高考英語高分書面表達講解ppt

1、 書面表達系列講練書面表達系列講練 之之 贏取高分策略贏取高分策略 要求考生根據所給情景，用英要求考生根據所給情景，用英語寫一篇語寫一篇100個單詞左右的短文個單詞左右的短文 情景包括目的、對象、時間、地情景包括目的、對象、時間、地點、內容等；提供情景的形式有點、內容等；提供情景的形式有圖畫、圖表、提綱等。圖畫、圖表、提綱等。 本部分滿分本部分滿分25/30分，所需時分，所需時間約為間約為30分鐘。分鐘。1、先根據文章的內容和語言初、先根據文章的內容和語言初步步確定檔次確定檔次。第五檔第五檔. 2125分分第四檔第四檔. 1620分分第三檔第三檔. 1115分分第二檔第二檔. 610分分 第一

2、檔第一檔. 15分分 0分分語言地道，語言地道，規(guī)范規(guī)范覆蓋所有內覆蓋所有內容要點容要點2、主要內容：、主要內容： 內容要點；內容要點； 詞匯和語法的數量和準確性；詞匯和語法的數量和準確性； 上下文的連貫；上下文的連貫； 語言的得體性語言的得體性應用了較多應用了較多的語法結構的語法結構和詞匯和詞匯有效地使有效地使用了語句用了語句間的連接間的連接成分成分3、拼寫和標點拼寫和標點是語言是語言準確性的一個方面，準確性的一個方面，評分時，應視其對交評分時，應視其對交際的影響程度予以考際的影響程度予以考慮。慮。4、詞數、詞數少于少于80和和多于多于120的，從總分中減去的，從總分中減去2分。分。5、如、

3、如書寫較差書寫較差，以至影，以至影響交際，將分數降低一響交際，將分數降低一個檔次。個檔次。詞匯詞匯,句型句型 （高級）和（高級）和語法多樣化（較復雜）語法多樣化（較復雜） 1.覆蓋了所有的覆蓋了所有的要點要點 2. 應用了較多的語法結構應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯和詞匯 3. 有效地使用了語句間的有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊連接成分，使全文結構緊湊要要點點全全連連接接詞詞書面表達如何寫？書面表達如何寫？五個步驟1、審題、審題文字信息文字信息圖畫信息圖畫信息題材、人稱、時態(tài)、要點題材、人稱、時態(tài)、要點2、以詞及點：用一兩個單詞或短語寫出每句、以詞及點：用一兩個單詞或短語寫出每句 話

4、的細節(jié)要點。話的細節(jié)要點。3、聯詞成句：用聯詞成句的方法將上述要點、聯詞成句：用聯詞成句的方法將上述要點 的詞語擴展成句子。的詞語擴展成句子。4 聯句成文：聯句成文：注意：注意：主語和謂語主語和謂語背景（適當增加時間、地點條件等）背景（適當增加時間、地點條件等）邏輯關系邏輯關系開頭與結尾開頭與結尾語篇銜接語篇銜接5、檢查修改，規(guī)范抄寫、檢查修改，規(guī)范抄寫給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分整體三部分1.Heading點題；一兩個句子；概括性；暗示性2. Body 中心記述部分；層次分明3. Ending 小結；呼應主題 技技 巧巧1. 使用較高級的詞匯使用較高級的詞匯

5、3. 使用恰當的連接詞使用恰當的連接詞詞匯反映你知識貯存量的詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個重要標志。的一個重要標志。運用得當的句子結構可以運用得當的句子結構可以給文章增色不少，從而使給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝整篇文章因此而生輝 。使用恰當連接詞，對寫一使用恰當連接詞，對寫一篇有篇有“英語味英語味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。自然、緊湊。2. 使用較豐富的句式使用較豐富的句式1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2

6、.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯We all think highly of him .

7、A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.7. She went to Austria in order to study music. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms

8、.10.You can find my house easily. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.Youll have no trouble finding my house. 豐富的句式：豐富的句式：( (常用到的句型結構）常用到的句型

9、結構） 利用不同的句型來表達同一個意思， 能增加文章的文采。1. 感嘆句 e.g. How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !2. 強調句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.3、 倒裝句 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes

10、 the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、 省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.5、 with短語 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.6、 定語從句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be

11、a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.7、 各種名詞性從句 e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.8、 各種狀語從句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment w

12、e reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily. 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-

13、ing形式）.2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒裝句)4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強調句型) 5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虛擬語氣）On his arriving, please give me a

14、n e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎樣使用較豐富的句式怎樣使用較豐富的句式Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out

15、of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過去分詞)7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)8.I wont believe what he says. （使用狀語從句） 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句)No sooner had

16、 he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress.高考大綱中常用的高考大綱中常用的連接詞連接詞1. 表示遞進表示遞進;在同一話題上補充內容在同一話題上補充內容 另外，還有：what is

