2017-2018學年高中英語 ModuleMy First Ride on a Train Section Ⅴ Writing-游記類記敘文教學案 外研版

1、學必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精module 3 my first ride on a train section writing游記類記敘文游記類記敘文就是記述旅途中所見所聞，并通過對當?shù)氐娘L土人情、山川地貌、人文景致、名勝古跡等方面的描寫來表達作者的思想感情.一、基本結構游記一般分為三部分:開頭部分：引出話題，簡要介紹游覽的情況;主體部分:詳細記述游覽過程;結尾部分:要抒發(fā)自己的體驗與感受。二、增分佳句1i will never forget my first trip to lhasa.我永遠不會忘記第一次去拉薩的旅行.2that was my first visit to the west

2、lake。那是我第一次去參觀西湖.3on the way to the palace museum， we saw the beautiful scenery。在去故宮的路上,我們看到了美麗的風景.4after 4 hours riding on the train we arrived at mount tai。乘坐4個小時的火車后，我們到達了泰山。5we were all attracted by the beauty of nature.我們都被這種自然美景吸引住了。6this is an unusual/unforgettable journey to london tower。這次去

3、倫敦塔的旅游令人難忘.7it was really an unforgettable journey。這確實是一次難忘的旅行.8what a good trip we had today。 我們今天的旅行多么愉快?。?we were very tired， but we really had a wonderful day.盡管我們非常累,但我們真地度過了愉快的一天。10this was a real life.changing experience that i would never forget。這是一次真正改變生活的經(jīng)歷,我永遠不會忘記。題目要求去年夏天我和家人到大連旅游。我們參觀了海

4、洋公園，觀看了海豚的精彩表演。又到海里游泳,后來還去看了一些有名的景點，品嘗了那里的名吃。請根據(jù)提示,以“an unforgettable trip”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語記敘文。參考詞匯：海豚 dolphin第一步:審題構思很關鍵一、審題1確定體裁：本文為游記類，屬于記敘文;2確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應為第一人稱；3確定時態(tài)：主要用一般過去時。二、構思第一部分，引入：整體介紹游覽的概況；第二部分，闡述：詳細介紹游覽過程；第三部分,總結:抒發(fā)體驗并表達愿望。第二步：核心詞匯想周全1make_a_tour_of游覽2together_with 和一塊3modern_coast_city 現(xiàn)

5、代化海濱城市4take_the_bus/by_bus 乘坐公共汽車 5many_kinds_of 很多種6cant_believe_ones_eyes 不能相信自己的眼睛7go_swimming 去游泳8enjoy_oneself/have_a_wonderful_time 玩得很愉快第三步:由詞擴句雛形現(xiàn)1去年夏天我和家人一起到大連旅游,因為大連是一個美麗的現(xiàn)代化的海濱城市。 (as引導原因狀語從句)last_summer,_i_made_a_tour_of_dalian_together_with_my_family，_as_dalian_is_a_beautiful_and_modern

6、_coast_city。2那里有很多種動物,以至于我不能相信自己的眼睛。（so 。.。that .。.引導結果狀語從句)there_were_so_many_kinds_of_animals_that_i_couldnt_believe_my_eyes。3觀看了海豚的表演之后，我們在一家餐館吃午餐,那里的海鮮美味可口.(after引導時間狀語從句；whose引導定語從句）after_we_had_seen_the_show_of_dolphins,_we_had_lunch_in_a_restaurant_whose_seafood_was_delicious。4大海是藍色的,海灘是金色的,我

7、們在海里玩得很愉快。（so連接兩個并列句)the_sea_was_blue_and_the_beach_was_golden,_so_we_enjoyed_ourselves_in_the_sea.5我們也看了大連一些有趣、著名的景點。（主謂結構)we_also_went_to_some_interesting_and_famous_places_in_dalian.6盡管游覽使我非常疲憊，但我感到很高興。（although引導讓步狀語從句）although_i_was_exhausted_from_the_tour,_i_felt_very_happy.7我希望有空時能再次去那里.（that

8、引導賓語從句；when引導時間狀語從句)i_hope_that_i_can_go_there_again_when_i_have_free_time。第四步：句式升級造亮點1用which引導的非限制定語從句改寫句1last_summer，_i_made_a_tour_of_dalian_together_with_my_family,_which_is_a_beautiful_and_modern_coast_city。2用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語改寫句3having_seen_the_show_of_dolphins，_we_had_lunch_in_a_restaurant_whose_seaf

9、ood_was_delicious。3用as引導的讓步狀語從句改寫句6exhausted_as_i_was_from_the_tour,_i_felt_very_happy。第五步：過渡銜接聯(lián)成篇an unforgettable triplast_summer，_i_made_a_tour_of_dalian_together_with_my_family，_which_is_a_beautiful_and_modern_coast_city。first_we_took_the_bus_to_the_sea_park。_there_were_so_many_kinds_of_animals_t

10、hat_i_couldnt_believe_my_eyes。_having_seen_the_show_of_dolphins,_we_had_lunch_in_a_restaurant_whose_seafood_was_delicious.after lunch we went swimming。 the sea was blue and the beach was golden, so we enjoyed ourselves in the sea. we also went to some interesting and famous places in dalian。exhausted_as_i_was_from_the_tour，_i