專(zhuān)題09 書(shū)面表達(dá)（單元主題寫(xiě)作滿(mǎn)分范文）-八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下冊(cè)重難點(diǎn)講練全攻略（牛津上海版）

PAGE1PAGE2姓名：___________班級(jí)：___________考號(hào)：___________專(zhuān)題09書(shū)面表達(dá)（單元主題寫(xiě)作，滿(mǎn)分范文15篇）（解析版）一、書(shū)面表達(dá)1．（22-23八年級(jí)下·上海金山·期中）Writingapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Mymostexcitingday”.(以“最令我激動(dòng)的一天”為題，寫(xiě)一篇至少60個(gè)詞的短文，要求意思明確，內(nèi)容連貫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)(注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分)Suggestedquestions(以下問(wèn)題僅供參考)(1)Whenwasyourmostexcitingday?(2)Whatdidyoudoonthatday?(3)Whywasitthemostexcitingday?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：IcanstillrememberthedaywhenIfirstwenttothezoo.That’sthemostexcitingdayI’veneverhad.Itwasafineday.WhenIgottothezoo,Ijustcouldn’twaittoseetheanimals.Thereweresomanyanimalsinit,suchasmonkeys,tigers,lions,bears,elephants,pandasandsoon.Allofthemwereinthecages.Themonkeyswerenaughty.Tigersandlionsmademescared.Andthepandasweresolovely.IwassoexcitedthatdaybecauseIwasclosetoanimals.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意圍繞“信息提示”介紹最興奮的一天是什么時(shí)候，講述那天做了什么，談?wù)劄槭裁茨翘焓亲罴?dòng)人心的一天。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹最興奮的一天是什么時(shí)候；第二步，講述那天做了什么；第三步，談?wù)劄槭裁茨翘焓亲罴?dòng)人心的一天。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①getto到達(dá)②can’twaittodosth迫不及待做某事③suchas例如[高分句型]①I(mǎi)wassoexcitedthatdaybecauseIwasclosetoanimals.（使用because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②WhenIgottothezoo,Ijustcouldn’twaittoseetheanimals.（使用when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）2．（22春八年級(jí)下·上海嘉定·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthegiventopic(根據(jù)以下話(huà)題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)Therearealotofusefulresourcesinourlife.Pleasechooseoneandwriteatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Theimportanceof____________”(我們的生活中有許多有用的資源，請(qǐng)選取一種以“____________的重要性”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)Suggestedquestions:Whyisthethingimportant?Whatcanwedowithit?Whatcanwedotoprotectit?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheimportanceofsavingwaterItiswidelyacceptedthattheroleofwatercannotbereplacedbyanyotherthinginourdailylife,butfewpeopleareawarethatthefreshwaterisreducingsharply.So,whatshouldwedo?AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldusewatertwiceormore.Forexample,wecanusewateraftercleaningthericetowatertheplants.Furthermore,turnoffthetapwheneverwestopusingit.Lastbutnotleast,pollutedwatershouldbedealtwithintimetokeeptherivercleanbecausewecannotlivewithoutwater.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,weshouldpaycloseattentiontodailywater.Let’sactnowtosavewater.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說(shuō)明文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作時(shí)需要圍繞題干提出的問(wèn)題展開(kāi)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，并引出要保護(hù)的資源；第二步，詳細(xì)介紹采取的措施；第三步，最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①asfarasIamconcerned就我而言②turnoff關(guān)閉③lastbutnotleast最后[高分句型]①I(mǎi)tiswidelyacceptedthattheroleofwatercannotbereplacedbyanyotherthinginourdailylife,butfewpeopleareawarethatthefreshwaterisreducingsharply.（it作形式主語(yǔ)）②Furthermore,turnoffthetapwheneverwestopusingit.（whenever引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）3．（22春八年級(jí)下·上海長(zhǎng)寧·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Useelectricitysafely”.（你發(fā)現(xiàn)你身邊的親朋好友經(jīng)常有不安全用電的行為，有很大的危險(xiǎn)隱患。請(qǐng)以“安全用電”為題寫(xiě)一篇60—120詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasaguide:（寫(xiě)作必須包含以下內(nèi)容）1.Howdosomepeopleuseelectricity?2.Whyshouldweuseelectricitysafely?3.What’syoursuggestiononusingelectricitysafely?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Useelectricitysafely

Usingelectricitysafelyisaveryimportanttopicinourdailylives.

