新培優(yōu)同步北師大高中英語必修三課件：Unit7Thesea單元寫作指導(dǎo)

1、針對訓(xùn)練寫作指導(dǎo)寫作模板單元針對訓(xùn)練 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。When I saw her tonight she smiled and recognised me.I smiled back at he匸She was looking more relaxed even though she was still busy doing her job.I have noticed her several times last few months and she always looks so much happier now.Tonight when I

2、talked with her I noticed her name tag.Her name is Pamela.Pamela works at the express checkouts in a busy supermarket.She deals with problems when the self-service checkout experiences a problem (no price on product,machine problems,etc.).She monitors these checkouts and usually has hardly dealt wit

3、h one complaint before another is createdWhen I first talked with PamelaJ had called her because of the checkout I was using.There wasn" t any problem with the checkout though.My problem or should I say concem was about Pamela.She looked tired and was under a lot of stress as she quickly moved

4、from one checkout to the next.It， s a bit of a firefighting job.I told Pamela that she needed to slow down.She wasn" t getting paid enough to be working as hard as she was working.I told her that we,the customers,could wait and it was very bad for her health to be putting herself under such pre

5、ssure.I told her that our expectations were not as hard as the ones she set for herself.Pamela told me she would slow down.She was touched that not only did I notice her stress but I chose to talk with her about it and was concerned for her health.I gently told her things had to change.I told her I

6、would be looking out for her in the future to see if she had taken my advice on board.She smiled and said,"I promise that I will next time."注意：1所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2. 至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:When I saw her again she was still doing her

7、job but there was such a difference.Paragraph 2:I am proud of myself.針對訓(xùn)練寫作指導(dǎo)寫作模板前文概要:Pamela在一家超市的快速結(jié)賬通道上班,作者看到她非 常忙碌看起來很疲憊，因此建議Pamela把工作節(jié)奏放慢一點(diǎn)，對自 己的要求不要過高，否則對她的健康非常不利。作者說以后會(huì)關(guān)注 她看她是否聽取了自己的建議,Pamela笑著保證她一定會(huì)的。本文采用了倒敘的寫作手法。文章第一段提到今天晚上作者在 超市見到了Pamela,她認(rèn)出了作者并向作者微笑致意。最近幾個(gè)月 她工作時(shí)看起來輕松多了,并提到了今天晚上作者和她交談的時(shí)候, 注

8、意到了她的名字。續(xù)寫的Paragraph 1的開頭說到當(dāng)作者看到她的時(shí)候她仍然在工 作,但是有了很大的變化，暗示本段應(yīng)該寫到Pamela的具體變化，還 有作者和她交談的具體內(nèi)容等。續(xù)寫時(shí)可用的關(guān)鍵詞有:Pamela, customers,her health,slow down等。針對訓(xùn)練寫作指導(dǎo)寫作模板Paragraph 2開頭說到作者感到很自豪，暗示本段的續(xù)寫應(yīng)該涉及 作者的心理感受，以及從此事中悟到的人生哲理?？捎玫年P(guān)鍵詞 有:pressure,concern 等。針對訓(xùn)練寫作指導(dǎo)|寫作模板Paragraph 1:When I saw her again she was still do

9、ing her job but there was such a difference.! praised the new her.Now Pamela said that other customers would have to wait for their turn while she 1 dealt with another customer （應(yīng)對另一個(gè)顧客）.She told me the change had significantly improved her health.She added that she，s also Mared what I said with her

10、 colleagues （把我說的和她的同事分享）As I walked away from Pamela my heart was lightened.She has taken my advice on board and tried to slow down her working pace.A day，s work means just that.lt doesn，t mean that one 3, should put two days9 work into one day（應(yīng)該扌巴兩天的工作放在一天之內(nèi)）.Paragraph 2:I am proud of myself. Not

11、 only have I caused Pamela to reflect on the pressure she was putting herself undercut also she in turn has 4. encouraged her colleagues（鼓勵(lì)女也的同事們）in thesupeTmarket to do the same.I really 5feel very happy and satisfied （感 至I非常幸福和滿意）for my concern and act of kindness do make a difference to those in need.It? s just