高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+魯本為母攢錢買胸針：愛與堅(jiān)持的故事

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)魯本為母攢錢買胸針：愛與堅(jiān)持的故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文In1945,a12-year-oldboysawabeautifulbrooch(胸針)inashopwindowthatsethisheartracing.Buttheprice—fivedollars—wasfarbeyondReubenEarle’smeans.Fivedollarscouldbuyalmostaweek’sfoodforhisfamily.Reubencouldn’taskhisfatherforthemoney.EverythingMarkEarlemadethroughfishingwenttohismother,Dora,whostruggledtofeedandclothetheirfivechildren.However,heopenedtheshop’sweathereddoorandwentinside.Standingproudandstraightinhisoldbutcleanshirtandtrousers,hetoldtheshopkeeperwhathewanted,adding,“ButIdon’thavethemoneyrightnow.Canyoupleaseholditformeforsometime?”4續(xù)寫原文“I’lltry,”theshopkeepersmiled.Reubenrespectfullytouchedhisworncapandwalkedout.Hewouldraisethefivedollarsandnottellanybody.Onhearingthesoundofhammering(敲打)fromasidestreet,Reubensuddenlyhadanidea.PeoplebuilttheirownhomesinBayRoberts,usingnails(釘子)boughtinlargebagsfromalocalfactory.Sometimestheusedbagswerethrownawayattheconstruction,andReubenknewhecouldsellthembacktothefactoryforfivecentsapiece.Thatdayhefoundtwobags,whichhesoldtothemaninchargeofpackingnails.5續(xù)寫原文Theboy’shandtightlyheldthefive-centpiecesasheranthetwokilometershome.Nearhishousestoodtheancientbarn(谷倉).Reubenfoundanoldsodatinanddroppedhiscoinsinside.Thenheclimbedintothebarnandhidthetininit.ItwasdinnertimewhenReubengothome.HisfatherwasreadytoservedinnerasReubentookhisplaceatthetable.Helookedathismotherandsmiled.Slimandbeautiful,shewasthecenterofthehome,thegluethatheldittogether.Herchoreswerenever-ending.Butshewashappy.Herfamilyandtheirwell-beingwerehermostimportantthings.6段首句Paragraph1：Soonthesummervacationcame,andnostudentwasmoredelightedthanReuben.Paragraph2：Racinghome,Reubenburstintothehouse,wherehismotherwasbusyinthekitchen.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了1945年，12歲的魯本看到一枚5美元的漂亮胸針，雖價(jià)格遠(yuǎn)超其家庭承受能力，但他仍渴望買下。魯本家境貧寒，父親收入全交母親維持家用。他請求店主為其保留胸針，之后想到收集廢棄釘子袋賣錢的辦法。整個(gè)夏天他四處奔波收集袋子換錢。暑假結(jié)束時(shí)，他終于攢夠了錢，飛奔回家將裝滿硬幣的罐子交給母親，母親感動落淚，為兒子的愛與堅(jiān)持深感驕傲。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Soonthesummervacationcame,andnostudentwasmoredelightedthanReuben.暑假來臨，魯本興奮不已，因?yàn)樗辛顺渥愕臅r(shí)間去實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)。他每天早早起床，背著一個(gè)破舊的袋子，前往各個(gè)正在建設(shè)的房屋附近。他在塵土飛揚(yáng)的工地中仔細(xì)搜尋著每一個(gè)可能被丟棄的釘子袋，哪怕袋子被埋在雜物堆里，他也會耐心地翻找出來。有時(shí)他會遇到其他孩子在玩耍，他們邀請魯本一起，但魯本總是堅(jiān)定地?fù)u搖頭，繼續(xù)自己的“尋寶之旅”。每找到一個(gè)袋子，他就像找到了寶藏一樣開心，因?yàn)檫@意味著他離給母親買胸針的夢想又近了一步。隨著時(shí)間的推移，他收集的袋子越來越多，換來的錢也逐漸增多，他心中充滿了希望。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Racinghome,Reubenburstintothehouse,wherehismotherwasbusyinthekitchen.魯本沖進(jìn)家門，激動地叫著母親。母親從廚房探出頭來，看到兒子滿頭大汗卻滿臉笑容的樣子，感到十分詫異。魯本走到母親面前，鄭重地把舊蘇打罐遞給母親，說：“媽媽，這是給您的。”母親打開罐子，看到里面滿滿的硬幣，瞬間明白了一切。她的眼眶濕潤了，既感動又心疼地抱住魯本，說：“孩子，你辛苦了?！濒敱疽蕾嗽谀赣H懷里，說：“媽媽，我想讓您開心?！蹦赣H撫摸著他的頭，感慨兒子的懂事和堅(jiān)持。這一刻，溫馨與幸福彌漫在整個(gè)屋子里，他們的愛也在這個(gè)小小的舉動中得到了最美的詮釋。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Asthesummervacationarrived,Reubenwasoverjoyedashecouldnowfocusallhisenergyonearningthemoney.Everymorning,hewouldsetoutwithanoldsack,headingtotheconstructionsitesaroundtown.Hesearchedeverycornerforthediscardednailbags,notmindingthedirtanddust.Sometimes,thebagswereheavyanddifficulttocarry,buthenevergaveup.Herememberedthebeautifulbroochandhismother'ssmile,whichgavehimthestrengthtocontinue.Witheachbaghefound,hewouldrushtothefactorytoexchangeitforcents.Slowlybutsurely,themoneyinhissodatingrew,andhishopeofbuyingthebroochbecamestronger.14范文呈現(xiàn)Rushingintothehouse,Reubenshoutedforhismother.Whenshecameoutofthekitchen,shewasastonishedbyhissweatyyetexcitedface.Reubenwalkeduptoherandhandedhertheoldsodatin,saying,"Mom,thisisforyou."Ashismotheropenedthetinandsawthecoins,sheimmediatelyunderstood.Tearswelledupinhereyes.ShehuggedReubentightlyandsaid,"Son,you'veworkedsohard."Reubensnuggledinherarmsandreplied,"Mom,Ijustwanttomakeyouhappy."Hismotherstrokedhishead,deeplytouchedbyhisthoughtfulnessandperseverance.Atthatmoment,warmthandhappinessfilledthehouse,andtheirlovewasbeautifullyexpressedinthissimpleact.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Soonthesummervacationcame,andnostudentwasmoredelightedthanReuben.Withthearrivalofthevacation,hecouldwholeheartedlyengageinhismoney-earningmission.Everyday,hewouldsetoffearlyinthemorning,anoldsackslungoverhisshoulder,makinghiswaytothevariousconstructionsitesaroundtown.Searchingeverynookandcrannyforthediscardednailbags,hepaidnoheedtothedirtanddustthatcoveredhim.Despitethebagsbeingheavyandcumbersome,heneverthoughtofgivingup.Itwasthethoughtofthebeautifulbroochandhismother'slovingsmilethatdrovehimon.Wheneverhefoundabag,hewouldhurriedlyrushtothefactorytoexchangeitforcents.Gradually,themoneyinhissodatinaccumulated,andhisdreamofbuyingthebroochgrewnearer.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Racinghome,Reubenburstintothehouse,wherehismotherwasbusyinthekitchen.Outrushedhismotherwhensheheardhisexcitedshouts.Beholdinghissweatyyetbeamingface,shewasfilledwithastonishment.Reubensteppedforwardandpresentedtheoldsodatintoher,declaring,"Mom,thisisforyou."Uponope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