高考英語寫作指導(dǎo)地點描寫（30張）ppt課件

1、根底寫作技巧指點根底寫作技巧指點Suppose you are a guide to describe a place to tourists, what subjects(主題主題will you introduce ?locationpopulationareahistoryculturelivingconditionseducationeconomya placePossible subjects：1.引見地理位置引見地理位置Locationbe located inbe situated inlie in坐落于坐落于腳下腳下/頂部頂部stands at the foot of/ on

2、the top of 常用詞語常用詞語 1. 1. 日本在中國的東方。日本在中國的東方。 2. 2. 這房子朝南。這房子朝南。 3.3.新教學(xué)坐落在學(xué)校的中央。新教學(xué)坐落在學(xué)校的中央。翻譯翻譯Japan is/lies to the east of China.The house faces (to) the south.The new teaching building lies in the center of the school.4.4.中國位于亞洲東部，是世界上最大中國位于亞洲東部，是世界上最大的國家之一。的國家之一。China, located/ lying in the east

3、 of Asia, is one of largest countries in the world. 2.引見人口引見人口Population:has a population of, a city with a population of北京是中國的首都，是一個有北京是中國的首都，是一個有12001200多萬人多萬人口的大城市。用一句話口的大城市。用一句話, the capital of China, is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.3.引見面積引見面積Areahas/covers an area ofsquare

4、kilometersa city with an area ofsquare kilometers城鎮(zhèn)城鎮(zhèn) 面積面積 100 100多平方公里多平方公里Its a town with an area of over 100 square kilometers4.引見歷史引見歷史History:has a long history (of years)with a long history (of years)歷史悠久歷史悠久它是一個具有悠久歷史的現(xiàn)代化城市。它是一個具有悠久歷史的現(xiàn)代化城市。It is a modern city with a long history.5.引見交通引見交通Tr

5、ansportationtake a bus, a train or a plane togo to by bus/train/plane坐汽車、火車、飛機到坐汽車、火車、飛機到交通便利交通便利has convenient transportationa city with convenient transportation both on land and water經(jīng)濟迅速開展經(jīng)濟迅速開展economy has been developing rapidly多次進入全國經(jīng)濟十強城市多次進入全國經(jīng)濟十強城市has been listed among the top ten strongest

6、 cities in economy several times6、引見經(jīng)濟、引見經(jīng)濟economy7. 7. 名勝古跡名勝古跡有很多名勝古跡：有很多名勝古跡：places of interest/ historical spots承德是全國承德是全國24個歷史文化名城之一，也是個歷史文化名城之一，也是44個風(fēng)景名勝之一。個風(fēng)景名勝之一。Chengde City is not only one of the well-known 24 historical and cultural cities but also one of the 44 major scenic spots in Chin

7、a. 一些其它表達(dá)方式：一些其它表達(dá)方式：發(fā)生了很大變化發(fā)生了很大變化great changes have taken place特征鮮明的地方文化特征鮮明的地方文化distinct local culture海岸線總長海岸線總長公里公里Its coastline has a total length of kilometers.根底寫作-情景闡明西山鎮(zhèn)依山傍水。過去，這里的人們生活極其貧困。西山鎮(zhèn)依山傍水。過去，這里的人們生活極其貧困。解放后人們的生活在各方面都發(fā)生了很大的變化。解放后人們的生活在各方面都發(fā)生了很大的變化。人口人口約約10萬萬面積面積約約126平方公里平方公里地理概括地理概括

