關(guān)于食品安全的基礎(chǔ)寫作.ppt

基礎(chǔ)寫作 basic writing,關(guān)于食品安全話題,基礎(chǔ)寫作 假如幾天前你的同學從某超市買回食品，請同學吃，他們吃后食物中毒，肚子痛，被送往附近的醫(yī)院治療后脫險。請給報社寫一封信描述他們食物中毒及脫險的經(jīng)過，呼吁社會重視食品安全問題。 【內(nèi)容要點】： 1越來越多的食品存在安全問題 2買回食品共食 3中毒、肚子痛 4送醫(yī)院治療后脫險 5希望全社會都重視食品安全,【寫作要求和標準】 1、必須使用5個句子介紹全部所給內(nèi)容; 2、將5個句子組成連貫的短文; 3、注意短文內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性。開頭已經(jīng)寫好。 參考詞語：中毒 get poisoned 肚子痛 have stomachache 脫險 out of danger Dear editor, Im writing to tell you something about the problem of food safety.,寫作前準備： step1. 把要寫的內(nèi)容概括成5個漢語句子： 1.越來越多的食品存在安全問題 。 2.幾天前你的同學從某超市買回食品,請同學吃。 3.他們吃后食物中毒，肚子痛。 4.被送往附近的醫(yī)院治療后脫險。 5.希望全社會都重視食品安全。,1.越來越多的食品存在安全問題 。,安全：safty 存在：exist,2.幾天前你的同學從某超市買回食品，請同學吃。,超市：supermarket,3.他們吃后食物中毒，肚子痛。,中毒： get poisoned 肚子痛：stomachache,4.被送往附近的醫(yī)院治療后脫險。,附近的: nearby 治療: examine and give some medicine 吃藥：take medicine,5.希望全社會都重視食品安全。,重視：pay more attention to /attach importance to,1.越來越多的食品存在安全問題 。,Food safety exists more and more serious question.,2.幾天前你的同學從某超市買回食品，請同學吃。,A couple of/A few days ago/The other day, one of my classmates bought a bag of food from a supermarket and some roommates were invited to enjoy the food.,Step2: 寫出簡單句并進行修改,3.他們吃后食物中毒，肚子痛。,After they finished it, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches (with their faces pale).,After finishing it, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with their faces pale.,4.被送往附近的醫(yī)院治療后脫險。,They were quickly sent to a nearby hospital, A doctor examined them, and gave them some medicine 。 They were out of danger/escaped from danger soon after they took the medicine.,They were quickly sent to a nearby hospital, where a doctor examined them and gave them some medicine and they were out of danger soon after taking the medicine.,5.希望全社會都重視食品安全。,I hope that the whole society pay more attention to food safety.,適當加上一些內(nèi)容，讓句子更連貫 (This accident made me realize the seriousness of the food safety problem, so) I sincerely hope that the whole society pay more attention to food safety.,Dear editor, Im writing to tell you something about the problem of food safety. Nowadays, food safety exists more and more serious question. A couple of days ago, one of my classmates bought a bag of food from a supermarket and some roommates were invited to enjoy the food. Unfortunately, after finishing it, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches,Step3:把五個句子用適當?shù)倪B接詞，過渡詞連成一篇較通順的短文。最后認真檢查。,with their faces pale. They were quickly sent to a nearby hospital, where a doctor examined them and gave them some medicine and they were out of danger soon after taking the medicine. This accident made me realize the seriousnes