高考英語(yǔ)作文格式范文

1、范 文 高考英語(yǔ)作文只求表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，稍加高級(jí)詞匯和句式變化（長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合、被動(dòng)句、it開頭句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、巧妙運(yùn)用連接詞使全文顯得順暢）就能拿高分，尤其立意不是求新而是求準(zhǔn)（不是中文作文），符合實(shí)際。 高考英語(yǔ)寫作訓(xùn)練方法 一, 高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)基本策略: 仔細(xì)審題。 如果是看圖寫文，看懂每幅圖之間的聯(lián)系至關(guān)重要。 寫要點(diǎn)。據(jù)每幅圖寫出一至兩句話。因?yàn)槊磕旮呖紩姹磉_(dá)一般控制在10句話，120個(gè)詞左右。 連句成文。每句話寫好后，用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞連接起來(lái)，使之上下連貫，呼應(yīng)，通順，簡(jiǎn)潔。 查錯(cuò)漏。完稿后，檢查一下有沒有時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，拼寫錯(cuò)誤并逐一加以改正。 卷面整潔。卷面整潔干凈甚至比準(zhǔn)確，通順，簡(jiǎn)

2、介更重要。因?yàn)檎麧嵏蓛艚o閱卷人精神上帶來(lái)愉悅，相對(duì)而言，分?jǐn)?shù)自然要給得高一些。 為了幫助同學(xué)們?cè)谄綍r(shí)寫作練習(xí)的時(shí)候時(shí)刻牢記這些寫作的基本要領(lǐng)，特編順口溜如下：細(xì)審題，巧構(gòu)思，列要點(diǎn)，防遺漏。寫日記，同漢語(yǔ)；書信，通知格式要牢記。看清圖表細(xì)梳理，寫人記事按順序；完稿后查遺漏，整潔干凈莫忘記。 二, 高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)高分策略：從遣詞，造句，謀篇三個(gè)方面分析。 遣詞的原則：使用高等級(jí)詞匯及短語(yǔ), 如果僅僅記住幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單基礎(chǔ)的詞匯,而且一味的重復(fù)低水平的英語(yǔ)知識(shí)點(diǎn),還遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)沒有達(dá)到大學(xué)的入學(xué)要求。這就要求考生在平時(shí)的訓(xùn)練和考試當(dāng)中，有意識(shí)的強(qiáng)化“復(fù)雜，高級(jí)”這兩個(gè)概念，使自己的作文能力區(qū)別于普通學(xué)生的作文

3、，使自己一下子就站在一個(gè)比別人高的位置上，充分顯示自己的實(shí)力。 平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中注意總結(jié)各種各樣的詞匯。以描述人物的詞匯為例： 表達(dá)人物愛憎感情： like, love, be interested in, be fond of hate, dislike, be tired of, lose interest in happy, excited, pleased, satisfied, angry, sad, worried, disappointed, terrified, mad, frightened 介紹人物的影響及人們對(duì)人的評(píng)價(jià)： He became famous for his n

4、ew theory. The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. We regard Li Fei as our model. Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. People spoke highly of him and all respected him. 常見描述人物性格，外貌和身體狀況等的詞語(yǔ) good-looking /funny-looking /strong-looking /ugly-looking /dirty-looking /ordin

5、ary-looking /blue-eyed /white-eyed /warm-hearted /light-hearted /kind-hearted /absent-minded /tall /short /beautiful /pretty /lovely /naughty/ be blind /lame in /be in good or poor condition/ healthy/ fine/ well /strong-tempered /bad-tempered /near-sighted /far-sighted /foolish /stupid /silly /cleve

6、r /smart /wise /bright / diligent /intelligent /lazy /hard working, etc. 造句的原則：句式多變，語(yǔ)法活用，句子是表達(dá)一個(gè)完整意思的最小當(dāng)位，所以造句能力在英文寫作中是非常重要的。好的英語(yǔ)句子能夠生動(dòng)，形象，準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)內(nèi)容。所以要想寫出漂亮的書面表達(dá)，必須從寫好句子開始。 謀篇的原則： 滿分作文都有個(gè)共性就是有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。文章的連貫性和緊湊感 是很重要的。句子作為最小的表達(dá)意思的語(yǔ)言當(dāng)位如果只是被隨意的整合，是無(wú)法達(dá)到有效表達(dá)的目的。 常見的句子之間的連接手段有： 使用代詞指代上一句中的名詞

