2020屆高考英語(yǔ)作文名師指路模板12日記Word版含解析

1、12日記模板一（月、日、年、星期、天氣）（標(biāo)題）Today/Yesterday, I/we .（ 事件）In the morning, we; then; after that. By the time we had a good time. Finally . I ' ll never forget the memorable day!（事件經(jīng)過(guò)）From this activity, I have learned that/I think .（事件意義和自己的感想 ）模板二Date Day of the weekToday is. This afternoon I went to.

2、 Then I.Sitting on the train, I thought. At the next station,. She looked. I hesitated. The old lady. Seeing her smile, I . I will.必備佳句日記是用來(lái)記錄一天中所發(fā)生的有意義的、值得記錄的事件。在日記中，人們會(huì)對(duì)事件發(fā)表議論，闡 述一下自己的態(tài)度或體會(huì)。日記中所記錄的事情可以是自己的直接經(jīng)歷也可以是描述他人的事情。日記的 種類有很多種，從體裁角度，可以分為記事型日記和議論型日記。記事型日記是以某種順序描述某一件事 情發(fā)生發(fā)展的過(guò)程。而議論型日記是針對(duì)當(dāng)天的某一事件或

3、某一現(xiàn)象表明自己的看法或態(tài)度。日記的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)可以從以下幾個(gè)角度入手：首先要對(duì)所發(fā)生的事件或現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行描述。按照事件發(fā)展的 先后順序進(jìn)行，適當(dāng)添加對(duì)天氣或景物或心情的描述。其次要發(fā)表感想或議論，針對(duì)事件進(jìn)行感悟或議論 性的描述，以使文章有所立意。最后要對(duì)未來(lái)提出展望或推測(cè)，或表示決心、態(tài)度、觀點(diǎn)、意圖、希冀等。寫(xiě)好英文日記要注意以下幾點(diǎn):1.日記的格式英文日記通常由書(shū)端和正文兩個(gè)部分組成。日記常以第一人稱記下當(dāng)天生活中的所見(jiàn)、所聞、所做或 所想的事情。中、英文的日記三格式大致一樣。英語(yǔ)日記的書(shū)端是專門(mén)寫(xiě)日記的日期、星期和天氣的。左 上角是日期（年、月、日）、星期。右上角寫(xiě)上當(dāng)天的天氣情況，如： S

4、unny, Fine, Rainy, Windy, Snowy, Cloudy 等。（1）日期表達(dá)有多種形式。年、月、日都寫(xiě)時(shí)，通常以月、日、年為順序，月份可以縮寫(xiě)，日和年用逗號(hào) 隔開(kāi)。例如：A）September 1, 2017 或 September 1st, 2017 也可省略寫(xiě)成 Sept. 1, 2017 或 Sept. 1st, 2017;the 1st of September in 2004（月份不可以縮寫(xiě)）B）只有月、日：September 1或September 1st（月份可以縮寫(xiě)）C）只有年、月：September 2004 或 the September of 200

5、4（月份不可以縮寫(xiě)） 以上的1或1st都應(yīng)讀作the first.（2）星期也可以省略不寫(xiě)，可將其放在日期前或后，星期和日期之間不用標(biāo)點(diǎn)，但要空一格，星期也可縮 寫(xiě)。如：Saturday , October 22nd, 2004;October 22nd, 2004 Saturday（3）天氣情況必不可少。天氣一般用一個(gè)形容詞如：Sunny, Fine , Rainy , Snowy等表示。寫(xiě)在日期之后，用逗號(hào)隔開(kāi)，位于日記的右上角。如：Saturday , March 4, 2017, Windy;1st January , 2017, Fine2 .日記的時(shí)態(tài)：由于日記是對(duì)當(dāng)天所發(fā)生事情的

