英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略

1、 衢衢 州州 二二 中中潘潘 志志 強(qiáng)強(qiáng)Mar.1.2007英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略to be with us!to be with us! 國(guó)家教育部于國(guó)家教育部于2000年提出了修改中學(xué)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)年提出了修改中學(xué)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的意見，其指導(dǎo)思想是：一個(gè)宗旨（素質(zhì)教育）、的意見，其指導(dǎo)思想是：一個(gè)宗旨（素質(zhì)教育）、二個(gè)重點(diǎn)（創(chuàng)新精神和實(shí)踐能力）、三個(gè)面向（面二個(gè)重點(diǎn)（創(chuàng)新精神和實(shí)踐能力）、三個(gè)面向（面向未來(lái)、面向國(guó)際、面向競(jìng)爭(zhēng)）。同時(shí)提出了英語(yǔ)向未來(lái)、面向國(guó)際、面向競(jìng)爭(zhēng)）。同時(shí)提出了英語(yǔ)素質(zhì)教育的目的和內(nèi)容：激發(fā)和培養(yǎng)學(xué)習(xí)興趣，幫素質(zhì)教育的目的和內(nèi)容：激發(fā)和培養(yǎng)學(xué)習(xí)興趣，幫助

2、學(xué)生樹立自信心，形成有效的學(xué)習(xí)策略，養(yǎng)成良助學(xué)生樹立自信心，形成有效的學(xué)習(xí)策略，養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)策略，養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣、掌握一定的好的學(xué)習(xí)策略，養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣、掌握一定的語(yǔ)言知識(shí)和基本技能，建立初步的語(yǔ)感，獲得基本語(yǔ)言知識(shí)和基本技能，建立初步的語(yǔ)感，獲得基本的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力，開發(fā)智力、培養(yǎng)觀察、記憶、思的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力，開發(fā)智力、培養(yǎng)觀察、記憶、思維、想象、創(chuàng)造能力，了解文化差異，增強(qiáng)世界意維、想象、創(chuàng)造能力，了解文化差異，增強(qiáng)世界意識(shí)，為學(xué)生的發(fā)展和終身學(xué)習(xí)打下良好的基礎(chǔ)。在識(shí)，為學(xué)生的發(fā)展和終身學(xué)習(xí)打下良好的基礎(chǔ)。在如此背景下進(jìn)行的本研究項(xiàng)目的意義在于既符合國(guó)如此背景下進(jìn)行的本研究項(xiàng)目的意

3、義在于既符合國(guó)家對(duì)中學(xué)外語(yǔ)教學(xué)所提的要求和目標(biāo)，也將寫的訓(xùn)家對(duì)中學(xué)外語(yǔ)教學(xué)所提的要求和目標(biāo)，也將寫的訓(xùn)練貫穿于日常教學(xué)活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程，寓寫于聽說(shuō)讀等練貫穿于日常教學(xué)活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程，寓寫于聽說(shuō)讀等諸方面的訓(xùn)練中，從而使學(xué)生達(dá)到真正全面提高寫諸方面的訓(xùn)練中，從而使學(xué)生達(dá)到真正全面提高寫的能力的目的。同時(shí)對(duì)中學(xué)外語(yǔ)教師指導(dǎo)學(xué)生如何的能力的目的。同時(shí)對(duì)中學(xué)外語(yǔ)教師指導(dǎo)學(xué)生如何寫好英語(yǔ)作文也極具參考價(jià)值和幫助作用。寫好英語(yǔ)作文也極具參考價(jià)值和幫助作用。前前 言言 目前國(guó)內(nèi)就中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)寫作課題尚缺乏較完整、系統(tǒng)和目前國(guó)內(nèi)就中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)寫作課題尚缺乏較完整、系統(tǒng)和科學(xué)的研究，更勿論提出有份量乃至權(quán)威的實(shí)驗(yàn)報(bào)告，用

