(完整版)短文改錯(cuò)專(zhuān)題解析版

1、短文改錯(cuò)專(zhuān)題解析版1. 【山東省實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué) 2016 屆高三上學(xué)期第三次診斷】 短文改錯(cuò)（共 10 小題,每小題 1 分,滿 分 10 分）假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。作文中共有 10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤 ,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏子符號(hào)（人）并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除 :在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線 ,并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意 :1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改 10處,多者（從第 11 處起）不計(jì)分。Dear Thomas,I feel sorry to know your worri

2、es about getting fatter and fatter so that you have failed the sports test. Nothing can be more disappointment than that.As far as I am concerned, there are many reasons cause your failure in a test. Firstly, you are very lazy to have regular sports. In fact, sports can help you keep fit and energy.

3、 Secondly, you eat too much meat, that makes you gain weight easily. Finally, you sleep more than you need. There was no denying that it is all these things that have caused your problem and your worries.As I stated above, you should first eat less meat but more fruits and vegetable. And then you sh

4、ould have regular sports so that you can burn the fat that builds up in your body and to become slim.Hope my advice is some help to you.Yours sincerely, Li Hua【答案】71. disappo in tme ntdisappo inting72加 that/which;causecausing73. a t the74. very t too75. energy tenergetic76. that twhich77. was t is78

5、. vegetablet vegetables79. 去掉 and/to80. 加 of72. 力口 that/which;cause t caus考g査關(guān)系詞?？煽闯墒且痪鋸木?，也可把cause看成非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，所以加 that/which;cause tcausing73. a t the考查冠詞。上文已經(jīng)提到是體育測(cè)試了，此處特指，故用the。74. very tto考查副詞。Too.to.結(jié)構(gòu)，表示太.以至于不能.，故用too75. energy t energeti考查形容詞。Keep energetic 保持活力，用 energetic。76. that t which"查

6、關(guān)系詞。非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，故用which。77. was t is考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，用is。78. vegetablet vegetab考查名詞?？蓴?shù)名詞用復(fù)數(shù)，所以用 vegetables o79. 去掉 and/to 考查連詞和介詞?？梢员硎疽粋€(gè)結(jié)果，也可以表示并列，但是這兩者不能并 存，去掉 and/to 。80. 加 of 考查介詞。 Be of +名詞與這個(gè)名詞的形容詞效果一樣，加of。考點(diǎn)：考查了動(dòng)詞、介詞、冠詞、名詞、形容詞、時(shí)態(tài)等的用法【學(xué)法指導(dǎo)】在短文改錯(cuò)中常出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤主要有以下幾類(lèi)：1. 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)用錯(cuò)，可數(shù)與不可數(shù)名詞的混用。比如第 78 小題 more

7、fruits and vegetable ， 可數(shù)名詞用復(fù)數(shù)，所以用 vegetables。2. 動(dòng)詞：時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)，常出現(xiàn)在總體時(shí)態(tài)為過(guò)去或現(xiàn)在時(shí)，中間雜有不適的另一時(shí)態(tài)的現(xiàn)象；或是及物動(dòng)詞后無(wú)賓語(yǔ)，或是不及物動(dòng)詞后加了賓語(yǔ)；需要接 ing 形式的接了 to ，或相 反等。比如第 77 小題 There was no denying that ，本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，用is。3. 形容詞副詞：常出現(xiàn)需形容詞的地方用了副詞或相反；關(guān)系副詞 where ， when ， why 等的缺失或錯(cuò)用。4. 介詞：主要是介詞的多余或缺失，錯(cuò)用5. 主謂一致性：第三人稱單數(shù)漏掉s,或主語(yǔ)為復(fù)數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用了單

