老年人孤獨生活

1、，lonely life of aged people life of aged peoplephenomenon？，On the other hand, some people take their old parents as their burdenand treat them badly. As a result, many old people feel neglected and live ingreat loneliness and helplessness, especially when they are suffering from poorhealth.，those wh

2、o have old parents should take the responsibility to take goodcare of them. ，government should set up more nursing houses for old people,especially for those who have no children and who are physically and mentallydisabled. More importantly, there should be more organizations providingfinancial, med

3、ical and legal assistance for old people. In a word, specialefforts should be made to help old people to spend their later years of theirlives comfortably and merrily. 1.1It is obvious in the picture that an old lady sitting in front of the mirror.學習提示 易混詞匯: female, woman, lady 都有“女性”之意。 批改提示 in fro

4、nt of表示“在.前面”，注意與in the front of區(qū)別。詳情點擊 批改提示 obvious的近義表達有conspicuous 。 1.2She said that her children are not at home and she feel very lonely.學習提示 易混詞匯: baby, child, infant, youngster 均有“孩子”之意。 批改提示 very的近義表達有extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。 1.3At the same time, lonely life in the eld

5、erly is become a serious social problem.動詞錯誤 語法錯誤，be become不規(guī)范，建議修改。 句子錯誤 語法錯誤，建議將be become改為become或be becoming。 動詞錯誤 動詞 become 很少用作被動式 學習提示 易混詞匯: lonely, laone, desolate, lone, solitary 均有“孤單的，寂寞的”之意。 2.1Lonely life in the elderly has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life.低頻警示

6、 lonely life in the elderly 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 cause.impact 在教材中出現過 48 次 學習提示 易混詞匯: shock, impact, collision, clash 均含“沖擊，碰撞”之意。 批改提示 cause近義表達有l(wèi)ead to/ result in/ bring about/ give rise to/ engender 批改提示 注意daily和diurnal區(qū)別。 2.2What is the reason for this phenomenon?學習提示 易混詞匯: marvel, miracle

7、, wonder, phenomenon 均含“奇跡”之意。 批改提示 reason表示“原因，理由”。注意與cause的區(qū)別。詳情點擊 2.3On the one hand, their children have to go to work or have to go to study, because their children need to make money or get the degree.搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 get.degree 在教材中出現過 1549 次 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 make.money 在教材中出現過 20192 次 學習提示 易混詞匯: baby, chi

8、ld, infant, youngster 均有“孩子”之意。 批改提示 查看have to和must的區(qū)別。 2.4On the other hand, some people take their old parents as their burden and treat them badly.搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 take.parent 在教材中出現過 99 次 學習提示 易混詞匯: burden, cargo, load 均有“負擔，負荷”之意。 批改提示 people表示“人，民族”。查看與person的區(qū)別。 2.5As a result, many old people feel

9、neglected and live in great loneliness and helplessness, especially when they are suffering from poor health.學習提示 易混詞匯: specially, especially, particularly 均可表示“特別地”之意。 批改提示 people表示“人，民族”。查看與person的區(qū)別。 3.1As far as I am concerned, those who have old parents should take the responsibility to take go

10、od care of them.搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 have.parent 在教材中出現過 1095 次 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 take.care 在教材中出現過 1151 次 學習提示 易混詞匯: anxiety, worry, care, concern 均含“焦慮，關心”之意。 批改提示 查看who和whoever，whom的區(qū)別。 3.2What's more, the government should set up more nursing houses for old people, especially for those who have no children and

11、 who are physically and mentally disabled.低頻警示 more nursing houses 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 have.child 在教材中出現過 8 次 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 set_up.house 在教材中出現過 94 次 學習提示 易混詞匯: baby, child, infant, youngster 均有“孩子”之意。 批改提示 查看who和whoever，whom的區(qū)別。 3.3More importantly, there should be more organizations providing f

12、inancial, medical and legal assistance for old people.搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 provide.assistance 在教材中出現過 1570 次 學習提示 易混詞匯: help, aid, assistance, support 均有“幫助，支持”之意。 批改提示 people表示“人，民族”。查看與person的區(qū)別。 批改提示 provide的近義表達有l(wèi)end或offer。 3.4In a word, special efforts should be made to help old people to spend their late

13、r years of their lives comfortably and merrily.句子錯誤 本句語法不規(guī)范，請檢查！ 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 spend.year 在教材中出現過 7017 次 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 make.effort 在教材中出現過 8223 次 學習提示 易混詞匯: effort, trouble, pains, endeavour, struggle 均表示“努力”之意。 批改提示 help近義表達有support/ assist/ aid It is obvious in the picture that an old lady sitting in fron

14、t of the mirror.She said that her children are not at home and she feel very lonely.At the same time,the lonely life of aged people has became a serious social problem. The lonely life of aged people has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life.What is the reason for this phenomen

15、on？On the one hand，their children have to go to work or have to go to study,because their children need to make money or get the degree.On the other hand, some people take their old parents as their burden and treat them badly. As a result, many old people feel neglected and live ingreat loneliness

16、and helplessness, especially when they are suffering from poor health. As far as I am concerned，those who have old parents should take the responsibility to take goodcare of them. What's more,the government should set up more nursing houses for old people,especially for those who have no children and who are physically and mentally d