4、以科學(xué)的研究，更勿論提出有份量乃至權(quán)威的實(shí)驗(yàn)報(bào)告，用以指導(dǎo)我國(guó)學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)寫作。而隨著我國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)與國(guó)際接軌及加指導(dǎo)我國(guó)學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)寫作。而隨著我國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)與國(guó)際接軌及加入世貿(mào)組織后，英文寫作的重要性正在日益凸現(xiàn)，我們知道，入世貿(mào)組織后，英文寫作的重要性正在日益凸現(xiàn)，我們知道，語(yǔ)言交際，就是傳遞和接受信息。傳遞信息就是說(shuō)和寫，接語(yǔ)言交際，就是傳遞和接受信息。傳遞信息就是說(shuō)和寫，接受信息就是聽和讀。聽和說(shuō)是口頭交際，讀和寫是書面交際，受信息就是聽和讀。聽和說(shuō)是口頭交際，讀和寫是書面交際，我們不僅要聽懂別人說(shuō)的、看懂別人寫的，而且還要自己能我們不僅要聽懂別人說(shuō)的、看懂別人寫的，而且還要自己能說(shuō)，且要說(shuō)得地道，

5、寫得洋氣，這樣才算是真正實(shí)現(xiàn)了用英說(shuō)，且要說(shuō)得地道，寫得洋氣，這樣才算是真正實(shí)現(xiàn)了用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行交際的目的。英語(yǔ)的聽說(shuō)讀寫四者密不可分，相互滲語(yǔ)進(jìn)行交際的目的。英語(yǔ)的聽說(shuō)讀寫四者密不可分，相互滲透，互為基礎(chǔ)，又呈螺旋式提高。寫的能力要在聽說(shuō)讀的基透，互為基礎(chǔ)，又呈螺旋式提高。寫的能力要在聽說(shuō)讀的基礎(chǔ)上培養(yǎng)和提高，而寫的訓(xùn)練又能進(jìn)一步提高聽說(shuō)讀的能力，礎(chǔ)上培養(yǎng)和提高，而寫的訓(xùn)練又能進(jìn)一步提高聽說(shuō)讀的能力，因此，今后有關(guān)中學(xué)生英文寫作的研究將會(huì)越來(lái)越引起重視，因此，今后有關(guān)中學(xué)生英文寫作的研究將會(huì)越來(lái)越引起重視，并將進(jìn)一步深化、細(xì)化。并將進(jìn)一步深化、細(xì)化。 中文和英文畢竟是兩種不同的語(yǔ)言，差異很大。我

6、們?cè)谥形暮陀⑽漠吘故莾煞N不同的語(yǔ)言，差異很大。我們?cè)趯懹⑽牡臅r(shí)候經(jīng)常會(huì)出一些錯(cuò)誤，一部分是最基本的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)寫英文的時(shí)候經(jīng)常會(huì)出一些錯(cuò)誤，一部分是最基本的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，這里我們把英文寫作中常犯的錯(cuò)誤列出一部分，以引起誤，這里我們把英文寫作中常犯的錯(cuò)誤列出一部分，以引起我們的注意。另一部分是由于東西方文化的差異所帶來(lái)的不我們的注意。另一部分是由于東西方文化的差異所帶來(lái)的不同思維方式所造成的。同思維方式所造成的。 寫作研究的現(xiàn)狀和發(fā)展趨勢(shì)寫作研究的現(xiàn)狀和發(fā)展趨勢(shì)英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略第一章 歷年高考作文評(píng)析一、1989年全國(guó)高校招生統(tǒng)一考試年全國(guó)高校招生統(tǒng)一考試 英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)（一）題目要求（

