四級作文輔導(dǎo).ppt

1、9：00 考生進(jìn)考場/ 9：00- 9：10 發(fā)答題卡和試卷冊（要求同學(xué) 先填名字等等） 9：10- 9：40 作文部分（在答題卡一上做作文部分） 9：40- 9：55 快速閱讀（同樣是做在答題紙一上） 9：55-10：00 收答題卡一 10：00-11：20 所有題目在答題卡二上作答 （具體包括：10：00-10：35 聽力部分； 10：35-11：00 仔細(xì)閱讀； 11：00-11：15 完型填空或者改錯； 11：15-11：20 翻譯部分） 11：20 整個答卷完成，收取答題紙二包括試題冊,時間安排,大學(xué)英語四級考試作文輔導(dǎo),2011.12,Contents,考試要求,考試題型,論說文,

2、應(yīng)用文,諺語作文,熱點(diǎn)問題型,選擇觀點(diǎn)型,圖表型,解決問題型,現(xiàn)象型,單個圖表型,多個圖表型,圖畫型,時間要求：30分鐘 1） 審題（3分鐘） 2） 寫作（25分鐘） 3） 檢查（2分鐘）,寫作命題: 源于日常生活和有關(guān)科技、社會文化等方面的一般常識，不涉及知識面過廣、專業(yè)性太強(qiáng)的內(nèi)容。,命題方式：給出題目、或規(guī)定情景、或給出段首句續(xù)寫、或給出關(guān)鍵詞寫短文、或看圖作文,考試要求,1. 語言第一位：表達(dá)通順、無重大語言錯誤 （1）基礎(chǔ)一般：簡單原則、安全第一 （2）基礎(chǔ)較好：句子結(jié)構(gòu)詞多變 2. 結(jié)構(gòu)第二位： （1）邏輯性： A.并列：and / or / but/also B.因果：becau

3、se / since / as / for/based on C.轉(zhuǎn)折：but / however （2）關(guān)聯(lián)詞 3. 內(nèi)容第三位：內(nèi)容不跑題即可,具體要求,寫完之后修改注意： （內(nèi)容方面盡量不要修改） 1、字母大小寫 2、怪符號 3、單詞拼寫 4、主謂一致 5、動詞時態(tài) 6、名詞單復(fù)數(shù),1、論說文（10次） （1）提綱作文（9次） 2006.12，2006.6 2005.12，2005.6 ， 2003.6，2003.1，2001.1，2000.6，2000.1， （2）圖表作文（1次） 2002.6 2. 諺語型（0次） 3. 應(yīng)用文（6次） （1）口頭作文（3次） 2007.6， 200

4、5.1，2004.6 （2）書信作文（3次） 2003.12，2002.1,考試題型,熱點(diǎn)問題型：2006.6，2005.12，2005.6，2003.6 2003.1，2001.1，2000.1 選擇觀點(diǎn)型：2006.12，2000.6， 圖表型：2002.6，1991.6,一.論說文,提綱式,2006年6月CET作文題目 An announcement for a voluntary program 1.校學(xué)生會組織一次暑假志愿活動現(xiàn)招聘志愿者 2.本次志愿者活動的目的、內(nèi)容及安排 3.報名條件和聯(lián)系方式 2006年12月CET作文題目 1.許多人喜歡在除夕夜觀看春節(jié)晚會 2.但有些人提出

5、取消春節(jié)晚會. 3.我的看法. 2007年6月CET作文題目 歡迎辭,歡迎加入俱樂部. Welcome to our club 書寫提綱： 1.表達(dá)你的歡迎 2.對你的俱樂部做一個簡要介紹,2008年6月CET作文題目 Recreational activities 1. 娛樂活動多種多樣 2. 娛樂活動可能使人們受益，也可能有危害性 3. 作為大學(xué)生我的看法 2008年12月CET作文題目 Use of Disposable Plastic Bag 1. 一次性塑料袋的使用 2.使用一次性塑料袋代來的問題 3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意義 2009年6月CET作文題目 Free Admissi

6、on to museums 越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對外開放的目的是什么？ 也會帶來一些問題； 你的看法？,2009年12月CET作文題目 Creating a Green Campus 1. 綠色校園的重要性， 2. 什么樣的校園是綠色的？ 3. 我們應(yīng)該怎么做。,Paragraph 1: 概括性的引出要評論的事物或觀點(diǎn) (2) 具體描述這個事物或者觀點(diǎn)（或者是我對這個現(xiàn)象/ 事物的基本看法） Paragraph 2: (1) 作者對該現(xiàn)象或問題的基本看法，即文章的論點(diǎn)句； (2) 支持性的細(xì)節(jié)分論點(diǎn)（至少兩點(diǎn)） (3) 本段總結(jié)（可以省略） Paragraph 3: 總結(jié)全文，定下結(jié)論（通常為

