讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+我與忠犬Billy的溫暖過往與思念 高三上學(xué)期英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)我與忠犬Billy的溫暖過往與思念1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Lately,Iwasdeeplytouchedwithtwomoviesaboutfaithfuldogs：ADog'sPurposeandADog'sWayHome.Adog'slifecycledandcycledonlytomeethisfirstownerwhiletheothercovered400milesoftoilandhungerallthewaybacktoherhome.IhadafaithfuldogtoowhenIwasalittlegirl,butitwasadifferentstory.4續(xù)寫原文Whenmydadfirsttookhimhomeinacardboardbox,hewassoquietthatIevendoubtedwhethertherewasreallyadoginit.WhenIpeepedthroughtwosmallholesontheside,Ijustsawapatchofgreyfur.MydadassuredmethatitwasjustasmalldogbeforeIdaredtoopenthebox.Therehewas!Whatalovelygreydog!Hewasslimandlookedsmart.IwasonmykneesasIcheerfullyobservedhim.However,hetriedtoavoideyecontactwithme,apparentlyalittlescaredwitheverythingstrangearound.Iwantedtopethisheadbutheonlyturnedhisheadaway.5續(xù)寫原文Whenhebecamefamiliarwithme,IcalledhimBillyandhewasreallydelighted,zagginghistail.EverytimeIleftforschool,hesawmeoff.WhenIcameback,hewayswaitedonmywayhomeandgreetedmewithhislicksandbrushedhisheadagainstlegs.WhenBillywasinthekitchenwithmyfather,lyingonasmallheapoffirewoodsidethefurnace(灶),hecouldalwaysknowwhichpieceoffirewoodmydadwouldpickandraisedhispawintime.ItalwayssurprisedmehowintelligentandconsiderateBillyIimaginedhimturningintoasmallboycarryingmyschoolbagformeandtalkingmydad.WithBillybrighteningeverydayofmychildhood,Iwasmorethanhappy.6段首句Paragraph1：Butoneday,Billywasseriouslyill.Paragraph2：Afewyearslater,Iwenttoadog'ssheltertotrymyluck.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9我”受兩部關(guān)于忠犬的電影觸動，回憶起自己小時候的忠犬Billy。爸爸將Billy帶回家時，它十分膽小。但隨著時間推移，Billy與“我”熟悉起來，它聰明又貼心，每天接送“我”上學(xué)，還能預(yù)知爸爸的舉動。然而，有一天Billy突然重病，這讓“我”無比揪心，也為后續(xù)“我”對它的懷念和尋找新的情感寄托埋下伏筆。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

Butoneday,Billywasseriouslyill.但有一天，Billy病得很重。它不再像往常那樣活蹦亂跳，而是虛弱地趴在地上，眼神中滿是痛苦。我心急如焚，趕忙叫來爸爸。我們帶著Billy四處找獸醫(yī)，一路上我緊緊抱著它，眼淚止不住地流。獸醫(yī)給Billy做了檢查，開了藥，可Billy的病情并沒有好轉(zhuǎn)。我日夜守在它身邊，給它喂藥、陪它說話，希望它能快點好起來。然而，Billy還是沒能戰(zhàn)勝病魔，它永遠地離開了我，那一刻，我感覺自己的心都碎了。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Afewyearslater,Iwenttoadog'ssheltertotrymyluck.幾年后，我來到一家狗狗收容所碰碰運氣。一走進收容所，各種各樣的狗狗朝我涌來，它們的眼神里充滿了渴望和期待。我在這些狗狗中仔細尋找著，希望能找到一只像Billy一樣能觸動我心靈的狗狗。突然，一只灰色的小狗吸引了我的注意，它的眼神和Billy有幾分相似。我蹲下身子，輕輕撫摸它的頭，它沒有躲開，反而親昵地蹭著我的手。我知道，就是它了。我決定帶它回家，開啟我們新的故事。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Butoneday,Billywasseriouslyill.Helosthislivelyenergyandlayweaklyontheground,hiseyesfilledwithpain.Iwasextremelyworriedandquicklycalledmydad.WetookBillyaroundtofindavet.Alltheway,Iheldhimtightlyinmyarms,withtearsstreamingdownmyface.ThevetexaminedBillyandprescribedsomemedicine,buthisconditiondidn'timprove.Istayedbyhissidedayandnight,feedinghimmedicineandtalkingtohim,hopinghewouldgetbettersoon.However,Billycouldn'tovercometheillnessandleftmeforever.Atthatmoment,Ifeltasifmyhearthadbeenshatteredintopieces.14范文呈現(xiàn)Afewyearslater,Iwenttoadog'ssheltertotrymyluck.AssoonasIenteredtheshelter,variousdogsrushedtowardsme,theireyesfullofeagernessandexpectation.Isearchedcarefullyamongthesedogs,hopingtofindonethatcouldtouchmyheartlikeBillydid.Suddenly,agreypuppycaughtmyattention.ItseyesresembledBilly'sinsomeway.Isquatteddownandgentlystrokeditshead.Itdidn'tavoidmebutrubbedagainstmyhandaffectionately.Iknewitwastheone.Idecidedtotakeithomeandstartanewstorywithit.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Butoneday,Billywasseriouslyill.Gonewashisusualexuberance;instead,helayprostrate,hisbodywrackedwithweakness,andhiseyes,oncesofulloflife,nowcloudedwithpain.Panic-stricken,Iimmediatelysummonedmyfather,andtogether,weembarkedonafranticsearchforaveterinarian.Duringthejourney,IheldBillyclosetomychest,myarmstrembling,andmytearsflowingunabated,asifmyverysoulwasweepingforhissuffering.Theveterinarian,afterathoroughexamination,prescribedmedication,butalas,itseemedtohavelittleeffect.Iremainedbyhissidearoundtheclock,administeringmedicinewithatremblinghandandwhisperingwordsofcomfort,inavainattempttowillhimbacktohealth.Intheend,despitemydesperateefforts,Billysuccumbedtohisillness,leavingagapingvoidinmyheart,asifapartofmehadbeenrippedawayforever.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Afewyearslater,Iwenttoadog'ssheltertotrymyluck.ThemomentIsteppedthroughtheshelter'sdoors,achorusofbarksandexcitedyelpsgreetedme.Dozensofdogs,theirtailswaggingwithanticipation,rushedtowardsme,theireyesshiningwithhope.Ibeganameticuloussearch,myeyesscanningeachandeveryface,yearningtofindaconnection,asparkthatwouldremindmeofBilly.Then,inacorner,asmallgreypuppycaughtmyeye.Asoureyesmet,ajoltofrecognitionsurgedthroughme;therewasanunmistakableresemblancetoBillyinthosesoulfuleyes.Icroucheddownslowly,myhandoutstretched,andasIgentlystrokeditshead,itnuzzledagainstme,asifittoohadrecognizedakindredspirit.Withouthesitation,Ik