7、一）題目要求一個(gè)國(guó)際青年參觀團(tuán)正在訪問我國(guó)某城市，你負(fù)一個(gè)國(guó)際青年參觀團(tuán)正在訪問我國(guó)某城市，你負(fù)責(zé)安排他們的參觀活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)起草一份通知，準(zhǔn)備向責(zé)安排他們的參觀活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)起草一份通知，準(zhǔn)備向參觀團(tuán)成員宣讀。通知必須用一段話說(shuō)明以下幾點(diǎn)參觀團(tuán)成員宣讀。通知必須用一段話說(shuō)明以下幾點(diǎn)： 1.參觀日期：參觀日期：7月月22日，星期六。日，星期六。 時(shí)間：早餐后時(shí)間：早餐后8點(diǎn)出發(fā)。午餐在參觀地吃。下午回點(diǎn)出發(fā)。午餐在參觀地吃。下午回來(lái)。來(lái)。 2.參觀內(nèi)容：分四組，每組參觀一個(gè)地方：工廠、參觀內(nèi)容：分四組，每組參觀一個(gè)地方：工廠、學(xué)校、農(nóng)場(chǎng)或醫(yī)院。學(xué)校、農(nóng)場(chǎng)或醫(yī)院。 3.歡迎每人參加一組活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)選擇好參觀地點(diǎn)

8、，并歡迎每人參加一組活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)選擇好參觀地點(diǎn)，并在今晚在今晚9點(diǎn)前到服務(wù)臺(tái)點(diǎn)前到服務(wù)臺(tái)(the Service Desk)簽名。簽名。 滿分作文：Ladies and gentlemen,May I have your attention, please? Welcome to our city! Im very glad to tell you our trip plans. There are four choices, including factories,schools,farms,and hospitals.Its up to you to decide which group yo

9、u have interest. Were supposed to get going at 8 oclock tomorrow morning right after breakfast, and you dont have to take any food with you since lunch will be served at the site. Please make sure the place that you feel like going and sign up at the service desk before 9 p.m.! Thank you!其它可用于本篇作文的好

10、句子：其它可用于本篇作文的好句子：1. You will be put into four groups.2. We have four trip plans for you to choose from.3. You are supposed to be in any of the four groups.4. There are four choices. Its up to you to decide which one is yours.5. Choose a place which you may feel like visiting.6. Well get going at 8 o

11、clock tomorrow morning right after breakfast.7. The trip is scheduled for a whole day, so Im afraid well have lunch on site.8. In addition, you dont have to take any food with you, since lunch will be served at the place you will be visiting.9. Always stay with your guide, just to be on the safe sid

12、e.10. To make sure that the visits are well planned, we need you to sign up for your trip by 9:00 P.M.11. Thank you for listening.英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略0404年浙江省高考英語(yǔ)卷書面表達(dá)解析年浙江省高考英語(yǔ)卷書面表達(dá)解析一、題目一、題目 假設(shè)你是李越假設(shè)你是李越,你的加拿大筆友你的加拿大筆友Steve來(lái)信說(shuō)來(lái)信說(shuō),他和他的他和他的一些同學(xué)正在學(xué)中文一些同學(xué)正在學(xué)中文,請(qǐng)你推薦兩本學(xué)中文的詞典，根據(jù)請(qǐng)你推薦兩本學(xué)中文的詞典，根據(jù)下表提供的信息下表提供的信息,請(qǐng)你給他

13、寫一封回信請(qǐng)你給他寫一封回信.英漢/漢英詞典新華字典收詞(字)18,000(英語(yǔ))20,000(漢語(yǔ))10,000價(jià)格52元11元特點(diǎn)大量例子、用法說(shuō)明,適合初學(xué)者中國(guó)最常用的漢語(yǔ)字典英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略 不少教師認(rèn)為本案起點(diǎn)比較低，尖子不少教師認(rèn)為本案起點(diǎn)比較低，尖子生發(fā)揮水平的空間比較少，連生發(fā)揮水平的空間比較少，連“初中畢初中畢業(yè)生業(yè)生”都可以都可以“應(yīng)付應(yīng)付”。但是評(píng)卷結(jié)果。但是評(píng)卷結(jié)果卻讓人大跌眼鏡：該題的全省平均得分卻讓人大跌眼鏡：該題的全省平均得分只有只有12.5812.58分，滿分（分，滿分（2525分）者更是鳳毛分）者更是鳳毛麟角。麟角。二、寫作解二、寫作解析析英語(yǔ)高考書

