2025版高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)技能保分練二十一短文改錯(cuò)

PAGE1-專項(xiàng)技能保分練(二十一)短文改錯(cuò)Test1[2024·湖北省聯(lián)考]DearWangping，Howarethingsgoingwithyou?It'sbeensixmonthsinceyoustudiedabroadinEngland.Itisthefirsttimethatyouhadbeenabroad.Withoutdoubt,itishardtofitinthelifeinaforeigncountry.Haveyougotaccustomtolivingthere?Andhowaboutthefood?Asanexchangestudent,haveyouovercomeallthedifficultiesyouhavelearnEnglish?Canyouunderstandthattheteacherssayinclassandcommunicatefreewithyourclassmatesnow?Youaresuchsmartthatyoumusthavebeenmaderapidprogressinyourstudies.EverythingisOKwithme.Ioftenrecallthehappydaysthatwestayedtogether.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours，LiHua答案與解析：DearWangping，Howarethingsgoingwithyou?It'sbeensixeq\o(month,\s\do10(①months))sinceyoustudiedabroadinEngland.Itisthefirsttimethatyoueq\o(had,\s\do10(②have))beenabroad.Withoutdoubt,itishardtofitineq\o(∧,\s\do10(③with))thelifeinaforeigncountry.Haveyougoteq\o(accustom,\s\do10(④accustomed))tolivingthere?Andhowaboutthefood?Asanexchangestudent,haveyouovercomeallthedifficultiesyouhaveeq\o(learn,\s\do10(⑤learning))English?Canyouunderstandeq\o(that,\s\do10(⑥what))theteacherssayinclassandcommunicateeq\o(free,\s\do10(⑦freely))withyourclassmatesnow?Youareeq\o(such,\s\do10(⑧so))smartthatyoumusthavebeeneq\o(,\s\do10(⑨so))maderapidprogressinyourstudies.EverythingisOKwithme.Ioftenrecallthehappydayseq\o(that,\s\do10(⑩when))westayedtogether.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours，LiHua①month改為monthsmonth為可數(shù)名詞，前有six修飾，應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。故將month改為months。②had改為have此句“Itisthefirsttimethatsbhavedone...”是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的固定句型之一，故將had改為have。③在in后加withfitinwith...為固定搭配，意為“適應(yīng)……”，故在in后加with。④accustom改為accustomedgetaccustomedtodoingsth.意為“習(xí)慣于做某事”，為固定用法，故將accustom改為accustomed。⑤learn改為learning分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處為havedifficulty(in)doingsth.的變形。故將learn改為learning。⑥that改為what分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，understand為動(dòng)詞，后接賓語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句引導(dǎo)詞在從句中作say的賓語(yǔ)，故將that改為what。⑦free改為freelycommunicate為動(dòng)詞，應(yīng)用副詞修飾。freely意為“自由地”；free作為副詞時(shí)，意為“免費(fèi)地”，不符合語(yǔ)境。故將free改為freely。⑧such改為sosmart為形容詞，前面應(yīng)用so修飾；such常用來(lái)修飾名詞結(jié)構(gòu)。故將such改為so。⑨刪除beenmake與其主語(yǔ)you之間為主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故應(yīng)用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，故刪除been。⑩that改為when分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，...westayedtogether為定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為days，定語(yǔ)從句引導(dǎo)詞在從句中作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，應(yīng)用when引導(dǎo)。故將that改為when。Test2[2024·重慶一中檢測(cè)]TeahasalonghistoryinChina,datedbackto5,000yearsago.Obvious,itplaysanimportantpartinChineseculture.Agoodmanyofdistinguishedpoetsandwritershadwrittenmanymasterpiecesabouttheappreciateofteaandtheloveforit,amongthemwasLuYuintheTangdynasty.HewroteTheClassicofTea,afirstbookontea,buthewasregardedasthe“TeaSaint(圣人)”．