7、我的對策或看法）。,（一）熱點(diǎn)問題型,（1）解決問題型模板一 With the development of modern industry, more and more people are concerned about the problem that _ ( 主題問題). Accordingly, _(伴隨主題問題出現(xiàn)的新問題) is becoming more and more serious. Confronted with _ (主題問題), we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situat

8、ion. For one thing, _( 解決方法1). For another_ ( 解決方法2). Finally, _ (解決方法3). As far as I am concerned, the best way is _ (解決方法4). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because_ (解決方法4 的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和好處).,（1）解決問題型模板二 With the development of the society, with the advent(出現(xiàn)，到來） of _ (相關(guān)事物或現(xiàn)象

9、), we have to face a problem that _ (主題問題). What are the reasons for it? In the following paragraphs, Ill venture to explore the reasons. To start with, _ ( 闡述原因1). Moreover, _( 闡述原因2). In addition, _ (闡述原因3). In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken. For one thi

10、ng, it is high time that people all over China realized the importance of _ (解決主題問題). For another, the government should issue strict laws and regulations in order to put the situation under control.,（2）現(xiàn)象型模板 Nowadays many people prefer _ (主題) because it plays a significant role in our daily life. G

11、enerally, its advantages can be seen as follows. On the one hand,_ (主題的優(yōu)點(diǎn)1). On the other hand, _ (主題的優(yōu)點(diǎn)2). But everything can be divided into two. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that _ (主題的缺點(diǎn)1). To make matters worse, _ (主題的缺點(diǎn)2). Through the above anal

12、ysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, _ (主題) itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses that determine its value to our society.,練習(xí)一,2006.6 Directions: For this part ,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short

13、essay on the topic of students selecting their lecturers. You should write at least 120 words following the outline below:1.有些大學(xué)允許學(xué)生自由選擇某些課程的任課教師2.學(xué)生選擇教師時所考慮的主要因素3.學(xué)生自選任課教師的益處和可能產(chǎn)生的問題,Paragraph I: （1）引出將要評論的事物或者是觀點(diǎn) （2）簡明扼要的提出人們在這個問題上的兩種不同看法。 Paragraph II: （1）提出一種觀點(diǎn)或優(yōu)點(diǎn)； （2）本段的支持性分論點(diǎn)； （3）本段總結(jié)（可以省略）。 P

14、aragraph III: （1）承上啟下的過渡句； （2）提出另一種觀點(diǎn)或缺點(diǎn)；,（二） 選擇觀點(diǎn)型,一.論說文,（3）本段的支持性分論點(diǎn) （4）本段總結(jié)（可以省略） Paragraph IV： （1）平衡兩種看法； （2）給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。,模板一 There is no consensus among the people as to the view of _ (主題). Some people hold the idea that _ (觀點(diǎn)A). A case in point is that _ (支持觀點(diǎn)A 的例子). On the other hand, others may

15、have a quite different view. According to them,_ (觀點(diǎn)B). The most typical example is that _ (支持觀點(diǎn)B 的例子). Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but the latter is more convin

16、cing.,模板二 _ (主題) is a common occurrence in our lives. The attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person. Some people tend to _when they are asked_ (觀點(diǎn)A) because _(支持觀點(diǎn)A 的原因). The most typical example is that _(支持觀點(diǎn)A 的例子). However, others argue that _ (觀點(diǎn)B). They point out that _ (重申觀點(diǎn)B) for

17、 the reason that _ (支持觀點(diǎn)B的原因). As far as I am concerned, I will choose to _ (你的觀點(diǎn)) because this choice fits my personality and my life-long belief.,練習(xí)一,2006.12 Directions: For this part ,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Spring Festival Gala. You should write at least

18、120 words following the outline given below: 1.許多人喜歡在除夕觀看春節(jié)晚會. 2.有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會. 3.我的看法.,2005.12Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below :

19、1.名校校園正成為旅游新熱點(diǎn)2.校園是否應(yīng)對游客開放，人們看法不同 3.我認(rèn)為,練習(xí)二,According to Chinese culture, to be kind to ones parents is the height of virtue. We owe so much to our parents in that they not only gave us life but have done so much in bringing us up. It is not reasonable against nature for us to shirk the responsibili

20、ty of taking care of our parents when they are old. Further more, we have the duty to pay back their love by making their later years enjoyable and happy.,Paragraph I： （1）點(diǎn)明要闡釋的諺語或名言 （2）用自己的話解釋這一諺語或名言的意思，有時有正反兩面的邏輯 Paragraph II： （1）作者對該諺語或名言的觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度，即文章的論點(diǎn)句； （2）支持性的細(xì)節(jié)分論點(diǎn)，舉例子論證（至少兩點(diǎn)，有時有正反兩面的邏輯）； Paragra

21、ph III： 總結(jié)全文，定下結(jié)論（通常為闡明其現(xiàn)實(shí)或更深遠(yuǎn)意義）。,二. 諺語型作文,模板一 _ (所給格言或諺語). This is a proverb full of logic. By this proverb, it is meant that _ (解釋該格言或諺語的內(nèi)涵). In other words, _ (換言之的解釋). Indeed, we can learn many things from it. Examples can easily be found to make this point clearer. _ (例子1) is a case in point.

