18-19Unit3SectionⅦWriting——人物傳記

1、Section VH Writing人物傳記寫作技法指導(dǎo)文體指導(dǎo)寫人物傳記，主要是對(duì)其生平、主要事跡和貢獻(xiàn)進(jìn)行介紹，使讀者對(duì)他們有 一個(gè)更為清晰和全面的了解。1. 人物傳記的一般結(jié)構(gòu)(1) 介紹人物的出生時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)。(2) 介紹人物的主要經(jīng)歷、事跡或成就等。(3) 介紹人物的主要貢獻(xiàn)或者地位。(4) 最后對(duì)人物作一定的評(píng)價(jià)。2. 人物傳記的寫作順序傳記多采用時(shí)間順序來(lái)組織材料，寫作前可以根據(jù)獲得的材料列一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的 寫作提綱，將值得寫的內(nèi)容列出來(lái)，然后進(jìn)行篩選。3. 人物傳記的常用時(shí)態(tài)介紹人物的生平事跡和成就等主要以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，對(duì)人物的評(píng)價(jià)常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。亮點(diǎn)句式1. She took an

2、 active part in social activities.她積極參與社會(huì)活動(dòng)。2. She showed great in terest in draw ing making up her mind to be a pain ter.她對(duì)繪畫很感興趣，決心成為一名畫家。3. It was in 2019 that he began to work as a doctor.正是在2019年他開(kāi)始從事醫(yī)生職業(yè)。4. He fell in love with scienee anddevoted himself tdt.他迷上了科學(xué)并且致力于它。5. He lived a hard lif

3、e before he became a great success.在他獲得成功之前，生活比較清苦。6. She finished middle school in 1965 after which she went to university.她在1965年中學(xué)畢業(yè)，然后上了大學(xué)。第1頁(yè)7. works作品7. The most important thing is that he is warm-hearted.最重要的事是他有一顆熱心腸。8. So strongminded was he thathe could keep up until he succeeded. 他意志很堅(jiān)強(qiáng)，他

4、會(huì)繼續(xù)做下去直到成功。滿分佳作構(gòu)建寫作任務(wù)請(qǐng)你就下表所提供的信息用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)要介紹德國(guó)著名作曲家巴 赫。姓名Joha nn Sebastian Bach生卒年代16851750生平1.生于德國(guó)埃森納赫市（Eisenach）的一個(gè)音樂(lè)世家。9歲喪母， 10歲喪父。2.少年時(shí)期靠獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金上學(xué)，1702年畢業(yè)，1703年成為一名小 提琴手，此后創(chuàng)作了許多曲子。3.晚年雙目失明仍堅(jiān)持創(chuàng)作。1750年在萊比錫（Leipzig）去世。評(píng)價(jià)偉大的作曲家，西方文化史上最重要的人物之一。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫審題謀篇體裁人物傳記類記敘文時(shí)態(tài)一般過(guò)去時(shí)主題德國(guó)著名作曲家巴

5、赫的生平人稱第三人稱結(jié)構(gòu)第一段：有關(guān)巴赫的基本信息和主要生平經(jīng)歷。第二段：對(duì)他的評(píng)價(jià)。遣詞造句I.對(duì)接單元詞匯1.musical音樂(lè)的2.scholarship獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金3.violi nist小提琴家4.compose作（詩(shī)、曲）5.lose on e's sight失明6.create創(chuàng)作第2頁(yè)第5頁(yè)8. composer作曲家9. discourage sb.from doing sth. 阻止某人做某事10. keep on doing sth.繼續(xù)做某事11. in the history of.在歷史上n .巧用單元句式、語(yǔ)法（一）完成句子1. 九歲時(shí)，他失去了母親，第二年他的

6、父親去世了。（and連接并列句）At the age of nine, he lost his mother, and the next year his father died2. 小時(shí)候，他靠獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金上學(xué)，1702年畢業(yè)。（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）When he was young he went to school on a scholarship and graduated in 1702.3 .不幸的是，晚年他雙目失明。（it作形式主語(yǔ)）It was unfortunate that he lost his sight completely in his later life.4.

7、然而，他仍堅(jiān)持創(chuàng)作了很多作品。However，he still kept on creating many works.（二 ）句式升級(jí)1. 用狀語(yǔ)從句的省略形式改寫句 2When young, he went to school on a scholarship and graduated in 1702.2. 用 unfortunately 詞改寫句 3Unfortunately，he lost his sight completely in his later life.妙筆成篇【參考范文】Johann Sebastian Bach was born into a musical fam

8、ily in 1685 in Eisenach, Germany.Bach had an unhappy childhood.At the age of nin,ehe lost his mother, and the next year his father died.When young，he went to school on a scholarship and graduated in 1702.And then in 1703，he became a violinist.And from then on，he composed a lot of works.Unfortunately，he lost his sight completely in his later life.However，this did n't discourage him from worki ng on music, and he still kept on creati ng m