First,ensureanyelectricalitemsareapprovedstandardwhenpurchasingandkeepthemcorrectlymaintained.Second,unplugelectricalitemsthatarenotinregularuseandensurethatyouunplugandswitchoffelectricalitemswhenyouareawayfromthehouseforanylengthoftime.Third,don’tuseanyelectricalitemsinthebathroomunlessspecificallydesignedforusethere,suchasshaversandelectrictoothbrushes.Butwhenyouusethem,makesurenottogetthemwetandavoidpluggingandunpluggingwithwethands.Thelast,alwaysturntheelectricsoffatthemainsifcarryingoutanyelectricalrepairsandonlyattemptrepairsifyouknowwhatyouaredoing.

Weshoulduseelectricitycarefullybecauseitemsleftpluggedincanbeafireriskandwasteenergyifleftonstandby.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說(shuō)明文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“提示信息”中“應(yīng)該如何用電；安全用電的原因以及安全用電的建議”，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“安全用電是我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪蟹浅Ｖ匾脑?huà)題?！眮?lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。從“如何安全用電以及安全用電的建議”重點(diǎn)介紹安全用電的具體情況；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“我們應(yīng)該謹(jǐn)慎用電，因?yàn)椴迳想娫吹奈锲啡绻幱诖龣C(jī)狀態(tài)，則可能會(huì)引發(fā)火災(zāi)，并浪費(fèi)能源?！盵亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①switchoff關(guān)上②makesurenottodosth確保不做某事[高分句型]①Third,don’tuseanyelectricalitemsinthebathroomunlessspecificallydesignedforusethere,suchasshaversandelectrictoothbrushes.（don’t...祈使句的否定形式，表勸告）②Weshoulduseelectricitycarefullybecauseitemsleftpluggedincanbeafireriskandwasteenergyifleftonstandby.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）4．（22春八年級(jí)下·上海浦東新·期中）TheEarthDayiscomingonApril22nd.WhatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentonourEarth?Pleasewriteatleast60wordsonthetopic“HowtoprotectourMotherEarth”.（以“如何保護(hù)我們的地球母親”為題，根據(jù)英文提示寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)單詞的短文）Suggestedquestions:1.WhatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentonourEarth?2.WhatcanyoudotoprotectourMotherEarth?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtoprotectourMotherEarthInthelastfewyears,wehavebeenfacedwithseriousenvironmentalproblems,suchasglobalwarming,airpollutionandenergyshortage.IthinkitistimeforustotakeactiontoprotectourMotherEarth.Firstofall,weshouldformthehabitofsavingfoodfromnowon.Besides,we’dbettertravelbybusorbybiketoprotecttheenvironment.What’smore,itisagoodideatorecyclewaste.Itcanhelpusmakebetteruseofthelimitedresource.WeonlyhaveoneEarth.Let’tdosomethinghelpfulbeforeitistoolate!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏“要點(diǎn)”中你能做什么來(lái)保護(hù)我們的地球，注意要點(diǎn)要齊全。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題。介紹我們的地球面臨著嚴(yán)重的環(huán)境問(wèn)題；第二步，具體闡述我們能做什么來(lái)保護(hù)我們的地球；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。呼吁大家現(xiàn)在就行動(dòng)起來(lái)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①befacedwith面臨，面對(duì)②suchas比如③firstofall首先④fromnowon從現(xiàn)在起⑤what’smore除此之外還⑥makeuseof利用[高分句型]①I(mǎi)thinkitistimeforustotakeactiontoprotectourMotherEarth.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）②Let’tdosomethinghelpfulbeforeitistoolate!（祈使句；before引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）5．（22-23八年級(jí)下·上海青浦·期中）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.（根據(jù)以下情境寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）假如你是李華，最近你發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)校里存在浪費(fèi)和破壞各類(lèi)資源的情況，例如：有的學(xué)生在水龍頭邊打水仗等。請(qǐng)你選取一個(gè)方面，給同學(xué)們寫(xiě)一篇倡議書(shū)，說(shuō)說(shuō)你的看法，并提出解決問(wèn)題的具體行動(dòng)。