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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。InasmalltownnamedBellevillelocatedintheFrenchcountrysidelivedagirlnamedLiliana.Shegrewupinapoorfamily,buttheywererichinloveanddreams.Despitetheirmodestmeans,Lilianafoundjoyinthesimplepleasuresoflife.Lilianahadapassionforsports,andsheoftenimaginedherselfasafamousathlete,competingingrandstadiums.Oneday,whileshewasoutridingabike,sherealizedshehadlostherfavoritebook,whichwasapreciousgiftfromherlategrandmother,andshewasheartbroken.“Don’tworry.I’llfindit,”Lilianacomfortedherself,determinedtorecoverthelostbook.Goingbackoverhersteps,shesearchedeverycornerandcrackofBelleville.Justasshewasabouttogiveup,sherememberedasmallspotbytheriverwhereshehadstoppedtorest.Sherushedthereandfoundthebooklyinginthegrass,slightlydampbutunharmed.“Thankgoodness!”Lilianaexclaimed,pickingupthebook.Asshedid,asmallhandmadebookmarkfellout.ItwasasimplepieceofpaperwithadrawingoftheEiffelTowerandthewords“DreamBig”writteninhergrandmother’shandwriting.Yearspassed,andLiliana’sloveforsportsgrew.Shetrainedhard,usingherbicycletobuildherstrength.Eventually,hereffortspaidoff,andsheearnedascholarshiptoasportsacademyinParis.InParis,Lilianafacedmanychallenges.Thecitywasvastandfrightening,andthecompetitionattheacademywasfierce.Oneevening,afteraparticularlytoughtrainingsession,shesataloneinherdormroom,holdingthebookmark.“Grandma,givemestrength,”shewhispered,tearsstreamingdownherface.Withreneweddetermination,Lilianathrewherselfbackintohertraining.Shestartedwinningcompetitionsandgainingrecognition.Butjustasthingswerelookingup,shefellill.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ButLilianadecidedtostayandcompeteinthecomingchampionship.___________________________________________________________________________________________________LilianareturnedhometoBellevilleasahero.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意本文講述了生活在法國鄉(xiāng)村小鎮(zhèn)Belleville的女孩Liliana的故事。她出身貧寒,卻熱愛運(yùn)動(dòng),懷揣夢想。一次騎行時(shí),她丟失了祖母送的珍貴書籍,找回書的同時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)了寫有“DreamBig”的書簽,這成為她的精神支柱。后來她獲得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金進(jìn)入巴黎的體育學(xué)院,面對(duì)激烈競爭和城市的陌生感,她憑借書簽的激勵(lì)堅(jiān)持訓(xùn)練并取得成績。然而,就在一切向好時(shí),她生病了。故事山分析開端:介紹Liliana的出身,她生活貧困但熱愛運(yùn)動(dòng),夢想成為著名運(yùn)動(dòng)員。發(fā)展:Liliana丟失祖母送的書后找回,并發(fā)現(xiàn)書簽受到鼓舞。之后她獲得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金進(jìn)入巴黎體育學(xué)院,努力訓(xùn)練并開始取得成績。高潮(續(xù)寫部分):Liliana生病,但決定堅(jiān)持參加即將到來的錦標(biāo)賽,在比賽中面臨身體和心理的巨大挑戰(zhàn)。結(jié)局(續(xù)寫部分):Liliana克服困難,取得優(yōu)異成績,作為英雄回到家鄉(xiāng),收獲榮耀與成長,她的故事激勵(lì)著家鄉(xiāng)的人們。伏筆及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆:Liliana出身貧寒,但家庭充滿愛,且她熱愛運(yùn)動(dòng)、懷揣夢想。回應(yīng):在巴黎面對(duì)諸多挑戰(zhàn)以及生病的情況下,她對(duì)夢想的熱愛支撐她堅(jiān)持參加錦標(biāo)賽,展現(xiàn)出堅(jiān)韌不拔的精神。伏筆:丟失的書中發(fā)現(xiàn)祖母寫有“DreamBig”的書簽,成為她的精神支柱?;貞?yīng):續(xù)寫中在生病的艱難時(shí)刻,她極有可能再次想起書簽上的話,從中汲取力量,堅(jiān)定參賽的決心。伏筆:Liliana在體育學(xué)院努力訓(xùn)練,開始贏得比賽和獲得認(rèn)可。回應(yīng):這為她有勇氣參加錦標(biāo)賽并取得好成績做鋪墊,表明她具備一定的實(shí)力和比賽經(jīng)驗(yàn)。伏筆:Liliana在巴黎面臨城市的陌生和激烈的競爭,通過努力克服?;貞?yīng):體現(xiàn)她有較強(qiáng)的適應(yīng)能力和抗壓能力,所以在生病時(shí)也能保持積極心態(tài),續(xù)寫中她會(huì)以此心態(tài)應(yīng)對(duì)比賽。伏筆:Liliana熱愛家鄉(xiāng),盡管在巴黎發(fā)展,但家鄉(xiāng)始終是她的情感寄托?;貞?yīng):續(xù)寫中她以英雄身份回到家鄉(xiāng),表明她對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的歸屬感,也體現(xiàn)家鄉(xiāng)對(duì)她成就的認(rèn)可。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)(兩段)第一段:著重描述Liliana決定參賽后的準(zhǔn)備過程。包括她如何克服身體不適進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練,心理上如何給自己打氣,面對(duì)他人的質(zhì)疑或擔(dān)憂她的反應(yīng)等。可以描寫訓(xùn)練中的艱難場景,如體力不支仍咬牙堅(jiān)持,展現(xiàn)她的頑強(qiáng)意志。