《高中英語看圖作文》ppt課件

1、1看圖作文寫作技巧看圖作文寫作技巧看圖作文的關(guān)鍵：看圖作文的關(guān)鍵： 1. 看懂圖片，以防跑題?？炊畧D片，以防跑題。 2. 確定短文的時態(tài)和人稱。確定短文的時態(tài)和人稱。 3. 審審-譯譯-改改-謄謄 4. 適當(dāng)添加評論等內(nèi)容適當(dāng)添加評論等內(nèi)容22011年北京高考34假設(shè)你是你是李華，本周你們正在學(xué)習(xí)假設(shè)你是你是李華，本周你們正在學(xué)習(xí)Life in the Future單元。白天，你們進(jìn)行了討論；夜晚，你夢見乘坐時間飛單元。白天，你們進(jìn)行了討論；夜晚，你夢見乘坐時間飛船到船到3012年的學(xué)校參觀。請根據(jù)下面五幅圖，寫一篇日記。年的學(xué)校參觀。請根據(jù)下面五幅圖，寫一篇日記。5時態(tài)和人稱時態(tài)和人稱 人稱

2、：一人稱人稱：一人稱 時態(tài)：本周學(xué)習(xí)（現(xiàn)在時）時態(tài)：本周學(xué)習(xí)（現(xiàn)在時） 對夢中的描述（過去式）對夢中的描述（過去式）6本周正在學(xué)習(xí)本周正在學(xué)習(xí)Life in the Future白天進(jìn)行了討論白天進(jìn)行了討論We are learning Life in the Future this week.We have learned Life in the Future.We have been learning Life in the Future this week.We had a discussion about it. 7本周正在學(xué)習(xí)本周正在學(xué)習(xí)Life in the Future白天進(jìn)行了

3、討論白天進(jìn)行了討論We learn Life in the Future this week.We learned Life in the Future this week.We have a dicussion about it.同學(xué)們存在的問題同學(xué)們存在的問題8晚上，我夢見乘坐時間飛船到晚上，我夢見乘坐時間飛船到3012年的學(xué)校參觀年的學(xué)校參觀At night, I dreamed that I visited a school in 3012 by a time craft through the time tunnel.I visited the school and talked w

4、ith the students at that time.在未來學(xué)校中，我參觀了學(xué)校在未來學(xué)校中，我參觀了學(xué)校和學(xué)生進(jìn)行交談和學(xué)生進(jìn)行交談9晚上，我夢見乘坐時間飛船到晚上，我夢見乘坐時間飛船到3012年的學(xué)校參觀年的學(xué)校參觀At night, I dreamed that I went to the year 3012. I took a time craft and throughed a time tunnel. I visited a future school.在未來學(xué)校中，我參觀了學(xué)校在未來學(xué)校中，我參觀了學(xué)校和學(xué)生進(jìn)行交談和學(xué)生進(jìn)行交談I visited the school a

5、nd talked with the students at that time. To my great surprise, there was no classroom in the future school. Students all learn the knowledge by looking at the computers.同學(xué)們存在的問題同學(xué)們存在的問題10當(dāng)我要飛回當(dāng)我要飛回2012年的時候，我的年的時候，我的時間飛船的警報器響了，我感覺時間飛船的警報器響了，我感覺非常害怕非常害怕After the visit, I was on my way back to the yea

6、r 2012.My alarm on the craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft.I was shocked.11當(dāng)我要飛回當(dāng)我要飛回2012年的時候，我的年的時候，我的時間飛船的警報器響了，我感覺時間飛船的警報器響了，我感覺非常害怕非常害怕After visited, I was on my way back to the year 2012.Suddenly, the alarm on the craft begin ring/shout. It seemed something wrong

7、.That is something wrong.Something seemed to be wrong.There must be something wrong.The time crafted shoked.同學(xué)們存在的問題同學(xué)們存在的問題12我嚇得一下子驚醒，原來是起床的我嚇得一下子驚醒，原來是起床的時候了時候了Just at that time, I woke up. The alarm was still ringing. It was the alarm clock that woke me up. It was time to get up.13一，簡單句與復(fù)合句并用，長短句

8、結(jié)合一，簡單句與復(fù)合句并用，長短句結(jié)合 二，簡單句合并為復(fù)合句二，簡單句合并為復(fù)合句 三，把復(fù)合句改為簡單句三，把復(fù)合句改為簡單句把從句改為分詞短語把從句改為分詞短語把從句改為介詞短語把從句改為介詞短語 四，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運(yùn)用諸如倒裝句、四，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運(yùn)用諸如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞狀語等強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞狀語等. 五，注意使用詞組、習(xí)語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。五，注意使用詞組、習(xí)語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。 六六. 適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想與發(fā)揮。適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想與發(fā)揮。14非謂語動詞非謂語動詞從句從句特殊句式特殊句式注意：不能不用，注意：不能不用， 且不能少

9、用，且不能少用， 但也不能濫用。但也不能濫用。使用高級句式使用高級句式定語從句，定語從句，狀語從句，狀語從句，名詞性從句名詞性從句(主、賓、表、同位語從句主、賓、表、同位語從句)倒裝句，倒裝句，感嘆句，強(qiáng)調(diào)感嘆句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句，虛擬語氣句，虛擬語氣15We have been learning Life in the Future this week.We had a discussion about it.This week, we have been learning Life in the Future. In this unit, we have not only learned a lot

10、 about our future, but we discussed about this topic as well.At night, I dreamed that I visited a school in 3012 by a time craft through the time tunnel.I visited the school and talked with the students at that time.At night, I had an interesting dream in which I travelled through the time tunnel to

11、 the year of 3012 by time craft. I visited the school and had a nice talk with the students there.16After the visit, I was on my way back to the year 2012.My alarm on the craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft.I was shocked.After the visit, I was on my way back to the ye

12、ar 2012 when my alarm on the craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft.I was shocked.17Just at that time, I woke up. The alarm was still ringing. It was the alarm clock that woke me up. It was time to get up.Shocked, I woke up suddenly. However, the alarm in the time craft

13、was still ringing! Looking around, I realized it was the alarm clock that warned that it was time to get up. What a relief! It was only a dream! .that reminded me of the time to get up.18Sept 21, 2012 Friday Fine This week, we have been learning Life in the Future. In this unit, we have not only lea

14、rned a lot about our future, but we discussed about this topic as well.At night, I had an interesting dream in which I travelled through the time tunnel to the year of 3012 by time craft. I visited the school and had a nice talk with the students there.After the visit, I was on my way back to the year 2012 when my alarm on the craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft.Shocked, I woke up suddenly. However, the alarm in the time craft was still ringing! Looking around, I realized it was the alarm clock which reminded me of the time to get up. What a relief! It w