22、Another case is that _ (例子2). Whatever you do, please remember the saying “_ (該格言或諺語)”. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, youll necessarily benefit a lot from it.,模板二 The good old proverb, _ (所給格言或諺語), reminds us that_ ( 詮釋該格言或諺語). On the one hand, _ (詳述1). On the other hand,

23、_ (詳述2). Take _ (某相關(guān)事例) for example. _ (展開論述). However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you hold it sooner or later.,The Blocked Style齊頭式,Zhang P.O. Box 123 Zhengzhou Institute of Aeronautical Industry Management Henan Provinc

24、e 450015 P.R. China Nov.20 收信人地址 Dear Mr./ Ms. , . . Very Sincerely yours, Zhang,寫信人姓名，地址，日期,三. 應(yīng)用文,2. The Indented Style 縮行式,Zhang P.O. Box 123 Zhengzhou Institute of Aeronautical Industry Management Henan Province 450015 P.R. China Nov.20 收信人地址 Dear Mr./ Ms. , . . Very Sincerely yours, Zhang,3. Th

25、e Modified Style 混合式,Zhang P.O. Box 123 Zhengzhou Institute of Aeronautical Industry Management Henan Province 450015 P.R. China Nov.20 收信人地址 Dear Mr./ Ms. , . . Very Sincerely yours, Zhang,Dear_, I am _(自我介紹). I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_. The rea

26、son for my dissatisfaction is_(總體介紹). In the first place,_(抱怨的第一個方面). In addition, _(抱怨的第二個方面). Under these circumstances, I find it _(感覺) to _(抱怨的方面給你帶來的后果). I appreciate it very much if you could _ (提出建議和請求). Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. Yours since

27、rely Li Ming,（一）投訴信,（二）詢問信,Dear _, I am _(自我介紹). I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding_(要詢問的內(nèi)容). First of all, what are _?(第一個問題) Secondly, when will _ ? (第二個問題) Thirdly, is _?(第三個問題) I would also like to inquire _(將最重要的問題單獨(dú)成段). Could you be so kind a

28、s to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects? Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely Li Ming,Dear_, I am writing to formally request to_(請求的內(nèi)容) The reason for _is that _（給出原因）.I_, so I _ (給出細(xì)節(jié)). I would a

29、lso like to request _(提出進(jìn)一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at_(電話號碼). I look forward to a favorable reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming,（三）請求信,（四）道歉信,Dear _, I am truly sorry tha

30、t _(道歉的原因). The reason is that _(介紹原因) Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Yours sincerely Li Ming,（五）感謝信,Dear_, I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _(感謝的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in _(對方給你的具

31、體幫助), I fear that I would have been_(沒有對方幫助時的后果). Every one agrees that it was you who _ (給出細(xì)節(jié)). Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely Li Ming,（六）建議信,Dear _, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and I will try to make some cond

32、uctive suggestions here. In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions:_(建議的內(nèi)容) I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good Luck with your_(祝愿) Yours sincerely Li Ming,（七）求職信,DearSirorMadam,Iwritet

33、hislettertoapplyforthepositionthatyouhaveadvertisedin_(報紙名稱) of_(廣告發(fā)布時間). NotonlydoIhavethequalificationsforthisjob, butIalsohavetherightpersonalityfora_(工作名稱).Ontheonehand,_(第一個原因).Ontheotherhand,_(另一個原因). Shouldyougrantmeapersonalinterview,Iwouldbemostgrateful.Ifyouneedtoknowmoreaboutme,pleasefeel

34、freetocontactmeatanytimeat_(電話號碼).Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication,andIam lookingforwardtomeetingyou. YourssincerelyLiMing,（八）邀請信,Dear_,Therewillbe a_(內(nèi)容)at / in_(地點(diǎn))on_(時間）Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.Theoccasionwillstartat_(具體時間).Thiswillbefollowedbya_(進(jìn)一步的安排).Ataround_(時間)，_(另一個安排)Irea

35、llyhopeyoucanmakeit. YourssincerelyLiMing,練習(xí)1,2007.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Welcome to our club. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 歡迎辭，歡迎加入俱樂部。 標(biāo)題：Welcome to our club 書寫提綱： 1. 表達(dá)你的歡迎； 2. 對你們俱樂部

36、作一個簡要介紹。,練習(xí)2,2005.1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a campaign speech in support of your election to the post of chairman of the student union. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.A Campaign Speech1. 你認(rèn)為自己具備是什么條件(能力，性格，愛 好)可以勝任學(xué)生會主席工作，2 .如果當(dāng)選你將會為本校同學(xué)做什么？,練習(xí)3,2004.6 Directions: For this part, you are a