高二短文改錯專項練習(xí)題

1、高二短文改錯專項練習(xí)題（2/5/2012）短文改錯英語課上，老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下短文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。第一套（1）College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many stude

2、nts have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half o

3、f their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as Im very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarsh

4、ip.（2）I am angry about the act of dishonesty in the exams. Im not saying that Im a good student and that Ive never cheated. I once write the answer on my hand for a history test but, unluckily, caught by my teacher. Because she was one of my most favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry

5、I felt at once. I thought cheat would help me keep my straight As. Little I know that I was hurting not only herself but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students to succeed by learning with their own and do the best they can, not by cheating.（3）Friendship is very importance.

6、Everyone needs friendship. In all our lives we cant live without friendship just as we cant live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front of us. But real friendship is no easy to come by. True friendship

7、 must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us.By his advices we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves.（4）My secret of staying young is simp

8、le: keeping your mind awake and you will stay young all over. Take an interest in world around you, and learn at least one old thing every day. Dont think that you are ever very old to go back to school. I know a man who entered medical college in 70. He got his degree with honors and became a famou

9、s doctor. Other man went to law school at 71 and is now a active lawyer. You may say that staying young is easy only for those live in the future. In fact, you can do it whether you care enough to try to keep your mind awake and active, and which is the only way to be always young.（5）My swimming exp

10、erience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond. I slipped into one. Had my friend not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I had come to know the importance of learn

11、ing to swim. I didnt attend at any training class but learned it all by myself. Strange to say, I have difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim look awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me from floating. Thinking of this, I feel quiet satisfied.（6）In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong wa

12、s going on her way to school happily then suddenly she felt the street was strong shaking. The trees were torn up and many buildings were leaned down to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by the fallen buildings. She was knocked down by a tree before she knew. Two doctors carried him to safety and

13、 she was settled down in a tent for treatment. After some time, she had got over. Seeing such many goods from the mainland of China and other countries, she believed all the destroyed houses would be built.（7）Im glad to write to you. It is near a month since you had left our hospital. Im still worri

14、ed about you. How are you get along these days? I think you may be much better now, but Id better have a good rest and take good care of yourselves since you are sixty-year-old man. I still remember those days which you helped me to my English. With your help, I make good progress. But to my regret,

15、 my English remains very poor through I have made good use of my time. Can you give me some advice on it?（8）One day I was dining with my friend Zhou in McDonald when two young girls came in hand in hand. While enjoyed a hamburger, I found Zhou looking around at something strangely.I raised my eyes t

16、o see what was happening. The two girls are making gestures skillfully. Obviously they were deaf-mutes. I had learned some sign languages ago, so I showed various gestures with Zhou following me in low spirits. We played and laughed cheerfully as if there had no one else present. Suddenly we saw bot

17、h the two girls glaring at us. Before we could explain to them, they had walked out angrily, left the food unfinished. They thought we were making joke of them. How I regretted!（9）We often think insects to be harmless. This is partly true. Many an insect are harmful. Flies carry diseases. Others ins

18、ects carry diseases, too. Farmers are at war with insects most the time. Hunger insects kill crops in the fields Farmers spray the field as to get rid of these insects. Does this means that all insects are harmful? No. Many are of great helpful to man. Bees make honey. With bees and other insects, m

19、any trees would have not fruit. Silkworms make silk. Some insects eat other insects that kill fruit trees.（10） Today we were organized for a short trip to the West Hill. We set out by the school bus at 7:30 a.m. The weather was pleasure and every one of us was excited. After two hours ride, we arriv

20、ed there at nine thirty. We began our programs the moment as we got off from the bus. We played games on the hillside and swimming in the river. After that we had our picnic lunch. In the afternoon we walked along the river, that winds around the hills.We took a lot of photo and enjoyed ourselves ve

21、ry much. Time past quickly and we had to come back. It was over five oclock that we returned school. What a good trip we had today! Ill never forget it.第二套（1）It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007 I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the oth

22、er sides of the street Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road He fell with a cry The car didnt stop and drive off at full speed heading west I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pai

23、r of glasses and the plate number was AC864 After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital （2）I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to wo

24、rk hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, Ill unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really cant accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a days hard works. Besides, it is im

25、portant for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldnt be forbidden to watch TV.（3）Dear sir,Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it

26、 turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come t

27、o here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much. （4）I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Mings parents invited I to spend two wonderful wee

28、k in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we havent see each

29、 other much. But weve kept writing to each other.（5）I feel quite sure the chemistry test that were going to have tomorrow. The teacher has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been goodIn a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy

30、it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. We are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(實例) problem. Then I will ready for the test. （6）Dear Susan,Im very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I wont b

31、e able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You wont find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you togeth

