高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+瑜伽之路：耐心鑄就成功件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)瑜伽之路：耐心鑄就成功1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Earthalostherbalanceandfellheavilyontothefloor.“I’llneverbeasflexibleasyouare,Grandma.”shesighedsoftly.Eartha’sGrandmahadbeenpractisingyogaformorethan50years,whocouldtwist,bendandcurlherbodywithease.Shecouldevenstandonherhandsandpullherbodyintodifferentposes.“Eartha,yournamemeans‘patience’.Youneedpatienceforyoga,”saidherGrandma.Likemanyschoolsinthecountry,Eartha’sschoolheldanannualyogacompetition.EarthawantedtomakeherGrandmaproud.Butshecouldhardlystandononeleg.4續(xù)寫原文Grandmareturnedtothekitchen.Earthakeptpracticinghard.Shestoodstraight,herarmsathersides.Shemovedherhandsandknees,archingherback.Alloftheseposeswereeasy,whilethecompetitionwascertaintobeharder.Soshetriedmorechallengingposes,lyingonherstomachandpushinguponherhands.Herarmssoongottiredandshecollapsedtothefloor.Earthawanderedintothekitchen.“Finishedalready?”askedGrandma.“It’shard,”Earthasaid.“Howdidyougettobesostrong?”Grandmasmiled.“Patience.”Thenextmorning,Earthafeltachedandsorealloverthebody.Herlegshurtsobadlyfromtheposesshepracticedthatsheevenwantedtoquit.However,hergrandmother’swordsechoedinhermind,andsheheldtheposeforalongertime.5續(xù)寫原文EachdayEarthawouldpracticeanewpose,beforegoingovertheposesshehadpracticedthepreviousfewdays.Withthedateofthecompetitionapproaching,shestartedtofeelstrongerandmoreflexible.Herarmsandlegsstoppedtrembling.Thedayoftheyogacompetitionarrivedasexpected.Inthegym,Earthalayonherbackwithherkneesbentandplacedherhandsonthefloorbehindher.Everythingwentsmoothly.Justthen,soeagerwasshetowinGrandma’spridethatherposesdisplayedamixofimpatience,andrigidness.Earthafellonthemat,whichcostheredgeoverothercompetitors.Abellrang,endingthefirsthalfofthecompetition.6段首句Paragraph1：Thinkingsheruinedallbecauseofimpatience,EarthalookedattheaudienceforGrandma.Paragraph2：Calmandconfident,Earthasteppedonthestageforthesecondhalfofthecompetition.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了Eartha的奶奶練習(xí)瑜伽超50年，身體柔韌性極佳。Eartha的學(xué)校舉辦年度瑜伽比賽，她渴望讓奶奶驕傲，然而練習(xí)時困難重重，她甚至難以單腿站立。但在奶奶“耐心”的教導(dǎo)下，她堅持每天練習(xí)新姿勢，逐漸變得強壯且靈活。比賽當(dāng)天，前半場因急于求勝，她摔倒失誤。在奶奶的鼓勵下，她決定在后半場比賽中重新證明自己。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thinkingsheruinedallbecauseofimpatience,EarthalookedattheaudienceforGrandma.Eartha滿心懊悔，覺得自己因急躁搞砸了一切，她焦急地在觀眾中尋找奶奶。目光掃過一排排座位，心也跟著揪了起來。終于，她和奶奶的目光交匯，奶奶臉上那溫暖的笑容和豎起的大拇指，瞬間讓她心頭一暖。奶奶輕聲說著“耐心點，Eartha”。這句話如同黑暗中的明燈，驅(qū)散了她心中的陰霾。她恍然大悟，一次摔倒并不能決定什么。她深吸一口氣，暗暗發(fā)誓，一定要在接下來的比賽中全力以赴。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Calmandconfident,Earthasteppedonthestageforthesecondhalfofthecompetition.Eartha平復(fù)心情，帶著滿滿的自信，再次踏上比賽舞臺。她從一個簡單的姿勢開始，動作輕柔而舒緩，每一個轉(zhuǎn)換都流暢自然。她時刻牢記奶奶的教誨，將耐心融入每一個動作中。隨著節(jié)奏的推進(jìn)，她的動作越來越舒展，身體仿佛與瑜伽融為一體。臺下的觀眾被她的表演深深吸引，寂靜的場館里只有她均勻的呼吸聲和輕柔的動作聲響。最終，她完美地完成了所有動作，贏得了觀眾熱烈的掌聲，也收獲了屬于自己的成長與蛻變。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thinkingsheruinedallbecauseofimpatience,EarthaanxiouslyscannedtheaudienceforGrandma.Hereyesroamedovertherowsofseats,filledwithworryandself-blame.Whentheireyesfinallymet,Grandmagreetedherwithawarmsmileandathumbs-up.Earthafeltasenseofrelieffloodingthroughher.Grandmamouthed,"Patience,Eartha."Thesewordsseemedtoinjectnewenergyintoher.Sherealizedthatonefalldidn'tmeantheend.Summoninguphercourage,shedecidedtoturnthingsaroundinthesecondhalfofthecompetition.Shetoldherselfthatshecouldstillmakeitandproveherself.14范文呈現(xiàn)Calmandconfident,Earthasteppedontothestageforthesecondhalfofthecompetition.Shestartedwithasimplepose,movingsmoothlyfromonetoanother.Eachmovementwasexecutedwithprecisionandcontrol.RememberingGrandma'swords,shefocusedonbeingpatient.Shepaidcloseattentiontoherbody,makingeveryposeperfect.Asshecontinued,theaudiencewasgraduallydrawninbyherperformance.Thegymwasfilledwithahushedsilence,onlybrokenbythesoftsoundsofhermovements.Finally,shecompletedalltheposesflawlessly,winningthunderousapplausefromtheaudience.Itwasnotjustavictoryinthecompetitionbutalsoatriumphoverherself.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thinkingshehadruinedeverythingduetoimpatience,EarthafranticallyscouredtheaudienceforGrandma.Hereyesdartedacrosstherowsofseats,brimmingwithanxietyandself-reproach.Themomenttheireyesmet,Grandma'swarmsmileandanencouragingthumbs-upinstantlysoothedherfrayednerves.Grandmamouthedthosemagicalwords,"Patience,Eartha."Itwasasifasparkhadreignitedthefirewithinher.Shecametotherealizationthatasinglestumbledidnotsignifydefeat.Summoningupallhercourage,sheresolvedtostagearemarkablecomebackinthesecondhalfofthecompetition.Withnewfounddetermination,shesteeledherself,vowingtoprovehermettle.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Calmandconfident,Earthasteppedontothestageforthesecondhalfofthecompetition.Startingwithasimplepose,sheglidedgracefullyfromonepositiontoanother,eachmovementatestamenttoherhardworkandnew-foundpatience.Executingeveryposewithmeticulousprecision,shewasfullyimmersedintheflowoftheperformance.Remembering