14、面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略、這種英漢、漢英的方式使得學(xué)生能更方便地查找參照詞。、這種英漢、漢英的方式使得學(xué)生能更方便地查找參照詞。、這本字典實(shí)際上是、這本字典實(shí)際上是“雙向雙向”字典：一半是英漢，一半是漢英，字典：一半是英漢，一半是漢英，分別擁有分別擁有20,000個(gè)漢字和個(gè)漢字和18,000英語(yǔ)單詞。英語(yǔ)單詞。、這本字典大約有、這本字典大約有10,000字。字。、英漢部分的英語(yǔ)單詞后面都有相對(duì)應(yīng)的漢語(yǔ)。、英漢部分的英語(yǔ)單詞后面都有相對(duì)應(yīng)的漢語(yǔ)。、所有的漢字都有英語(yǔ)翻譯，這些翻譯有助于更精確地理解漢字。、所有的漢字都有英語(yǔ)翻譯，這些翻譯有助于更精確地理解漢字。、盡管沒有小本的、盡管沒有小本的新華字典新華字

15、典那樣容易攜帶，那樣容易攜帶，英漢英漢/漢英漢英字典還是更受學(xué)生們的歡迎。字典還是更受學(xué)生們的歡迎。、對(duì)于常見的單詞來(lái)說(shuō)，它還含有充足的例子。、對(duì)于常見的單詞來(lái)說(shuō)，它還含有充足的例子。、它提供了大量的用法注解。、它提供了大量的用法注解。三、語(yǔ)句使用建議三、語(yǔ)句使用建議英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略9、它有相當(dāng)多的例句和注解。、它有相當(dāng)多的例句和注解。10、由于其易用和全面，我也經(jīng)常使用這本字典。、由于其易用和全面，我也經(jīng)常使用這本字典。11、我向所有中文學(xué)習(xí)者推薦這本字典。、我向所有中文學(xué)習(xí)者推薦這本字典。12、因?yàn)樗鼡碛衅渌值洳辉鴵碛械臇|西，所以我說(shuō)它很、因?yàn)樗鼡碛衅渌值洳辉鴵碛械臇|西，所以我

16、說(shuō)它很有用。有用。13、平均三個(gè)中國(guó)人就有一個(gè)擁有這本字典。、平均三個(gè)中國(guó)人就有一個(gè)擁有這本字典。14、總體上說(shuō)，它特別有用，是本很有價(jià)值的字典。、總體上說(shuō)，它特別有用，是本很有價(jià)值的字典。15、與其他字典相比，這本字典十分有用。、與其他字典相比，這本字典十分有用。16、總而言之，要選漢語(yǔ)字典，這是最好的選擇之一。、總而言之，要選漢語(yǔ)字典，這是最好的選擇之一。英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略1、The English-Chinese, Chinese-English format makes it convenient for students to cross-reference words.2、T

17、his dictionary is actually a two-way dictionary: one half is English/Chinese and the other half is Chinese/English, containing some 20,000 Chinese words and 18,000 English words.3、This dictionary has roughly 10,000 words.4、The E/C section has the English word followed by the Chinese equivalent.5、All

18、 Chinese characters are followed by English translation, which helps you understand the characters more accurately.6、While not as portable as the smaller XD, the E/C C/E was more warmly welcomed by my students.7、For common words it also includes efficient examples.8、It provides lots of usage notes.英

19、語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略 9、It has a good number of example sentences with necessary usage notes.10、I use this dictionary a lot due to its ease of use and its completeness.11、I highly recommend this dictionary for all learners of mandarin Chinese language.12、I have found this dictionary to be very helpful because

20、 it has what many Chinese dictionaries do not have.13、On average, one in three Chinese own a copy of the dictionary.14、Overall, it is extremely useful and a good value.15、This dictionary is incredibly useful comparing to other ones. 16、In short, its one of your best options for a Chinese dictionary.

