高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：狗狗相伴：退休迷茫中重尋生活意義+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)狗狗相伴：退休迷茫中重尋生活意義1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Iheardthedooropenandknewitwouldn’tbelongbeforemyhusbandPaulwouldcomethroughthedoor.Ifearedhisarrival.Don’tgetmewrong—Ilovehimdearly,butrecentlyhehadstartedtoasktoomanyquestions.Hewasreallygettingonmynerves.“Hibaby,I’mhome,”camehisvoice.“Whereareyou?”“Inhere,”Ireplied.Iwaslyingonourbedwatchingthefiveo’clocknewsinmypajamas（睡衣）.“You’restillinyourpajamas,again?Youwouldfeelbetterifyougotdressed.”“Why?I’mnotgoinganyplace,”Irepliedtestily.Hejustsighedandstartedchanginghisclothes.Weweren’tfightingbutweweren’texactlygettingalongfamouslyeither.Myearlyretirementhadcomeunexpectedlyandalthoughitwasduetohealthissues,theyweren’tsevereenoughto“allow”mestayinpajamasallday.4續(xù)寫原文Everyonekepttellingmeittooktimetoadjust,thatIwouldbeverybusyifIgavemyselfachance.Ididn’twanttobejustbusy;Iwantedapurpose.Meanwhile,asIsearchedformeaninginmylifeagain,myhusbandsteppedinandsuggestedwegetadog.ThenextWednesdaymorninghesaid,“Hey,getdressed.Todaywe’regoingtothedog-shelter.”“Oh,no…Ican’t.”“Whynot?Yougoing,somewhere?”heasked.“Well,um;I’mnotreadyforthatcommitment,”Ireplied.“Sallie,we’regettingadog,notadoptingababy!”5續(xù)寫原文WewenttotheshelterandreturnedwithaBeagle-Doxiemix.InamedherMollie,spelledwithan“ie”justlikemyname.Iboundedoutofbedthenextmorning,eagertotakecareofMollie.Iwasgreetedbydoggiekissesandunconditionallove.Molliedidn’tcarethatIdidn’thaveacareerorthatIhavehealthissues.Shejustneededme.Ifedher,bathedher,andstartedourdailyroutineofwalks.MollieandIweretwoneedysoulswhohadfoundeachother.6段首句Paragraph1:Afunnythinghappened:myenergyreturned.Paragraph2:Onerecentwinterevening,MollieandItookourusualwalk.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9“我”因健康問題提前退休，整日穿著睡衣無所事事，雖深愛丈夫保羅，但他的詢問讓“我”心煩。大家都說“我”需要時間適應(yīng)退休生活，丈夫建議養(yǎng)只狗。起初“我”抗拒，后來還是和他去了收容所，帶回一只比格-臘腸混血犬，“我”給它取名莫莉。有了莫莉后，“我”每天充滿活力地照顧它，帶它散步。這不僅讓“我”重獲精力，還使“我”重新融入社交，發(fā)現(xiàn)生活新樂趣。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Afunnythinghappened:myenergyreturned.一件有趣的事情發(fā)生了：我的精力恢復(fù)了。每天清晨，我不再賴床，而是迫不及待地起床照顧莫莉。帶著她出門散步，成了我最期待的事。清新的空氣，街邊的綠樹紅花，都讓我心情愉悅。我開始主動和鄰居們交談，分享莫莉的趣事，還結(jié)識了不少同樣愛狗的朋友。我們會相約一起遛狗，交流養(yǎng)狗心得。慢慢地，我不再覺得自己與外界脫節(jié)。同時，受朋友們的啟發(fā)，我報名參加了社區(qū)的繪畫課程。在課堂上，我盡情揮灑顏料，用畫筆描繪生活中的美好，比如莫莉可愛的模樣。這不僅讓我找到了新的興趣愛好，還讓我感受到了創(chuàng)造的快樂。我發(fā)現(xiàn)，生活因莫莉變得充實(shí)而有意義，我不再迷茫，而是積極地?fù)肀恳粋€新的一天。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Onerecentwinterevening,MollieandItookourusualwalk.最近的一個冬夜，莫莉和我像往常一樣去散步。寒風(fēng)吹過，我裹緊圍巾，莫莉卻絲毫不懼寒冷，興奮地跑在前面。當(dāng)我們路過公園旁的街道時，莫莉突然停下，對著路邊的下水道口狂叫。我好奇地走近，發(fā)現(xiàn)一只小貓被困在里面，凍得瑟瑟發(fā)抖。我心疼極了，四處尋找工具，想辦法把小貓救了上來。看著小貓可憐的樣子，我決定帶它回家。到家后，我給小貓洗了熱水澡，喂了些食物。莫莉在一旁好奇地看著，還友好地湊過去聞了聞。從此，家里又多了一位新成員，我們?nèi)齻€一起度過了許多溫暖的時光，我的生活也變得更加豐富多彩。