7、重復(fù)使用上一句中的詞 使用連接詞 使用平行結(jié)構(gòu) The following are some good compositions, which are provided only for your reference. Most of them are too long. 1. 你的一名網(wǎng)友因?yàn)槊詰倬W(wǎng)絡(luò)，浪費(fèi)了太多的時(shí)間，以致學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)大幅退步。給他寫封E-MAIL，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。 2006 ，August 5 Dear Peter , I have heard (或I have learned from your letter) that you are crazy about the

8、internet and almost spend you entire leisure time on it, which gives rise to your bad exam results. The internet, however, is a two-edged sword. Whether it is a blessing or a curse depends on, for the most part, (適當(dāng)使用插入語(yǔ)形式是句式豐富多彩) people themselves who use it. In the first instance (=first), the int

9、ernet enables us to be well informed of and to keep pace with the time. Moreover, the affluent (rich and enough) resources which are free of charge on the internet can be downloaded by anyone at any time, thus making it more convenient to learn at ones own pace. (句式復(fù)雜而地 道) Nevertheless, wasting your

10、 time by surfing on the internet purposelessly is nothing less than foolish, for study is the first and foremost task for us students. Accordingly (Therefore / As a result), I assume it is important that you develop a good habit of internet surfing. Being obsessed with this kind of modern entertainm

11、ent will affect your school work for sure. To strengthen my point, I think it advisable for those who are addicted to the internet to impress self-discipline on their mind. Looking forward to your reply soon. / Looking forward to hearing from you soon. / Best wishes to you. / Remember me to your par

12、ents. Sincerelyyours / Yours truly ， Li Ping August 5 ，2006 Dear Peter, From your last mail, I could tell without doubt (賓語(yǔ)太長(zhǎng)，狀語(yǔ)前移，導(dǎo)致句式嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)) that youve still got a strong desire to study hard. However, the key point of your problem, from my point of view, (適當(dāng)使用插入語(yǔ)形 式使句式豐富多彩) lies in how to break away

13、from your obsession with the internet. My suggestions about the situation can be stated as follows, which I sincerely hope will be of some help. In the first place, you should make it clear in your mind that the internet is just virtual reality where everything youve dreamed of can never be accompli

14、shed in terms of real achievements. Your devotion to life or study, by sharp contrast, is sure to pay off some day. In addition, self-discipline is, by any means, a must in overcoming your addiction. Why not try to make a plan for a whole day without leaving time for playing computer, and keep to yo

15、ur schedule all the time? In this way, you could better focus on the things in hand, free from the temptation of the internet. I definitely know its hard for you at first to get rid of the appealing internet, since all things are difficult before theyre easy. I can even imagine how your fingers trem

16、ble at the mere mention of the word computer. Nevertheless, leaving you exposed to the constant lure of the games on online is beyond me to any degree. I do hope you will return to your normal study, the sooner the better. Best wishes! Yours, Lin Hai August 5 ，2006 Dear Peter, Recently the issue of

17、youngsters toxication in the Internet has been brought into focus. And as your friend, Im really sorry to know that so much time have you spent on the Internet that you have no “spare” time and energy to put your mind into your study. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at it. For one thing, I h

18、ave no idea why youre so crazy about the Internet. Although we cant deny the Internet has changed our traditional means of information circulation and communication, it is still just a tool which helps our work and study. From what you are doing now, however, you seem to be putting the cart before t

19、he horse. For another, you can think about why you were so absorbed in the Internet initially. Im sure you didnt have a healthy hobby in your spare time, such as ball games, newspaper reading or something else. If you had developed a proper hobby at that time, you wouldnt have been reduced to a big

20、“net worm”. While it cant be solved immediately, Im positive that youll lead a better life without the Internet in the near future. Yours, Lin Hai. 筆頭通知(Notice): 與書信格式差不多只是少了 “Yours,” . June 5, 2006 Dear students, The Student Union has decided to organize a music week. It will be held in the first w

21、eek of May. The activities include singing pop songs and playing classical and folk music. Bring your own musical instruments, please. A music contest will be included as well. The students taking part in the contest will listen to a part of a song or a piece of music, and then guess where it comes

22、from. If youd like to take part in the music week, please come and sign up for it before April 20th. The place for the activities will be announced later. Come to the great fun! Please do be on time. Student Union 口頭通知(Announcement)：注意與筆頭通知在格式上的區(qū)別 Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, ple

23、ase? / Your attention, please! 。 Thats all. Thank you for listening. 發(fā)言稿： Ladies and gentlemen, Yesterday our teacher of English asked me to say something about pollution. Now, I give you my views on this vital question. As a matter of fact, the effects of industrial pollution are known to everyone

