2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：跨國尋主：小狗蜘蛛的坎坷歸程+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習跨國尋主：小狗蜘蛛的坎坷歸程1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文IwaseightyearsoldwhenmyfamilymovedfromTowoombatoEnglandin1950.MymotherwassufferingfromararediseaseandhadtotaketreatmentinLondon.Thedaybeforeweboardedtheship,Fathersenthisfive-year-oldredheeler(Australiancattledog),Spider,whowaslovedbyusall,tohisfriendSandy,asSandywastobehisguardianwhilewewereoverseas.Wedidn’tknowhowlongmymother’streatmentwouldtakeorhowlongwewouldbeaway.Sixweekslater,anairletterarrivedfromSandy,givingmyfatherthenewsthatSpiderhadrunawayjusttwoweeksafterwehadsailed.Iwillalwaysremembermyfather’sfaceashereadthisnews.MymotherandItriedtocomforthim,knowinginourheartshowuselessthiswas.4續(xù)寫原文Sandyhadadvertisedconstantlyonthemedia.Despitemany“sightings”,thedogwasneverfound.ItseemedSpiderjustkeptrunningandsearchingforus.Myfatherworriedhewouldbeshotordeadfromstarvation.ButourfamilythoughtthatFatherheldasecrethopethatSpiderwasstillalive.WesailedbacktoAustraliatwoyearslaterandmyfatherimmediatelybeganhisownsearchforSpider.Herepeatedcallstothepeoplewhohadsaidtheyhadseenhisdog,butitturnedouttobeclueless.5續(xù)寫原文Onecoldwinter’sSaturdaymorning,eightmonthsafterourreturn,myfatherhadacallfromGinGin,375kilometersfromToowoomba.Anelderlyladylivingonherownwasputtingfoodout“foraveryoldyellowdog”.Thishadbeengoingonforafewweeks.Immediatelywesetoff.Fiveandahalfhourslater,wefoundtheoldhousebesidethebush(灌木叢).Sadly,theladytoldmyfatherthatthedoghadn’tbeenaroundforafewdays.Myfatherhadanupsetlookinhiseyes.HeputtwofingerstohismouthanddidhisspecialwhistleforSpider.6段首句Paragraph1:Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.Paragraph2：Oncehomewegentlycleanedhimup.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析91950年，8歲的“我”一家因母親治病從澳大利亞的圖文巴搬去英國，臨行前將5歲的紅毛牧牛犬蜘蛛托付給朋友桑迪。六周后得知蜘蛛在他們走后兩周就跑丟了。盡管桑迪多方尋找，仍一無所獲。兩年后一家人回國，父親繼續(xù)尋找。一次聽說375公里外有疑似蜘蛛的蹤跡，一家人前往尋找，在一位老婦人家附近，父親吹起特殊口哨。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.突然，灌木叢中傳來一陣聲響。起初，那聲音很微弱，像是有什么東西在小心翼翼地挪動。緊接著，一個身影緩緩從灌木叢中鉆了出來。那是一只瘦骨嶙峋、臟兮兮的狗，身上的毛雜亂地糾結在一起，走路也搖搖晃晃。但當它聽到父親那熟悉的口哨聲時，原本黯淡的眼睛瞬間亮了起來，耳朵也豎了起來。父親激動地輕聲喚道：“蜘蛛？”仿佛是聽到了久違的呼喚，那只狗虛弱地叫了一聲，便跌跌撞撞地朝我們奔來。每一步都顯得那么艱難，卻又充滿了急切。近了，我們才看清，真的是蜘蛛！它歷經(jīng)了無數(shù)個日夜的漂泊，終于再次回到了家人身邊。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Oncehomewegentlycleanedhimup.一回到家，我們便輕柔地為它清洗。我們用溫水小心地沖洗著它身上的污垢，慢慢梳理著打結的毛發(fā)，每一個動作都充滿了心疼。清洗之后，那只熟悉的紅毛牧牛犬的模樣漸漸顯現(xiàn)出來。蜘蛛依舊很瘦，肋骨都清晰可見，但它的眼神里卻透著一種劫后余生的欣喜與活力。我們給它準備了一些易消化的食物，一小口一小口地喂它，看著它一點點恢復體力。在接下來的日子里，蜘蛛在我們的悉心照料下，逐漸找回了往日的生機，它時刻跟在父親身邊，仿佛生怕再次與家人分離。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.Atfirst,itwasafaintandindistinctnoise,asifsomethingwasmovingstealthily.Then,afiguregraduallyemergedfromthethickbushes.Itwasadog,extremelythinanddirty,withitsfurallmatted.Itsstepswerewobbly,showingitsweakness.However,themomentitheardmyfather'sspecialwhistle,itsearsperkedupimmediately,anditseyes,whichhadbeendull,sparkledwithaglimmerofhope.Myfathergaspedinexcitementandmurmured,"Spider?"Asifinresponsetothislong-awaitedcall,thedogbarkedweaklyandstumbledtowardsus.Everystepittookseemedarduous,yetfullofeagerness.Asitgotcloser,wecouldclearlyseethatitwasindeedSpider.Aftercountlessdaysandnightsofwandering,itfinallyfounditswaybacktoitsfamily.14范文呈現(xiàn)Oncehomewegentlycleanedhimup.Weusedwarmwatertocarefullywashawaythedirtonhisbodyandslowlycombedthroughhisknottedfur,everymovementfilledwithloveandpity.Afterthecleaning,thefamiliarappearanceoftheredheelergraduallyemerged.Spiderwasstillverythin,withhisribsclearlyvisible,buttherewasakindofvitalityandjoyinhiseyes.Wepreparedsomeeasily-digestiblefoodforhimandfedhimlittlebylittle,watchinghimregainhisstrengthbitbybit.Inthefollowingdays,withourmeticulouscare,Spidergraduallyreturnedtohisformervitality.Hefollowedmyfathereverywhere,asifhewasafraidofgettingseparatedfromhisfamilyagain.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Suddenly,asoundemanatedfromthebush.Initially,itwasafaint,almostimperceptiblerustling,asifsomecreaturewasstealthilymakingitswaythroughtheundergrowth.Gradually,afigureemergedfromthethicket.Itwasadog,emaciatedandfilthy,itsfurmattedinatangledmess.Itsgaitwasunsteady,atestamenttoitsweakenedstate.However,uponhearingmyfather'sdistinctivewhistle,itsearsshotup,andasparkofrecognitionignitedinitspreviouslydulleyes.Myfather,unabletocontainhisexcitement,gasped,"Spider?"Asifinanswertothislong-awaitedsummons,thedogletoutafeeblebarkandstaggeredtowardsus.Eachstepittookwaslabored,yetdrivenbyanunmistakableeagerness.Asitdrewnearer,therewasnomistakingit–itwasSpider,who,afterenduringcountlessdaysandnightsofwandering,hadfinallyfounditswaybacktoitsfamily.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Oncehome,wesetaboutgentlycleaninghimup.Warmwaterwascarefullyappliedtowashawaytheaccumulateddirt,andwepainstakinglycombedthroughhisknottedfur,everygestureimbuedwithtendernessandcompassion.Post-cleaning,thefamiliarvisageoftheredheeler