押南京卷第76題 書面表達(dá)（原卷版）

押南京卷第76題書面表達(dá)命題原則及特點(diǎn)1.著重考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用所學(xué)語言知識與技能來表達(dá)思想、進(jìn)行交際的能力。以書面的形式進(jìn)行信息溝通、再現(xiàn)生活經(jīng)歷、描述周圍事物、發(fā)表意見和觀點(diǎn)。2.最近幾年來書面表達(dá)在體裁和題材方面突出的特點(diǎn)是穩(wěn)中有變。話題更貼近學(xué)生生活，讓人人有話可說，有感可發(fā)，且發(fā)揮空間大。試題突出交際性和實(shí)用性。3.中考書面表達(dá)還是控制性加半開放性寫作。通過提供要點(diǎn)，降低了考生的寫作焦慮，同時也給考生足夠的寫作空間。4.中考寫作體裁是外在的、附屬的東西，是提供的。如何連貫、清楚、得體地表達(dá)內(nèi)涵才是學(xué)生真正需要關(guān)注的。從某種意義上說，初中寫作只是停留在翻譯的層面，它是語言的組織和觀點(diǎn)的表達(dá)，不是創(chuàng)作。1．（2021·江蘇南京·中考真題）某英文網(wǎng)站正在舉辦征文活動，請根據(jù)網(wǎng)站征文要求，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。Thisnewglobalsiteisaplaceforstudentstosharetheirideas.Wearelookingforyourbeautifulschooldaytoinspire（鼓舞）ourreaders.Didyouhelpanyoneatschool?Didyouenjoyabeautifulsonginyourartlesson?Didyouhaveanamazingexperienceintheschoollab?Yourschoollifeisfullofbeauty.Chooseabeautifulschoolday.Writeapassagetotelluswhatyoudidthatdayandwhyyouthinkitwasbeautiful.Sendyourwritingtousrightnow!注意:1.內(nèi)容涵蓋要點(diǎn),全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)80左右（已給出的文章開頭,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。MyBeautifulSchoolDayMyschoollifeisfullofbeauty.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2020·江蘇南京·中考真題）假如你是李華，在學(xué)校英文?？疜IDSMAG上看到招募夏令營營員的信息。請根據(jù)招募內(nèi)容，用英語給?？瘜懸环庑?。FUNLAND

Hi!Thissummerholidaywewillhavedifferentcampsforkids.Herearethreepopularones.Joinus!Makeachoiceandexplainwhyyouchooseit.ReadingCamp●Chineseliterature●Westernliterature●…CultureCamp●Westernmusic●Chineseart●…SportsCamp●Ballgames●Watersports●…Comeandhavefun!注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)（理由不得少于兩點(diǎn)），可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)80左右（已給出的文章開頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等.DearSirorMadam,Thanksforofferingussuchwonderfulcamps.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、英語寫作四步法：第一步：看清題目，確定時態(tài)和人稱；第二步：明確要點(diǎn)，抓住重點(diǎn)，擬定提綱；第三步：連句成篇，多用簡單句，少用無把握的復(fù)合句，若遇到不會寫的詞，有表達(dá)障礙，可以換種表達(dá)；第四步：檢查句子是否通順，是否有邏輯錯誤，是否漏掉題中要點(diǎn)二、用英語思維寫英語作文的技巧①直接了當(dāng)，開門見山②英語寫作高分就在于開頭（首句直接給出觀點(diǎn)）結(jié)尾和每段的首尾句③冷眼旁觀，話別說太絕，英語是一門邏輯性的語言=4\*GB3④學(xué)會舉例，越具體越好，一篇英文需要有內(nèi)涵，而內(nèi)涵的支撐靠舉例子=5\*GB3⑤英語例子一定要越細(xì)越好=6\*GB3⑥得連接詞著得天下，連接詞用的自然，貼切，自然能夠給文章添彩=7\*GB3⑦寫英語作文的過程就是在自問自答三、英語作文的思路點(diǎn)撥和范例思路點(diǎn)撥：第一段:兩到三句話,重要性+必要性第二段:注意連詞的使用+具體的建議第三段:兩到三句話,總結(jié)+美好的愿景3．（2024·江蘇南京·一模）

