九年級(jí)上冊(cè)英語(yǔ)專題匯編英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)(一)及解析

1、九年級(jí)上冊(cè)英語(yǔ)專題匯編英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)（一）及解析一、英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)1.書(shū)面表達(dá)我的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)初中即將畢業(yè)，你在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方面積累了較多的經(jīng)驗(yàn)與方法，請(qǐng)你向你的表弟介紹你的做法，根據(jù)卜面表格中的內(nèi)容，按要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一）痘文，多聽(tīng)聽(tīng)收音機(jī)，聽(tīng)音樂(lè)等，可以放松 .多說(shuō)運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)，增強(qiáng)能力與信心.多讀書(shū)開(kāi)闊視野，了解英語(yǔ)文化.語(yǔ)法規(guī)則更好地理解與運(yùn)用.寫(xiě)作寫(xiě)寫(xiě)日常生活.其他要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范;2.必須包含表格中所有內(nèi)容，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮3.行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4.詞數(shù) 80100?！敬鸢浮縈y English StudyHow time flies! My three-

2、year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.

3、Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily lif

4、e.In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如 look back, listen to the radio, a good way to learn English , relax ourselves, communicate with , help sb. do , do more reading , in addition , in a word 等。而感嘆句 How time flies!, 倒裝

5、句 only when wedevelop interest in studying English can we learn it well. 和復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)Use spoken Englishwhen communicating with classmates. 的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的

6、單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2.親愛(ài)的同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，你們一定有很多的感觸.假如彳是Tony名城中學(xué)九（ 1）班的學(xué)生。請(qǐng)以My junior high school life 為題,寫(xiě)一篇80 詞左右的短文。提示：1 . 個(gè)人基本情況介紹2 .校園（校園干凈而美麗，活動(dòng)非富多彩）；老師（傳授知識(shí)，教會(huì)做人,經(jīng)常鼓勵(lì)）；同學(xué)（和睦相處，互相學(xué)習(xí)，共同進(jìn)步）。3 .對(duì)學(xué)校、老師、同學(xué)表達(dá)感謝和祝福。要求：1 . 文章包含以上提示內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2 .文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名?！敬鸢浮縈y junior high school lifeM

7、y name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I m glad to tellmyeotuhisnog about my school life.Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ours

8、elves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的初中生活?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要

9、為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My name is ,T m glad to , Our campus is ，Our teachers teach us 等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的個(gè)人情況，接下來(lái)介紹我們的校園，老師和同學(xué)，最后對(duì)學(xué)校、老師、同學(xué)表達(dá)感謝和祝福。此處go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth,all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get o

10、n with, learn from, make progress 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。3 書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是九年級(jí)學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Billy 發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)你平時(shí)鍛煉的情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，給Billy 回封電子郵件，并建議他每周都要花些時(shí)間鍛煉身體。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1. 你最近正忙于為即將到來(lái)的體育測(cè)試（ physical test）做準(zhǔn)備。2. 介紹你平時(shí)鍛煉的情況：（ 1 ）每天鍛煉的時(shí)間：不到一個(gè)半小時(shí)。（ 2）偶爾不鍛煉的原因：作業(yè)多，沒(méi)時(shí)間。（ 3）擅長(zhǎng)的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)：球類運(yùn)動(dòng)。3. 談?wù)勫憻捊o你帶來(lái)了哪些好處。寫(xiě)作要求：1. 不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2. 可適當(dāng)加入

11、細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3. 字跡工整，語(yǔ)言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰。4. 至少 80 詞。Dear Billy,It s mryeagt pleasure to receive your e-mail.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,ll tellIt s my great pleasure to recvei your e- mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I it to you.I am busy preparing for the coming physical tes

12、t. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I havoetinme to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exerc

13、ise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Billy 回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時(shí)的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些時(shí)間鍛煉身體?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I ambusy because I have ，Doing exercise can help , So I advise you to等