8、數(shù)；再就是就近原則對(duì)主語(yǔ)的影響。6. 冠詞：定冠詞 the 的多余或缺失,如季節(jié),月份,星期,球類(lèi)及三餐活動(dòng),稱呼頭銜前 等不能加 the 的地方加了 the 。比如 73 小題 in a test ,上文已經(jīng)提到是體育測(cè)試了,此處特 指,故用 the 。7. 數(shù)詞：主要是序數(shù)詞與基數(shù)詞的混用和錯(cuò)用。8. 連詞：不合句中的邏輯關(guān)系。如需轉(zhuǎn)折連詞（如 but）的時(shí)候用了承接連詞（so），或相 反等等。9. 代詞：主要是代詞的格與數(shù)的錯(cuò)用。如男性用了女性代詞，單數(shù)用了復(fù)數(shù)代詞或相反； 應(yīng)當(dāng)用形容詞性的物主代詞用了賓格，主格或相反，關(guān)系代詞的錯(cuò)用或缺失。10. 常用固定短語(yǔ)或固定用法及句型用錯(cuò)，比如

9、第 80 小題 Hope my advice is some help toyou.，Be of +名詞 =形容詞的固定搭配使用錯(cuò)誤，加of。2.【湖北省武漢市武昌區(qū) 2016屆高三元月調(diào)研】Dear Ms. Helen,I am pleasing to offer you the position of after-sales manager in our company starting on 16 June, 2016. You were given the right to discuss this offer and to seek advices on the attached p

10、roposed agreement with your family, a lawyer, or someone else you trust. Unless you want some information on your employment rights, you can also contact the Employment Service Office or visiting our website.Also, if you disagree this offer or wish to clarify something in it, please ring myself to d

11、iscuss any issue you wish to raise.If you are happy with the proposed terms and wish to accept an offer of employment, please sign this letter and return it to me by 1 June, 2016. In case of I have not heard from you by that date, this offer will be automatical withdrawn. Li Hua 【答案】71. pleasing-ple

12、ased72. were-are73. advices-advice74. Unless-If75. visiting- visit76. disagree 后添加 with77. myself-me78. an-the79. 去掉 please80. automatical-automatically【解析】71. pleasing-pleased 考查形容詞。形容人應(yīng)該用 -ed 形式的形容詞，故改為 pleased。72. were-are 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故改為are。73. advices-advice 考查單復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知這里是單數(shù)形式的建議，故改為advice。7

13、4. Unless-If 考查虛擬語(yǔ)氣。這里是表示疑問(wèn)性的虛擬語(yǔ)氣，需要表示“如果 ”的詞匯，故改為 If 。75. visiting- visit 考查動(dòng)詞。 Or 前后的動(dòng)詞的格式結(jié)構(gòu)相同， 前面是原形， 后面也應(yīng)是原形， 故改為 visit 。76. disagree 后添加 with 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。 Disagree with sth./sb. 是固定結(jié)構(gòu)，故添加 with 。考點(diǎn)：考查詞匯和語(yǔ)法的運(yùn)用。3. 假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文文中共有10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加；在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（

14、人），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉； 修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意： 1每句錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計(jì)分。Many years before I failed the entrance exam and had to go to a ordinary college. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patiently t

15、o me. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere of classroom. Later, I decided to treasure for my college time. I worked hard but got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, that greatly i

16、ncreased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are. 【答案】81. beforeago82. go to a go to an83. Disappo intingDisappo in ted84. patientlypatient85. treasure fortreasure86. but t and87. are t were88. st

17、udent t students89. that t which90. what t not what【解析】試題分析 :81. before t agoago 表示 “從現(xiàn)在起若干時(shí)間以前 ”，常與動(dòng)詞一般過(guò)去式連用。 而且 ago只能作副詞。 before 表示 “從過(guò)去某時(shí)起若干時(shí)間以前 ”，常與過(guò)去完成式連用。 而 before 既可作副詞又可作介詞和連詞。此處應(yīng)用ago。82. . go to a t go to oarndinary 以元音開(kāi)頭，因此應(yīng)用不定冠詞an。83. Disappo inting t Disappo in ted disappo infi!到失望的， dis

18、appo inting 令人失望的， 根據(jù)句意，應(yīng)用 disappointed 。84. patiently t patien此處形容詞作補(bǔ)語(yǔ)，故改為patient。85. treasure fortsutreatreasure 為及物動(dòng)詞，可直接接賓語(yǔ)，故改為treasure。86. but t an前后句并無(wú)轉(zhuǎn)折聯(lián)系，因此改為and。4. 假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（人），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 （ ）劃掉。修改：在

