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1、How to improve writing Do you want to score high in the writing part ?15？20？25!Nothing is impossible!Todays taskWrite an application to a press Task 1 假設你是某報社的記者，請用英語寫一篇假設你是某報社的記者，請用英語寫一篇新聞，報道小悅悅被撞事件發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，新聞，報道小悅悅被撞事件發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，并發(fā)表自己的感想。并發(fā)表自己的感想。 注意：注意：1.詞數(shù)詞數(shù)120左右。左右。 2.冷漠的冷漠的-indifferent；碾；碾-roll On Oct

2、ober 13th ,2011, a girl was hit and rolled by two cars. Her name is Wang Yue. She comes from Fu Shan city and she is just two years old. That afternoon, she was playing on the street. Suddenly, she was hit by a car. She lay and bled on the road.18 people passed by her, but no one came to save her. T

3、hen, another truck rolled her again. At last,an old lady picking up waste pulled her to the side of the road. Wang Yue was sent tohospital immediately. She died two days later. From my point of view, the passers-by were too indifferent, so Wang Yue died.As a member of our society, we should bemore s

4、ympathetic and kind-hearted. We should help others when they are in trouble. We should not be cold, and wemust build up a more harmonious and warmer society. On October 13th, 2011, a girl was hit and rolled by two cars. Her name is Wang Yue. She comes from Fu Shan City and she is just two years old.

5、 That afternoon, she was playing on the street. Suddenly, she was hit by a car. She lay and bled on the road.18 people passed by her, but no one came to save her. Then, another truck rolled her again. At last, an old lady picking up waste pulled her to the side of the road. Wang Yue was sent to hosp

6、ital immediately. She died two days later. From my point of view, the passers-by were too indifferent, so Wang Yue died. As a member of our society, we should be more sympathetic and kind-hearted. We should help others when they are in trouble. We should not be cold, and we must build up a more harm

7、onious and warmer society. the same subject “She” simple words simple transitions（過渡詞）（過渡詞） simple sentencesProblems & ways of improving them: Use different sentences (使用多樣句型使用多樣句型) Change the subject (改變主語改變主語)Use good transitions (使用過渡連接使用過渡連接)Choose advanced phrases (選取高級詞匯選取高級詞匯)1.A girl was

8、 hit and rolled by two cars. Her name is Wang Yue, she comes from Fu Shan city and she is just two years old. Wang Yue, (用同位語改寫）用同位語改寫）was hit and rolled by two cars.a two-year-old girl who comes 2.That afternoon, she was playing on the street. Suddenly, she was hit by a car. That afternoon, _ , (用用

9、when +V-ing省略句式改寫省略句式改寫) she was hit by a car. when playing on the streetfrom Fu Shan city,II.使用高級詞匯使用高級詞匯1.rolled her again. 2.but she died at last. a second time3. we should be more sympathetic. be supposed to/ought to 4.we should be more sympathetic and kind- hearted. as well as 5. we should help

10、 others give a hand to/do sb. a favor lost her life III.使用過渡詞使用過渡詞 1. Suddenly, she was hit and rolled by a car. She lay and bled on the road. Suddenly, she was hit and rolled by a car. _ , she lay and bled on the road. 2. She lay and bled on the road. 18 people passed by her, but no one came to sav

11、e her. She lay and bled on the road. _ , 18 people passed by her As a resultTo our surprise3. Wang Yue was sent to hospital immediately. She died after two days. Wang Yue was sent to hospital immediately. _ , she died after two days.Unfortunately/HoweverIV.使用多樣句型使用多樣句型1.At last, an old lady picking

12、up waste pulled her to the side of the road. _ （用強調(diào)句型改寫）（用強調(diào)句型改寫）2. The passers-by were too indifferent, so Wang Yue died. _ .(改為改為sothatsothat句型）句型）The passers-by were so indifferent that Wang Yue lost her life.At last, it was an old lady picking up waste that pulled her to the side of the road.3.

