中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)壓軸題分類匯編(word)1

1、【英語(yǔ)】中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)壓軸題分類匯編（word） 1一、中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1近年來，各大城市霧霾（haze）情況越來越嚴(yán)重，整個(gè)國(guó)家的空氣污染狀況令人擔(dān)憂。請(qǐng)分析空氣污染的現(xiàn)象，原因，應(yīng)對(duì)措施，寫一份英文的倡議書，呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境，減少對(duì)空氣的污染。要點(diǎn)提示：（1）我國(guó)空氣污染的現(xiàn)象。（至少寫2 點(diǎn)）（2） 空氣污染產(chǎn)生的原因。（至少寫2 點(diǎn)）（3）減少空氣污染的措施。（至少寫2 點(diǎn)）要求：（ 1） 80 詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（ 2） 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。Dear students ,As we all know , hazy days ha

2、ve been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us ofthe seriousairpollution_【答案】 Dear students,As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air polluti

3、on. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the peoples activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. Whats more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more

4、 and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, whats more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下整個(gè)國(guó)家的空氣污染

5、狀況。所提供的材料中列舉了近年來，各大城市霧霾（haze）情況越來越嚴(yán)重，主要從空氣污染的現(xiàn)象，原因，應(yīng)對(duì)措施三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】We had better walk or take a bus. 我們最好步行或乘公共汽車。這里had better 表示最好，后面跟動(dòng)詞原形，take a bus 表示乘公共汽車?！靖叻志?/p>

6、型二】Protecting the environment is our duty.保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé)。這里Protecting theenvironment做主語(yǔ)，用的是動(dòng)詞的ing 形式。2你有沒有因?yàn)闆]能好好管理時(shí)間而影響了學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷?請(qǐng)你寫一篇文章談?wù)勥@件事及你的看法。內(nèi)容包括：1.你沒完成學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)的經(jīng)歷（事情，原因及后果）；2.針對(duì)如何管理好時(shí)間給出幾點(diǎn)建議。作文要求：1.短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。3.詞數(shù) 80 個(gè)左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Once, I couldnt make good use of time and

7、it had a bad influence on mystudy._【答案】 Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homew

8、ork in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It

9、can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如make good use of ， lastweekend， how to do ， play a game， a kind of ， spent more time on ， forget to do ， in the end， be angry with ， be going to do ， on the paper ， put up 等。而特殊非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu) Jim taught me how to play a kind

10、 of computer game. 和 I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next. 等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意

11、總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思 ，考 運(yùn)用所學(xué)英 知 準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，盡可能使用高 和 復(fù) 的句式 構(gòu)以便得到 高的分?jǐn)?shù)。3世界 生 的一 研究 告 示，我國(guó)青少年近 率居世界第一。2019 年全國(guó)兩會(huì)當(dāng)中 “小眼 ”成關(guān)注重點(diǎn)，防控青少年近 迫在眉睫。以下表格是學(xué)校 本校學(xué)生近 做的 表，假如你是校 Jack， 根據(jù)所提供的信息，用英 寫一篇 告， 述學(xué)校 果，并表明你自己的 點(diǎn)和

12、理由。我校學(xué)生的近 情況60%的本校學(xué)生戴眼 。1.不良的看 ，如在床上或陽(yáng)光下看 原因2. 玩手機(jī)、看 、玩 3.學(xué) ，作 多 1. 真做眼保健操建 2.多吃胡 卜等 眼睛有益的食物3.參考 ：近 nearsighted注意： 1. 內(nèi)容 包括所提示的信息，可適當(dāng) ；2. 文中不得出 自己的真 姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3. 數(shù)： 80-100，開 已 出，不 入 數(shù)。According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is thelargest inChina._【答案】 Acco

13、rding to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight ？ First, dont keep your eyes work for

14、 a long time. Dont spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Dont read in the sun; dont read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes forabout a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You

