英語高考書面表達運用策略

1、 衢衢 州州 二二 中中潘潘 志志 強強Mar.1.2007英語高考書面表達運用策略英語高考書面表達運用策略to be with us!to be with us! 國家教育部于國家教育部于2000年提出了修改中學(xué)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)年提出了修改中學(xué)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的意見，其指導(dǎo)思想是：一個宗旨（素質(zhì)教育）、的意見，其指導(dǎo)思想是：一個宗旨（素質(zhì)教育）、二個重點（創(chuàng)新精神和實踐能力）、三個面向（面二個重點（創(chuàng)新精神和實踐能力）、三個面向（面向未來、面向國際、面向競爭）。同時提出了英語向未來、面向國際、面向競爭）。同時提出了英語素質(zhì)教育的目的和內(nèi)容：激發(fā)和培養(yǎng)學(xué)習(xí)興趣，幫素質(zhì)教育的目的和內(nèi)容：激發(fā)和培養(yǎng)學(xué)習(xí)興趣，幫助

2、學(xué)生樹立自信心，形成有效的學(xué)習(xí)策略，養(yǎng)成良助學(xué)生樹立自信心，形成有效的學(xué)習(xí)策略，養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)策略，養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣、掌握一定的好的學(xué)習(xí)策略，養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣、掌握一定的語言知識和基本技能，建立初步的語感，獲得基本語言知識和基本技能，建立初步的語感，獲得基本的語言運用能力，開發(fā)智力、培養(yǎng)觀察、記憶、思的語言運用能力，開發(fā)智力、培養(yǎng)觀察、記憶、思維、想象、創(chuàng)造能力，了解文化差異，增強世界意維、想象、創(chuàng)造能力，了解文化差異，增強世界意識，為學(xué)生的發(fā)展和終身學(xué)習(xí)打下良好的基礎(chǔ)。在識，為學(xué)生的發(fā)展和終身學(xué)習(xí)打下良好的基礎(chǔ)。在如此背景下進行的本研究項目的意義在于既符合國如此背景下進行的本研究項目的意

3、義在于既符合國家對中學(xué)外語教學(xué)所提的要求和目標(biāo)，也將寫的訓(xùn)家對中學(xué)外語教學(xué)所提的要求和目標(biāo)，也將寫的訓(xùn)練貫穿于日常教學(xué)活動的全過程，寓寫于聽說讀等練貫穿于日常教學(xué)活動的全過程，寓寫于聽說讀等諸方面的訓(xùn)練中，從而使學(xué)生達到真正全面提高寫諸方面的訓(xùn)練中，從而使學(xué)生達到真正全面提高寫的能力的目的。同時對中學(xué)外語教師指導(dǎo)學(xué)生如何的能力的目的。同時對中學(xué)外語教師指導(dǎo)學(xué)生如何寫好英語作文也極具參考價值和幫助作用。寫好英語作文也極具參考價值和幫助作用。前前 言言 目前國內(nèi)就中學(xué)生英語寫作課題尚缺乏較完整、系統(tǒng)和目前國內(nèi)就中學(xué)生英語寫作課題尚缺乏較完整、系統(tǒng)和科學(xué)的研究，更勿論提出有份量乃至權(quán)威的實驗報告，用

4、以科學(xué)的研究，更勿論提出有份量乃至權(quán)威的實驗報告，用以指導(dǎo)我國學(xué)生的英語寫作。而隨著我國經(jīng)濟與國際接軌及加指導(dǎo)我國學(xué)生的英語寫作。而隨著我國經(jīng)濟與國際接軌及加入世貿(mào)組織后，英文寫作的重要性正在日益凸現(xiàn)，我們知道，入世貿(mào)組織后，英文寫作的重要性正在日益凸現(xiàn)，我們知道，語言交際，就是傳遞和接受信息。傳遞信息就是說和寫，接語言交際，就是傳遞和接受信息。傳遞信息就是說和寫，接受信息就是聽和讀。聽和說是口頭交際，讀和寫是書面交際，受信息就是聽和讀。聽和說是口頭交際，讀和寫是書面交際，我們不僅要聽懂別人說的、看懂別人寫的，而且還要自己能我們不僅要聽懂別人說的、看懂別人寫的，而且還要自己能說，且要說得地道，