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Recently,Ihavefoundthattherearesituationsofwasteanddestructionofvariousresourcesinschools.Forexample,insomeclassrooms,thelightsareonwithoutanyone.Althoughthenationallivingstandardshaveimproved,electricityasanenergysourceisstillnotsufficient.Soweneedtosaveelectricity.Firstly,whenweleavetheclassroom,wemustturnoffthepowersupply.Secondly,ifwecanseeclearly,donotturnonthelights.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，針對(duì)存在浪費(fèi)和破壞各類(lèi)資源的情況介紹你的看法；第二步，提出解決問(wèn)題的具體行動(dòng)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①sufficient足夠的②turnoff關(guān)掉[高分句型]①Althoughthenationallivingstandardshaveimproved,electricityasanenergysourceisstillnotsufficient.（although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）②Secondly,ifwecanseeclearly,donotturnonthelights.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）6．（22-23八年級(jí)下·上海奉賢·期中）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Theimportanceof________”(我們的生活中有很多重要的東西，你認(rèn)為什么對(duì)于你或者人們很重要，談?wù)勀愕南敕ú㈥U述理由，鑒于它的重要性，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)怎么做？請(qǐng)以“__________的重要性”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，要求意思明確、內(nèi)容連貫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)。)Suggestedquestions:1.Whatdoyouthinkisimportant?2.Whydoyouthinkitisimportant?3.Whatshouldwedotoprotectit?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Whensomethingconfusesus,wewillnaturallytofindsomeonetotalkaboutit.Thefirstchoiceisafriend.Friendsaresoimportantinourlives.Welivetogetherandweshareourhappinessorsadnesswiththem.Friendsarepartsofourlives.Whatwillhappenifsomeonehasnofriends?Wehearthatthecriminalsareisolatedbyothersbecausemostofthemhavenofriends.Withoutfriends,peoplecannotexpresstheiremotionsandtheywillbecomelonelyandindifferenteasily.Wecan’tlivewithoutfriends.Weshouldlearntocaremoreaboutothersandhelpothers.Inthisway,wewillmakemorefriendsandourfriendshipwilllastlongeraswell.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)及一般將來(lái)時(shí)；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，表述完整。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，直入主題表述我認(rèn)為生活中朋友是重要的；第二步，表述為什么認(rèn)為朋友很重要；第三步，表述我們?nèi)绾巫霾拍芫S持友誼。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①talkabout討論②careabout關(guān)心③Inthisway用這種方式[高分句型]①Whensomethingconfusesus,wewillnaturallytofindsomeonetotalkaboutit.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②Whatwillhappenifsomeonehasnofriends?（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）7．（23-24八年級(jí)·上海奉賢·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“AhelpinghandIgave”（以“我伸出的一次援助之手”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)單詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）幫助別人自己也會(huì)快樂(lè)，即使一件微不足道的小事也會(huì)令自己感到快樂(lè)。你在生活中一定也有向需要幫助的人伸出援助之手的經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)你選取其中一件，談一談你是如何提供幫助的及你的感受。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AhelpinghandIgaveHelpingothersbringsmehappinessandmakesmylifemeaningful.Igrowupalotbyhelpingothers.IamgoodatEnglishandcanalwaysgetgoodgradesinEnglishexams.Thenoneday,mybestfriendTinaaskedmetohelpherwithherEnglish.SoIsharedsomeusefulwaystolearnEnglish.Eachtimeshehastroublewithherhomework,I’lltrymybesttoexplainasclearlyaspossible.I’mgladthatTinahasmadegreatprogressinEnglish.Ifeelastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhenhelpingothers.Itmakesmerealizethatthemoreyougive,thehappieryouwillbe.