19、錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意： 1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改 10 處，多者 （從第 11 處起 ）不計(jì)分。After a couple of year away from my hometown, I find it has changed a lot. The old fish shop across the street has gone. There exist now a park that has a small river run through. The factory on Friendship Street has been move

20、d out the city and a sports center is now in their place. The market at corner of Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to my middle school was still there.【答案】71.yeart years72.hast is73.existt exists74.runt running75. moved out 后加 of76. theirt its第 6 頁(yè) 共 25 頁(yè)77

21、. corner 前加 the78. been 去掉79. BesidesBut80. was t is【解析】試題分析：通過(guò)閱讀并修改此短文， 考查學(xué)生對(duì)固定搭配，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)，名詞的單復(fù)數(shù) 問(wèn)題，以及非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的辨別和運(yùn)用。71. year t years 考查可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。 a couple of 意思是：兩三個(gè)，后面用復(fù)數(shù)名詞 years。72. 第二行的第一個(gè)has t i考查形容詞。gone這里是形容詞，所以用is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。73. existt exist考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。a park是主語(yǔ)，后置，所以用動(dòng)詞的單三形式exists。74. run t running 考查非謂語(yǔ)

22、動(dòng)詞。， running through 是定語(yǔ)修飾 a small river，run 的邏 輯主語(yǔ)是a small river，所以用動(dòng)詞的-ing形式。75. moved out后加of 考查短語(yǔ)。 move out of the city搬出這個(gè)城市。76. theirt i考查代詞。its 代替前面的 a sports center, in one ' s pla在某地。77. corner 前加 the 考查冠詞，這里用 the 表特指。78. been 去掉 考查語(yǔ)態(tài)。句意：在新華路拐角的市場(chǎng)已經(jīng)讓位于一個(gè)超市。這里是主動(dòng)的 關(guān)系，所以去掉 been。79. Beside

23、st B考查關(guān)系詞。前后表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，用but, Besides的意思是：而且。80. was t is考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。全文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以用is, was是過(guò)去式。考點(diǎn)：語(yǔ)篇理解以及語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。5. 【廣東省惠州市 2016 屆高三上學(xué)期第三次調(diào)研】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修 改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有 10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每 處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào) （），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意： 1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

24、2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計(jì)分。My family was very poor when I was a child. My parents lost their jobs or lived with heavy pressure. As a result, I wanted to study hardly so as to have different future. During my high school life, I spent all my time studied those difficult subjects, which made me one

25、 of the best student in our school. After graduation, I was admitted in a key university where I meet a lot of interesting friends. Now, I am working in a big company and I am able to afford anything I wanted. What ' s more, my parents also have been found new jobs. So I believe that our dream w

26、ill came true if we try our best.【答案】51.or t and52. hardlyt hard53. different future 前加 a54. studiedt studying55. studentt students56.in t to / into / by57. meet t met第 9 頁(yè) 共 25 頁(yè)58. wa ntedwant59. 去掉 been60. camecome52. hardlyhar考查副詞。句意：我想努力地學(xué)習(xí)。 hardly 幾乎不， hard 努力。53. different future 前加 a 考查冠詞。54

27、. studied宀study in考查固定搭配。55. stude nt宀stude nt考查復(fù)數(shù)名詞。future 是可數(shù)名詞， 這里是指一個(gè)不同的未來(lái)， 用spend time doing sth. 所以用 studying 。one of 后面用復(fù)數(shù)名詞 students。56.in t to /into / by考查固定搭配。be admitted to/ into / by 被.錄取。57. meet t met 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。本句是過(guò)去式，所以用動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式 met。58. wa nted t want考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。本句是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以用原形want。59. 去掉 been 考

28、查時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)。主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以去掉 been。60. came t come考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。 will后用動(dòng)詞原形 come。考點(diǎn)：短文改錯(cuò)。106. 【四川省資陽(yáng)市 2016屆高三上學(xué)期第二次診斷】請(qǐng)改正下面短文中的錯(cuò)誤。文中共有 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（人），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞；刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉； 修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意： 1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計(jì)分。One Monday afternoon,