14、句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān) 系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭表示很高興收到Billy的來(lái)信，接下來(lái)介紹我平時(shí)的鍛煉情況，最后指出鍛煉給我?guī)?lái)的好處以及我建議Billy要多鍛煉。此處be busy doing sth,prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。4.書(shū)面表達(dá)初三的學(xué)習(xí)生活繁忙中有困惑、淚水，也有進(jìn)步、喜悅。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提示，寫(xiě)一篇題為Our school life in Grade Nine的短文，介紹九年級(jí)的學(xué)

15、校生活，并提出希望和建議。在校老師工作認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)，充滿愛(ài)心學(xué)生（至少發(fā)揮兩點(diǎn)）周末作業(yè)作業(yè)多.舍棄愛(ài)好其它活動(dòng)鍛煉，電視愿望（發(fā)捶一到兩點(diǎn)）要求：1 .所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：2 .文章不少于90詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3 .語(yǔ)意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；4 .文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is l

16、ike now.【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our lif

17、e. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, to

18、o. So we cant afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰

19、，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短 語(yǔ)， 例如 at school, work hard , most of, patient enough , help sb. with sth. , all kinds of problems , in our life , as a result, as for students , listen to , be busy doing , try to do , spend a lot of time doing , not any more , play basketball 等。而 It is more than half a year si

20、nce we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多種特殊比較級(jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá) 多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容 經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要 點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu) 以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5.書(shū)面表達(dá)你即將升

21、入高中，面臨寄宿( a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。 請(qǐng)你以A boarding school or a day school為題?！睂?xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容須包括：讀寄宿學(xué)校的利 和弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利和弊；你的選擇和理由(不得與上述兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容重復(fù))。注意：1.詞數(shù);100詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2 .文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3 .文章必須包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middl

22、e school,【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boardingschool or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our

23、 family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文?？梢苑秩螌?xiě)。第

24、一段要寫(xiě)總體交代你即將升入高中， 面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫(xiě)詳細(xì)敘 述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?！驹斀狻繉?xiě)作之前要1.審清題目，看看有哪些要求？哪些時(shí)態(tài)？人稱？2.確定文章類型，記敘文？說(shuō)明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？3.確定時(shí)態(tài)，單一還是混合。4.寫(xiě)下關(guān)鍵詞、短語(yǔ)、句型。5.列出提綱和段落，并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^(guò)渡詞銜接。6.根據(jù)提綱和段落結(jié)構(gòu)句型及關(guān)鍵詞句完成文章。寫(xiě)完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤(rùn)色，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過(guò)渡法和自然銜接法來(lái)是文章更為地道、通順、

25、純正。用的短語(yǔ)、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來(lái)增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫(xiě)作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要 清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。6.臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開(kāi)展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是Moonlight小組的組長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員Tommy進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)，寫(xiě)一份素質(zhì)報(bào)

26、告.NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書(shū)，認(rèn)為看書(shū)有很多好處（請(qǐng)列舉2個(gè)好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。在學(xué)校和同學(xué)相處融洽。上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉一例）。今年，學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒(méi)有充足的睡眠.Your suggestions（根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提2點(diǎn)建議）要求：1、表達(dá)清楚、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫；2、要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3、詞數(shù)：100詞左右；4、不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my

27、 team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all hislessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because hethinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has

28、 agood effect on children s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crossesthe road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year.However

29、, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn t have enough sleep.I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It s better for him to manage histime wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫(xiě)一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)報(bào)告。在表格中有非常詳細(xì)的關(guān)于Tommy 各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要

30、用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來(lái)。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意表達(dá)的條理性。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)。在最后要給Tommy 提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。同時(shí)注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，尤其是表格中的第五項(xiàng)和第六項(xiàng)內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意了被動(dòng)形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school thisyear.。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。短文注意到了長(zhǎng)短句的結(jié)合，并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達(dá)的連貫。如He is always ready to

