讀后續(xù)寫+冬日里的溫情故事+講義 高三省一模適應(yīng)性測試英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Walkingonthestreet,thebittercoldofaDecemberdayinWashington,D.C.wasruiningmymood.ThetemperaturewasbelowzerosoIduckedintothesubwaystation,hopingtogetwarm.WarmthcametomybodyasIsettledontoabenchwithacupofhotcoffee.NowIwasreadytorelaxanddosomeseriouspeople-watching.Inoticedahomelessmanseatednearby.Thepleasantsmellofdeliciousfoodfromthesubwayfoodcourt(餐飲區(qū))wastemptingmetoconsideranearlydinner.Fromthelonginglookinmyneighbor’seyesitwasobviousthathe,too,noticedthegoodsmell.Iwonderedhowlongithadbeensincehehadeatenanything,expectinghewouldapproachmeforahandout(施舍).Butheneverdid.Myheadandheartwerebattlingitout:theformertellingmetomindmyownbusiness,andthelatterurgingmetomakeanimmediatetriptothefoodcourtforhim.Whilethisinnerdebatewasfierce,awell-dressedyoungcouplesuddenlyapproached.“Excuseme,sir,”beganthehusband.“Wejustfinishedeatingandourappetitewasn’tasbigaswethought.Wehatetowastefood.Canyouhelpusoutandputthistogooduse?”Thekindstrangerhandedalargecontainerwithfood.“Thankyou.”camethegratefulreply.FeelinggoodaboutwhatIhadseen,butdisappointedbymyownlackofaction,Iobservedmyneighbor’sresponsetohissuddengoodfortune.Heliftedthesoup,cuppinghishandsaroundthesteamingbowl.Itwasobviousthathewasgoingtoenjoythismiraclemeal.Heopenedhismouthandsuddenly,hestopped.Thereasonforthisunexpectedbehaviorsoonbecameclear.Enteringthehallwasanewarrival,inhisseventies,hatlessandgloveless.Hislightweightjacketwasapoorprotectionagainstcold.Hisfaceandhandswereredanddamaged.Peoplearoundfocusedonhimwithpityandwhisperedatthissadsight.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Myneighborwastheonlyonetotakeaction.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TearsblurredmyvisionwhenIwenttobuyfoodatthefoodcourt.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意這篇文章講述了一個發(fā)生在華盛頓地鐵站的感人故事。在一個寒冷的12月，作者在地鐵站躲避嚴(yán)寒時，注意到了一位無家可歸的人。作者內(nèi)心掙扎，是否要為他提供幫助，但最終沒有采取行動。此時，一對年輕夫婦將自己吃不完的食物送給了這位無家可歸的人。然而，當(dāng)一位年邁且衣衫單薄的老人進(jìn)入地鐵站時，無家可歸的人毫不猶豫地將自己的食物讓給了老人。這一行為深深觸動了作者，讓他意識到自己的自私和冷漠，并促使他反思和行動。故事展現(xiàn)了人性中的善良與無私，以及小小的善舉如何傳遞溫暖。故事山分析引入：作者在寒冷的12月躲避嚴(yán)寒，進(jìn)入地鐵站。上升：作者注意到一位無家可歸的人，內(nèi)心掙扎是否要幫助他。沖突：作者猶豫不決，而一對年輕夫婦主動將食物送給了無家可歸的人。高潮：無家可歸的人將食物讓給了另一位更需要的老人。結(jié)局：作者深受觸動，決定采取行動，為需要的人提供幫助。伏筆及回應(yīng)伏筆：作者提到“我的頭和心在交戰(zhàn)”，暗示內(nèi)心的掙扎?；貞?yīng)：作者最終沒有采取行動，但被無家可歸的人的行為觸動。伏筆：無家可歸的人“渴望地看著食物”，但沒有伸手乞討。回應(yīng)：他將食物讓給了更需要的老人，展現(xiàn)了無私。伏筆：作者提到“我期待他會向我乞討，但他沒有”?；貞?yīng)：無家可歸的人沒有乞討，反而主動幫助他人。伏筆：作者提到“我為自己沒有行動而感到失望”。回應(yīng)：作者最終決定彌補(bǔ)自己的不足，主動為他人提供幫助。伏筆：作者提到“我準(zhǔn)備去吃晚飯”，暗示他有能力提供幫助?；貞?yīng)：作者最終去買了食物，幫助了需要的人。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）第一段：描述無家可歸的人如何將食物讓給老人，以及他的行為對周圍人的影響。關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)：無家可歸者的無私行為，老人的反應(yīng)，作者的感動。第二段：描述作者的反思和行動，以及這次經(jīng)歷給他的啟示。關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)：作者的內(nèi)心掙扎，最終的行動，對人性的思考。情感線（150字）文章通過作者的內(nèi)心掙扎、無家可歸者的無私行為以及作者的反思，展現(xiàn)了情感的起伏。作者在寒冷的天氣中感到冷漠，內(nèi)心掙扎是否要幫助他人，但最終沒有行動。