29、 we were playing the basketball on the playground while Isuddenly slipped and fell over. On seeing that, all my classmates rushed to me. Under the help of several other students, Li Xiang, one of my best friend put me on his back and head for the clinic immediately. It turned out that my right ankle

30、 got hurt but I had to be sent to hospital.He did not leave until ambulance arrived. The following day, he came to see me. To my greatly relief, he brought textbooks with them and helped me with my lessons. It was a great pleasure to have such a devoting friend.【答案】71. playing 后去掉 the72. whilewhe n7

31、3. U nderWith74. frie ndfriends75. head headed76. but -and/so77. until 后面加 the/an78. greatly agreat79. them ahim80. devoting adevoted【解析】 試題分析：通過(guò)閱讀修改此短文，考查學(xué)生對(duì)英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法的應(yīng)用，包括連詞，冠詞，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài) 和語(yǔ)態(tài)，形容詞和副詞的區(qū)別，名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)問(wèn)題等。71. playing 后去掉 the 考查冠詞。 play basketball 沒(méi)有冠詞，意思是：打籃球。72. while a when 考查固定搭配。 be doing when 是固定

32、用法，意思是：某事正在發(fā) 生這時(shí)。73. Under a With 考查固定搭配。with the help of 在 的幫助下。所以 Under a With74. frienda friend考查名詞。one of后面用復(fù)數(shù)名詞，所以friend a friend。75. head a headed 考查 動(dòng)詞的一致性。全文都 是過(guò)去式，這里應(yīng)該一致，所以 headaheaded。76. buta and/so 考查連詞。這里前后是并列或者因果關(guān)系，所以 but aand/so。77. until 后面加 the/an 考查冠詞。 ambulance 是可數(shù)名詞，前面用冠詞 the/an

33、，表特指或 泛指。第 10 頁(yè)共 25 頁(yè)78.greatly great 考查形容詞。形容詞great修飾名詞relief。79. them 宀him考查代詞。他隨身帶來(lái)課本，所以用 him。80. devoting宀devoted查形容詞。devoted忠誠(chéng)的修飾名詞。考點(diǎn)：語(yǔ)篇理解以及語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。7. 【浙江省杭州市五校聯(lián)盟2016 屆高三年級(jí)上學(xué)期第一次診斷】 下面短文中有 10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（人），并在其下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）戈搏。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞。注意： 1

34、. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計(jì)分。Let your friendThis morning I went to the supermarket, buying a toy and went to see my nephew , a 8-year-old boy named Jack. She was playing with some of his friend in the yard when I arrived there. The moment he found that I came to see him with his mos

35、t favorite toy, Jack jumped with joy. Every boy and girl present wanted very much to have a look the toy. However, Jack doesn want his friends to see it. He was about to hide the toy then I stopped him.play with your toy as well, Jack you must learn to share.” I said. Rtheatlihzedwas wrong,Jack play

36、ed with the toy together with his friends.【答案】71. buying 改為 bought72. a 改為 an73.She 改為 He74. friend 改為 friends75. 去掉 most76.look 后加 at77. doesn '改為 didn 't78. then 改為 when79. 去掉 to80. realized 改為 realizing第 12 頁(yè)共 25 頁(yè)72. a 改為 an 考查冠詞。 8-year-old 是元音開(kāi)頭， boy 是可數(shù)名詞，一個(gè)用an。73.She改為He考查代詞。這里指我8歲的侄

37、子，所以 She改為He。74. friend 改為 friends 考查復(fù)數(shù)名詞。 some of 后用復(fù)數(shù)，所以 friend 改為 friends 。75. 去掉 most 考查形容詞的用法。 favorite 最喜歡的， 本身就含有最的意思， 所以去掉 most。76.look后加 at 考查固定搭配。have a look at看一眼 。77. doesn '改為didn '考查時(shí)態(tài)的一致性。本文講述過(guò)去的事情，所以用助動(dòng)詞 didn '。t78. then改為 when 考查固定搭配。be about to do sth. when 意思是：正要做某事這時(shí)