5、寫得洋氣，這樣才算是真正實現(xiàn)了用英說，且要說得地道，寫得洋氣，這樣才算是真正實現(xiàn)了用英語進行交際的目的。英語的聽說讀寫四者密不可分，相互滲語進行交際的目的。英語的聽說讀寫四者密不可分，相互滲透，互為基礎(chǔ)，又呈螺旋式提高。寫的能力要在聽說讀的基透，互為基礎(chǔ)，又呈螺旋式提高。寫的能力要在聽說讀的基礎(chǔ)上培養(yǎng)和提高，而寫的訓(xùn)練又能進一步提高聽說讀的能力，礎(chǔ)上培養(yǎng)和提高，而寫的訓(xùn)練又能進一步提高聽說讀的能力，因此，今后有關(guān)中學(xué)生英文寫作的研究將會越來越引起重視，因此，今后有關(guān)中學(xué)生英文寫作的研究將會越來越引起重視，并將進一步深化、細化。并將進一步深化、細化。 中文和英文畢竟是兩種不同的語言，差異很大。我

6、們在中文和英文畢竟是兩種不同的語言，差異很大。我們在寫英文的時候經(jīng)常會出一些錯誤，一部分是最基本的語法錯寫英文的時候經(jīng)常會出一些錯誤，一部分是最基本的語法錯誤，這里我們把英文寫作中常犯的錯誤列出一部分，以引起誤，這里我們把英文寫作中常犯的錯誤列出一部分，以引起我們的注意。另一部分是由于東西方文化的差異所帶來的不我們的注意。另一部分是由于東西方文化的差異所帶來的不同思維方式所造成的。同思維方式所造成的。 寫作研究的現(xiàn)狀和發(fā)展趨勢寫作研究的現(xiàn)狀和發(fā)展趨勢英語高考書面表達運用策略第一章 歷年高考作文評析一、1989年全國高校招生統(tǒng)一考試年全國高校招生統(tǒng)一考試 英語書面表達英語書面表達（一）題目要求（

7、一）題目要求一個國際青年參觀團正在訪問我國某城市，你負一個國際青年參觀團正在訪問我國某城市，你負責(zé)安排他們的參觀活動。請起草一份通知，準(zhǔn)備向責(zé)安排他們的參觀活動。請起草一份通知，準(zhǔn)備向參觀團成員宣讀。通知必須用一段話說明以下幾點參觀團成員宣讀。通知必須用一段話說明以下幾點： 1.參觀日期：參觀日期：7月月22日，星期六。日，星期六。 時間：早餐后時間：早餐后8點出發(fā)。午餐在參觀地吃。下午回點出發(fā)。午餐在參觀地吃。下午回來。來。 2.參觀內(nèi)容：分四組，每組參觀一個地方：工廠、參觀內(nèi)容：分四組，每組參觀一個地方：工廠、學(xué)校、農(nóng)場或醫(yī)院。學(xué)校、農(nóng)場或醫(yī)院。 3.歡迎每人參加一組活動。請選擇好參觀地點

8、，并歡迎每人參加一組活動。請選擇好參觀地點，并在今晚在今晚9點前到服務(wù)臺點前到服務(wù)臺(the Service Desk)簽名。簽名。 滿分作文：Ladies and gentlemen,May I have your attention, please? Welcome to our city! Im very glad to tell you our trip plans. There are four choices, including factories,schools,farms,and hospitals.Its up to you to decide which group yo

9、u have interest. Were supposed to get going at 8 oclock tomorrow morning right after breakfast, and you dont have to take any food with you since lunch will be served at the site. Please make sure the place that you feel like going and sign up at the service desk before 9 p.m.! Thank you!其它可用于本篇作文的好

10、句子：其它可用于本篇作文的好句子：1. You will be put into four groups.2. We have four trip plans for you to choose from.3. You are supposed to be in any of the four groups.4. There are four choices. Its up to you to decide which one is yours.5. Choose a place which you may feel like visiting.6. Well get going at 8 o

11、clock tomorrow morning right after breakfast.7. The trip is scheduled for a whole day, so Im afraid well have lunch on site.8. In addition, you dont have to take any food with you, since lunch will be served at the place you will be visiting.9. Always stay with your guide, just to be on the safe sid