21、英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略1、高考范文高考范文Dear Steve, Im so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese. Id like to recommend the following two dictionaries. The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. Be

22、sides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word. Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary, and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and XD c

23、osts 11 yuan. Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries. (111 words)四、范文欣賞四、范文欣賞英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略2、考場(chǎng)高分范文、考場(chǎng)高分范文Dear Steve, Thank you very much for your last letter which asked me something about how to choose a dictionary for learning Chinese. Here I strongly recommend you the followin

24、g two which may be useful to you. One of them is the English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary, which will cost you 52 yuan. It contains some 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. As it has lots of examples showing how to use the words, it will be much valuable for the beginners like you.

25、The other one, Xinhua Dictionary, which charges you only 11 yuan and has a collection of 10,000 Chinese words. It is the most commonly used one in China. If you need my help with your Chinese please write to me. (120 words)英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略3、教師范文、教師范文Dear Steve, Very glad to have received your letter, sa

26、ying that you and your classmates are learning English. I wish you good luck with your efforts in Chinese learning. In your letter you also ask what Chinese dictionaries to use. Here are the two that I highly recommend. An ideal tool for study, the English-Chinese & ChineseEnglish dictionary col

27、lects 20,000 Chinese words and 18,000 English words. Abundant examples illustrate how and when a word can be used. As a must-have reference for beginners, the dictionary is worth the price, 52 yuan. The Xinhua Dictionary, consisting of 10,000 Chinese words, has been the most influential Chinese-only

28、 dictionary available. The dictionary is relatively small, easy to carry and affordable, costing only 11 yuan. If you have further questions, let me know. (128 words)英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略 普通高校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試大綱普通高校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試大綱中英語(yǔ)中英語(yǔ)學(xué)科書面表達(dá)的學(xué)科書面表達(dá)的“評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)”中指出，評(píng)分時(shí)，中指出，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)該注意應(yīng)該注意“應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量、上下應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量、上下文的連貫性和語(yǔ)言

29、的得體性文的連貫性和語(yǔ)言的得體性”；最高檔次的給；最高檔次的給分要求中還要求考生能夠分要求中還要求考生能夠“應(yīng)用較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)應(yīng)用較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；構(gòu)和詞匯；盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯，具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言用用能力；有效地使用詞匯，具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言用用能力；有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊”等等。等等。這些要求在上述三篇范文中，尤其是最后兩篇這些要求在上述三篇范文中，尤其是最后兩篇范文中，都有較好的體現(xiàn)。范文中，都有較好的體現(xiàn)。五、范文評(píng)析五、范文評(píng)析英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略 范文中能夠通過(guò)從屬連詞（第范文中能夠通過(guò)從屬連詞

30、（第2 2篇）、非限制性定語(yǔ)篇）、非限制性定語(yǔ)從句（第從句（第2 2篇）、同位語(yǔ)（第篇）、同位語(yǔ)（第3 3篇）和現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)（第篇）和現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)（第1 1、3 3篇）等語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)構(gòu)建長(zhǎng)句，使多個(gè)要點(diǎn)能夠在一個(gè)句篇）等語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)構(gòu)建長(zhǎng)句，使多個(gè)要點(diǎn)能夠在一個(gè)句子中得以表達(dá)，從而使意義更為連貫、文章更為流暢。本子中得以表達(dá)，從而使意義更為連貫、文章更為流暢。本案的并列信息比較多，如價(jià)格、擁有詞匯量等，但是上面案的并列信息比較多，如價(jià)格、擁有詞匯量等，但是上面提到的多種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，使文章擺脫了內(nèi)容上的乏味，提到的多種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，使文章擺脫了內(nèi)容上的乏味，變得很耐讀變得很耐讀. . 范文中也