31、 help others. 、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news. 、 He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year. 等。7近年來(lái)霧霾天氣在中國(guó)許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關(guān)注。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向?？坝⒄Z(yǔ)角 ”投稿,內(nèi)容包括：1. 霧霾的危害2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因（2 個(gè)） 3. 應(yīng)對(duì)霧霾的措施

32、（3 個(gè)）提示：霧霾smog poisonous 有毒的注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 110 左右； 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.【答案】In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which hasaroused great

33、 concern among people.Smog has a bad effect on people s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that ha

34、s caused this.The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people s burning coal, driving cars,industry production and so on.What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Sec

35、ond, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來(lái)介紹有

36、關(guān)霧霾的情況，題目中給出了寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將 這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不 能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過(guò)分析可 知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要變化， 這是一個(gè)寫(xiě)作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語(yǔ)句式與漢語(yǔ)在語(yǔ)序和詞性上的使 用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~ 匯和句型來(lái)表達(dá)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語(yǔ)，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。8.書(shū)面表達(dá)請(qǐng)將短文寫(xiě)在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。一直以來(lái)，同學(xué)們對(duì)作業(yè)持有不同的

37、觀點(diǎn)。在你班的主題班會(huì)上，同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了“Is dayhomework necessary ?”的討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示和要求，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，發(fā)表你的 觀點(diǎn)。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned ；Practice makes prefect ；In my opinidh,Your opinion :Take up too much time ;Make us less interested in studying ；要求：1 . 80詞以上。2 .文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名?！敬鸢浮緿ear students,Im glad to gi

38、ve a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think its necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the kn

39、owledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding.So I always believe“ Practice makes. perfect”In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldnt be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. I

40、t might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.Thats all. Thanks.【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：審題之后能明白寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是要寫(xiě)出一篇小論文，討論每日的作業(yè)到底 是不是必要的。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn)，其次結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，發(fā)表自己的 觀點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中要注意邏輯準(zhǔn)確，注意正確使用連詞，借助實(shí)例、實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)來(lái)佐證自己 的觀點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：首先用一個(gè)自然段

41、來(lái)闡明寫(xiě)作的主題，表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)（認(rèn)為作業(yè)是很必要 的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do這樣的句型。其次，開(kāi)始具體陳述觀點(diǎn)，陳述的 時(shí)候要適當(dāng)使用實(shí)例，相關(guān)用到的短語(yǔ)有have some difficulties in doing在做的時(shí)候有困難，review the knowledge 復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí)，think over the difficulties 來(lái)回思考難點(diǎn)，Little by little一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語(yǔ)也為文章增色不少，例如用到了Practice makes perfect熟能生巧這個(gè)諺語(yǔ)。最后可以用說(shuō)理的方式來(lái)介紹做作業(yè)的必要性，例如用到

42、了improve our skills提高我們的技能，在這里也有一點(diǎn)亮點(diǎn)，就是說(shuō)作業(yè)也要有變化性，要豐富多彩，體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考，總體來(lái)說(shuō)出色地完成了既定的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。9 環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé)，如果我們每一個(gè)人都能珍愛(ài)美麗地球保護(hù)自然資源，相信我們的家園會(huì)越來(lái)越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“Going Green為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問(wèn)題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望。提示詞語(yǔ)：pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問(wèn)題： What are the main environ

43、mental problems we have? What can we do in ourdaily life?What s your wish?Now there are many environmentalproblems.Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to

44、 school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together w

45、e can make a big difference. Let s work together to make a better place to live.題干解讀：該題目屬于說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問(wèn)題是什么，為改善 環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來(lái)敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時(shí)態(tài)采用 的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述建議時(shí)，描寫(xiě)具體，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：save energy； brush our teeth ； put it into different bins ； take action ； make a bigdif

46、ference 。句型： When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins ； Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference 。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用至U的表達(dá)，例如save energy； brush our teeth ； put it into different bins ； takeaction; make a big difference o以及狀語(yǔ)從句等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程 中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較 等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn) 符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合