12、e.10. To make sure that the visits are well planned, we need you to sign up for your trip by 9:00 P.M.11. Thank you for listening.英語高考書面表達運用策略0404年浙江省高考英語卷書面表達解析年浙江省高考英語卷書面表達解析一、題目一、題目 假設(shè)你是李越假設(shè)你是李越,你的加拿大筆友你的加拿大筆友Steve來信說來信說,他和他的他和他的一些同學(xué)正在學(xué)中文一些同學(xué)正在學(xué)中文,請你推薦兩本學(xué)中文的詞典，根據(jù)請你推薦兩本學(xué)中文的詞典，根據(jù)下表提供的信息下表提供的信息,請你給他

13、寫一封回信請你給他寫一封回信.英漢/漢英詞典新華字典收詞(字)18,000(英語)20,000(漢語)10,000價格52元11元特點大量例子、用法說明,適合初學(xué)者中國最常用的漢語字典英語高考書面表達運用策略 不少教師認為本案起點比較低，尖子不少教師認為本案起點比較低，尖子生發(fā)揮水平的空間比較少，連生發(fā)揮水平的空間比較少，連“初中畢初中畢業(yè)生業(yè)生”都可以都可以“應(yīng)付應(yīng)付”。但是評卷結(jié)果。但是評卷結(jié)果卻讓人大跌眼鏡：該題的全省平均得分卻讓人大跌眼鏡：該題的全省平均得分只有只有12.5812.58分，滿分（分，滿分（2525分）者更是鳳毛分）者更是鳳毛麟角。麟角。二、寫作解二、寫作解析析英語高考書

14、面表達運用策略、這種英漢、漢英的方式使得學(xué)生能更方便地查找參照詞。、這種英漢、漢英的方式使得學(xué)生能更方便地查找參照詞。、這本字典實際上是、這本字典實際上是“雙向雙向”字典：一半是英漢，一半是漢英，字典：一半是英漢，一半是漢英，分別擁有分別擁有20,000個漢字和個漢字和18,000英語單詞。英語單詞。、這本字典大約有、這本字典大約有10,000字。字。、英漢部分的英語單詞后面都有相對應(yīng)的漢語。、英漢部分的英語單詞后面都有相對應(yīng)的漢語。、所有的漢字都有英語翻譯，這些翻譯有助于更精確地理解漢字。、所有的漢字都有英語翻譯，這些翻譯有助于更精確地理解漢字。、盡管沒有小本的、盡管沒有小本的新華字典新華字

15、典那樣容易攜帶，那樣容易攜帶，英漢英漢/漢英漢英字典還是更受學(xué)生們的歡迎。字典還是更受學(xué)生們的歡迎。、對于常見的單詞來說，它還含有充足的例子。、對于常見的單詞來說，它還含有充足的例子。、它提供了大量的用法注解。、它提供了大量的用法注解。三、語句使用建議三、語句使用建議英語高考書面表達運用策略9、它有相當(dāng)多的例句和注解。、它有相當(dāng)多的例句和注解。10、由于其易用和全面，我也經(jīng)常使用這本字典。、由于其易用和全面，我也經(jīng)常使用這本字典。11、我向所有中文學(xué)習(xí)者推薦這本字典。、我向所有中文學(xué)習(xí)者推薦這本字典。12、因為它擁有其他字典不曾擁有的東西，所以我說它很、因為它擁有其他字典不曾擁有的東西，所以我

16、說它很有用。有用。13、平均三個中國人就有一個擁有這本字典。、平均三個中國人就有一個擁有這本字典。14、總體上說，它特別有用，是本很有價值的字典。、總體上說，它特別有用，是本很有價值的字典。15、與其他字典相比，這本字典十分有用。、與其他字典相比，這本字典十分有用。16、總而言之，要選漢語字典，這是最好的選擇之一。、總而言之，要選漢語字典，這是最好的選擇之一。英語高考書面表達運用策略1、The English-Chinese, Chinese-English format makes it convenient for students to cross-reference words.2、T