31、體現(xiàn)了較強(qiáng)的詞匯運(yùn)用能力。在范文中也體現(xiàn)了較強(qiáng)的詞匯運(yùn)用能力。在“考場(chǎng)高分考場(chǎng)高分范文范文”中，中，containcontain、chargecharge、a collection ofa collection of等的正確等的正確運(yùn)用，無(wú)疑為文章增色不少；而運(yùn)用，無(wú)疑為文章增色不少；而“教師范文教師范文”中的用詞亦中的用詞亦有可圈可點(diǎn)之處，通過(guò)有可圈可點(diǎn)之處，通過(guò)effortsefforts、collectcollect、abundantabundant、illustrateillustrate、consist ofconsist of、influentialinfluential、avai

32、lableavailable、relativelyrelatively等詞，彰顯了作者的詞匯量，這與評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中等詞，彰顯了作者的詞匯量，這與評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的要求也是相吻合的。的要求也是相吻合的。英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略0505年浙江卷英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)年浙江卷英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)一、題目（滿分一、題目（滿分30分）分）你的英國(guó)朋友正在做一個(gè)課題：世界各地的生日慶祝方式。他請(qǐng)你介紹中國(guó)學(xué)生過(guò)生日的方式。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文：（一）通常方式：1.生日聚會(huì)2.生日禮物3.生日祝福（二）我認(rèn)為更有意義的慶祝方式和理由詞數(shù)：100-120英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略二、高考范文二、高考范文Chinesestudents

33、celebratetheirbirthdaysindifferentways,butthemostcommonwayistohavefundrinking,singinganddancing.Onthebirthday,oneusuallyreceivesnicegiftsandgoodwishesfromfriendsandparents.Sometimes,parentswillprepareaspecialdinneroracaketoshowtheirlovefortheirchildren.Sincebirthdaycelebrationisoneoftheimportantacti

34、vitiesinoneslife,itcanbedoneinmoremeaningfulways.Forexample,wecanbuysomeflowersorcookadeliciousmealforourmothersonthatday.Inthisway,weexpressthankstoourparentsinreturnfortheirlove.(105words)英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略三、考場(chǎng)優(yōu)秀作文三、考場(chǎng)優(yōu)秀作文InChina,themostcommonwaytocelebrateabirthdayistoholdabirthdayparty.Thebirthdaypers

35、onusuallyinvitessomeclassmatesandotherrelativestothepartyinwhichhisfamilymembersandfriendswillgettogetherandhaveagoodtime.Abigcakewithcandlesonitisoftenseenandthebirthdaysongissungontheoccasion.Peoplewhoareinvitedwillbringgiftsaswellastheirbetwishes.However,Ithinkthereisanotherwaytomakeabirthdaycele

36、brationmoremeaningful,todoagooddeedformothers.Wecanhelpthemcookingorcleaning.Althoughthiswonthelpthemmuch,weatleastshowourloveforthem.(119words)英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略四、教師范文四、教師范文InChinabirthdaypartiesareimportantsocialgatheringswherefriendsandrelativeswouldbringgiftstothechildhavingtheirbirthday.Birthdaycards

37、withwarmwordsofgoodwishesareoftensent.Afeastisusuallygiventotheguestsandnoodles,extra-longtosymbolizelonglife,areservedinhonorofthebirthdaychild.Althoughthesetraditionshavebeenpracticedforgenerations,peoplecancreatebirthdaytraditionsoftheirown,whichIthinkshouldfocusonthanksgivingratherthanconsumptio

38、n.Childrenshouldsetasidesometimethinkingwhattheyarethankfulforandwhattheycandoinreturn.Onealternativeistohelpwashthedishesatnightordootherchoresfortheirmothersbecauseitistheirmothersbirthday.(124words)英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略五、可用于本題的一些好句子五、可用于本題的一些好句子BirthdaypartiesarealwaysamongthehighlightsofeachyearforChines