Chinesepeopletakedelightintea-drinking.Itservedalmosteverywhere.Wheneverguestvisit,offeringacupofteatothemisabasicsocialcustom.TeaispartofChinesepeople'sdailylife.答案與解析：TeahasalonghistoryinChina,eq\o(dated,\s\do10(①dating))backto5,000yearsago.eq\o(Obvious,\s\do10(②Obviously)),itplaysanimportantpartinChineseculture.Agoodmanyeq\o(,\s\do10(③))distinguishedpoetsandwriterseq\o(had,\s\do10(④have))writtenmanymasterpiecesabouttheeq\o(appreciate,\s\do10(⑤appreciation))ofteaandtheloveforit,amongeq\o(them,\s\do10(⑥whom))wasLuYuintheTangdynasty.HewroteTheClassicofTea,eq\o(a,\s\do10(⑦the))firstbookontea,eq\o(but,\s\do10(⑧and/so))hewasregardedasthe“TeaSaint(圣人)”．Chinesepeopletakedelightintea-drinking.Iteq\o(∧,\s\do10(⑨is))servedalmosteverywhere.Whenevereq\o(guest,\s\do10(⑩guests))visit,offeringacupofteatothemisabasicsocialcustom.TeaispartofChinesepeople'sdailylife.①dated改為datingdatebackto...意為“追溯到……”，無(wú)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，此處應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)。故將dated改為dating。②Obvious改為Obviously此處作狀語(yǔ)，用來(lái)修飾后面的整個(gè)句子，應(yīng)用副詞。故將Obvious改為Obviously。③刪除ofagoodmany后可干脆加可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，和many的用法類似，此處意為“很多杰出詩(shī)人和作家”，表示泛指，不須要of。故刪除of。④had改為have句意為：很多杰出的詩(shī)人和作家寫了很多對(duì)于茶的鑒賞和酷愛(ài)的杰作……此處表示詩(shī)人和作家關(guān)于茶的寫作這件事從過(guò)去持續(xù)到現(xiàn)在，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。故將had改為have。⑤appreciate改為appreciationabout是介詞，后面接名詞或動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)。故將appreciate改為appreciation。⑥them改為whom此處是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，引導(dǎo)詞作介詞among的賓語(yǔ)，在從句中作主語(yǔ)，應(yīng)用whom，指代名詞短語(yǔ)poetsandwriters。故將them改為whom。⑦a改為the“the＋序數(shù)詞＋名詞”表示“第幾……”，“a/an＋序數(shù)詞”表示“又一/再一”。此處特指《茶經(jīng)》是關(guān)于茶的第一本書，應(yīng)用定冠詞。故將a改為the。⑧but改為and/so句意為：他寫了第一本關(guān)于茶的書籍——《茶經(jīng)》，(所以)被認(rèn)為是“茶圣”。依據(jù)句意可知，前后句存在順承關(guān)系或因果關(guān)系，而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故將but改為and/so。⑨在It后加is此處It指代茶，與serve之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，又依據(jù)本段整體時(shí)態(tài)可知，此處應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。故在It后加is。⑩guest改為guests句意為：無(wú)論什么時(shí)候客人來(lái)訪，給他們上一杯茶是一種基本的社交習(xí)俗。guest為可數(shù)名詞，且依據(jù)后面的them可知，此處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將guest改為guests。Test3[2024·山西省聯(lián)考]ThismorningmyAmericanfriendsJackandIwenttothetemplefairholdinginourcity.Whenwearrivedatthepark,wewereamazedatthatwesaw.Thereweresuchmanydifferentperformancesandboothssellingtraditionhandicrafts.Sincetherewerelotsofgamestoplay,foodtoeat,andperformancestosee,wespendatleastsixhourswalkingthroughcrowdsofpeople.Jacksaidhehadgreattimebecausehenotonlytastednumerouskindsoflocalsnacksandanotherdishesbutalsoenjoyedlivedragonandliondances,waistdrumdancingandotherfolkperformances.Wecamebackofhomeataboutsevenp．m.,tiredandhappy.