13、We should help others when they are in trouble. When others are in trouble, _ _ (用主語從句改寫）用主語從句改寫） 4. We should not be cold, and we must build up a more harmonious and warmer society. (用用“only+狀語狀語”的句式倒裝）的句式倒裝） what we aresupposed to do is give a hand to them.Only when we are not so cold can we build

14、 up a more harmonious and warmer society. 5. She lay and bled on the road. _. (V-V-ing作伴隨狀語）作伴隨狀語） She lay on the road, bleeding On October 13th ,2011, Wang Yue, a two- year-old girl from Fu Shan, was hit and rolled by two cars. That afternoon, when playing on the street, she was hit by a car. As a

15、result, she lay on the road, bleeding. To our surprise, 18 people passed by her, but no one came to save her. Improved composition: Then, another truck rolled her again. At last, it was an old lady picking up waste pulled her to the side of the road. Wang Yue was sent to hospital immediately, howeve

16、r, she lost her life two days later. From my point of view, the passers-by were so indifferent that Wang Yue lost her life. As a member of our society, we should be more sympathetic as well as kind-hearted. When othersare in trouble, what we are supposed to do is togive a hand to them. Only when we

17、are not socold can we build up a more harmonious and warmer society.First of allSecondThird高考寫作中常用過渡性詞語高考寫作中常用過渡性詞語表對等關系的表對等關系的：and，or, as well as, bothand, on the one handon the other hand, Firstsecondthird, for one thingfor another表因果關系的表因果關系的：therefore, so, as a result, as a result of, because of

18、, due to, owing to, thanks to, thus表時間順序的表時間順序的：at first, then, later, meanwhile, in the end, before long, for the first time表轉(zhuǎn)折關系表轉(zhuǎn)折關系： yet, but, while, on the contrary, however高考寫作中常用過渡性詞語高考寫作中常用過渡性詞語表解釋說明的表解釋說明的： that is, that is to say, in other words, such as, for example表遞進關系的表遞進關系的：even, in a

19、ddition, furthermore, also, moreover, whats more, besides, worse still, whats worse, above all表總結(jié)陳述的表總結(jié)陳述的：in a word, on the whole, in short, in brief, to sum up, all in allTask2： 隨著高考臨近和學習壓力的增大，不少同隨著高考臨近和學習壓力的增大，不少同學感到非常緊張。為了幫助同學們緩解緊張的情學感到非常緊張。為了幫助同學們緩解緊張的情緒，輕松應對緊張的高三學習生活，你的英語老緒，輕松應對緊張的高三學習生活，你的英語老

20、師要求每個人以師要求每個人以“How to make yourself happy”為題寫一篇為題寫一篇120左右的英語短文。左右的英語短文。 （1） 隨著高考的臨近隨著高考的臨近，（with的復合結(jié)構的復合結(jié)構) a lot of students of Senior Three feel nervous （2） 由于很大的壓力由于很大的壓力 .（介詞詞（介詞詞 組組+n.詞組）詞組）So（3） 知道如何釋放壓力很重要知道如何釋放壓力很重要 .（it作作 形式主語）形式主語）and live a happy life. The following suggestions may（4） 有作用

21、有作用 .（用（用 be+of 結(jié)構）結(jié)構） （5）首先首先，對自己滿意對自己滿意 （用（用Do+V-原原強調(diào)）強調(diào)）if you work hard and make progress every day. （6）其次其次 ，尋找更多笑尋找更多笑 的機會的機會（V-ing作主語）作主語）is （7）你應該做的你應該做的 ,（表語從句）（表語從句） because laughter can relieve stress and improve your mood. Thirdly, think about happy things in life. For example, your pare

22、nts love you deeply and you have great ambitions,（8） 這會使你感這會使你感 到滿意到滿意 .（用定語從句）（用定語從句） （9）是否快樂取決于你自己是否快樂取決于你自己. （用（用whether引導主語從句）引導主語從句）I hope all of you enjoy studying. ，（with 的復合結(jié)構的復合結(jié)構) a lot of students of Senior Three feel nervous （介詞詞組（介詞詞組+n.詞組）詞組）So （it作形式主語）作形式主語）and live a happy life. The following suggestions may_. （用（用be+of的結(jié)構）的結(jié)構） _，_（do+V-原原表強表強 調(diào)）調(diào)）if you work hard and make progress ev