山西省2012高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)專(zhuān)題訓(xùn)練短文改錯(cuò)+寫(xiě)作(2)

1、山西省 2012 高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)專(zhuān)題訓(xùn)練：短文改錯(cuò)+寫(xiě)作（ 2）短文改錯(cuò)假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有 10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（ ），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意： 1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10 處，多者（從第11 處起）不計(jì)分。I am a senior high school student To my opinion, the classroom is a p

2、lace forstudents to gain knowledges So quietness is badly need for us to learn in theclassroom But recently somestudents has brought their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear of thering of mobile phonesSome of them even wasted precious time in class type shortmessages on the mobilephone

3、s To keep the classroomquietlyand make us focusmoreon our studies, I suggest that mobile phones be used in the classroom At least,they shouldn t be used where we are having a class書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是 Li Hua ，擔(dān)任學(xué)生會(huì)主席，你校剛在10月10日舉行完首屆校園外語(yǔ)節(jié)，請(qǐng)你按以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備一篇英語(yǔ)稿，投遞到英文報(bào)，stCentury 。The 21目的： 為了豐富校園生活，提高同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)的積極性，校學(xué)生會(huì)特舉

4、辦首用心愛(ài)心專(zhuān)心1屆校園外語(yǔ)節(jié)。參賽形式：以班級(jí)為單位參加。活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：英文演講，英文歌曲和英語(yǔ)短劇比賽。活動(dòng)裁判：本校英語(yǔ)教師和外教?；顒?dòng)影響：增強(qiáng)了學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的興趣等。參 考 詞 匯 ：ForeignLanguage Festival,EnglishSpeech Contest,EnglishPlaylets Competition注意：詞數(shù) 100 左右；信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Editor，On Oct.10th , our school held the first Foreign Language Festival.Yours sincerely,Li Hua改錯(cuò)

5、1. To my opinionTo In2. gain knowledgesknowledges knowledge3. is badly need forneed needed用心愛(ài)心專(zhuān)心24. students has broughthas have5.often hear of the ring去掉 of6. wasted precious timewasted waste7. class type shorttype typing8. To keep the classroom quietlyquietly quiet9. mobile phonesbe used phones be

6、 之間加 not或 shouldn t10.where we are havingwhere wheneditor,On Oct.10 th ,ourschoolheld the firstForeignLanguage Festival.Itaimed to makecampus life more colourful as well as to encourge students to study English.Therewerethreeactivitiesduringthisfestival EnglishSpeechContest,English Songs and English

7、 Playlets Competition. Each contestant from allthe classes took part in them actively. And the judges consisted of our Englishteachers and foreign teachers.As the chairman of the Students Union, I was completely involved in thefestival. In my opinion, this festival has been successfully organized. Also, theatmosphereoflearningEnglishhasbeenwellconstructed.Moreover,ithaseffectivelyraisedourawaren