高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：周六的溫馨時(shí)光：爺爺餐廳里的善意故事+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)周六的溫馨時(shí)光：爺爺餐廳里的善意故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Bobby,mybrother,andIwouldspendourusualSaturdaywithGrandpa,cleaninghishouse.Momwouldtakeustohishomeintheearlymorning.Sincechildhood,BobbyandIhadbeenspendingthedaydusting,moppingandchangingthesheetsonhisbed.Grandpagrewupinapoorfamily.Hisdaddiedwhenhewasateenager.Thenhehadtoleaveschool,runthefamilyfarmandraisehisbrotherandsister.Heworkedasanightdoorkeeperforacompanywithinwalkingdistanceofhishome,andthehighlightofhisweekwastherewardthathegavemybrotherandmeforcleaning.Anditwasthemomentwhenwefeltthehappiest.4續(xù)寫原文ThisSaturday,afterBobbyandIfinishedcleaning,Grandpadecidedtoinviteustodinner.Whenwefinallyarrivedathisfavoriterestaurant,thewaitressesgreetedhimasalong-lostelder.Theirsmilesandwavesfollowedustoourfavoritetableasweplacedourorders.Andthenwelaughedandate.Grandpapraisedhowwellwehadcleanedhisplace,tellinganyonewhowouldliketolistenabouteverytaskwehadaccomplished.Regardlessofwhowasservingusatthetime,eachoftheotherwaitresseswouldcomeuptosay“hi”toGrandpaandcongratulatehisgrandkidsontheirwork.Itwasarestaurant,butitwaslikeourhome.Whendinnerwasover,thewaitresswouldbringthecheckandhandittoGrandpa.Thistime,itwasGloriathatbentclosetohim,andtoldhimtheamountofthecheck.Grandpacarefullydugintothepocketofhistrousersandbroughtoutaworncoinpurse.Hecarefullylaidoutthecoinsandpaidthebill.ThenhegaveGloriaatip,butitwasn’tenough.Iwasashamedthathegottheamountofthetipwrong,andwewereembarrassed.IwasabouttosaysomethingwhenGloriagrabbedmyhands.“Comeandgetsomeflowers,today’sgifts,Susie,”shesaidassheledmetowardthecounter.5段首句Paragraph1:“Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,”Gloriasaidtomeseriously.Paragraph2:IlistenedtoGloriaandstaredatthoseflowers,deepinthought.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8每個(gè)周六，“我”和哥哥博比都會(huì)去爺爺家?guī)兔Υ驋咝l(wèi)生，這是我們一直以來(lái)的習(xí)慣。爺爺年少時(shí)家境貧寒，父親早逝，他十幾歲就不得不輟學(xué)，扛起經(jīng)營(yíng)家庭農(nóng)場(chǎng)、撫養(yǎng)弟妹的重任。后來(lái)，他在離家不遠(yuǎn)的公司做夜班門衛(wèi)。打掃完后，爺爺常帶我們?nèi)ニ钕矚g的餐廳吃飯，餐廳的服務(wù)員們都熱情地迎接他，就像對(duì)待久違的長(zhǎng)輩。大家有說(shuō)有笑地用餐，爺爺還向周圍人夸贊我們打掃得好。用餐結(jié)束，服務(wù)員格洛麗亞告知爺爺賬單金額，爺爺從破舊的錢包里仔細(xì)數(shù)出硬幣付賬，可給的小費(fèi)不夠。“我”因爺爺給的小費(fèi)不足而感到羞愧和尷尬，這時(shí)格洛麗亞拉著“我”的手，說(shuō)要帶“我”去拿花，將“我”帶到了柜臺(tái)前。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:“Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,”Gloriasaidtomeseriously.“我想讓你認(rèn)真聽我說(shuō)，蘇西。”格洛麗亞嚴(yán)肅地對(duì)我說(shuō)。她拉著我站在柜臺(tái)前，目光堅(jiān)定地看著我?！澳銧敔斒俏覀儾蛷d最受歡迎的客人之一，他每次來(lái)都帶著滿滿的熱情和對(duì)生活的熱愛(ài)。我們都很尊敬他，他的故事激勵(lì)著我們每一個(gè)人?！备衤妍悂嗩D了頓，繼續(xù)說(shuō)道，“你知道嗎，你爺爺?shù)纳畈⒉蝗菀住Ｋ?jīng)歷了很多困難和挫折，但他從來(lái)沒(méi)有抱怨過(guò)，一直都堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地面對(duì)生活。他給的小費(fèi)雖然不多，但那是他的一片心意，是他對(duì)我們服務(wù)的認(rèn)可和尊重。我們不能因?yàn)殄X的多少而忽視他的這份心意?！蔽衣犞衤妍悂喌脑?，心中的羞愧和尷尬漸漸消散，取而代之的是對(duì)爺爺?shù)木磁搴透屑?。格洛麗亞接著說(shuō)：“而且，我們餐廳一直都有一個(gè)不成文的規(guī)定，對(duì)于像你爺爺這樣的老顧客，我們會(huì)給予特別的照顧。那些所謂的‘禮物’，其實(shí)是我們表達(dá)對(duì)他的感謝和敬意的方式。我們希望他能在這里感受到家的溫暖?！?0續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:IlistenedtoGloriaandstaredatthoseflowers,deepinthought.我聽著格洛麗亞的話，凝視著那些花，陷入了沉思。原來(lái)，在這看似平常的餐廳里，隱藏著這么多溫暖和善意。爺爺雖然生活拮據(jù)，但他依然用自己的方式表達(dá)著對(duì)他人的尊重和感激。而餐廳的服務(wù)員們，也用他們的善良和細(xì)心，給予爺爺特別的關(guān)懷。我突然意識(shí)到，我之前因?yàn)闋敔斀o的小費(fèi)不夠而感到羞愧是多么的愚蠢。我應(yīng)該為有這樣一位堅(jiān)強(qiáng)、樂(lè)觀、懂得感恩的爺爺而感到驕傲。我轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)身，看著爺爺，他正和博比開心地說(shuō)著話。我走過(guò)去，緊緊地抱住了爺爺，說(shuō)：“爺爺，我愛(ài)你。”爺爺有些驚訝地看著我，然后笑著摸了摸我的頭，說(shuō)：“我也愛(ài)你，蘇西?！蹦且豢?，我感受到了濃濃的祖孫情。從那以后，每次和爺爺來(lái)這家餐廳，我都會(huì)懷著一顆感恩的心，珍惜和爺爺在一起的每一刻，也更加懂得了尊重和理解他人的重要性。