6、回顧，故常用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。在發(fā)表議論或感想時(shí)，也可使 用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)或一般將來(lái)時(shí)。3 .日記的人稱：因?yàn)槿沼浭怯涊d自己的親身經(jīng)歷，故應(yīng)用第一人稱，語(yǔ)言盡量口語(yǔ)化，按照事情發(fā)生的先 后順序，清楚、準(zhǔn)確、連貫地把事情表達(dá)出來(lái)。算例初析一1假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，不久前在學(xué)校舉辦的英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)。校報(bào)請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇稿件刊典例01登在英文版面上，介紹你課外學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文:1 .參加英語(yǔ)角的益處；2 .堅(jiān)持寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)日記的作用；3 .英文閱讀網(wǎng)站(EnjoyReading )對(duì)你的幫助。注意：1 .詞數(shù)：120-150;2 .可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】本文是

7、一篇提綱類寫(xiě)作。涉及語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)類話題，此話題是學(xué)生最熟悉的話題之一，語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)是學(xué)生每 天必不可缺少的事情，因此，本話題貼近學(xué)生生活，讓學(xué)生有話可寫(xiě)。符合高考是命題思想?？忌晌臅r(shí) 應(yīng)汪思：1 .采用三段成文的結(jié)構(gòu)；2 .內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：A參加英語(yǔ)角的益處；B堅(jiān)持寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)日記的作用；C英文閱讀網(wǎng)站(EnjoyReading )對(duì)你的幫助。3 .時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；4 .人稱：第一人稱；5 .適當(dāng)使用連詞使文章流暢、通順；6 .注意使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型為文章增光添彩?！痉段馁p析】As a high school student, I consider English a very important sub

8、ject. In order to learn it well, apart from English class, I took an active part in English corner and other after-class English activities, which benefit me a lot.In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. Besides, sometimes, some foreigners are glad to join us

9、. By talking with them, my oral English improveda lot. I also find it useful to keep English diaries. I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English. As a saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by practice will we make more progress. Finally, some good English study websites contr

10、ibute a lot to my improvement. Through these website s, I can read some classic English passages, poems and stories.What' s more,I can learn some learning skills and methodologies, which play an important part in my study process.All in all, every road leads to Roma, but I believe hard work pays

11、 off. 典例02假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，校報(bào)英文版正在開(kāi)展”續(xù)寫(xiě)雷鋒日記”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅 圖的先后順序，將你所做的一件好事以日記形式記述下來(lái)，向校報(bào)投稿。注意：1 .日記的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。2 .詞數(shù)100左右。Saturday, June 2FineThis morning,【思路點(diǎn)撥】這是一篇看圖寫(xiě)作， 一共四幅圖。做題時(shí)：1.認(rèn)真讀圖，可知四幅圖體現(xiàn)了你所做的一件好事，2.初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語(yǔ)、句型和時(shí)態(tài)。3.連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容。4.反復(fù)審核，修改錯(cuò)誤。5.注意所給的漢語(yǔ)提示。一般說(shuō)來(lái)，看圖寫(xiě)話中的漢語(yǔ)提

12、示往往給定了有關(guān)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物等相關(guān)的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息。在把握了文章的 中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容。這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)。然后再將各圖的單個(gè)句子串連起來(lái)。串連時(shí)，要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞語(yǔ) 或過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)句，不至于讓讀者覺(jué)得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然?！痉段馁p析】Saturday, June 2FineThis morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers were reading a map, look

13、ing puzzled. It seemed they were lost. I went up to them and asked how I could help. They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven. I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No. 20, which could take them there directly. They appreciated my help greatly. Before long, th

14、e bus came. We waved goodbye to each other. Seeing them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction.必背范文Writting1假定你是李華，昨天你參加了你校舉辦的以"我最喜歡的一本書(shū)”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)日記，要點(diǎn)如下：1 .描述當(dāng)時(shí)比賽的情況；2 .你的表現(xiàn)和感受。注意：1 .詞數(shù)120左右（開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2 .可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Friday2ndMay2014FineYesterday afternoon I attended the E

15、nglish speech contest held by my school. The topic of it is "The book I like best".【范文】Friday2nd May 2014FineYesterday afternoon I attended the English speech contest held by my school. The topic of itis "The book I like best".When I knew that the first five candidates performed

16、very well, I felt a little worried. Atthe thought of the words "I can do it", I became calm a lot. Soon it was my turn, when I said "Thebook I like best is Three Days to See written by Helen Keller. From the book, I realize that itwould be an excellent rule to live happily each day as