8、 坐落在粵北一山腳下，面臨一條坐落在粵北一山腳下，面臨一條大河，新建有許多工廠商店、醫(yī)院學(xué)校大河，新建有許多工廠商店、醫(yī)院學(xué)校教育狀況教育狀況解放前只有一所學(xué)校且只有富家子弟可以解放前只有一所學(xué)校且只有富家子弟可以上學(xué)，現(xiàn)在有上學(xué)，現(xiàn)在有10所學(xué)校，每個孩子都可以所學(xué)校，每個孩子都可以上學(xué)；上學(xué)；生活狀況生活狀況 人們工作之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳人們工作之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳舞、參加體育活動等舞、參加體育活動等寫作要求：寫作要求：1.1.短文標(biāo)題自擬短文標(biāo)題自擬2 2必需運用個句子引見全部所給的內(nèi)必需運用個句子引見全部所給的內(nèi)容；容；3 3將個句子組織成銜接的短文將個句子組織成銜接的

9、短文title if necessary(標(biāo)題標(biāo)題tense and voice 時態(tài)和語態(tài)時態(tài)和語態(tài)person 人稱人稱style 文章題材文章題材the important points 要點要全要點要全1.How to analyze the directions (審題審題)? Great Changes in Xishan Town普通如今、普經(jīng)過去、如今完成時普通如今、普經(jīng)過去、如今完成時第三人稱第三人稱運用文運用文List the important points out :解放后人們的生活發(fā)生了很大的變化。解放后人們的生活發(fā)生了很大的變化。西山鎮(zhèn)的人口約西山鎮(zhèn)的人口約1010

10、萬；萬；Since liberation great changes have taken place in peoples lifeXishan town has a population of aboutThe population of Xishan town is about 100,000. 面積約面積約126126平方公里平方公里 It covers/has an area of about126 square kilometers. The size of it is about 126 square kilometers.坐落在粵北一座山腳下，面臨一條大河 Xishan tow

11、n is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong Province and faces a big river. Xishan town is located /stands at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river. 新建有許多工廠商店、醫(yī)院學(xué)校新建有許多工廠商店、醫(yī)院學(xué)校 Many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been bui

12、lt/ set up.解放前只需一所學(xué)校且只需富家子弟可以上學(xué)。解放前只需一所學(xué)校且只需富家子弟可以上學(xué)。如今有如今有1010所學(xué)校，每個孩子都可以上學(xué)；所學(xué)校，每個孩子都可以上學(xué)；人們?nèi)蝿?wù)之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳舞、參人們?nèi)蝿?wù)之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳舞、參與體育活動等與體育活動等Now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school.Before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families.After work people

13、go shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports.用個句子引見全部所給的內(nèi)容；用個句子引見全部所給的內(nèi)容；用適當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~或在必要的地方改動句用適當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~或在必要的地方改動句子構(gòu)造將個句子組織成銜接的短文子構(gòu)造將個句子組織成銜接的短文 1.Xishan town is a small town, _ is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river.whichLets try!2.Xisha

14、n town has a population of about 100,000 _ covers an area of about 126 square kilometers.Xishan town, _ an area of about 126 square kilometers, has a population of .Xishan town covers an area of about 126 square kilometers_100,000 . andcoveringwith a population of多種表達(dá)法靈敏表達(dá)多種表達(dá)法靈敏表達(dá)3.Before liberatio

15、n, people there lived a hard life _ since liberation great changes have taken place_ many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been built. butand now4.Before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families_ now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school. 5.

16、After work people go shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports .butLets share!One possible version :1.Xishan town is a small town, which is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river. It has a population of about 100,000 and covers an are

17、a of about 126 square kilometers. Before liberation, people there lived a hard life but great changes have taken place since liberation and now many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been built. The school education has also improved, for example , before liberation there was only one sch

18、ool for children from wealthy families, but now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school. After work people go shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports .南極洲世界上最冰冷的地方，年年有冰雪覆蓋南極洲世界上最冰冷的地方，年年有冰雪覆蓋 Antarctica, is the coldest continent in the world.Antarctica, is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year round.1.運用定語從句或同位語優(yōu)化句子表達(dá)運用定語從句或同位語優(yōu)化句子表達(dá)which is covered with coldthick ice and deep snow allthe) year round, the coldest continent in the world,*