人教版八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)上冊(cè)期末作文書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練

1、人教版八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)上冊(cè)期末作文綜合復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練（一）請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文。（80字左右）寒假即將來(lái)臨，為了度過一個(gè)充實(shí)的寒假，你制定了寒假計(jì)劃。要點(diǎn)如下：1 . 一周鍛煉五次，讓身體更強(qiáng)壯；2 .多讀一些書，因?yàn)樽约旱恼Z(yǔ)文成績(jī)不夠好；3 .自學(xué)更多科學(xué)知識(shí)，希望將來(lái)制作一個(gè)機(jī)器人幫媽媽做家務(wù)；4 .你相信如果你能堅(jiān)持這些計(jì)劃，你在新學(xué)期就會(huì)成為班里最優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生之一。要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80左右；（2）可圍繞主題進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（3）文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：強(qiáng)壯的adj. shong堅(jiān)持v. keep學(xué)期n. tennThe winter vacation is coming

2、 and I make some resolutions live my life to the full. They are as follows. 【答案】At first, I am going to exercise five times a week to be stronger. Next, I plan to read more books because 1 didn't do very well in Chinese. Whafs more, I*m going to learn more about science by myself and I dream to

3、make a robot to help my mother with housework one day.I believe that if I am able to keep these resolutions, I will be one of the top students in my class.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意要承接開頭并且包括提示的內(nèi)容： 鍛煉、讀書、自學(xué)科學(xué)知識(shí)以及自己未來(lái)的設(shè)想。2 .例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；用第一人稱敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。敘述完整，條例清晰。3 .高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ)：at fii,st； plan t

4、o do； do well in： help.with.； be able to do。 句型：Whafs more,.結(jié)構(gòu)。語(yǔ)法：if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)。書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練（二）Tony是你的同班同學(xué)和好朋友，來(lái)自英國(guó)。請(qǐng)你以，想丫苗01迅2出1”為題，根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇英語(yǔ) 短文。要點(diǎn)如下：L Tony性格比你外向，個(gè)子沒你高；2 .他喜歡中文，學(xué)習(xí)努力，在班上英語(yǔ)最好，愛好運(yùn)動(dòng)；3 .新的一年，Tony打算組建一個(gè)足球隊(duì)；4 .你想取得好成績(jī)，培養(yǎng)一個(gè)新的愛好；5 .可適當(dāng)自由發(fā)揮一至兩點(diǎn)你的新年打算。注意：1 .內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，不要逐句翻譯；2 .文中

5、不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名，詞數(shù)60-80 （文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)）。參考詞匯：make v,組建 grades .成績(jī)take up學(xué)著做，開始做【答案】范文My friend and ITony is my best friend and classmate. He comes from England.He's more outgoing than me. But he's not as tall as me. He likes Chinese. He's hard-working and he's the best at English in our

6、 class. He also loves sports. And he plans to make a soccer team in the coining year. As for me, I'm going to get better grades. And I'll take up swimming as my hobby because if s fun and good for health.【解析】高分句型：1） . He's hard-working and he's the best at English in our class.（并列結(jié)構(gòu)）

7、2） . And Fil take up swimming as my hobby because ifs fim and good for health.（原因狀語(yǔ)從句） 【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用 自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。范 文中短語(yǔ)As for me的運(yùn)用，過渡到敘述自己的新年計(jì)劃，顯得非常自然。書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練（三）加入你是李華，本周五班會(huì)的主題是“我未來(lái)的生活”，請(qǐng)你圍繞此主題，準(zhǔn)備

8、一篇發(fā)言稿，以 便在班會(huì)上交流。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1 .喜歡唱歌，長(zhǎng)大后想當(dāng)一名歌手，從現(xiàn)在開始為夢(mèng)想做準(zhǔn)備；2 .首先努力學(xué)習(xí)，其次要練習(xí)唱歌，還要多看演唱會(huì)；3 .如果夢(mèng)想實(shí)現(xiàn)，將在武漢工作，因?yàn)槲錆h將更加美麗；94 .未來(lái)將有更少的大商場(chǎng)，人們會(huì)在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物；5 .你補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)你對(duì)此的其他想法。注意：1 .文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2 .詞數(shù)60至80左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3 .內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯。參考詞匯：piepare for為.做準(zhǔn)備come true實(shí)現(xiàn) online網(wǎng)上Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'd lik

9、e to talk about my life in the ftitnre .【答案】Hello, everyone, I'm Li Hua. Vd like to talk about my life in the future. I like singing and I hope to be a singer when I grow up. I will prepare for my dream from now on. First, I must study harder. Then I have to practice singing more often and final

10、ly I need to go to more concerts. If my dream conies true, I will work in Wuhan because it will be more beautiful. I tliiuk there will be fewer big stores in the future and people will buy things online. In a word, it will be more convenient.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題屬于材料作文，既要包含所給要點(diǎn)，也要求進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展。文章主題是未 來(lái)的生活，所以可

11、以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。2 .例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文按照題目要求，將所給要點(diǎn)全部包括并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展。在描述自己為實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想所 做的準(zhǔn)備時(shí)使用first、then和finally等順序副詞，讓例文讀起來(lái)思路清晰、敘事流暢。文中多處使用 高分短語(yǔ)和句型，為整篇文章增色不少。3 .高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：prepare for, come true, from now on, have to, practice doing sth., iii a wordo 句型：there be句型，任引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練（四）假如你是Wilson,你班正準(zhǔn)備召開一次主題班會(huì)暢想未來(lái)生活，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)提示， 寫

12、一篇60-80詞的英文發(fā)言稿。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要點(diǎn)提示：1 .二十年后我將成為一名工程師，在北京工作。2 .我能在家通過電腦工作，家里有機(jī)器人幫忙做家務(wù)，因此我有更多的閑暇時(shí)間去環(huán)世界，體驗(yàn)不 同國(guó)家的文化。3 .未來(lái)汽車會(huì)更少，樹木會(huì)增多，人們的壽命更長(zhǎng)。4 .為了實(shí)現(xiàn)我的夢(mèng)想，我將要努力學(xué)習(xí)，取得好成績(jī)。5 .適當(dāng)自由發(fā)揮。提示詞:engineer工程師；expeiience體驗(yàn)；culture文化My fellow students9My name is Wilson, I'm very glad to share my prediction about the

13、life in the future.In twenty years, I will be an engineer. I will work in Beijing, because there will be more jobs in that city. I will probably work on computers, and robots will help with the housework in my home, so I will have more free time to travel around the world, and experience the culture

14、 in different countries.There will be fewer cars and more trees. As a result, people will live longen In order to realize my dream, I'm going to study hard and get good grades. I believe my dream will come true one day.Thank you for listening!書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練（五）假如你是Li Ming,你的期友Henry請(qǐng)你參加這個(gè)周日的生日宴會(huì)，但你的爸爸在 外地

15、出差，要到下個(gè)月才回來(lái)，媽媽乂臥病在床，需要人照。另外，期末考試即將來(lái)臨， 因此，無(wú)法前去參加生日會(huì)。請(qǐng)用英詰寫一封謝信。要求：1.包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫：2.字?jǐn)?shù)70左右。文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。參考詞匯：be on business出差： the filial exam期末考試：party宴會(huì)Dear Henry,Thank you veiy much for inviting me to your birthday party. I'd love to your party, but I can't. My father is busy on a business in another city. He won't come back till next month. And I have to look after my mom b