專題11 便條-【妙筆生花】2024年中考英語寫作常考文體提分秘籍原卷版

2024年中考英語寫作?？嘉捏w講練提分秘籍專題11便條考情分析考情分析便條是為了臨時通知或轉(zhuǎn)告某事而形成的一種簡單的書信形式。在日常生活中有著廣泛的應(yīng)用，通常其內(nèi)容應(yīng)該言簡意賅，淺顯易懂，切忌冗長，同時語言不必精雕細琢，無需客套話，只需要將寫便條人的意思清楚明白地表達出來即可。近年中考中偶有考察。例如：李智向你的班主任張老師請假（2023·黑龍江齊齊哈爾·統(tǒng)考中考真題），畢業(yè)留言（2020·江蘇泰州·統(tǒng)考中考真題），給老師寫一張請假條（2019·黑龍江·中考真題），寫幾句畢業(yè)留言（2019·遼寧鐵嶺·中考真題）等。寫作方法指導(dǎo)寫作方法指導(dǎo)便條主要包括留言條和請假條，其格式與書信極為相似，具體體現(xiàn)在：（1）時間：日期一般寫在高于稱呼的右上角。不必寫年、月，可以只寫日期或星期幾，上、下午幾點鐘;（2）稱呼：稱呼可以正式，可以口語化，后用逗號;（3）正文：說清楚留言或請假的內(nèi)容即可，要求語言簡單扼要，通俗明了;（4）署名：留言或請假人的姓名。請假條、借條的署名要正式些，在姓名前寫.Yours,

Your

student

,

Your

friend等。遺失、啟事、招領(lǐng)啟事，有時不署名，只留下聯(lián)系單位的電話號碼。常見的便條：1.電話留言條英語電話留言條包括五部分:發(fā)話者(From);收話者(To);日期(Date);時間(Time);留言內(nèi)容(Message)。有時，最后可以出現(xiàn)記錄人簽名。電話留言條最根本的特點就是內(nèi)容必須言簡意賅，切忌冗長。即寫電話留言條時，行文要簡明扼要，通俗易懂,將發(fā)話者的意思清楚明白地表達出來。2.請假條請假條(written

