2016年10月到2018年6月浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫真題

1、精選優(yōu)質文檔-傾情為你奉上2016年10月到2018年6月浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫真題2016.10 浙江高考 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so an

2、gry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far

3、 beyond, a snow capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, J

4、ane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance.

5、 Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way care

6、fully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they cam

7、e back again.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.應使用5個以上短文文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語：3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph 1 But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. At that moment (時間), she felt a little sad, but she wasnt so

8、frightened (情感). She reminded herself constantly, (心理) “ Tom must have called for those helicopters. Maybe (情感) he was in one of them and will return soon(動作)! I have to guide him tomorrow.” She felt asleep (動作) and dreamed of seeing Tom (動作).Paragraph 2 It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate so

9、me berries and then(時間) walked along the stream, hoping (心理) to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. She walked and walked,exhausted but full of hope. Suddenly (時間), she spotted (動作) a huge flat rock. She managed (動作) to climb onto it and waited with patience. The moment (時間) the helicopte

10、r appeared (動作) again. The nearer it got (動作), the more she waved (動作) the yellow blouse. To her great joy, (情感) the helicopter didnt miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and rushed (動作) towards Jane. They hugged each other tightly (情感) and burst

11、into tears (情感).2017.6浙江高考On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac peda

12、led (騎行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog a

13、t all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side

14、again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追趕）。Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill clim

15、b before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road

16、. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左

17、右；2.應使用5個以上短文文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語：3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph 1The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and dashed for the back door of the car. It was locked. He then ran around to the passenger door, but it was locked, as well, so he began to climb

18、 through the open window.When spotting this ,Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man dived in,slamming the door behind him.Paul looked out the back window and saw the wolf standing over Macs bike as if it were a kill. Shortly after, the animal ran off.Paragraph 2 A few minutes later,t

19、he other two cyclists arrived .Mac emerged from the car and hugged his friends. “I thought I was going to die,” Mac cried to them.Mac retrieved（取回） his bicycle, and the three men resumed(繼續(xù)） their road trip, agreeing to keep in one anothers sight line. A few miles down the road, Mac pulled over and

20、burst into tears.“The rest of the trip was amazing, but I had to let the former emotion out.”2017 11. 浙江高考 A Vacation With My Mother I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and 

21、forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip

22、 approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and brav

23、ely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travelers checks Mom had forgotten. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:” You stand outside the door and

24、 play lookout while I go, and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we werent about to take any c

25、hances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great r

26、elief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.

27、應使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段開頭語已為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Para1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Mom insisted that we must make full use of it since we had brought it. David and I looked at Dad, hoping he could stop her

28、crazy idea. To our great disappointment, he agreed. We spent a whole afternoon seeking a nice camping place and set up our tent before the night fell. It was the first time that I had thought mom could be wise as I admiring our stunning tent. “Oh, I forgot the pillows!” what a mi

29、sconception. Despite the ache of my neck, we had some great nights.Para2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The bright blue sky, the limitless green grass, the group of sheep, the setting sun and the countless stars in the curtain of nights kept me

30、 spellbound. Not only did we see the picturesque scenery, we also managed to consider moms scandals as a kind of fun.I really love my Mum. To our relief, we arrived at grandparents place and went back to our home with all of four people. It was so fortunate to see my friends again.2018浙江卷·

31、讀后續(xù)寫 (滿分25分)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul,

32、my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Ve

33、ry early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hors

34、es. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountain

35、s. “Dont be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon

36、 sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (編織的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2. 至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2:We

37、 had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.題型解讀讀后續(xù)寫既考查學生對所學語言知識的運用能力，又考查學生的發(fā)散思維能力和創(chuàng)造力。該題型要求考生首先要讀懂已有信息，不僅能讀懂字面含義，還要理清文章的脈絡和關系。續(xù)寫這篇短文時，考生需要明白故事的發(fā)展進程、前因后果、地理位置變化、人物特征和情感等。在此基礎上，考生順著文章的思路，根據(jù)線索，發(fā)揮想象，對其后的情節(jié)進行合理預測，并用英語表達出來。同時，在組織語言時，切記使用5個以上給出的提示詞。讀后續(xù)寫表面看來難度不小，但在平時教學過程中，若能抓好詞匯教學，注重詞匯運用能力的培養(yǎng)，寫出好的續(xù)寫

38、篇章是不成問題的。至于發(fā)散思維的培養(yǎng)，在高考備考階段，如果能按話題進行詞匯復習，將孤立的詞匯通過話題聯(lián)系起來，必然能起到事半功倍的效果。續(xù)寫分析前文提要：父親帶兒子去“西部荒野”，喂雞牧羊，體驗農場生活；見父親和叔叔騎馬很是瀟灑，兒子心生向往，于是親身上馬體驗續(xù)寫線索：第一段所給首句：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. 這一句是故事發(fā)展的轉折點，可從rabbit出現(xiàn)后帶來的結果入手擴展開去，可以寫馬受到驚嚇狂奔而去，也可以寫人的反應，無論從何角度拓展，需注意與續(xù)寫第二段首句呼應。第二段所給首句：We had no