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話(huà)題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏相關(guān)要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，幫助別人能夠帶給我快樂(lè)，讓我的生活更有意義；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，詳細(xì)說(shuō)明如何提供幫助；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，幫助別人能夠給我?guī)?lái)滿(mǎn)足感。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①getgoodgradesinEnglishexams英語(yǔ)考試取得好成績(jī)②tryone’sbesttodo盡最大努力去……[高分句型]Itmakesmerealizethatthemoreyougive,thehappieryouwillbe.(賓語(yǔ)從句)8．（23-24八年級(jí)·上海浦東新·期中）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“An/A__________(unusual,interesting,special...)experienceinmylife”(以《一次……的經(jīng)歷》為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文。要求內(nèi)容貼切，意思連貫，不少于60個(gè)詞，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)

Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下問(wèn)題僅供參考）1.

Whenandwheredidithappen?2.

Whathappened?3.

Howdidyoufeelaboutit?4.

Whydidyouthinkso?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：AsuccessfulexperienceinmylifeInmymemory,therearefullofsuccessfulexperiences.Themostunforgettableonehappenedatschoollastterm.IwasnotgoodatsubjectsatschoolandIcouldn’tgetgoodmarksinexams.IfeltworriedaboutmystudysoIdecidedtoworkmuchharder.Ilistenedtotheteachersmorecarefullyinclassanddidmoreexercisesafterclass.What’smore,Ioftenaskedmyteachersforhelp.AlthoughImetalotofdifficulties,Ididn’tgiveup.NowIhavedonebetterinmystudy.IbelievethatnothingistoodifficultifIputmyheartintoit.IfImeetwithdifficultiesinmylife,Ishouldtrymybesttoovercomethem.Inaword,onlythepersonwhoovercomesdifficultieswillbesuccessful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；描述經(jīng)歷用“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并且突出寫(xiě)作的要點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。直接說(shuō)明要描述什么樣的經(jīng)歷及發(fā)生的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。重點(diǎn)介紹了這次經(jīng)歷的過(guò)程；第三步，描述自己的感受和啟發(fā)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①arefullof充滿(mǎn)②themostunforgettableone最難以忘懷的③difficulty困難④overcome克服[高分句型]①I(mǎi)listenedtotheteachersmorecarefullyinclassanddidmoreexercisesafterclass.（比較級(jí)）②AlthoughImetalotofdifficulties,Ididn’tgiveup.（讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）9．（22-23八年級(jí)·上海奉賢·期中）Everyonehassomechallengesinhislife.Howcanyoudealwithchallengeswhenyoufacethem?Thinkaboutoneofthechallengesyouhavefacedandwriteatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“facingchallenges”.（每個(gè)人的生活中會(huì)遇到各種挑戰(zhàn)，想一想當(dāng)你面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)時(shí)，你是如何應(yīng)對(duì)的。聯(lián)系一次你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷，以“面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60字的短文。以下問(wèn)題可供參考。）1.Whatwasyourchallenge?2.Howdidyoufeelwhenyoufacedthechallenge?3.Howdidyoudealwiththechallenge?4.Whatdidyoulearnfromtheexperience?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例：FacingchallengesLifeisfilledwithchallenges.Inmystudy,Ialwaysmeetwithnewchallenges.WhenIwasingradeeight,Iusedtofailmyfinalmathexams.Thiswasaseriousproblembecausemathisaveryimportantsubject.However,Ididnotquit.Ilistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclass.IalsodidasmanyexercisesasIcould.Besides,Iturnedtomyteacherandclassmatesforhelp.Intheend,afterseveralmonths’hardwork,Ipassedthefinalexam.Lookingbackonthis,IrealizethatwhateverchallengesIamfacedwith,ifIcansparenoeffortsandnevergiveup,Iwillgetthemover.What’smore,thosechallengesmakemewhoIam.