高考英語作文全省公開課金獎(jiǎng)全國賽課一等獎(jiǎng)微課獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)n件

1英語作文華麗變身BeautifyyourComposition1/24寫作訓(xùn)練—關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)1.越是好作文，內(nèi)容越豐富；2.越是不好作文，錯(cuò)誤越是被容忍；3.越是好作文，越不能出任何差錯(cuò)；4.越是好作文，字寫越好2/24美文關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)1.高級(jí)詞匯2.復(fù)雜句式3.完美過渡3/244詞匯使用四標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1、詞組優(yōu)先標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2、地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。3、防止重復(fù)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

4、后、高、長標(biāo)準(zhǔn)——后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長詞匯。4/24

begratefultosbforsthshowgratitudetosbforsthoweadebtofgratitudetosbforsthbeindebtedtosbsbappreciatesththanksbforsthbethankfultosbforsthgive/express/voicethankstosbgiveone’sappreciationtosbforsth詞組代替單詞Onbehalfofallseniorstudents,Iwouldliketothankmyparents,myfriendsandmyteachers.5/24

essentialcrucialvitalsignificantbelieveclaimconsiderfigureout

importantthinkNowadayscurrentlyat

presentnowrecentlythesedaysdifferent同義詞、近義詞替換6/247應(yīng)用較多詞匯It’sveryhelpful.Itbenefitsalot./Itisofgreathelp.SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.anincreasingnumberofpeopleYoureffortswillbeveryimportant.Youreffortswillmakeagreatdifference.moreandmorepeopleSuddenlyIhadagoodidea.7/24強(qiáng)調(diào)句名詞性從句慣用諺語…定語從句倒裝句with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)非謂語動(dòng)詞被動(dòng)句復(fù)雜句型

88/249一：必定不如雙否好二：陳說不如倒裝妙三：主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧四：分詞結(jié)構(gòu)不能少四不如復(fù)雜句式特點(diǎn)9/24實(shí)戰(zhàn)（1）Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.SuddenlyIthoughtofagoodidea.Agoodideaoccurredtome.Agoodideasuddenlystruck

me.

910/24實(shí)戰(zhàn)（2）他昨天下午來Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.

1011/2412將陳說句改為感嘆句Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant．Sheisaclevergirl．Howimportantitistopreventthepollution!whataclevergirlsheis!12/24將陳說句改為倒裝句Wecanachievesuccessinthisway.Itissoeasythatevenachildcandoit.Soeasyisitthatevenachildcandoit.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievesuccess.1313/24將簡單句改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句Smokingdidgreatharmtohishealth.

HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Itwassmokingthatdidgreatharmtohishealth.

HowisitthatwecanimproveourEnglish?1414/24合并為同位語從句LiuXiangisanexcellentathlete.HewonthefirstprizeintheOlympicGames.Thewordistrue.Theactorwillgiveusaspeech.LiuXiang,anexcellentathlete,wonthefirstprizeintheOlympicGames.

Thewordthattheactorwillgiveusaspeechistrue.1515/24合并為定語從句TheOlympicGameswasheldinBeijing,anditssloganwasOneWorldOneDream.YesterdaywewenttotheEastGate,andweboughtalotofclothes.TheOlympicGames,whosesloganwasOneWorldOneDream,washeldinBeijing.YesterdaywewenttotheEastGate,whereweboughtalotofclothes.1616/24必定不如雙否好Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime.Icouldn’thavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.

1717/24陳說不如倒裝妙Hedidn’tcomehereuntil5pm.Travellingcannotonlyrelaxus,butalsobroadenourhorizons.Notuntil5pm.didhecomehere.Itwasnotuntil5pm.thathecamehere.Notonlycantravellingrelaxus,butalsobroadenourhorizons.

1818/24主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧Wecanborrowfivebooks,andwecankeepthemforamonth.Themainproblemnowishowwecanpreventthisfromhappeningagain.Themainproblemnowishowthiscanbeprevented

fromhappeningagain.Fivebookscanbeborrowedandtheycanbekeptforamonth.

1919/24

Ifweatherpermits,wewillgohiking.Weatherpermitting,wewillgohiking.Beingastudent,I’dliketoknowthediscount.分詞結(jié)構(gòu)不能少

20一去（去連詞）二看（看主語）三改（改分詞）分詞結(jié)構(gòu)BecauseIamastudent,I’dliketoknowthediscount.20/24巧用過渡詞

21遞進(jìn)型：also,(and)besides,what’smore,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,even,what’sworse,worsestill,tomakemattersworse,fortheworse,notonly…butalso等；解釋型：thatis(tosay),inotherwords,or，namely,iffact,inreality,asamatteroffact等；轉(zhuǎn)折型：however,but,yet,nevertheless,instead,onthecoutrary,ontheotherhand等；列舉型：firstly…secondly…finally,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,foronething,foranother等21/24舉例型：forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatis,like,take…forexample等；因果型：because(of),since,nowthat,thanksto,dueto;thus,therefore,asaresult(consequence),so…that,sothat等；讓步型：though,although,inspiteof,despite等；次序型：first…next…andthen…finally,first…then…afterthat…finally等；并列型：and,both…and,or,either…or,aswellas,等巧用過渡詞22/24時(shí)間型：afterwards,soon,later,themoment/