15、 should eat more carrots and other eye-friendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming nearsighted.【解析】【 解】 是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)表格中的相關(guān)信息介 一下如何保 力。所提供的表格中列 了近 的原因和建 。主要從原因和建 兩個(gè)方面去介 。 一般 在 。注意作文中必 包含表格上的所有信息，并適當(dāng) 。寫作 ，避免使用 式的英 ，盡量使用我 熟悉的句子或短 。 法要正確，表

16、達(dá)要符合英 ，注意 、 狀 的搭配及主 一致 。寫作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文 系 密，符合 關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight.所以保持良好的 力 每個(gè)人都很重要。本 運(yùn)用句型：It is +形容 +for sb. to so sth.【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 當(dāng)你 本 的 候，你 把它從你的眼睛里移開一英尺。when you read

17、 是由 when 引 的 狀 從句。4 面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介 我的朋友 陽(yáng)的短文?；厩闆r 陽(yáng)，陽(yáng)光中學(xué)九年 二班學(xué)生1. 喜 。每周花七個(gè)多小 各種 型的 ，因 趣 好2.喜 。每年 兩次 兒的數(shù)量，以研究 兒在數(shù)量方面的 化。 秀事跡上個(gè)月把零花 捐 了希望工程1. 希望成 接家 到上海路段的高 工程 未來夢(mèng)想2. 每個(gè)人 保 境都可以做一些改 。如：（. 1 例）要求： 1）表達(dá)清楚， 法正確，上下文 ；2）必 包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng) ；3） 數(shù)： 100 左右（短文的開 已 出，不 入 數(shù)）；4）不得使用真 姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a stud

18、ent in Sunshine Middle School._【答案】 Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a y

19、ear to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month.His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown toShanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn t throw rubbish everywhe

20、re.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如like reading ， more than ， all kinds of ， spend time doing ， enjoy doing ， the number of ， twice a year， be the chief engineer of 等。而 He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes ev

21、eryone can make some changes to protect the environment. 等多種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的綜合運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是Moonlight 小組 的組長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員Tommy

22、進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)，寫一 份素質(zhì)報(bào)告NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書，認(rèn)為看書有很多好處（請(qǐng)列舉2 個(gè)好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。在學(xué)校和同學(xué)相處融洽。上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉 一例）。今年，學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)（Award for Best Student ）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠Your（根據(jù) 情況提2 點(diǎn)建 ） suggestions要求： 1、表達(dá)清楚、 法正確、上下文 ；2、要點(diǎn)必 包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng) ； 3、 數(shù)： 100 左右； 4、不得使用真 姓名、校名和地名等Tom

23、my is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】 Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by r

24、eading. And reading has agood effect on children s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school,he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crossesthe road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Stu

25、dent this year.However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesnve enoughsleeptha.I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It s better for him to manage histime wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】 篇作文要求我 按照表格里的內(nèi)容介 一下Tommy 的情況， Tommy 寫一篇 合素 的 價(jià) 告。在表格中有非常

26、的關(guān)于Tommy 各方面的內(nèi)容，我 需要用正確的英 把 些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容 多，寫作 要注意表達(dá)的條理性。 篇作文 主要使用第三人稱來寫。在最后要 Tommy 提一些建 ， 一部分 用第一人稱。同 注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，尤其是表格中的第五 和第六 內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn) 明】 是一篇比 秀的范文。 篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒有 漏要點(diǎn)。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意了被 形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school thisyear.。寫作 注意了條理性，使文章具有 次感，條理清楚。短文注意到了 短句的 合，并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍?，使文章表達(dá)的 。如He is

27、 always ready to help others. 、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news. 、 He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year. 等。6 面表達(dá)根據(jù)下列表格的提示，寫一篇 Changes in Our Hometown 的英 短文（80 左右）文章內(nèi)容必 包含所 的所有信息開 已 出，不 入 數(shù)內(nèi)容要