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)以問(wèn)題的方式給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏；適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)作主題“生活充滿(mǎn)挑戰(zhàn)”；第二步，闡述具體寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。從挑戰(zhàn)的內(nèi)容、面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)的感受、解決措施三方面闡述面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)的具體情況；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，總結(jié)面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)學(xué)習(xí)到的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①befilledwith充滿(mǎn)②as…assb.could盡可能……③turntosb.forhelp向某人求助④sparenoefforts不遺余力[高分句型]①WhenIwasingradeeight,Iusedtofailmyfinalmathexams.(usedto)②Lookingbackonthis,IrealizethatwhateverchallengesIamfacedwith,ifIcansparenoeffortsandnevergiveup,Iwillgetthemover.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)10．（22-23八年級(jí)下·河北邢臺(tái)·期中）假設(shè)你是李華，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部要開(kāi)展以“KeepSafe,StartwithMe”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文投稿。要求：（1）結(jié)構(gòu)完整、條理清晰、語(yǔ)言通暢。（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。（3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。KeepSafe,StartwithMeDoyouknowhowtokeepsafeinourdailylife?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：KeepSafe,StartwithMeDoyouknowhowtokeepsafeinourdailylife?TodayI’dliketotellyousomewaystokeepsafe.First,alwaysplayinasafeplace.Wemustn’tplayonthestreet.Aparkisasafeplacebecausetherearenocarsorbusesinit.Second,followthetrafficrules.Beforecrossingaroad,stopandlookbothways.Neverputyourheadoutofarunningcar.Manypeoplegethurtbydoingso.Third,don’ttalktoastrangerorgowithhimorher.Fourth,wehadbetterknowhowtogivefirstaidincaseofanaccident.That’swhatIwanttosay.Startwithmenow,let’skeepsafeinourdailylife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述并適當(dāng)拓展。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，引出主題，介紹保持安全的方法；第二步，具體介紹保持安全的方法；第三步，倡導(dǎo)大家從自己做起，在日常生活中保證自己的安全。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①tellsb.sth.告訴某人某事②followthetrafficrules遵守交通規(guī)則③givefirstaid進(jìn)行急救[高分句型]①First,alwaysplayinasafeplace.（祈使句的肯定形式）②Aparkisasafeplacebecausetherearenocarsorbusesinit.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句；therebe句型）11．（22-23八年級(jí)·上海普陀·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Theheroinmyheart”(以“我心中的英雄”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)提示：每個(gè)人在成長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程中總會(huì)遇見(jiàn)一些對(duì)你產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)影響的人，他/她是“你心中的英雄”。請(qǐng)你用一件具體事例來(lái)講述你心中的英雄激勵(lì)你的故事。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheHeroinMyHeartYuanLongpingisaheroinmyheart.Hewasbornin1930anddiedattheageof91.Mr.Yuanspentnearly60yearsdoingresearchonbetterriceinordertomakepeopleintheworldhaveenoughfood.Andhewassuccessful!HewashonoredasFatherofHybridRice.IthinkMr.Yuanwasagreatman.Hewassoselflessandhard-workingthatIrespecthimverymuch.Iwillneverforgethim.Asastudent,Ihavedecidednottowasteanyfoodfromnowon.Also,I’llstudyharderthanbeforesothatIcanmastermoreknowledgeandskills.WhenIgrowup,I’llworkhardforourcountrylikehim.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話(huà)題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：本文話(huà)題已給出，介紹心目中的英雄，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，直入主題引出自己心目中的英雄；第二步，詳細(xì)介紹其基本情況并介紹他都做了什么事；第三步，寫(xiě)你為什么崇拜他；第四步，寫(xiě)你從他身上學(xué)到了什么。