請仔細(xì)觀察下面圖片并發(fā)揮想象，用英語寫出一篇涵蓋每張圖片內(nèi)容且結(jié)局完整的故事。故事的開頭已經(jīng)給出。注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名學(xué)校名稱；2.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3.詞數(shù)80左右。Millieisamiddleschoolstudentwholovesplayingwithlittleanimals.Oneday,whenshewasonherwaytoschool,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2024·江蘇南京·一模）勞逸結(jié)合，方能游刃有余。課間十分鐘是一幅多彩的畫卷。請根據(jù)學(xué)校的征稿要求，寫一篇英語短文。Now,moreandmorestudentsarebusystudyingalldaylong.Thisweekwewantyoutohaveyoursayabouttheten-minutebreak.Whyisitnecessarytohavethebreak?Whatdoyouandyourclassmatesdoduringthebreak?Whatisyourgoodadviceonplanningthebreak?注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)80左右（已給出的文章開頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Wehaveaten-minutebreakbetweenclasses._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（23-24九年級下·江蘇南京·階段練習(xí)）在我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，能夠全身心地投入到一件事情中去，享受做事情的過程，是一種幸福！但求耕耘，不問收獲！某英文網(wǎng)站正在以“全身心投入(Devotion)”為主題的征文活動。假如你是慧潔，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，包含下列問題：1.Whatdidyoudevoteyourselfto?2.Howdidyoudoit?3.Whathaveyoulearntfromtheexperience?注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；2.詞數(shù)90詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DevotionI’mgladtosharemyideasaboutmydevotioninmylife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（23-24九年級下·江蘇南京·階段練習(xí)）我國的傳統(tǒng)文化源遠(yuǎn)流長，博大精深。我們隨時都能感受到傳統(tǒng)文化的氣息，它跳動在民族樂器回音裊裊的琴弦上，閃爍在國粹京劇色彩斑斕的臉譜上，綻放在異彩紛呈的民俗節(jié)日中，傳揚(yáng)在膾炙人口的中華詩詞里，描繪在歷史悠久的名勝古跡中……請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：(1)你最喜歡的傳統(tǒng)文化；(2)講述你體驗(yàn)傳統(tǒng)文化的一次經(jīng)歷；(3)談?wù)勀愕母惺?。注意?.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，全文連貫通順；2.詞數(shù)不少于80詞。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（23-24九年級上·江蘇南京·期末）義務(wù)教育階段“雙減政策”實(shí)施后，周末培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)不再提供服務(wù)，校內(nèi)課后服務(wù)全面覆蓋。為更好地幫學(xué)生自主安排課余時間，校網(wǎng)站張貼了一份問卷。假如你是張寧，請根據(jù)問卷內(nèi)容，用英語給校長回一封電子郵件。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右(已給出的文章開頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。2.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dearheadmaster,Thanksforofferingussuchmeaningfulchances.Iamgladtotellyousomethingaboutmyafter-schoolactivities.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,ZhangNing8．（23-24九年級上·江蘇南京·期末）現(xiàn)在，越來越多的外國學(xué)生對中華傳統(tǒng)文化很感興趣。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)你的筆友David的郵件，用英語給他回一封郵件。DearLiHua,Howareyougoingthesedays?OurschoolheldaChineseCultureDaylastweek.WefeltthebeautyofChinesemusic,thecharmofChinesepaintingsandthewisdomofChineseliterature.That’ssoamazing!Iwanttolearnmore.Couldyouintroduceyourfavouriteonetome?Pleasetellmeyourstoryaboutit.Andwhatdoyouthinkofit?I’mlookingforwardtoyourshare.Yours,David注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)不少于70詞(已給出的郵件開頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。DearDavid,I’mgladtoknowyouareinterestedinChineseculture._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopetohearfromyousoon.Allthebest,LiHua9．（23-24九年級上·江蘇南京·期末）BeforeSpudWebb’sproudestmomentcame,heworkedhardtoovercome(克服)hisheightdisadvantage;beforeTanDuncreatedamazingmusic,hehadtomakeaviolinhimselfwhenhewasveryyoungbecauseofhispoorfamily;beforeAudreyHepburnwasseenbytheworld,shesufferedhardshipsandstressesbeyondherageduringherchildhood.Weallexperiencedifficultiesandweallhavechancestosucceed.PleasewriteanarticleonthetopicofEverybodyCanBeaWinner,whichshouldinclude:(1)Whatdifficultydidyouexperience?(2)Howdidyouovercomethedifficulty?(3)Whatcanyoulearnfromtheexperience?注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右；2.內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和校名。EverybodyCanBeaWinner___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________