作文講評(píng)-求助信

1、2014煙臺(tái)一模作文 假如你是高三學(xué)生李華，今年高考英語學(xué)科閱讀量加大，而你的閱讀能力較差，因此學(xué)習(xí)壓力越來越大。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫信向你的前外教MrJohnson求助：1英語學(xué)習(xí)的困難以及增加閱讀量給自己帶來的困擾；2希望得到他的指導(dǎo)和幫助。注意：1詞數(shù)：l20l50，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear MrJohnson，Yours, Li Hua審題立意審題立意( (體裁，人稱，時(shí)態(tài)體裁，人稱，時(shí)態(tài)) ) 應(yīng)用文，書信應(yīng)用文，書信 第一人稱第一人稱 I I 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)： 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 羅列要點(diǎn)羅列要點(diǎn) 第一部分，第一部分，openingope

2、ning 寒暄語寒暄語+ + 簡(jiǎn)明點(diǎn)明寫信原因簡(jiǎn)明點(diǎn)明寫信原因 第二部分，第二部分，bodybody（可分兩段）（可分兩段） 1英語學(xué)習(xí)的困難以及增加閱讀量給自己帶來的困擾；2希望得到他的指導(dǎo)和幫助。 第三部分，第三部分，endingending（期待與希望）（期待與希望） 第四部分，第四部分，落款落款signaturesignature它山之石它山之石- -Opening:1. It has been a long time since you returned to America. (瑜)2. Hows it going with you ? Stressed and worried,

3、Im writing to you to seek for your help in learning English.(誠(chéng))3. Im sorry to bother you but I really have had trouble studying English recently and I need your help eagerly. (馳+喆) 它山之石它山之石- -Body: 4. As you know, I had difficulty in learning English when you taught me. Although I have made progress

4、 after strict training, I still do not well in English. What makes thing worse is that （宇）5. First , I always find myself lost in words while expressing myself. Unfortunately, reading is exactly what I am not good at.（知）6.Im not good at reading, so it always takes me a lot of time to understand the

5、articles . Because of this, Im under big pressure.（凡）7. Whats more, I always get puzzled in reading when faced with(=facing) sentences that consist of unfamiliar words and phrases.（敖）8. All of teachers attach great significance to the capability of reading. Hard as I try, I still find it hard to imp

6、rove.（郭）Ending:9. Id appreciate it if you could Ill appreciate it if you can10.Looking forward to your early reply. 小姜與小顏（鹽）的作文 Salt and ginger are very important in our daily life.As the saying goes,冬吃蘿卜夏吃姜（jiang），不用醫(yī)生開處方（fang）。西方人推崇吃蘋果：An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 翻譯一下：“一天一蘋果（guo），醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我（w

7、o）” 顏家驥Dear Mr. Johnson, How time flies! I have not seen you for a long time. Now,I m busy preparing for the NationalCollege Entrance Exam. But I havesome problems in English.As you know, the examimproves th requirementsof reading. But Im not good at reading. So I feel the pressure more and more hea

8、vy, which evenmakes me cant sleep (unable to sleep)well. Although I have taken somemeasures to change the situation, Imake no progress. So Im very puzzled. I would appreciateit if you could give me some guidanceand help. I believe I could make itwith your generous help. Dear Mr. Johnson, I am writin

9、g to tell you someTroubles I meet these days and hope to get some advice from you. 姜奕帆 With the college entranceexam approaching, I feel moreStressful than ever. What makesthings worse is that we have to read more articles to finish the paperduring the English exam. As you know,Im not good at Englis

10、h, especially atreading. I am always fighting againstthe English words while readingarticles. It makes me more and more nervous and I really dont haveenough confidence to continue.Every time I open the English book, I just feel helpless and hopeless.So what can I do to change it?Id appreciate it if

11、you could give me advice on improvingReading ability. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, LihuaDear Mr. Johnson,（范文） How are things going with you? Im writing to ask for your help. Asyou know, Im weak in English readingcomprehension. Although I have triedevery means to improve it, likeexpanding my

12、 vocabulary and doing alarge number of exercises, so far allmy efforts have ended up in failure,which really makes me discouraged. To make things worse, this year reading will make up a higherpercentage than ever before in the coming College Entrance Examination. Now with the important exam drawing

13、near, I feel more and more stressed and worried. If I didnt take effective measures, I wouldntbe able to get through the exam and that would ruin my college dream. Ill appreciate it very much if you can giveme some advice on how to improve myreading ability effectively and Im lookingforward to your

14、early reply. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 回信假如你是一家報(bào)社的編輯布萊克先生，收到了高三學(xué)生李華的來信。近來他在英語閱讀上有些困難，做閱讀理解題時(shí)常出錯(cuò)，由于時(shí)間緊，任務(wù)重，很著急，不知該如何做，請(qǐng)求你給想想辦法，盡快調(diào)整好，適應(yīng)高三的學(xué)習(xí)生活。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以上的情況寫一篇120150的回信。 Dear Li Hua， Im glad to hear from you. Imhonored to be believed.（寒暄）I know you have trouble in doingexercises in reading and you arewo

15、rried. Here is some advice, whichmay be of help to you.（點(diǎn)明寫信原因） Firstly, you should know everyonecan meet with the same difficulty. Youshould have confidence, which is thekey to success. Secondly, youd betternot be afraid of making mistakes. Thirdly, you should go on reading the passageone passage a

16、 day.After a short period of time, youwill find you make fewermistakes. Insisting on Readingthe end is to victory. Lastly, youshould make a proper plan foryour subjects, which will behelpful to your future study.（body） As far as Im concerned, if youdo like this, I believe you willmake great progress. （ending） Best wishes! Yours， Mr Black 附表達(dá)答案66. experience/suffer/have/face water shortage/crisis or: be short of