39、estudents.Alotofpeopleareinvitedincludingneighbors,friendsandco-workerseveniftheydonthavekidsaroundthebirthdaychildsage.AdultscongratulatechildrenonbecomingayearolderbypresentingthemwithredenvelopesthatcontainLuckyMoney.英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略Whenboysorgirlsturn10,theyhaveahugeparty.Onthedaywehaveafamilydinner

40、withlotsofinvitedguests.Itdoesnotseemlikeabirthdaywithoutnoodles.Thecelebrationincludesnoodlesrepresentinglonglife.Thebirthdaychildwearsentirelynewclothestomarktheoccasion.Oneofthebest-receivedgiftsistheredenvelopeofmoney.LikeBritishstudents,themajorityofChinesechildrencelebratebirthdayswithacaketop

41、pedwithlightedcandles.Whenthecakeissetbeforetheguestofhonor,heorsheissupposedtomakeawish,withouttellinganyonewhatitis.英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略Acakeismade,andcandlesareputontopbasedonhowoldthepersonis.Attheendofthehappybirthdaysong,thebirthdaypersonblowsoutthecandlesandallguestsapplaudorcheer.Thebirthdaychildcan

42、choosewheretoeatoutthatnight.Thekidsaretakenouttotheirdesiredplacewheretheycanbuyanythingtheywantwithinacertainpricerange.Ithinkweshouldcreateourowntraditions,makingbirthdaycelebrationmorespecialandunique.Thebirthdaypersongetspresentsbutalsomustgiveonepresenttotheentirefamily.Wecanvisitthehospitalwh

43、erewewereborn.Insteadofgivingmoneyasagift,parentscanbuytheirchildrenbooks.Eachyearadifferentthemeshouldbechosenforthebirthday.英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略六、評(píng)價(jià)與指導(dǎo)六、評(píng)價(jià)與指導(dǎo)1.英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)的題型從過(guò)去詳細(xì)的中文提綱，慢慢演化為簡(jiǎn)潔的圖畫列表，到今天某一話題下的自由表達(dá)，走過(guò)了20多年的道路。本年度的書面表達(dá)半開放的命題方式，既是對(duì)新課程理念的響應(yīng)，也是20多年探索的最新選擇，應(yīng)該說(shuō)這一步并非是試探或偶然，而是走得非常堅(jiān)決。英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略2開放或半開放的作

44、文模式，寫作容易落入俗套，因此這種題型要挑戰(zhàn)我們過(guò)去英語(yǔ)作文只關(guān)注語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的狹隘思維，轉(zhuǎn)而更多地去關(guān)注新的主意甚至是立意?！敖處煼段摹敝械腷ecauseitistheirmothersbirthday一句，就是很好的“主意（理由）”，是尋常作文中不易發(fā)現(xiàn)的亮點(diǎn)。如果能夠提出新鮮的主意，如Wecanvisitthehospitalwherewewereborn等，相信可以贏得更多的贊賞分。然而新鮮的主意，并非能天上掉得下來(lái)，而是要仰仗大量的閱讀和輸入。越開放的作文題目，越要求平時(shí)有大量的閱讀經(jīng)歷。課堂上積極回應(yīng)教師的brainstorming、mindmap等任務(wù)，認(rèn)真傾聽同學(xué)發(fā)言也不無(wú)裨益。英

45、語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略3.開放或半開放的作文模式，題干通常比較簡(jiǎn)潔，因此要更加注意審題。在本例中，同學(xué)們比較容易忽略“更有意義”、“理由”等信息。忽略前者，容易導(dǎo)致思想內(nèi)容不夠積極。比如有同學(xué)說(shuō)：Wecanplaytricksonthebirthdayperson，或者：kissingisthebestwaybecauseitdoesntcostmuch，就有調(diào)侃的意味，不夠恰當(dāng)。忽略后者，容易導(dǎo)致文章內(nèi)容不夠充實(shí)，比如有同學(xué)說(shuō)Weshouldsaythankstoourparentsandgivethempresentsinstead，接著就嘎然而止，缺乏了細(xì)致性和豐富性。英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)