17、his dictionary is actually a two-way dictionary: one half is English/Chinese and the other half is Chinese/English, containing some 20,000 Chinese words and 18,000 English words.3、This dictionary has roughly 10,000 words.4、The E/C section has the English word followed by the Chinese equivalent.5、All

18、 Chinese characters are followed by English translation, which helps you understand the characters more accurately.6、While not as portable as the smaller XD, the E/C C/E was more warmly welcomed by my students.7、For common words it also includes efficient examples.8、It provides lots of usage notes.英

19、語高考書面表達運用策略 9、It has a good number of example sentences with necessary usage notes.10、I use this dictionary a lot due to its ease of use and its completeness.11、I highly recommend this dictionary for all learners of mandarin Chinese language.12、I have found this dictionary to be very helpful because

20、 it has what many Chinese dictionaries do not have.13、On average, one in three Chinese own a copy of the dictionary.14、Overall, it is extremely useful and a good value.15、This dictionary is incredibly useful comparing to other ones. 16、In short, its one of your best options for a Chinese dictionary.

21、英語高考書面表達運用策略1、高考范文高考范文Dear Steve, Im so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese. Id like to recommend the following two dictionaries. The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. Be

22、sides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word. Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary, and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and XD c

23、osts 11 yuan. Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries. (111 words)四、范文欣賞四、范文欣賞英語高考書面表達運用策略2、考場高分范文、考場高分范文Dear Steve, Thank you very much for your last letter which asked me something about how to choose a dictionary for learning Chinese. Here I strongly recommend you the followin

24、g two which may be useful to you. One of them is the English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary, which will cost you 52 yuan. It contains some 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. As it has lots of examples showing how to use the words, it will be much valuable for the beginners like you.

25、The other one, Xinhua Dictionary, which charges you only 11 yuan and has a collection of 10,000 Chinese words. It is the most commonly used one in China. If you need my help with your Chinese please write to me. (120 words)英語高考書面表達運用策略3、教師范文、教師范文Dear Steve, Very glad to have received your letter, sa

26、ying that you and your classmates are learning English. I wish you good luck with your efforts in Chinese learning. In your letter you also ask what Chinese dictionaries to use. Here are the two that I highly recommend. An ideal tool for study, the English-Chinese & ChineseEnglish dictionary col

27、lects 20,000 Chinese words and 18,000 English words. Abundant examples illustrate how and when a word can be used. As a must-have reference for beginners, the dictionary is worth the price, 52 yuan. The Xinhua Dictionary, consisting of 10,000 Chinese words, has been the most influential Chinese-only

28、 dictionary available. The dictionary is relatively small, easy to carry and affordable, costing only 11 yuan. If you have further questions, let me know. (128 words)英語高考書面表達運用策略 普通高校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試大綱普通高校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試大綱中英語中英語學(xué)科書面表達的學(xué)科書面表達的“評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)”中指出，評分時，中指出，評分時，應(yīng)該注意應(yīng)該注意“應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量、上下應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量、上下文的連貫性和語言

29、的得體性文的連貫性和語言的得體性”；最高檔次的給；最高檔次的給分要求中還要求考生能夠分要求中還要求考生能夠“應(yīng)用較多的語法結(jié)應(yīng)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；構(gòu)和詞匯；盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯，具備較強的語言用用能力；有效地使用詞匯，具備較強的語言用用能力；有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊”等等。等等。這些要求在上述三篇范文中，尤其是最后兩篇這些要求在上述三篇范文中，尤其是最后兩篇范文中，都有較好的體現(xiàn)。范文中，都有較好的體現(xiàn)。五、范文評析五、范文評析英語高考書面表達運用策略 范文中能夠通過從屬連詞（第范文中能夠通過從屬連詞

30、（第2 2篇）、非限制性定語篇）、非限制性定語從句（第從句（第2 2篇）、同位語（第篇）、同位語（第3 3篇）和現(xiàn)在分詞短語（第篇）和現(xiàn)在分詞短語（第1 1、3 3篇）等語法結(jié)構(gòu)來構(gòu)建長句，使多個要點能夠在一個句篇）等語法結(jié)構(gòu)來構(gòu)建長句，使多個要點能夠在一個句子中得以表達，從而使意義更為連貫、文章更為流暢。本子中得以表達，從而使意義更為連貫、文章更為流暢。本案的并列信息比較多，如價格、擁有詞匯量等，但是上面案的并列信息比較多，如價格、擁有詞匯量等，但是上面提到的多種語法結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，使文章擺脫了內(nèi)容上的乏味，提到的多種語法結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，使文章擺脫了內(nèi)容上的乏味，變得很耐讀變得很耐讀. . 范文中也