38、。79. 去掉 to 考查固定搭配。 let somebody do sth. 讓某人做某事， 后面用動(dòng)詞原形做賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足 語(yǔ)。80. realized改為realizing考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。Jack是realize的邏輯主語(yǔ)，所以用realizing?？键c(diǎn)：語(yǔ)篇理解以及語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。8 . 【安徽省 “皖南八校 ”2016屆高三第二次聯(lián)考】 Good morning, everyone!I'd like to share a quote with you, which go like this:“Time is said to be money, but it ismore-it is li

39、fe. ” It is true that time is great value. After alli,nagniysthmore precious than time. In our daily life, we've often been told that lose time will never return. To be honest, I am used to spend plenty of time playing computer games, what made me fall far behind my classmates. Have realized how

40、 much time l wasted, I've made up my minds to work hard to catch up with them. Wasting time is just like wasting part of our lives. Such valuable is time that if you want your dreams to come true, you should make the more of it.【答案】56. go-goes57. 加 of58. anything-nothing59.lose-lost60. 去掉 am61.

41、what-which62. Have-Having,63. minds-mind,64.Such-So,65.more-most/best【解析】 試題分析：時(shí)間就是金錢(qián)、就是生命。本文是一篇號(hào)召珍惜時(shí)間的演講。56.go-goes 考查動(dòng)詞主謂一致。 Which 引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句指代一件事，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)， 因此 go-goes。57.is 后面加 of 考查介詞。根據(jù)后面抽象名詞 value ，可知是 be+of +名詞結(jié)構(gòu)，因此 is 后 面加 of 。58.if 考查連詞。根據(jù)句意：沒(méi)有什么能比時(shí)間珍貴，得知這里是表示否定，因此anything-nothing 。59. lose-lost

42、 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。此處是表示被動(dòng)完成，用過(guò)去分詞結(jié)構(gòu)， “失去的 ”，因此 lose-lost 。60. 去掉 am 考查動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)。根據(jù)句意：我過(guò)去總是浪費(fèi)大量時(shí)間玩電腦游戲， “過(guò)去常 ?！?used to de,因此去掉 am。61. what-which 考查關(guān)系代詞。用 Which 引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句指代一件事 “玩電腦 ”，因此 what-which 。第 17 頁(yè) 共 25 頁(yè)9【. 河南省鄭州市 2016 年高三上學(xué)期第一次 質(zhì)量預(yù)測(cè)】 假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文， 請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。 文中共有 10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、

43、刪除或修 改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（人），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計(jì)分。I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9.You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed to me.

44、I had no more choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory, for reading from the paper wasn' t allowing. The real moment began before I stood onthe platform with my legs trembling or my mind blank.But my listeners were waiting patient.Gradually,

45、I found me back, giving my speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of speak before a big audience had disappeared. Actually, now I ' ve become a great speaker!【答案】71. make 后添加 a72. to-on73. 去掉 more74. allowing-all

46、owed75. before-when 76.or-and77. patiedt-patiently78. me-myself79. speak-speaking80. had-has【解析】71. make 后添加 a 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。 Make a speech 意為 “做一個(gè)演講 ”，是固定結(jié)構(gòu)， 故添加 a。72. to-on 考查短語(yǔ)。 fix on 意為 “集中于 ”，故改為 on 。73. 去掉 more 考查成分多于。根據(jù)句意可知這里是我沒(méi)有選擇，故去掉 more 。74. allowing-allowed 考查被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。這里是被允許，是被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，故改為allowed 。75.

