雅思大作文強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練_學(xué)生課件

1、.雅思大作文強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練第一部分 大作文概述1. 格式注意事項(xiàng) （1）不用寫題目。 （2）注意分段。 （3）左右留一寸的空間。 傳統(tǒng)方法：每段首行向右移兩個(gè)字的位置。 現(xiàn)代方法：段落之間留一行控分段。 （4）不要分詞。 （5）大概10-12個(gè)詞一行。2. 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) (1) TR-Task response (2) CC-Coherence and Cohesion (3) LR-Lexical resource (4) GRA-Grammatical range and accuracy3. 大作文寫作步驟 審題確立文章框架和大綱選定模板進(jìn)行填空檢查修改（1） 審題 第一步是通讀 第二步是細(xì)讀 （

2、2）列提綱 （3）選定模板 四段式：3773 五段式：35553 (4) 填空 一、舉實(shí)例論證。Although sticking to ones goal is key to success， sometimes one should be ready to give up. Napoleons story is a case in point. After Napoleon succeeded in seizing the crown of France， he should have been satisfied with his achievement. But he did not.

3、 He went on to conquer the whole Europe. Then after he succeeded in ruling almost the whole Europe， he should have given up this ambition to expanding his empire. But he did not. He went on to invade Russia and there he suffered a total defeat. Later he was sent into exile and died in a lonely islan

4、d.The second reason for my propensity for outdoor activities is that they can build my mind greatly. In sports, one must learn to struggle for the victory, learn to fight with no matter what is left in his body. And one must learn to stick to ones own confidence and hope, no matter how little the ho

5、pe may be. And one must learn to accept failure， learn to start again after failure. Long-running and mountain climbing contribute much to this kind of spirits. I will never forget the feeling when I raced to the final line first in a 300-meter running. I could hardly breathe in the last 100 meters.

6、 My lungs ached and my legs weighed tons， but there was still one runner in front of me. I gave all my strength to move one foot ahead of the other. When I surpassed him， he gave a cry of surprise， I won at last and I learned much from the race. 二、用一些研究、調(diào)查、發(fā)現(xiàn)、科學(xué)家及權(quán)威人士的觀點(diǎn)或組織機(jī)構(gòu)的研究結(jié)果加以論證，并引用數(shù)據(jù)作為支撐。此論證方

7、法的好處就是比較權(quán)威客觀，更有說服力。If people move to live in different places， they will have more opportunity for improving their lives. According to a survey conducted by the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, 55% of urban Chinese had changed their living place at least once in their lifetime by 2000, an increas

8、e of 30 percent as compared with that of 2 decades ago. Chinese sociologists agree that this trend is most likely to continue with the development society. Statistics indicate that people who moved at least once in their lifetime enjoy a much higher living standard than those who never moved. 三、通過比較

9、和對(duì)比方式來論證，這樣兩個(gè)事物、行為或者觀點(diǎn)的利弊就非常明顯。Those who believe in the measure say that students benefit a lot from traveling or working for a year before their formal university education. First， they can more broadly acquainted themselves with the society， deepen their understanding of the outside world, and thu

10、s better coordinate their objectives of learning with the needs of the society. In contrast, by immediate entrance to university they can not steer the direction of their study well and may display a poor combination of the theory with practice. Second， study at high school is really exhausting， esp

11、ecially when to win college admission. So it is necessary to grant these children a relatively long period of relaxation or buffer， say， traveling or working for a year， to loosen the chords of their brain， so that when they go back to school later again， they can become completely refreshed and rej

12、uvenated. 四、通過假設(shè)進(jìn)行正反論述。Then, since the transportation system is the lifeline of a countrys economic activities, its paralysis would lead to the disintegration of the economy, either industry of farming or daylife. Suppose all the means of transportation were halted for lack of oil, factories with in

13、sufficient raw materials would have to close, workers would be out of work, and ripe farm crops would have to stay in the fields at the mercy of rain and storms. People would try to store food and the price of all commodities would go up. If we take those power stations run by oil into account, situ

14、ations would become even worse. In this sense, oil decides the fate of the whole economy and that of the government. 五、換種說法，換而言之。 The computer technology has no doubt at all replaced most of function， that is， we can read books from the academic database; newspapers and publishes from almost everywh

15、ere, this means that we do not need many hard copies and environment friendly for the earth. However I am not so much convinced that public libraries can replace other functions that we need other than providing information or books. 第二部分 重點(diǎn)寫作題材逐項(xiàng)擊破1. 教育類例1（1）例文修改 （2）佳作賞析例2（1）例文修改（2）佳作賞析（3）寫作練習(xí) Univ

16、ersities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Some people suggest that high school graduate students should go to university to have higher education, but others encourage students to find jobs to meet the needs of the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.Some people suggest that high school graduate students should go to university to have higher education, but others encourage students to find jobs to meet th