31、體現(xiàn)了較強的詞匯運用能力。在范文中也體現(xiàn)了較強的詞匯運用能力。在“考場高分考場高分范文范文”中，中，containcontain、chargecharge、a collection ofa collection of等的正確等的正確運用，無疑為文章增色不少；而運用，無疑為文章增色不少；而“教師范文教師范文”中的用詞亦中的用詞亦有可圈可點之處，通過有可圈可點之處，通過effortsefforts、collectcollect、abundantabundant、illustrateillustrate、consist ofconsist of、influentialinfluential、avai

32、lableavailable、relativelyrelatively等詞，彰顯了作者的詞匯量，這與評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中等詞，彰顯了作者的詞匯量，這與評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的要求也是相吻合的。的要求也是相吻合的。英語高考書面表達運用策略0505年浙江卷英語書面表達年浙江卷英語書面表達一、題目（滿分一、題目（滿分30分）分）你的英國朋友正在做一個課題：世界各地的生日慶祝方式。他請你介紹中國學(xué)生過生日的方式。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文：（一）通常方式：1.生日聚會2.生日禮物3.生日祝福（二）我認為更有意義的慶祝方式和理由詞數(shù)：100-120英語高考書面表達運用策略二、高考范文二、高考范文Chinesestudents

33、celebratetheirbirthdaysindifferentways,butthemostcommonwayistohavefundrinking,singinganddancing.Onthebirthday,oneusuallyreceivesnicegiftsandgoodwishesfromfriendsandparents.Sometimes,parentswillprepareaspecialdinneroracaketoshowtheirlovefortheirchildren.Sincebirthdaycelebrationisoneoftheimportantacti

34、vitiesinoneslife,itcanbedoneinmoremeaningfulways.Forexample,wecanbuysomeflowersorcookadeliciousmealforourmothersonthatday.Inthisway,weexpressthankstoourparentsinreturnfortheirlove.(105words)英語高考書面表達運用策略三、考場優(yōu)秀作文三、考場優(yōu)秀作文InChina,themostcommonwaytocelebrateabirthdayistoholdabirthdayparty.Thebirthdaypers

35、onusuallyinvitessomeclassmatesandotherrelativestothepartyinwhichhisfamilymembersandfriendswillgettogetherandhaveagoodtime.Abigcakewithcandlesonitisoftenseenandthebirthdaysongissungontheoccasion.Peoplewhoareinvitedwillbringgiftsaswellastheirbetwishes.However,Ithinkthereisanotherwaytomakeabirthdaycele

36、brationmoremeaningful,todoagooddeedformothers.Wecanhelpthemcookingorcleaning.Althoughthiswonthelpthemmuch,weatleastshowourloveforthem.(119words)英語高考書面表達運用策略四、教師范文四、教師范文InChinabirthdaypartiesareimportantsocialgatheringswherefriendsandrelativeswouldbringgiftstothechildhavingtheirbirthday.Birthdaycards

37、withwarmwordsofgoodwishesareoftensent.Afeastisusuallygiventotheguestsandnoodles,extra-longtosymbolizelonglife,areservedinhonorofthebirthdaychild.Althoughthesetraditionshavebeenpracticedforgenerations,peoplecancreatebirthdaytraditionsoftheirown,whichIthinkshouldfocusonthanksgivingratherthanconsumptio

38、n.Childrenshouldsetasidesometimethinkingwhattheyarethankfulforandwhattheycandoinreturn.Onealternativeistohelpwashthedishesatnightordootherchoresfortheirmothersbecauseitistheirmothersbirthday.(124words)英語高考書面表達運用策略五、可用于本題的一些好句子五、可用于本題的一些好句子BirthdaypartiesarealwaysamongthehighlightsofeachyearforChines