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)"Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,"Gloriasaidtomeseriously.Shepulledmetostandinfrontofthecounterandlookedatmewithfirmeyes."Yourgrandpaisoneofthemostpopularguestsinourrestaurant.Everytimehecomeshere,hebringsfullenthusiasmandloveforlife.Weallrespecthimverymuch,andhisstoryinspireseveryoneofus."Gloriapausedforamomentandcontinued,"Youknow,yourgrandpa'slifeisnoteasy.Hehasgonethroughalotofdifficultiesandsetbacks,buthehasnevercomplainedandhasalwaysfacedlifebravely.Althoughthetiphegaveisnotmuch,itishissincereintentionandhisrecognitionandrespectforourservice.Wecan'tignorehisintentionjustbecauseoftheamountofmoney."AsIlistenedtoGloria'swords,theshameandembarrassmentinmyheartgraduallydissipated,replacedbyadmirationandgratitudeformygrandpa.Gloriathensaid,"Moreover,ourrestauranthasalwayshadanunwrittenrulethatwewillgivespecialcaretoregularcustomerslikeyourgrandpa.Thoseso-called'gifts'areactuallythewayweexpressourgratitudeandrespectforhim.Wehopehecanfeelthewarmthofhomehere."13范文呈現(xiàn)IlistenedtoGloriaandstaredatthoseflowers,deepinthought.Itturnedoutthatthereweresomanywarmthandkindnesshiddeninthisseeminglyordinaryrestaurant.Althoughmygrandpa'slifewashard,hestillexpressedhisrespectandgratitudetoothersinhisownway.Andthewaitressesintherestaurant,withtheirkindnessandthoughtfulness,gavemygrandpaspecialcare.IsuddenlyrealizedhowstupidIwastofeelashamedbecausemygrandpa'stipwasnotenough.Ishouldbeproudofhavingsuchastrong,optimisticandgratefulgrandpa.Iturnedaroundandlookedatmygrandpa.HewastalkinghappilywithBobby.Iwalkedoverandhuggedmygrandpatightly,saying,"Grandpa,Iloveyou."Mygrandpalookedatmeinsurpriseandthensmiledandtouchedmyhead,saying,"Iloveyoutoo,Susie."Atthatmoment,Ifeltthestrongaffectionbetweengrandparentsandgrandchildren.Fromthenon,everytimeIcametothisrestaurantwithmygrandpa,Iwouldcherisheverymomentwithhimwithagratefulheartandalsounderstandmoredeeplytheimportanceofrespectingandunderstandingothers.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)"Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,"Gloriasaidtomeearnestly.Sheledmetothecounterandfixedhereyesonmewithalookofdetermination."Yourgrandpaisoneofthemostbelovedguestsinourrestaurant.Eachtimehestepsthroughourdoors,hebringswithhimaninfectiousenthusiasmandadeep-seatedloveforlife.Weallholdhiminthehighestregard,andhisstoryservesasaninspirationtoeveryoneofushere."Gloriapausedbriefly,hereyesfilledwithsincerity,beforecontinuing."Yousee,yourgrandpahasenduredagreatdealinhislife.Hehasfacednumeroushardshipsandsetbacks,yethehasneveroncecomplained.Instead,hehasalwaysconfrontedlife'schallengeswithunwaveringcourage.Thetipheoffered,thoughmodestinamount,isatestamenttohisgenuineappreciationandrespectforourservice.Weshouldneverletthemonetaryvalueovershadowtheheartfeltsentimentbehindit."AsIlistenedintentlytoGloria'swords,thefeelingsofshameandembarrassmentthathadbeengnawingatmegraduallymeltedaway,replacedbyaprofoundsenseofadmirationandgratitudeformygrandpa.Gloriathenadded,"Furthermore,ourrestauranthaslong-standingunwrittenruleswhenitcomestotakingcareofourregularcustomerslikeyourgrandpa.Theseso-called'gifts'areourwayofshowingourgratitudeandrespectforhim.Westrivetomakehimfeelasifhe'sathomewheneverhe'shere."15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)IlistenedattentivelytoGloria'swordsandgazedintentlyattheflowers,lostindeepthought.Itdawnedonmethatthisseeminglyordinaryrestaurantwasfilledwithanabundanceofwarmthandkindness.Despitehisfinancialstruggles,mygrandpahadalwaysfoundawaytoexpresshisrespectandgratitudetowardsothers.Andthewaitresses,withtheirremarkablekindnessandthoughtfulness,hadgoneaboveandbeyondtoprovidehimwithspecialcare.IsuddenlyrealizedhowfoolishIhadbeentofeelasha