17、 if we should die tomorrow." my teachersand classmates cheered for me. I gained much confidence and went on to do my best. Finally I wonfirst prize.Be happy every day and try my best to do everything. I ' ll keep it in my mind and make it come true.【解析】本篇是關(guān)于日記的寫(xiě)作，同時(shí)也是一篇半開(kāi)放性的寫(xiě)作。文童要記述你校舉辦的以“我

18、最喜就的一 本書(shū)”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比吞。話題對(duì)學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)比較熟悉但是要根據(jù)提示合理發(fā)揮,拓展主題。具體來(lái)說(shuō)， 文章內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下三個(gè)方面:Q)別的演講同學(xué)發(fā)揮得好，對(duì)你所產(chǎn)生的影響；Q)當(dāng)輪到你作演講時(shí)，你 的表現(xiàn)如何m (3)自己的感受是什么小這樣文章才能夠連貫通順。特別要注意的是，由于文章是日記體，所 以文章中的時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”為主，Writing 2今天是七月八日，下午班級(jí)召開(kāi)了以“我的夢(mèng)想”為主題的班會(huì)活動(dòng)，每位同學(xué)都暢所欲言，特別是介紹了自己的職業(yè)方面的夢(mèng)想。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇日記，記述班會(huì)情況及自己的感受。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1 .談?wù)勛约郝殬I(yè)方面的夢(mèng)想；2 .介紹有這個(gè)夢(mèng)想的原因；3 .闡述如何實(shí)

19、現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想。注意：4 .詞數(shù)100左右；5 .文章開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。July 8 thSunnyAll the students talked about their own dreamed jobs in the future in this class-meeting.【范文】July8thSunnyAll the students talked about their own dreamed jobs in the future in this class-meeting.We all believe that our dreams will come true sooner

20、 or later.I also talked about my own dream: to be a doctor. And the reasons are as follows. When I wasin Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendlyand theyoften cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I' m very healthy. Sincethen

21、 I have hoped to become a doctor. How will I make my dream come true? I will study hard toget good grades. I ' ll read more books about medicine. I believe I' ll be a good doctor in thefuture.Anyhow, this class-meeting was indeed meaningful, meanwhile, I know that the dream I have calls for

22、my efforts. Helpfully, I can make it.Writing 3請(qǐng)以日記的形式，寫(xiě)一件 2018年你最想為社會(huì)做的事情。內(nèi)容必須包括:1）做什么？2）怎么做？3）為什么要做？【范文】December 223d ThuridayCloudyNowadays mQ式 of smdenti wants to paradipate in volunteer work, so do I, taking part in vdunteer work is the most important thing which I want to do in the ccnjing year

23、 2018.of cow用, there are a v3rimr cf volunteer jobs for me to do, firstly, 1 can help the aged people at the nursing home do seme washing and cleaning and tell iome interesting staries to them to make them happy. Secondly；, During niih hours, I can work on The busy road to help the policemen direct

24、the Traffic tn keep ±e traffic smoothVolunteer work give us young people a chance tc servs the other people in nesd. It encourage ui tc dwate our efforts to other j I can learn a lot irom it though somTimes I have to pay some cost inyielf. At least, jfrom it I can leam to care about others and

25、not to be selfish, and the work always gives me a senie af idf-pride From what has feeendiicus>ed above, it i> really a co就 werth paying.In short, pani ci paring in valumeer jab > ran be rewarding to both, those serving and those being served.Writing 4假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二（1）班的學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一

26、篇日記，描述周 日你在西山公園踏青過(guò)程中發(fā)生的事。注意：詞數(shù)100左右。Sunday, May 4FineSunday May 4Firu?It Kas 3. sunny day Tcday and I went to Xishn Park ihr a. spring cunng. Th moment I entft'M ±e park a variety of beautiful:flmres 3nd green trees came into sight Attracted by the beauty I couldn: t stop taking phiJtos As I tvand紅Ethe path： enjoying the beautiful viw I ncticd some±ing unpleasant 1v hoolgirls jumpedover thu 決n伏 tc pick flow。、and climb the tree Obviously they didn:t realize that their behavior had done great damage to ttiE beauty cf th® park IMthaut hesitation. I venr up and.