17、 more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2. 表示轉折關系表示轉折關系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.3. 表示因果關系表示因果關系 因為，因此，所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示條件關系表示條件關系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否則: or el

18、se 5. 表示時間關系表示時間關系 當 的時候 : when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until 一就 : as soon as 后來， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近來: lately; recently 自從 :since 從那時起: from then on6. 表示特定的順序關系表示特定的順序關系 首先， 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end7. 換一種方法表述換一種方法表述 換句話說: in other w

19、ords; that is to say; 8. 進行舉例說明進行舉例說明 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as9. 用于陳述事實用于陳述事實 實際上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你說實話 : to tell you the truth10. 對一個話題進行總結對一個話題進行總結 總而言之，總的來說: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word11. 其它常用到的副詞其它常用到的副詞 Therefore ; ot

20、herwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ; although ; afterwards ; personally; On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library. (NMET1999 范文)As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new

21、 arrangement of things.(NMET2001 范文)Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. (NMET2001 范文)三、怎樣使用恰當的連接詞三、怎樣使用恰當的連接詞PracticePractice 1 1 請在下列句子中（間）填上恰當的關聯詞或意思有聯系的短語。1. Xiao Ming was walking in the street _ he heard someone cry for help.2. He advised that I hire a car _ I could travel around in the west .3

22、. It was not long _ the police came .4. _he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.whenin order thatbeforeAs soon as 5. Do you agree with my arrangement ? _ , do write to me soon.6. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay a visit to some places of interest.7

23、. I shared the cost of the gas with my friends ._, I saved $80.8. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat.If not/soIn additionAs a resultWhats worse 聯合國教科文組織某考察團正聯合國教科文組織某考察團正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員接待人員,請根據下列提示以發(fā)言稿請根據下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡要介紹這個村的情況：的形式簡要介紹這個村的情況： 1)大?。航笮。航?00戶人家，

24、約戶人家，約500口人?？谌?。 2)變化：過去很窮，變化：過去很窮，78年后變年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?；艽蟆Ｈ藗兩畋纫郧昂枚嗔恕，F已舊貌換新顏?，F已舊貌換新顏。 3)教育：原來的學校很小，現教育：原來的學校很小，現已經過改建。新建的教學樓有已經過改建。新建的教學樓有4層，層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學齡是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學齡兒童在此免費就讀。兒童在此免費就讀。 注意：注意：1）要點齊全，前后連貫。）要點齊全，前后連貫。2）詞數：）詞數：100- -120之間。之間。Practice 書面表達：書面表達：Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to

25、our school.This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching buil

26、ding has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 famil

27、ies and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1

28、978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . 書面表達：書面表達：Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small . Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village

29、. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age chi

30、ldren can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay herethe newly built teaching building/ May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.

31、 It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been re

32、built and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. 20012001年春季高考作文年春季高考作文給澳大利亞的朋友寫一封信

33、，談談減負給學生的學習和生活帶來的變化。 I will tell you the changes of my life. Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I

34、 can read books and newspapers and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now.1717分分高考滿分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening,

35、 we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newsp

36、apers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.書面表達常用語句書面表達常用語句1.1.書信書信 Thanks for your last letter. I am writing just to inform you In reply to your last letter, I am writing to explain the two questions as follows: 開 頭

37、Looking forward to your reply/hearing from you! Thanks for your consideration. Do remember me to your parents! 結 尾2. 2. 敘事敘事 It is quite obvious/clear that ( 很顯然) There is no doubt that (毫無疑問) Take as an example. (以為例） On one hand, on the other hand (一方面，另一方面) Only in this way shall we (只有這樣我們才能) As

38、 far asis concerned, I prefer(就而言，我更) Measures/Action should be taken to(必須采取措施去) For the reasons given above, I feel that(鑒于以上原因，我覺得 What these people fail to consider is that(這些人沒有想到的是.) Undoubtedly there is a long way to go before(毫無疑問要 還有很長的路要走） Therefore, I strongly recommend that (因此， 我強烈建議All

39、 the facts show that（所有的事實顯示) I like not only because but also because(我喜歡 不僅因為而且因為) I am writing to you to inquire about(我寫信給你想詢問) I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at(我給你 寫信表示我對的不滿） I apologize to you for(我為向你道歉） I am grateful to you for(我為向你表示感謝） Mr. Green, my best friend, is teachi

40、ng Mr. Green, a favorite teacher from the USA, is teachingLetter writingA LetterNov 5, 2001Wuzheng Middle SchoolZhejiang P.R.C.JackTongxiang High SchoolDear Mary,BodyYours,Jack 親人、家屬：Yours lovingly ; Yours affectionately 朋友、平輩：Sincerely yours Yours sincerely 上級、長者：Yours respectfully Respectfully yours 單位、部門：Yours sincerely Yours faithfully 結束語Closing信封正面StampAirmail信封背面 June 5th , 2000 Dear Mr. Zhao, I am sorry that I am unable to attend school during the following week because of the Sports Meet. The school expects me to play an important part in it