24、- polluted air, polluted water, polluted earth. Though a great deal is already being done to control these effects, the problem of pollution is still serious. Continued population increase, and smog and chemical waste produced by factories and cars not only threaten to exhaust our resources, but als

25、o pollute our environment. We do need clean air, safe water and our childrens health. In my opinion, to solve the problem of pollution, everyone must refrain from polluting our environment. We should know that this is the duty of every individual, not of the government alone. Thats all. Thank you fo

26、r listening. 便條：與書信格式差不多, 像是一種非正式的信件 4:30, June 5 Mr Johnson, Since you are very interested in Beijing Opera, I have managed to get you a ticket for tonights performance. Its worth watching because it is performed by several famous players. I came to give you the ticket, but you happened to be out.

27、I had to leave a note to you. The performance is in Lu Xun Theatre. To get there, you can take the bus just in front of our school gate and get off at the second bus-stop. If you want to walk there, just go westward along Beijing Road, and turn right when you reach Friendship Road. You will see Lu X

28、un Theatre when you reach Renmin Road. It wont take you long. You cant miss it. Yours, Wang Fei 日記: 記敘在先（常為過(guò)去時(shí)），最后簡(jiǎn)單地發(fā)表一下看法（可為現(xiàn)在的某種時(shí)態(tài)）。 January 21, 2006 Saturday Fine Our school invited Mr Horton, a foreign teacher, working in a college in our city, to give a lesson to the students of Senior Grade T

29、hree. It was very interesting. I have learned a lot from the foreign teacher Mr Horton had a free talk with us in easy English. He spoke slowly so that we could understand him well. Sometimes he repeated what we didnt understand. My classmates were all active in his class. To my joy, I understood al

30、most everything Mr Horton said. And I was able to ask some questions in English, too. This Lesson encouraged me very much. Im sure if we keep on practicing, it will not be so difficult for us to learn spoken English well. （看法） 敘事類（看圖寫話較多）：常以時(shí)間或空間順序敘述，講清時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件，有時(shí)可以采用倒敘， 但須謹(jǐn)慎，少用直接引語(yǔ)。 Uncle Johns

31、Terrible Accident Last night, Father held a party at home in celebration of his birthday. Uncle John drank a lot of bear. “Bottoms up.” he repeated, with a deep blush already on his cheeks. I could tell from his voice that he was a bit drunk without doubt. It was not until midnight that my uncle ros

32、e to leave. Judging from his unsteady walk, I supposed it the last thing suitable that he drove home. I suggested he take a taxi. Turing a deaf ear to my words, he insisted that it was only a piece of cake. As the engine started, a feeling seized me that something terrible was about to happen. It wa

33、s in the hospital that Father and I saw Uncle John again. He had his legs in plaster at the moment and was injured all over. Later on, Uncle recalled what had happened that night. Due to the effect of alcohol, Uncle John bumped hard into a tree, his car windows smashed to pieces and he himself throw

34、n out onto the ground. Luckily for him, he was immediately sent to hospital by a kind driver, but then a policeman came to the hospital and revoked his driving license. Lying on the bed was the poor John, my uncle, who was badly injured in an accident on account of his driving after drinking. He was

35、 extremely sorry. However, nothing could make up for the wrong-doings. Just on the evening before, an exciting party was held by his best friend, Sam. The common interest in the alcohol made them have a good time till midnight. When my uncle was finally ready to return, he had already forgotten all

36、about the danger of driving after drinking, even ignoring the advice from his friends. My uncle had a close touch with a tree and flew out of his car. Such an experience accounted for the scars on his head and the injury all over. Just when he was lying on bed, regretting what he had done, in came a

37、 policeman who came to look into the whole thing and revoked his license. We should always keep in mind that life is important to everyone. （敘事類最后看情況可以加議論，具體 多少看需要） 說(shuō)明文（包括看圖、看表寫話）、議論文：5段或3段式， 1. 講清現(xiàn)象，簡(jiǎn)提看法； 2. 分析情況正/反、 好/壞； 3. 發(fā)表自己的看法、提出解決問(wèn)題的方法； 4。最后總結(jié) 看圖寫話 My Suggestions on the Use of the Vacant Lan

38、d Never before in history has (適當(dāng)使用倒裝句式使句式豐富多彩) the integrated ability of a person been so highly regarded as it is nowadays. In order to raise the competence of students in our school, I strongly recommend that a versatile scientific building be set up in the vacant land, which will definitely serv