第二段:講述Liliana在錦標(biāo)賽中的表現(xiàn)以及獲得的成績。描述比賽的激烈程度,她在關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻的出色發(fā)揮。奪冠后,重點(diǎn)描寫她回到家鄉(xiāng)Belleville受到的熱烈歡迎,鄉(xiāng)親們的反應(yīng)以及她內(nèi)心的感受,突出她成為英雄后的榮耀和對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的情感。情感線生病后的Liliana起初或許會(huì)感到沮喪和無助,但對(duì)夢想的執(zhí)著讓她迅速振作,決定參賽時(shí)充滿堅(jiān)定。訓(xùn)練過程中,身體的不適不斷挑戰(zhàn)她的意志,她在痛苦與堅(jiān)持間掙扎,但憑借對(duì)勝利的渴望和對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的熱愛,頑強(qiáng)堅(jiān)持。比賽時(shí)緊張與興奮交織,奪冠的那一刻,喜悅與自豪涌上心頭?;氐郊亦l(xiāng)成為英雄,她感受到的是榮耀與歸屬感,她的情感從低谷走向巔峰,完成了一次深刻的蛻變。故事線Liliana出身貧寒,熱愛運(yùn)動(dòng),夢想成為著名運(yùn)動(dòng)員。丟失祖母送的書后找回,并發(fā)現(xiàn)書簽,受到鼓舞。獲得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金進(jìn)入巴黎體育學(xué)院,努力訓(xùn)練并開始取得成績。生病,但決定堅(jiān)持參加即將到來的錦標(biāo)賽。在錦標(biāo)賽中克服困難,取得優(yōu)異成績。作為英雄回到家鄉(xiāng),受到熱烈歡迎。主旨升華句(英文)Truestrengthliesnotintheabsenceofchallenges,butintheunwaveringdeterminationtopursuedreamsdespiteadversity.(真正的力量不在于沒有挑戰(zhàn),而在于在逆境中仍堅(jiān)定不移地追求夢想。)Asimplebookmark,carryingtheloveandwisdomofalovedone,canbecomethedrivingforcethatpropelsustoovercomeinsurmountabledifficulties.(一張簡單的書簽,承載著親人的愛與智慧,能成為推動(dòng)我們克服重重困難的動(dòng)力。)Ourroots,nomatterhowhumble,arethesourceofourstrength,andtheloveofourhometownisthefuelthatkeepsourdreamsburningbrightly.(我們的根,無論多么卑微,都是我們力量的源泉,而對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的熱愛是讓我們夢想熠熠生輝的燃料。)Inthefaceofillnessandhardship,thecouragetopersevereandthebeliefinoneselfcanturntheimpossibleintothepossible.(面對(duì)疾病和艱難,堅(jiān)持的勇氣和對(duì)自己的信念能將不可能變?yōu)榭赡?。)Successisnotjustaboutachievingpersonalglory,butalsoaboutinspiringotherstobelieveintheirdreamsandstriveforabetterfuture.(成功不僅僅是實(shí)現(xiàn)個(gè)人榮耀,還在于激勵(lì)他人相信自己的夢想,為更美好的未來而奮斗。)寫作示范一第一段ButLilianadecidedtostayandcompeteinthecomingchampionship.Ignoringtheprotestsofhercoachesandteammates,shewasdeterminedtofightforherdream.Shetrainedharderthanever,eventhougheverymovewasastruggleduetoherillness.Eachday,sheremindedherselfofthe“DreamBig”onthebookmark.Duringtraining,sheoftenfeltdizzy,butsheneverstopped.Shevisualizedherselfwinningthechampionship,andthisimagegaveherthestrengthtokeepgoing.第二段LilianareturnedhometoBellevilleasahero.Thewholetownturnedouttowelcomeher.Peoplelinedthestreets,cheeringandwavingflags.Herparentswerebeamingwithpride,andherchildhoodfriendslookedatherwithadmiration.Lilianafeltadeepsenseoffulfillment.Sherealizedthatherjourneywasnotjustaboutpersonalsuccess.Itwasaboutinspiringthekidsinherhometowntobelieveintheirdreams.Sheheldupherchampionshiptrophy,knowingthatitwasasymbolofhopeforeveryoneinBelleville.寫作示范二第一段ButLilianadecidedtostayandcompeteinthecomingchampionship.Sheknewthatgivingupwasnotanoption.Sheadjustedhertrainingplanaccordingtoherphysicalcondition,focusingmoreontechniquesandmentalstrength.Everytimeshefeltlikegivingup,shetookoutthebookmarkandstaredatthewords“DreamBig”.Withthismotivation,shemanagedtocompleteherarduoustraining.Althoughherbodywasweak,herspiritwasunbreakable.第二段LilianareturnedhometoBellevilleasahero.Themomentshesteppedintothetown,shewasgreetedwiththunderousapplause.Thechildreninthetownrushedtowardsher,askingforautographsandpictures.Shespentthedaysharingherexperiencesandencouragingtheyoungonestofollowtheirdreams.Lookingaroundatthefamiliarfaces,Lilianafeltaprofoundsenseofgratitude.SheknewthatherrootsinBellevillehadgivenherthestrengthtoachieveherdreams,andshewascommittedtogivingbacktohercommunity.參考答案ButLilianadecidedtostayandcompeteinthecomingchampionship.Thedayeventuallyarrived,andshefeltamixoftensionanddetermination.Asshestoodatthestartingline,sheheldthebookmarkinherhand.Theracewasintense,butLilianapushedherselftothelimit.As

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