圖畫作文第一段寫法

1、作文1*陽叩"jf/i I 1jjij /> $ / < 1 #wA" J曲 dduir & HF*Or J orri nr J A<iJ dfj MT/ffc/*卜 ,$2乂2J titJ F J RiiTIir "”買 /Jjrr. * T/£rf "=皿""桿礦尸丿 rrHFFFJ jrrDirecti ons: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should start your essay wi

2、th a brief description of the picture and comment on parents ' role in their childrengrowth. You should write at least120 but no more tha n 180 words。命題解析本題要求首先描述圖畫，然后評論家長 在其孩子成長中的作用。圖中顯示：一位女 兒興高采烈地告訴母親：“媽媽，好消息 ！我被您選擇的大學錄取了?！憋@而易見，本 題的主旨是：父母為子女做出了太多的決定, 造成子女缺乏獨立。破題思路：第一段：漫畫描述，重點是母女之間的 對話內(nèi)容，從而引出文章

3、的主題是有關孩子 的獨立性，家長干涉孩子過多。第二段：可以分析此現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因。第三段：采取措施解決此現(xiàn)象。例文1How impressive the carto on is in describ ing the most widespread social phe nomenon concerning the in depe ndence of the children. Let ' take a closer look at thedraw in g,（概括描述圖畫內(nèi)容） the girl told her mother she was accepted by the uni ve

4、rsity of her mother ' s choice with prTfee author want to convey that parents are inclined to intervene their children ' freedom too much（圖畫介紹了或傳達了什么內(nèi)涵，想表達什么用意）例文2The draw ing vividly reflects（描述圖畫內(nèi)容） a daughter is chatt ing with her mother in their house. The eyes sparkli ng with delight, t

5、he daughter tells her mother,“ Good n ewsmom! I was accepted to the college of your choice. Obviously, the implication of the portrayal is that （圖畫介紹了或傳達了什么內(nèi) 涵,想表達什么用意） the daughter is lack of independence due to her mother' s doting care.作文3Directi ons: For this part, you are allowed 30 minu te

6、s to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the pictureand the n comme nt on this kind of moder n life . You should write at least 120 words but no more tha n 180 words.命題解析本題要求首先簡要描述圖畫，然后評論 這種現(xiàn)代生活。圖畫顯示：現(xiàn)代人無論工作、 居家、娛樂還是睡眠，都與電腦密不可分。 顯而易見，本題主旨

7、為電腦或網(wǎng)絡對現(xiàn)代生 活的影響。國內(nèi)寫作考試中已經(jīng)反復考察電腦或 網(wǎng)絡這一熱點話題。2002年6月四級寫作考 察“大學生使用電腦情況” ，2009年考研寫 作考察“網(wǎng)絡的近'與遠'”，2012年 6月六級寫作考察“網(wǎng)絡對人際共同的影響” 2013年12月四級寫作考察“網(wǎng)絡對人們溝 通方式的影響” 。2015年6月，四級寫作再 次考察電腦或網(wǎng)絡這一話題。如果考生研究 過之前的寫作真題，諸多表達均可使用。寫作思路:1、本題首段應簡要描述圖畫，指出人 們無論工作、家庭、休閑或休息，都 與電腦關系密切。2、第二段最好進行正反論證，說明電 腦有利有弊：一方面可以滿足工作生 活的需要并娛樂

8、自我，另一方面過度 沉迷也會浪費大量的時間和精力。3、第三段最好提出建議措施：我們應 該揚長避短，在合理使用電腦的同時， 避免過度沉迷。范文1：A is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon （描述圖畫內(nèi)容）,a person is alwaysstaying in front of a computer no matter whether he or she is working, studying or play ing. Eve n whe n he is sleep ing, the image of surfing online is als

9、o indispensable in his sweet dreams.The metaphorical and impressiveportrayal has subtly revealed （圖畫介紹了或傳達了什么內(nèi)涵，想表達什么用意）theduality of the relati on ship betwee n man and computer. On the one hand, there is no denying that the computer is currently one of the most efficient tools either to entertain

10、on eself or to meet the work's n eeds. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to computers to maintain face-to-face con tact with their frie nds and colleagues. Once in dulged in the fictitious world, people feel relucta nt to approach others and to conce

11、n trate on real life.Hence, it is necessary for us to use computers in a reas on able way and restrain from overindulgenee. After all, the computer is inven ted to connect you and me, and to bring convenien ces to our life rather tha n set a barrier to keep people bey ond reach.如圖所示，一個人無論工作、在家或娛 樂，總

12、是坐在一臺電腦前面。甚至當他睡覺 的時候，在他甜美的夢中，網(wǎng)上沖浪的畫面 也是必不可少的。這幅比喻并使人印象深刻的圖畫象征 性揭示了人與電腦之間的雙重關系。一方面,不可否認電腦目前是用于娛樂自我和滿足 工作需要的最高效媒介之一。但另一方面， 很多人承認他們太沉迷于電腦而不愿與朋 友和同事保持面對面接觸。 一旦沉迷于這種 虛幻世界，人們不愿接近他人并關注現(xiàn)實生 活。因此，我們很有必要以一種合理的方式 使用電腦，避免過度沉迷。畢竟，人們發(fā)明 電腦是為了連接你和我，為我們的生活帶來 方便，而非設置障礙使人彼此疏遠。破題思路：第一段：描述漫畫內(nèi)容，引出文章主題： 電腦的使用越來越廣泛，使用 的時間也越

13、來越長。第二段：分析該現(xiàn)象的原因。第三段：提出措施解決?；虻贸鲎约旱慕Y論This picture vividly describes that （描述 圖畫內(nèi)容）the pers on uses a computer in thewhole day eve n whe n he falls asleep at ni ght. What the carto on con veys is （圖畫介紹了或 傳達了什么內(nèi)涵，想表達什么用意）theimpact of computers on people. New products are being inven ted every minute of

14、 every day, all of which will hold sway over（ 支酉己）people in some respectsHowever, in all these tech no logies and products, computers have exerted the most importa nt in flue nee on people. Some people assert that computers have made life more complex and stressful, while some people believe that co

15、mputers have made life easier and more convenient. Now many of my classmates like to surf the Internet in their free time. I think Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages. For example, if I have some trouble studying ， I can surf the internet to find more helpful information. However, Internet