39、estudents.Alotofpeopleareinvitedincludingneighbors,friendsandco-workerseveniftheydonthavekidsaroundthebirthdaychildsage.AdultscongratulatechildrenonbecomingayearolderbypresentingthemwithredenvelopesthatcontainLuckyMoney.英語高考書面表達運用策略Whenboysorgirlsturn10,theyhaveahugeparty.Onthedaywehaveafamilydinner

40、withlotsofinvitedguests.Itdoesnotseemlikeabirthdaywithoutnoodles.Thecelebrationincludesnoodlesrepresentinglonglife.Thebirthdaychildwearsentirelynewclothestomarktheoccasion.Oneofthebest-receivedgiftsistheredenvelopeofmoney.LikeBritishstudents,themajorityofChinesechildrencelebratebirthdayswithacaketop

41、pedwithlightedcandles.Whenthecakeissetbeforetheguestofhonor,heorsheissupposedtomakeawish,withouttellinganyonewhatitis.英語高考書面表達運用策略Acakeismade,andcandlesareputontopbasedonhowoldthepersonis.Attheendofthehappybirthdaysong,thebirthdaypersonblowsoutthecandlesandallguestsapplaudorcheer.Thebirthdaychildcan

42、choosewheretoeatoutthatnight.Thekidsaretakenouttotheirdesiredplacewheretheycanbuyanythingtheywantwithinacertainpricerange.Ithinkweshouldcreateourowntraditions,makingbirthdaycelebrationmorespecialandunique.Thebirthdaypersongetspresentsbutalsomustgiveonepresenttotheentirefamily.Wecanvisitthehospitalwh

43、erewewereborn.Insteadofgivingmoneyasagift,parentscanbuytheirchildrenbooks.Eachyearadifferentthemeshouldbechosenforthebirthday.英語高考書面表達運用策略六、評價與指導(dǎo)六、評價與指導(dǎo)1.英語書面表達的題型從過去詳細的中文提綱，慢慢演化為簡潔的圖畫列表，到今天某一話題下的自由表達，走過了20多年的道路。本年度的書面表達半開放的命題方式，既是對新課程理念的響應(yīng)，也是20多年探索的最新選擇，應(yīng)該說這一步并非是試探或偶然，而是走得非常堅決。英語高考書面表達運用策略2開放或半開放的作

44、文模式，寫作容易落入俗套，因此這種題型要挑戰(zhàn)我們過去英語作文只關(guān)注語言表達的狹隘思維，轉(zhuǎn)而更多地去關(guān)注新的主意甚至是立意?！敖處煼段摹敝械腷ecauseitistheirmothersbirthday一句，就是很好的“主意（理由）”，是尋常作文中不易發(fā)現(xiàn)的亮點。如果能夠提出新鮮的主意，如Wecanvisitthehospitalwherewewereborn等，相信可以贏得更多的贊賞分。然而新鮮的主意，并非能天上掉得下來，而是要仰仗大量的閱讀和輸入。越開放的作文題目，越要求平時有大量的閱讀經(jīng)歷。課堂上積極回應(yīng)教師的brainstorming、mindmap等任務(wù)，認真傾聽同學(xué)發(fā)言也不無裨益。英

45、語高考書面表達運用策略3.開放或半開放的作文模式，題干通常比較簡潔，因此要更加注意審題。在本例中，同學(xué)們比較容易忽略“更有意義”、“理由”等信息。忽略前者，容易導(dǎo)致思想內(nèi)容不夠積極。比如有同學(xué)說：Wecanplaytricksonthebirthdayperson，或者：kissingisthebestwaybecauseitdoesntcostmuch，就有調(diào)侃的意味，不夠恰當(dāng)。忽略后者，容易導(dǎo)致文章內(nèi)容不夠充實，比如有同學(xué)說Weshouldsaythankstoourparentsandgivethempresentsinstead，接著就嘎然而止，缺乏了細致性和豐富性。英語高考書面表達運

46、用策略0606年浙江卷英語書面表達年浙江卷英語書面表達一一 題目題目當(dāng)前不少文學(xué)作品被改編成電影。有人選擇電影，有人喜歡讀原著。請你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：看電影：省時、有趣、易懂讀原著：細節(jié)更多、語言優(yōu)美我的看法及理由注意：1.詞數(shù)100-120，文章題目和開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）。2.參考詞匯：original work或book in the original（原著） Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better