然而，無家可歸者的無私行為深深觸動了他，讓他感到羞愧和自責(zé)。這種情感的轉(zhuǎn)變最終促使作者采取行動，為需要的人提供幫助。故事傳達(dá)了善良和無私的力量，以及小小的善舉如何溫暖人心。故事線作者在寒冷的天氣中進(jìn)入地鐵站躲避嚴(yán)寒。作者注意到一位無家可歸的人，內(nèi)心掙扎是否要幫助他。一對年輕夫婦將食物送給了無家可歸的人。無家可歸的人將食物讓給了另一位更需要的老人。作者深受觸動，決定彌補(bǔ)自己的不足。作者反思這次經(jīng)歷，意識到善良和無私的力量。主旨升華句Kindnessisnotabouthowmuchyougive,butabouthowmuchitmeanstothosewhoreceiveit.Sometimes,thesmallestactsofgenerositycanmakethebiggestdifferenceinsomeone’slife.Truecompassioncomesfromrecognizingtheneedsofothersandtakingaction,nomatterhowsmall.Asingleactofkindnesscancreatearippleeffectthatwarmstheheartsofmany.Inaworldfilledwithcoldness,asimpleactofkindnesscanbringunexpectedwarmth.寫作示范（兩篇）示例1：Myneighborwastheonlyonetotakeaction.Withoutamoment’shesitation,hestoodupandwalkedtowardstheoldman.Hehandedthecontaineroffoodtohim,saying,“Here,thisisforyou.IthinkyouneeditmorethanIdo.”Theoldman’seyeswidenedwithsurpriseandgratitude.Heacceptedthefoodwithtremblinghandsandmumbledaheartfelt“Thankyou.”Myneighborpattedhimontheshoulderandreturnedtohisseat,asmallbutcontentedsmileonhisface.Thekindnessheshowedwasastarkcontrasttothecoldnessoftheweather.Irealizedinthatmomenthowmuchwarmthasimpleactofgenerositycouldbring.ItwasalessoninempathyandcompassionthatIwouldneverforget.TearsblurredmyvisionwhenIwenttobuyfoodatthefoodcourt.Ifeltamixofadmirationformyneighborandregretformyowninaction.AsIstoodinline,Idecidedtomakeamends.Iorderedextrafood,hopingtodomypartinhelpingthoseinneed.WhenIreturnedtothebench,Ihandedthefoodtoanotherpersonwholookedcoldandhungry.Thistime,Ididn’twaitforsomeoneelsetotaketheinitiative.Ilearnedthatsometimes,thesmallestgesturescanmakethebiggestdifference.Theexperienceremindedmethatkindnessisnotjustaboutgrandgestures,butaboutrecognizingtheneedsofothersandtakingaction,nomatterhowsmall.示例2：Myneighborwastheonlyonetotakeaction.Hestoodupandwalkedtowardstheoldman,whowasshiveringinthecold.Withagentlesmile,hehandedthecontaineroffoodtohim,saying,“IthinkyouneedthismorethanIdo.”Theoldman’sfacelitupwithgratitude,andheacceptedthefoodwithtremblinghands.“Thankyou,”hewhispered,hisvoicefilledwithemotion.Myneighbornoddedandreturnedtohisseat,hiseyesshiningwithaquietsatisfaction.Iwatchedinawe,feelingapangofguiltformyownhesitation.Hissimpleactofkindnesshadnotonlywarmedtheoldman’sbodybutalsohisheart.TearsblurredmyvisionwhenIwenttobuyfoodatthefoodcourt.Ifeltadeepsenseofadmirationformyneighborandregretformyowninaction.AsIstoodinline,Idecidedtodosomething.Iorderedextrafoodandreturnedtothestation,determinedtomakeadifference.Thistime,Iapproachedayoungmotherwithacryingbabyandhandedherthefood.“Ihopethishelps,”Isaidsoftly.Shelookedup,surprisedandgrateful,andthankedme.Inthatmoment,Irealizedthatkindnessisnotabouthowmuchyougive,butabouthowmuchitmeanstothosewhoreceiveit.【答案】Myneighborwastheonlyonetotakeaction.Hestoodup,walkedovertothenewcomer,andgentlyofferedhimthesteamingbowlofsoup.Theoldman’seyeslitupwithsurpriseandgratitudeasheacceptedtheunexpectedkindness.Myneighborthenreturnedtohisseat,satisfiedwithhisdecisiontosharehismeal.Theatmospherei