39、e as a supplement to the already comprehensive facilities in our school. On the one hand, the building should include several laboratories (which are) equipped with computers and microscopes, where students can carry out various experiments on their own. (句式復(fù)雜而地道) An observatory is also in need due

40、to the large number of astronomy-lovers in our school. On the other, large lecture halls are also suggested since chances are that some eminent (outstanding) professors and scientists will come to deliver speeches on our campus. Such practice from my viewpoint is sure to pave the way for shaping the

41、 scientific awareness in our heart. With the art building cultivating our appreciation of music and paintings and the sports field strengthening our muscles and bodies, (獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用增加了文彩) we need precisely a paradise for scientific research to help us gain intelligence and conscientiousness (sense of du

42、ty), which are a must in todays fierce competition. To sum up, I sincerely hope that a magnificent scientific building will be standing there in the near future. 對(duì)綠地增加的感想（看圖表） 這類說(shuō)明文應(yīng)先描述圖表后發(fā)表看法，有時(shí)可以?shī)A敘夾議 In accordance with / According to the chart / As is shown in the chart, the average public green l

43、and area per capita has increased from 2.96 square meters in 1998 to 9.16 square meters in 2003. So it is no surprise that Shanghai has won the title of Garden City. As we all know, the ecological environment greatly affects the citizens daily life. Not only does it help to make the air fresh and be

44、autify our surroundings, it also relaxes ones body and mind, keeping everyone in high spirits when working and studying. In the meanwhile, the large amount of public green land will give tourists a good first impression. Its the best name-card for a city, speaking louder than any good words. Perhaps

45、 this can account for why the tourism in Shanghai is booming so rapidly, indirectly speeding up the development of the economy. It is a great honor for Shanghai to hold the Expo in 2010. By then, the environment will be quite an important factor. Cities perfect nature, and are perfected by the envir

46、onment. The far-reaching advantage the environment brings to us is obvious to all. Although Shanghai has been awarded such a glorious title, we still have a long way to go. We hope we can live in a city full of green one day, and we hope Shanghai can be a more harmonious place to live in the near fu

47、ture. With the World Expo 2010 drawing near, great importance has been attached to the appearance of Shanghai. As a result, Shanghai is now enjoying a dramatic increase in the average public green land area per capita every year, and the figure even amounted to 9.16 in 2003, three times as much as t

48、hat in 1998, which means Shanghai is proceeding steadily on its way to the Garden City. Therefore, what positive impact will be brought about under this condition? First, as the tidy appearance of the city is enhanced, more foreign guests will be attracted to pay their visit to Shanghai, which will

49、give rise to the consequent boom in tourism. Second, as we know, external causes partly act upon internal ones. So, with the environment quality promoted, we will live a better city life and thus perform better in every aspect of our social life. To draw a conclusion, there are quite a few advantage

50、s in the greening process of Shanghai. It is reported that Shanghai has already been titled as the National Garden City. And just as the slogan goes, “Better city, better life”, I bet we will soon enjoy a greener city and a more colorful city life. 有人認(rèn)為誠(chéng)實(shí)是一種美德，有人卻認(rèn)為誠(chéng)實(shí)意味著吃虧，針對(duì)這兩種觀點(diǎn)談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?An Ever-las

51、ting Merit “Honesty is the best policy.” Goes an aged old saying. Indeed, some people regard honesty as a virtue and they stick to this principle constantly. Some others, however, accept the notion that honesty gives a hint of being in an unfavorable situation. For me, I firmly hold the point that h

52、onesty is one of the values we should bear in mind all through our life. For one thing, a person who is not honest is bound to lose the trust of others. Therefore, they can not easily make friends with others and keep a lasting friendship, let alone own bosom friends. In brief, they are undoubtedly

53、unable to enter the main stream of the ethical standard. For another, those who cry wolf is not necessarily lucky to take advantage over others. Admittedly, a lier may perhaps lead a decent life for a time, but eventually he will lose the favor of others. Nevertheless, we should make room for white

54、lies, for sometimes there is a time when we have to conceal the actual fact. All in all / On the whole, honesty is an ever-lasting merit to which people should always adhere. Honesty, a Virtue to Be Engraved With the boom of economy and rise of our living standard, a few people eager to make large fortunes, are pursuing a wealthy life at the cost of neglecting our best policy - honesty. Those seemingly wise opinions even added to my anger that honesty is referred to as something of a loss. Neve