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Afunnythinghappened:myenergyreturned.Everymorning,InolongerlingeredinbedbutgotupeagerlytotakecareofMollie.TakingherforawalkbecamethethingIlookedforwardtothemost.Thefreshairandthebloomingflowersandgreentreesalongthestreetdelightedme.Istartedtotalktomyneighborsactively,sharinginterestingstoriesaboutMollie.Ialsogottoknowmanydog-lovingfriends.Wewouldmeetuptowalkourdogstogetherandexchangeexperiencesofraisingdogs.Gradually,Inolongerfeltisolatedfromtheoutsideworld.Inspiredbymyfriends,Isignedupforapaintingclassinthecommunity.Intheclass,Ifreelysplashedpaint,usingthebrushtodepictthebeautyinlife,suchasMollie'slovelyappearance.Thisnotonlygavemeanewhobbybutalsomademefeelthejoyofcreation.IfoundthatmylifebecamefulfillingandmeaningfulbecauseofMollie.Iwasnolongerconfusedbutactivelyembracedeachnewday.14范文呈現(xiàn)Onerecentwinterevening,MollieandItookourusualwalk.Thecoldwindblew,andIwrappedmyscarftightly.However,Molliewasnotafraidofthecoldatallandranexcitedlyahead.Whenwepassedbythestreetnearthepark,Molliesuddenlystoppedandbarkedwildlyattheseweropeningbytheroad.Iwalkedovercuriouslyandfoundakittentrappedinside,shiveringwithcold.Ifeltextremelysorryforit.Ilookedaroundfortoolsandmanagedtorescuethekitten.Lookingatthepoorkitten,Idecidedtotakeithome.Afterarrivinghome,Igavethekittenawarmbathandfeditsomefood.Molliewatchedcuriouslyfromthesideandevencameovertosniffitfriendly.Sincethen,therewasanewmemberinourfamily.Thethreeofusspentmanywarmmomentstogether,andmylifebecameevenmorecolorful.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Afunnythinghappened:myenergyreturned.Gonewerethedaysoflingeringinbed;instead,Iwouldleapoutofbedeachmorning,brimmingwitheagernesstoattendtoMollie.Takingherforastrollhadbecomethehighlightofmyday.Thecrisp,freshairandthevibrantflowersandlushtreesliningthestreetsneverfailedtoliftmyspirits.Ibegantoengageinconversationswithmyneighborsspontaneously,regalingthemwithamusinganecdotesaboutMollie.Thisledtomebefriendingnumerousdog-enthusiasts.Wewouldarrangetowalkourdogstogether,sharingourinsightsandexperiencesindog-rearing.Littlebylittle,Inolongerfeltdetachedfromtheoutsideworld.Spurredonbymynew-foundfriends,Ienrolledinapaintingclassinthecommunity.There,Ifreelyexpressedmyselfwithabrush,capturingthebeautyoflife,likeMollie'sadorablefeatures.Thisnotonlyintroducedmetoanewpassionbutalsoinstilledinmethejoyofcreation.IrealizedthatMolliehadtransformedmylife,fillingitwithpurposeandmeaning.Nolongeradrift,Ieagerlyembracedeachnewdaywithopenarms.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Onerecentwinterevening,MollieandIsetoffonourregularwalk.Thebitingwindwhippedthrough,causingmetopullmyscarftighteraroundmyneck.Incontrast,Molliewasunfazedbythecold,boundingaheadwithunbridledenthusiasm.Aswepassedthestreetadjacenttothepark,Molliesuddenlyhalted,barkingincessantlyata