答案與解析：ThismorningmyAmericaneq\o(friends,\s\do10(①friend))JackandIwenttothetemplefaireq\o(holding,\s\do10(②held))inourcity.Whenwearrivedatthepark,wewereamazedateq\o(that,\s\do10(③what))wesaw.Therewereeq\o(such,\s\do10(④so))manydifferentperformancesandboothssellingeq\o(tradition,\s\do10(⑤traditional))handicrafts.Sincetherewerelotsofgamestoplay,foodtoeat,andperformancestosee,weeq\o(spend,\s\do10(⑥spent))atleastsixhourswalkingthroughcrowdsofpeople.Jacksaidhehadeq\o(∧,\s\do10(⑦a))greattimebecausehenotonlytastednumerouskindsoflocalsnacksandeq\o(another,\s\do10(⑧other))dishesbutalsoenjoyedlivedragonandliondances,waistdrumdancingandotherfolkperformances.Wecamebackeq\o(,\s\do10(⑨))homeataboutsevenp．m.,tiredeq\o(and,\s\do10(⑩but))happy.①friends改為friend此處指Jack這個(gè)美國(guó)摯友，故應(yīng)用friend的單數(shù)形式。故將friends改為friend。②holding改為held分析句子成分可知，此處為非謂語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)，修飾thetemplefair，且hold與thetemplefair之間為邏輯上的被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故應(yīng)用過(guò)去分詞作后置定語(yǔ)。故將holding改為held。③that改為what分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，介詞at之后是賓語(yǔ)從句，該從句中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞saw缺少賓語(yǔ)，應(yīng)用what引導(dǎo)該從句。故將that改為what。④such改為so名詞前有many修飾時(shí)，其前通常用so，構(gòu)成“somany＋復(fù)數(shù)名詞”。故將such改為so?？旖猓寒?dāng)名詞前有many，much，few和little等詞修飾時(shí)，要用so而不用such。⑤tradition改為traditional此處修飾名詞handicrafts，應(yīng)用形容詞。故將tradition改為traditional。⑥spend改為spent依據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知，此處敘述的是發(fā)生在過(guò)去的事務(wù)，故謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。故將spend改為spent。⑦在had后加ahaveagreattime為固定搭配，意為“玩得快樂(lè)”。故在had后加a。⑧another改為other依據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知，此處指很多當(dāng)?shù)匦〕约捌渌牟耍琽ther意為“其他的；別的”，符合語(yǔ)境。故將another改為other。⑨刪除of句中home是副詞，其前不加介詞。故刪除of。⑩and改為but句中tired和happy的意思是相對(duì)立的，所以用but表示意義的轉(zhuǎn)折。故將and改為but。Test4[2024·長(zhǎng)春市質(zhì)量監(jiān)測(cè)二]It'sbeenalongtimebeforeIleftmyhometown.Irememberitwasthebeautifulplacewithanexcellentenvironment,andpeopletherewereverykind-hearted.Lastweekend,Imakeacalltoafriendlivingthere,buthesentmesomepicturesofthecitybye-mail.Fromthephoto,Icanseethatgreatchangeshavebeentakenplacethere.Forexample,thestreetshavebecomewide,andthebuildingshigher.Beside,thepeoplearedressedmodernclothes.Severalmodernshoppingmallsarebeingbuilt.MyhometownhaschangedverygreatlythatIcanhardlybelievemyeyes.Ihopemyhometowncanbecomebetterandbetterinthefuture.答案與解析：It'sbeenalongtimeeq\o(before,\s\do10(①since))Ileftmyhometown.Irememberitwaseq\o(the,\s\do10(②a))beautifulplacewithanexcellentenvironment,andpeopletherewereverykind-hearted.Lastweekend,Ieq\o(make,\s\do10(③made))acalltoafriendlivingthere,eq\o(but,\s\do10(④and))hesentmesomepicturesofthecitybye-mail.Fromtheeq\o(photo,\s\do10(⑤photos)),Icanseethatgreatchangeshaveeq\o(,\s\do10(⑥))takenplacethere.Forexample,thestreetshavebecomeeq\o(wide,\s\do10(⑦wider)),andthebuildingshigher.eq\o(Beside,\s\do10(⑧Besides)),thepeoplearedressedeq\o(∧,\s\do10(⑨in))modernclothes.Severalmode