39、idea where we were and it was getting dark. 這一句呼應前文Uncle Paul的囑托不要誤了晚飯，可從如何尋路返回入手去寫續(xù)文。續(xù)寫詞匯已給提示詞匯：dad，Uncle Paul，farm house，river，feed，sheep，late，track，get lost，sight話題激活詞匯：情感：panic，relief，nervous，worried動作：run，cry，think to oneself環(huán)境：scenery，mountain，range，valley，river，lake，forest，sun，set，wind，blowPo

40、ssible Version 1:Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees. “We may not be able to make it back to the farm

41、house in time for supper.” I thought to myself. After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home,

42、for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Dont worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along i

43、t. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner. (續(xù)寫詞數(shù)162)Possible Version 2:Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden inci

44、dent, the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.  P

45、aragraph 2We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may

46、lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but memorable experience it was! Possible Version 3:Paragra

47、ph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. I immediately grew fond of the furry rabbit and called out excitedly, “Dad! Look!” Alarmed, the rabbit ran away in a flash. I followed it eagerly, hoping to catch it as my trophy for the trip. My dad just followed me, knowing it was impo

48、ssible to stop me. We tracked the rabbit for about ten minutes until it got completely out of sight. Depressed and tired, I suggested going back. But apparently, we had diverged from the track Uncle Paul warned us to keep. (86 words) Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.

49、The thought that we might have got lost in such darkness sent shivers down my spine. Tears of fear and regret filled my eyes. Fortunately, Dad was not so panicked as I was. He kept silent and listened very carefully as he took my horse rein and led the way. We had wandered for what seemed like ages

50、when suddenly a river came into sight. Hopefully, we could find our way back to the farm house if we followed the river. Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper, but what an experience! It turns out theres always a way out of any plight(困境） as long as we stay calm. (114 words) 讀后續(xù)寫常用

51、句子積累1. 突然一個新念頭涌進我的腦海。Suddenly, a new idea washed over/occurred to me.2. 她聽到這個消息很激動，說不出一句話。Thrilled at the good news, she couldnt say a word。3. 當他來到他父親的家時，他突然感到悲傷和懊悔。When he arrived at his fathers house, suddenly sadness and regret filled his heart.4. 年輕人怒氣沖沖地向父親大喊道：“你有那么多錢， 卻只給我一本圣經 ？Angrily,&#

52、160;he raised his voice to his father and said, "With all your money you give me a Bible?" 5. 然后他丟下圣經，憤怒地沖出房子。He then stormed/dashed out of the house, leaving the Bible.6.年輕人好奇地，但有些失望地打開了盒子。發(fā)現(xiàn)一本漂亮的，皮封面的，用金字刻著年輕人的名字的

53、Bible。Curious, but somewhat disappointed, the young man opened the box and found a lovely, leather-bound Bible, with the young mans name embossed in gold.7. 他站著不說一句話，眼淚從臉頰上滾下來。He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.8. 不能為了別人的夢想而活著。never live someone elses dream. 9. 假如你的選擇權僅限于似乎可能或合理的范圍內， 你

54、將遠離自己的真心。If you limit your choices only to what seems possible or reasonable, you disconnect yourself from what you truly want.10. 他因恐懼而呆住，站在那兒一動不動。Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot.Consumed with/Overwhelmed by fear, Mac didnt know what to say. 11. 他意識到問題的嚴重性。He comprehended the gravity

55、of the situation。12. 時間似乎停止了，盡管他們可能只在那兒二至三分鐘。Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. 12. 一股力量立刻取代了Jane不斷增長的恐懼和焦慮。A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind.13. Makcik 躺在那里，沒有一點知覺。Makcik was lying i

56、n bed, unconscious.14. Jane and Tom 的快樂是非常巨大的。Jane and Toms joy was immense.15. 他突然閃現(xiàn)一絲恐懼。the thought of fear crossed his mind.16 .讓Tom記憶深刻的事件 The event that stands out in Tom's memory17. 她砰砰地敲門。She pounded the door.文1：Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an expla

57、nation. Embarrassed, Jenny didn't say anything. Dead silence suddenly fell. Then came Miss Walker's voice. “Why is Lee's watch on your wrist?” Jenny hesitated for a while and decided to tell everybody about the truth. However, thinking of the well-prepared speech, the magic of the watch,

58、 she changed her mind. At that, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first. Jenny made her way to the platform with every confidence. Words began to flood out of her. “How could she make it? We've never seen Jenny give so terrific a speech.” Whispers went around

59、 the classroom, and even Miss Walker nodded with approval. Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class. Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth, and especially the magic of the watch. “But it's just an ordinary watch with no magic”, Lee announced. 80 words范文

60、2：After reading the diary, the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father. His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times! Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father. He made an apology to his father, begging his father to forgive him fo