request

for

leave)是中學(xué)生必須掌握的常用應(yīng)用文之一，它包括請病假(note

for

sick

leave)和請事假(leave

of

absence)請假條是用于向老師或上級領(lǐng)導(dǎo)等因身體狀況不好或因某事請求準(zhǔn)假的場合。英文請假條寫作需注意三點:1)英文中請假條的寫法和漢語請假條相同，它一般般由四部分組成，即時間、稱呼、正文和簽名。2)一般而言，可認定請假條是一種簡單的書信文體。請假條一般寫在紙上，不用信封。其書寫格式與書信有很多相似之處，是書信的大大簡化。需要注意的是，便條通常是第一人稱或第三人稱寫給第二人稱，時態(tài)運用靈活，需要根據(jù)具體寫作內(nèi)容具體分析。便條寫作時可以遵循以下步驟：第一步：明確便條的格式，寫明接收人；第二步：闡明便條內(nèi)容，并對內(nèi)容進行具體擴展；第三步：告知其他相關(guān)內(nèi)容，表達愿望。寫作模板寫作模板模板①請假條DateDear_____________,擴展說明具體請假時間點明便條性質(zhì)及原因IamsorrythatIshallbeunableto_____________(做某事）,because_____________（原因）.SoIbegtoapplyfor_____________（幾天）days’/weeks’leavefrom_____________to_____________（從哪天到哪天）./Iwouldliketoaskfor_____________（幾天）days’leave.Ihopeyoucanapprove./Ishallbeverygratefulifyoucangrantmyleave.Thanks.擴展說明具體請假時間點明便條性質(zhì)及原因表達請求Yoursfaithfully,表達請求__________（落款）【模板范文】March24th,2022DearMissLi,IamsorrythatIshallbeunabletocometoschooltoday,becauseIfellill.IwentswimmingyesterdayandnowIhaveafever.Iamfeelingterriblenow.ThedoctorsaidIhadtostayinbedforseveraldays.SoIbegtoapplyfor2days’leavefromtodaytotomorrow.Ihopeyoucanapprove.Thanks.Yoursfaithfully,LiLin模板②留言條留言原因Dear_____________,留言原因YouwereoutwhenIvisitedjustnow.SoIhadtoleaveyouamessage.留言內(nèi)容表達期望_____________（人物）visited/calledyouatabout10:00inthemorning,sayingthat_____________（事件）.Pleasecallher/himwhenyoucomeback.留言內(nèi)容表達期望_____________（落款）【模板范文】DearLiMing,YouwereoutwhenIvisitedjustnow.SoIhadtoleaveyouamessage.MissHancalledyouatabout10:00inthemorning,sayingthatwe’llgoforapicnicthisSundayinpark.Wewillmeetattheschoolgateat9:30tomorrowmorningandgothereonfoot.Takesomefoodanddrinks.Anddon’tforgetyourcamera.Pleasecallherwhenyoucomeback.WangXin常用表達常用表達亮點詞匯搭配1.表示邀請invitev.邀請 hadbetter...最好……2.表示叮囑rememberv.記住 forgetv.忘記makesure確定 ring...up打電話3.表示請求approvev.同意 grantv.準(zhǔn)予，準(zhǔn)許4.表示請假事由fallill病了 stayinbed臥床haveafever發(fā)燒 beinhospital住院lookafter照顧 feelterrible感覺很糟糕beunabletodosth.不能做某事經(jīng)典句子背誦：開頭句1.IamsorrythatIshallbeunabletocometoschool,because...很抱歉我不能去學(xué)校了，因為……2.I’mafraidIcan’tcometoschooltoday.今天我恐怕不能去上學(xué)了。3.YouwereoutwhenIvisitedjustnow.我剛才去找你時你不在。4.Iamwritingtoleaveamessageforyou.我在給你留言。5.Iamleavingthisnotetotellyouthat...我給你留言是要告訴你……中間句1.Iwouldliketoaskfor...days’leave.我想請……天的假。2.Ihaveahighfeverandthedoctoraskedmetostayinbedandhaveagoodrest.我發(fā)高燒了，醫(yī)生要求我躺在床上好好休息。3.Ibegtoapplyfor...days’/weeks’leavefrom...to...我申請從……到……請……天/周假。4.Pleasegivemealeaveofthreedays.請準(zhǔn)予我三天的假期。5.You’dbetter...你最好……6.Donotforgetto...別忘了……結(jié)尾句1.Ishallbeverygratefulifyoucangrantmyleave.如果您能準(zhǔn)假，我將不勝感激。2.Ihopeyoucanapprove.希望您能批準(zhǔn)。3.Pleasefavormewithanearlyreply.請盡早回復(fù)我。4.Manythanks!多謝！5.HopeIcangetwellandreturntoschoolsoon.我希望我能盡快恢復(fù)回到學(xué)校。中中考真題精講（2023·黑龍江齊齊哈爾·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假如你是李智，請根據(jù)表格中的提示寫一張請假條，向你的班主任張老師請假。事由天數(shù)其他明天你將要去北京參加游泳比賽（competition）四天及時返校，自學(xué)錯過的課程要求:1.字跡工整，表達清楚，語法正確；2.詞數(shù):30—50詞。