28、點(diǎn)： 去 在1舊房1高樓2河水 2河水清澈（ clean and clear）3步行、 自行 上班3乘公交 、小汽 上班4 道路狹窄（ narrow ）4 街道 （ wide ），干 整 5 居住條件（ living conditions ）差5 生活越來越好， 境（environment ）越來越舒適6 你的感想 （寫兩到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years ， great changes have taken place in our hometown 【答案】 Changes in Our HometownIn the past

29、ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our home

30、town. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my h

31、ometown. But I think it s still important to remembe the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【 解】亮點(diǎn) 明： 篇 作的 次清晰，內(nèi)容 ，表達(dá)流 。文中使用了非常好的短 ，例如take place， in our hometown ， in the past ， used to be ，go to do ， on foot ， by bike，betterand better ， more and more 等。而 I think its still im

32、portant to remember the past/It tells thatwe should cherish the present life. 等 從句 構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了 作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多 ，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】 面表達(dá) 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求將所 定的材料內(nèi)容 整理后展開思 ，考 運(yùn)用所學(xué)英 知 準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，盡可能使用高 和 復(fù) 的句式 構(gòu)以便得到 高的分?jǐn)?shù)。7 面表達(dá)每個(gè)人都有自己心 的物品，相信你也 有一個(gè)自己心 的物品吧！ 以“A（ n）_ Ihave ” ，描述一個(gè)或一件你心 的物

33、品，并 你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意 。要求： 1. 在 目空白 填上你心 物品的名字；2.文中不得出 真 姓名和學(xué)校名稱;3. 言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文 通 ，80 左右。A（ n） _ I have_【答案】 A（ n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It s a black toy gun and it can shot somsmall plastic pills fo

34、r ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun.They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun.One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my fa

35、ther came back. My family was poor thenand my father didn t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I

36、 hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I willremember my father s love forever. Every time I miss him, I ll take out the toy gun and sayyou, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。寫作的難度是逐漸加深的，在討論其如何獲得的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，在談?wù)撘饬x的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)的

37、準(zhǔn)確性，避免不熟悉的表達(dá)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍，描述玩具槍的時(shí)候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充，例如a toy gunwrapped by yellow cloth （用黃布包著的玩具槍），這里用到了過去分詞作定語(yǔ)，作者還描述了玩具槍的功能（ small plastic pills），順便還描述了自己小時(shí)候玩槍的經(jīng)歷，準(zhǔn)確使用了時(shí)態(tài)。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時(shí)候不落俗套，講到了自己的家庭那時(shí)比較困難，父親是通過努力工作為我賺錢買槍的，寫作是富有感情的，也通過這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier ），

38、上升到了保家衛(wèi)國(guó)的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動(dòng)的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。8自信賦予人力量，帶給人快樂。擁有自信，人生處處是舞臺(tái)，生活越來越精彩。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你為校刊英語(yǔ)園地“自信助我成長(zhǎng)”專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾裕窒硪淮问鼓愀幼孕诺慕?jīng)歷，并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕?。提示詞語(yǔ)： powerful ， happy， believe in ， keep doing提示問題：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we become more conf

39、ident?Its very important to be confident【答案】 It s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick towhat we do. So it s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practicedit for many times at home, I still felt

40、nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then Ibreathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can t believe how happy I was when I recalled thespeech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bec

41、ome more and more confident. To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)

42、方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如at the beginning of ；know about ； make a speech 等； When ； Although ； Then ； From then on, 等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。9李華的英國(guó)筆友給 Jessica寫一封信Jessica來信說 , 她想了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。假如你是李華 , 介紹該節(jié)日。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點(diǎn)：, 請(qǐng)你1. 中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間；2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯, 賞月 , 吃月餅等；3, 我最期待的活動(dòng)。要求： 1.80-100 詞開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.語(yǔ)句通順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整。Dear Jessica,Im glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Fes