47、before-when考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。The momentwhen是固定用法，故改為 when。76.or-and考查and的用法。陳述句中的和用and表示，故改為 and。77. patiedt-patiently 考查副詞。Patiently 用來(lái)形容 wait，故改為 patiently。78. me-myself 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。Find oneself back 意為找回某人自己，故改為myself。79. speak-speaking考查動(dòng)詞。Of是介詞，介詞后面動(dòng)詞用-ing的形式，故改為 speaking。80. had-has 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文是一般現(xiàn)在是，所以此處的完成時(shí)也應(yīng)該是

48、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，并且主語(yǔ)為單數(shù)，故改為has。考點(diǎn)：考查詞匯和句型的運(yùn)用。10. 【山東省德州市 2016 屆高三上學(xué)期期末統(tǒng)考】 Dear Barbara，How are you? Today I 've got a wonderful news to tell yI ohuave admitted to Berkely school in California More than 3000 students took exams for it ， but only a few was chosen and I was one of them Therefore ， my parents

49、 are not happy about it They are strong against me going there They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel homesick They can 't imagine so young a girl like me live aloneThey advise me to choose a university near my home instead Then

50、I would be able to continue living with them How can I persuade them to accept the fact what I have grown up?Yours FaithfullyJane Blair【答案】71. 去掉 a72. 加上 been73. was t were74. Therefore t However75. stro ngstron gly76. too t so77.of 去掉，或者 of t that78.live t living79. would t will80. what tthat73. wa

51、s t wer考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。主語(yǔ)I后面應(yīng)該用謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞 were，故把was改成were。74. Thereforet However副詞。根據(jù)上下文可知此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折”所以應(yīng)該用 However,故把 Therefore 改成 However。75. strongTtrongly 考查副詞。此處副詞strongly用來(lái)修飾動(dòng)詞 against，故把strong改成strongly。76. too t s考查連詞。sothat固定搭配，表示 如此以至于”故把too改成so。77.of去掉，或者of t that考查介詞。此處 afraid后面是句子，而 be afraid of后面應(yīng)該接短 語(yǔ)，所

52、以應(yīng)該將of去掉或者改成that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。78.live Tiving考查動(dòng)名詞。Imagine doing sth.固定搭配。所以imagine后面應(yīng)該接動(dòng)詞 Ing 形式,故把 live 改成 living。79. would t wil考查情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。由于此處表達(dá)的是一般將來(lái)時(shí)的含義，所以應(yīng)該用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞will，故把 would 改成 will。80. what t that考查關(guān)系代詞。此處the fact后面接的從句是定語(yǔ)從句，用來(lái)修飾the fact,所以應(yīng)該用關(guān)系代詞 that 修飾,故把 what 改成 that。11. 【山東省淄博市淄川第一中學(xué)2016 屆高三上學(xué)期期末

53、】 假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之 間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有 10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有 兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（人），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意： 1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改 10 處，多者 （從第 11 處起 ）不計(jì)分。Ladies and gentlemen ，It ' s my hoornto give a speech here After-class activities play a im

54、portant part in our school life Proper activities help enrich our lives ， broaden our horizons or develop our personalities.Mine own experience can serve as a case in point. When I was in Senior one ， I become a member of our drama club ， that I used to visit on weekends Since my participation in va

55、rious activities organizing by the club ， I achieved a lot These activities bring me a lot of funs ， provide me with good opportunities to develop new friend-ships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook With so much advantages shown above ， why not to join us at once ？【答案】71.a-an

56、72.or-and73. Mine-Wy74. become-became75. anizing-organized77.I 前添加 have78. funs-fun79. much-many80. 去掉 to 【解析】71.a-an考查冠詞。Important的首字母發(fā)音是元音，前面冠詞需要用an,故改為an。72.or-and 考查 and 的用法。陳述句中的和用 and 表示，故改為 and。73. Mine-My 考查形容詞性物主代詞。這里應(yīng)該是形容詞性的物主代詞,故改為My。74. become-became 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文為一般過(guò)去時(shí),故改為became。75. that-which 考查非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。引導(dǎo)詞在從句中不作任何成分,并且有逗號(hào)隔開(kāi),故改為 which 。76.organizing-organized 考查 activities 和 organize 之間構(gòu)成被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故改為 organized?？键c(diǎn)：考查詞匯和句型的用法。12. 【黑龍江省哈爾濱市第六中學(xué)2016 屆高三上學(xué)期期末】短文中共有 10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句話最多兩處錯(cuò)誤。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在此處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào) （人），并在其下面寫(xiě)出增加的詞 ；刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉； 修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫(xiě)出修改