DearMr.Zhang,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiZhi（2020·江蘇泰州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假定你是李華，三年的初中生活就要結(jié)束了你和好友Mike分別在即，請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，用英語給Mike留言：1.回憶你倆之間一段難忘的經(jīng)歷（如互相幫助、互相鼓勵或一起參加某項活動等），并談?wù)勀愕母惺埽?.你對Mike今后學(xué)習(xí)或生活方面的建議；3.你對Mike的祝福和期待。要求：1.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息；3.詞數(shù)100左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearMike,Howtimeflies!It’stimetosaygoodbye._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,Lihua（2019·黑龍江·中考真題）假如你是Henry，昨天下午在學(xué)校打籃球時傷了左腳，醫(yī)生讓你臥床休息兩天，因此向老師（Mr.Read）請假。DearMr.Read,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Henry（2019·遼寧鐵嶺·中考真題）根據(jù)要求完成小作文，詞數(shù)：30詞左右。假如你是李平，畢業(yè)在即，過去三年的美好時光歷歷在目。請你給最難忘的人楊陽寫幾句畢業(yè)留言。（短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）DearYangYang，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiPing名校模擬題提升練10篇名校模擬題提升練10篇 （2023·黑龍江齊齊哈爾·統(tǒng)考二模）假如你是李平，請你給班主任王老師寫一張請假條。原因：你正在發(fā)燒，咳嗽得厲害。醫(yī)生說你患了流感（flu），建議你吃藥并在家休息一天。（30—50詞）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2022·黑龍江齊齊哈爾·統(tǒng)考二模）假設(shè)你是王麗，你想約李平周日去看電影，請你根據(jù)表格提供的信息給她寫一則留言，并請她周五之前給你答復(fù)。ThenameofthefilmTheBattleAtLakeChangjinIITуpeHistoricalfilmTimeofthefilm3:30p.m.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2022·黑龍江齊齊哈爾·統(tǒng)考三模）假如你是李平，請你給班主任王老師寫一張請假條，請兩天病假。原因：你正在發(fā)燒，咳嗽得厲害。媽媽帶你去醫(yī)院看病并做了核酸檢測（runaNucleicAcidTest）,醫(yī)生說你患重感冒，建議在家，休息。（30-50詞）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2022·西藏拉薩·統(tǒng)考二模）假定你是李雷，三年的初中生活就要結(jié)束了，你和好友Bruce分別在即，請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給Bruce留言：1.回憶你們的一段難忘經(jīng)歷（如互相幫助、參與的活動等），并談?wù)勀愕母惺埽?.你對Bruce的祝福和期待。要求：可以適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，但要確保行文流暢；不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息；詞數(shù)80個左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearBruce,Howtimeflies!It’stimetosaygoodbye.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiLei5．（2022·上海徐匯·統(tǒng)考二模）CompareyourschoolwithBlueSkySchoolandwriteatleast60wordstoleaveacommentonschoollifeatBlueSkySchoolandbrieflydescribehowyourschoollifeisdifferentfromaschooldayatBlueSkySchoolandwhatmayprobablymakesuchdifferences.假如你是李華，對比一下你的學(xué)校和BlueSkySchool。請用至少60個詞給BlueSkySchool的學(xué)生留個言，并簡單描述一下你的學(xué)校生活與BlueSkySchool的不同之處以及原因。如必須出現(xiàn)學(xué)校名，請用ABCSchool代替。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2022·黑龍江齊齊哈爾·校聯(lián)考二模）假如你是Tom，和Alex約好這周六去科學(xué)博物館。你去他家提醒他時他不在家，請你給他寫一張留言條，提醒他明天早上9點在博物館門口集合，并記得帶上學(xué)生證和手機。DearAlex,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Tom7．（2022·黑龍江佳木斯·統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是張華。奶奶病了，父母出門在外，你得在家照顧奶奶。為此向Mr.Li請假一天。AskingforLeaveDearMr.Li,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,ZhangHua8．（2022·黑龍江雙鴨山·一模）根據(jù)要求完成小作文假如你是Kate，今天患了重感冒不能上學(xué)，需在家休息一天。請給你的班主任Smith先生寫一張請假條。要求：30詞左右（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。DearMr.Smith,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Kate9．（2021·黑龍江齊齊哈爾·統(tǒng)考二模）假如你是李偉，你打算和你的好朋友David去看齊齊哈爾隊與哈爾濱隊的冰球（ice