2020高中英語讀后續(xù)寫-技巧專題08句式提升之獨立結(jié)構(gòu)的使用(解析版)

1、專題08讀后續(xù)寫句式提升之獨立結(jié)構(gòu)的使用獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)是由“名詞或代詞+現(xiàn)在分詞、過去分詞、不定式、形容詞短語、名詞短語、介詞短語或副詞 短語”構(gòu)成的一種獨立結(jié)構(gòu)。在該結(jié)構(gòu)中，名詞或代詞與其后的部分構(gòu)成邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系，用來修飾謂 語動詞或整個句子。在句中作狀語，表示“時間、條件、原因、伴隨，方式或結(jié)果”等含義，其位置比較靈活，可放于句首、句中或句末。一、請仔細觀察下列句子中獨立結(jié)構(gòu)的作用1 .名詞（代詞）+現(xiàn)在分詞The clock striking twelve, I went to bed.（表原因）2 .名詞（代詞）+過去分詞He lay there on his back, his t

2、eeth set, his right hand clenched on his breast.（表伴隨）3 .名詞（代詞）+形容詞短語Her face pale with anger, she rose to go away.（表原因）4 .名詞（代詞）+介詞短語Then, last night, I followed him here and climbed in, sword in hand. （表方式）5 .名詞（代詞）+副詞短語Summer over, the students returned to school.（表原因）二、請使用獨立結(jié)構(gòu)改寫下列句子1. Her eyes br

3、immed with tears and she left.【答案】 （Her） eyes brimming with tears, she left.2. The boy stood there and his face was rigid with anger.【答案】 The boy stood there, his face rigid with anger.3. I clasped my hands behind me and I was too shocked to say a word.【答案】I was too shocked to say a word, my hands c

4、lasped behind me.4. A girl came in with a book in her hand.【答案】 A girl came in, book in hand.5. The manager sat quietly in the office and his eyes were closed.【答案】 The manager sat quietly in the office, （his ） eyes closed.6. They sat in the room with the curtains drawn.【答案】 They sat in the room, the

5、 curtains drawn.7. Oliver jumped up and his face was bright red with anger.【答案】 His face bright red with anger, Oliver jumped up.8. Linda leapt to her feet and her eyes was blazing with anger.【答案】 Linda leapt to her feet, her eyes blazing with anger.9. As we hugged Ruth good-bye, she said to me. Her

6、 tears was shining in her eyes.【答案】 As we hugged Ruth good-bye, she said to me, tears shining in her eyes.10. He cried and his blue eyes was shining behind his glasses.【答案】 He cried, his blue eyes shining behind his glasses.三、實戰(zhàn)演練（2018年6月浙江高考）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。It was summer, and my dad w

7、anted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad ' s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to

8、 his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.

9、 "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze（吃草）.I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Unc

10、le Paul if I could take a hose ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn cj oin g to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don lole for s uppbe," Uncle Paul cried, &q

11、uot;and keep to the track so that you don get'lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magi

12、c scene. It looked like a beautiful woven （編織的） blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為l50左右；2 .至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語:3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.We had no idea where we were and it got dark.【參考范文】I

13、Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse reared into the air, let out a frightened whinny, and galloped off the track. I held on for dear life, branches lashing into my arms and face. Finally he slowed down, then stopped, but looking around at the endless sea of trees, I kn

14、ew wehadgotten hopelessly lost. I called and the only answer was the rustling of the wind in the trees. The horse meandered through the lonesome pines, with me continuing to call and scan the horizon for a familiar landmark, ears pricked for the sound of a horse or a human voice.We had no idea where we were and it got dark. At last I heard the welcome sound of rushing water -the river! Gratefully we went to the bank and drank our fill. We followed it in the direction that the sun had set, and