32、er to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and well talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours,Zhang Ming（7）Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised,

33、 I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I fo

34、und that I could even communicate some college students freely. （8）If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olym

35、pic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success. （9）Dear Mary,I receive

36、 your E-mail just now. Dont worry about me. Im getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests. Im afraid I couldnt agree with you . I know it

37、is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I m looking f

38、orward to hearing good news from you. （10）Dear Ralph, I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find the

39、y are not willing to be with me now. They dont talk with me, and theyve become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why dont I win true friendsh

40、ip?第三套（1）In many western countries heavy industry is high developed. The difference between heavy and light industry are based on the nature of the goods produced. Heavy industry produce machines while light industry uses machines produce the smaller objects required for various purpose in our home

41、and offices. The growth of industry in country depends on the general level of economic or industrial development. In its beginning, industrialization is likely to be cheap. To decrease （減少）costs, industrialists in an area usually depend to local supplies of the coal or electric power for their oper

42、ation. （2）It happened in a morning that I was walking in the street .I ate up a banana and threw their peel on the corner of the road. Short after that I heard a scream behind .I looked back to see what was happened .A little girl about 8 years old fell down and the banana peel was exactly under her

43、 left shoes . She stood up without cry .Then she picked up the banana peel and ran toward the dustbin .On that moment ,I realized my fault , and went to apologize her for that ,but my vanity (虛榮心)prevented me . The little girl had taught me a good lesson by her action. And now, after I do everything

44、, Ill think carefully whether its right or wrong. Ill do my best to be in good habits and qualities.（3）Mr Wang is my physics teacher. He has 1.75 meters in the height. He was born on November 4, 1952. So he is a middle-aged man. He graduated Qinghua University in 1983. After graduation, he becomes a

45、 middle school teacher. He has been taught physics for more than 20 years. He is very succeed as a teacher. He has been given a lot of honor. He not only is a good teacher in physics but also speak English and Russian very well. In his spare time, he likes reading books, collect stamps and listening

46、 music. Also, Mr Smith is kind-hearted.（4）Dear Lily, I got your letter and pleased to hear about your job interview at a grocery store. I know you want to get a job at the TV station, and youve been looking for several week now and havent found something. The job at the grocery store doesnt sound ba

47、dly. If I am you, Id take it. If you worked there for some time, you could earn some money. Its your decision, of course, but I advise you to take it. Let me to know what you decided to do. By the way, after you get the job you can think about get a bike later. （5）I still remember the morning. My fa

48、ther suddenly wake me up at about 5 and the sky was still gray. I jumped out bed surprised and extreme happy, for we were going to get a book! When we drove to the bookstore, many people were already waiting there. We waited for our turn at about 8:30. I was overjoyed when I got a book, not only bec

49、ause of the book themselves, but also of the love from my father. Never before had I felt such a love from him, because of my father, I believed then, had always been busy with his own work. That was “Harry Potter” that helped I feel the deep love from my parents!（6）I went to see film after supper.

50、On my way to the cinema, I met an old English woman, she had lost her way. I gave up the chance to see the film, walking towards her and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her great change had taken place in the past few years and she told me anything about Britain and her family. Though

51、I missed the film, however I felt very happy, for I not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also practise my spoken English, If I hadnt worked hard at English, I would have been able to help her.（7）For the final speaker here today, I would like to share you some of the conclusions of our r

52、esearchWewanted to know that the Internet would become the most popular source of news for peopleThey have found that although the Internet has become increasing popular, the number of people which get news from the Internet compares to the radio or television is still smallWhilethe Internet is a po

53、pular tool, it is still not as easily accessible with newspapers, television and the radio is, and due to the amount of uncontrolled information on the Internet, people do not always trust the news they find it online （8）If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at f

54、irst improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as good as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, Since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors a

55、bout our history and culture and show them their great achievements. In a short, I will do my best to help making the Games a successful.（9） Id like to tell you why I learn English. I often read English aloud and try learn something important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and form int

56、o the good habit of thinking in EnglishI listen to a lot and talk with others in EnglishIn this way, I was improved both my hearing and my spoken EnglishI keep a diary in English every day but my spoken English is becoming better and betterI also try my best to master the necessary grammar knowledge

57、. By this means, I can express itself in English correct. Thats the way I have been learning English. I hope it will be useful to youThats all. Thank you（10）I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could never pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend severa

58、l hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant cells, and I could never see through a microscope. This was used to make my professor angry. “I cant see everything, ” I said. Then he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still couldnt make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the microscope known to men. With my pleasure, I saw something and drew it quickly on the paper. “Whats that?” my professor asked. “Thats what I saw.” I answered. “No, you dont!” he shouted, and he bent ove