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①attheageof在……歲②inorderto為了③behonoredas被授予④studyharder更努力地學(xué)習(xí)[高分句型]①I(mǎi)thinkMr.Yuanwasagreatman.（賓語(yǔ)從句）②Hewassoselflessandhard-workingthatIrespecthimverymuch.（so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句）③I’llstudyharderthanbeforesothatIcanmastermoreknowledgeandskills.（sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句）12．（22-23八年級(jí)下·上海寶山·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Makeourcitybetter”（以“使我們的城市更美好”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）作為上海的公民，建設(shè)美麗的綠色城市是我們每個(gè)人的責(zé)任。生活中，有些人積極做到低碳出行，有些人嚴(yán)格進(jìn)行垃圾分類(lèi)，有的人注意節(jié)約能源，還有的參與綠化城市……請(qǐng)你談?wù)勀愦蛩阍鯓幼觯㈥U明理由。（注意：作文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的中文姓名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MakeourcitybetterWeshouldmakeourcityabetterplacetolivein.Inourdailylife,wecandolotsofthings.Forexample,whenwegoshopping,wecantakeclothbagsinsteadofusingplasticbags.Recyclingglasses,cansandwastepaperisalsoagoodideatoprotecttheenvironment.Second,wemustobeythetrafficrules.Breakingrulesisverydangerousanditmaycausebigaccidents.Ifweobeythetrafficrules,we’llhaveabetterandsaferlife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話(huà)題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫(xiě)作題目已給出，考生注意不要偏題，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，引出主題，使城市更好；第二步，細(xì)節(jié)介紹做法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①insteadof而不是②Recycling回收利用[高分句型]①I(mǎi)fweobeythetrafficrules,we’llhaveabetterandsaferlife.（條件狀語(yǔ)從句）②Forexample,whenwegoshopping,wecantakeclothbagsinsteadofusingplasticbags.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）13．（22春八年級(jí)下·上?！て谥校￤riteapassageofatleast60wordsabout“Electricityinourdailylife”.（以“電和我們的日常生活”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下內(nèi)容僅供參考）1.Whatrolesdoeselectricityplayinourdailylife?2.Whatshouldwedotouseelectricityproperly?Electricityinourdailylife____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文ElectricityinourdailylifeElectricityisamajorkindofpowerweusealotinourdailylife.Athomeweuseitforthelights,TVs,airconditioningandsoon.Andinfactories,electricitymakesthelargemachinesworksothattherearesomanydifferentsortsofproductsinthemarket.Therefore,electricitygivesusamorecolorfullifeandhelpsthesocietydevelop.Ifthereisnoelectricity,wecan’twatchTV,playcomputergamesorusemobilephones.So,weshouldsaveelectricity.Weshouldturnoffthelightswhenweleavetheroom.Inaword,everyoneshouldplayapartinsavingelectricity.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話(huà)題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：考生應(yīng)注意按照所給問(wèn)題的提示作答，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)明電力與人類(lèi)的關(guān)系，并具體闡述電力在生活中的作用；第二步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，提醒大家節(jié)約用電。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①akindof一種②turnoff關(guān)掉，關(guān)閉③playapartin在……中起作用[高分句型]①Electricityisamajorkindofpowerweusealotinourdailylife.（省略引導(dǎo)詞的定語(yǔ)從句）②Ifthereisnoelectricity,wecan’twatchTV,playcomputergamesorusemobilephones.（if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句）14．（22-23八年級(jí)下·上海靜安·期中）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaccordingtothetopic“Electricity”.以“電”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。.Suggestedquestions：1.Whatiselectricity?2.Wheredoeselectricitycomefrom?3.Whyiselectricityimportant?_____