47、to see the film than to read the book in the original.英語高考書面表達運用策略二二 高考范文高考范文 Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually

48、 more interesting, and it is easier to follow. Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful. Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have mo

49、re reason for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.英語高考書面表達運用策略三三 考場優(yōu)秀作文考場優(yōu)秀作文 Film or book, which do you prefer? Som

50、e of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. Compared with reading the original work, they think, seeing the film requires less time, which no doubt is an outstanding advantage in this crazily rounding society. Seeing the film is also much more fun and helps

51、 understanding. Others, however, prefer reading the original work. Thats because the work has more details of the story. Also, the beautiful language in the work has great appeal for the readers. I prefer reading the original work. In my opinion, books lead us to think, while seeing the film makes u

52、s lazy. Besides, reading the original work can also improve our reading skills.英語高考書面表達運用策略四四 教師范文教師范文Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. In their opinion, the film is much more interesting and easier to underst

53、and than the book. Whats more, to see the film saves us much time to know about the whole story. Howerver, some others hold a different view. They think that they can get much more details of the story from the original work. Meanwhile, the beautiful language in the book is also a great feast for th

54、eir mind. As for me, I prefer to see the film. Thats because I like to see the carefully designed scenes of the story. Besides, I can enjoy some beautiful music at the same time, which is especially important to a music lover like me!英語高考書面表達運用策略五五 可用于本文的一些好句子可用于本文的一些好句子The reason is that it takes l

55、ess time to understand the whole story.Thats because we can more easily understand the story through the film.Some others hold a different view. Some others dont share the same opinion.Personally, I agree with the second view.As for me, I would rather read the original book than see the film.In my o

56、pinion, reading the original book is much better than seeing the film.英語高考書面表達運用策略I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own.I will be able to see the carefully designed scenes as well as to enjoy some beautiful music.The original work tells more detailed information of the story a

57、nd is well written in beautiful language.Whats more, I will be able to better understand the authors ideas.In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.I think to see the film has many more advantages over to read the book in the original.英語高考書面表達運用策略六六 評價與指導(dǎo)評價與指導(dǎo)1

58、.06年書面表達延續(xù)了05年的半開放的模式，但在表達的形式上還是有跡可循的。作文的內(nèi)容是關(guān)于看書還是看電影的兩種不同意見的對比以及作者的看法和理由，這一形式的書面表達在前些年的高考中曾多次出現(xiàn)。因此，文章可以分成三個段落，脈絡(luò)十分清晰，便于學(xué)生的組織。英語高考書面表達運用策略2. 本例書面表達的題干也延續(xù)了05年的特點，語言簡潔。所以審題環(huán)節(jié)至關(guān)重要。平時應(yīng)引導(dǎo)學(xué)生學(xué)會在簡潔的語言中捕捉隱含的信息，以進行合乎英語習(xí)慣的表達。如若不然，則很容易出現(xiàn)錯誤。如有學(xué)生的文章中出現(xiàn)有Film requires less time的句子，就是沒有分清被比較的是看書和看電影。也正是因為題干簡潔，文章很容易被

59、寫得過于簡單而沒有文采，進而不能達到所要求的字數(shù)。如第一部分就有學(xué)生寫成了Seeing film saves time , and is very interesting and easy understanding.這需要平時的用心體會和練習(xí)。英語高考書面表達運用策略3.段落間和段落中的銜接過渡在這種形式的文章中顯得比較重要。而很多學(xué)生在一些具有關(guān)聯(lián)意義的詞匯的選擇上存在困難。如有學(xué)生將while錯用為副詞，將第二部分的開頭表達成While some others prefer reading the original work。也有學(xué)生在第一部分中用above all來表示看電影的第一個優(yōu)

60、點Above all, seeing the film saves much time。英語高考書面表達運用策略一、故事或人物介紹一、故事或人物介紹 第二章 美國學(xué)生習(xí)作賞析My Mum My mum is 36 and she goes to adultschool. She works at home by cleaning, cooking ect. Her full name is Robyn Tracie Ball. She has brown hair and brown eyes, and she usually wears shorts and a t-shirt unless we