46、用策略0606年浙江卷英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)年浙江卷英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)一一 題目題目當(dāng)前不少文學(xué)作品被改編成電影。有人選擇電影，有人喜歡讀原著。請(qǐng)你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”為題，按照下列要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文：看電影：省時(shí)、有趣、易懂讀原著：細(xì)節(jié)更多、語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美我的看法及理由注意：1.詞數(shù)100-120，文章題目和開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。2.參考詞匯：original work或book in the original（原著） Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better

47、to see the film than to read the book in the original.英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略二二 高考范文高考范文 Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually

48、 more interesting, and it is easier to follow. Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful. Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have mo

49、re reason for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略三三 考場(chǎng)優(yōu)秀作文考場(chǎng)優(yōu)秀作文 Film or book, which do you prefer? Som

50、e of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. Compared with reading the original work, they think, seeing the film requires less time, which no doubt is an outstanding advantage in this crazily rounding society. Seeing the film is also much more fun and helps

51、 understanding. Others, however, prefer reading the original work. Thats because the work has more details of the story. Also, the beautiful language in the work has great appeal for the readers. I prefer reading the original work. In my opinion, books lead us to think, while seeing the film makes u

52、s lazy. Besides, reading the original work can also improve our reading skills.英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略四四 教師范文教師范文Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. In their opinion, the film is much more interesting and easier to underst

53、and than the book. Whats more, to see the film saves us much time to know about the whole story. Howerver, some others hold a different view. They think that they can get much more details of the story from the original work. Meanwhile, the beautiful language in the book is also a great feast for th

54、eir mind. As for me, I prefer to see the film. Thats because I like to see the carefully designed scenes of the story. Besides, I can enjoy some beautiful music at the same time, which is especially important to a music lover like me!英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略五五 可用于本文的一些好句子可用于本文的一些好句子The reason is that it takes l

55、ess time to understand the whole story.Thats because we can more easily understand the story through the film.Some others hold a different view. Some others dont share the same opinion.Personally, I agree with the second view.As for me, I would rather read the original book than see the film.In my o

56、pinion, reading the original book is much better than seeing the film.英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own.I will be able to see the carefully designed scenes as well as to enjoy some beautiful music.The original work tells more detailed information of the story a

57、nd is well written in beautiful language.Whats more, I will be able to better understand the authors ideas.In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.I think to see the film has many more advantages over to read the book in the original.英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略六六 評(píng)價(jià)與指導(dǎo)評(píng)價(jià)與指導(dǎo)1

58、.06年書面表達(dá)延續(xù)了05年的半開放的模式，但在表達(dá)的形式上還是有跡可循的。作文的內(nèi)容是關(guān)于看書還是看電影的兩種不同意見的對(duì)比以及作者的看法和理由，這一形式的書面表達(dá)在前些年的高考中曾多次出現(xiàn)。因此，文章可以分成三個(gè)段落，脈絡(luò)十分清晰，便于學(xué)生的組織。英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略2. 本例書面表達(dá)的題干也延續(xù)了05年的特點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔。所以審題環(huán)節(jié)至關(guān)重要。平時(shí)應(yīng)引導(dǎo)學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)在簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言中捕捉隱含的信息，以進(jìn)行合乎英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣的表達(dá)。如若不然，則很容易出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤。如有學(xué)生的文章中出現(xiàn)有Film requires less time的句子，就是沒有分清被比較的是看書和看電影。也正是因?yàn)轭}干簡(jiǎn)潔，文章很容易被

59、寫得過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)單而沒有文采，進(jìn)而不能達(dá)到所要求的字?jǐn)?shù)。如第一部分就有學(xué)生寫成了Seeing film saves time , and is very interesting and easy understanding.這需要平時(shí)的用心體會(huì)和練習(xí)。英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略3.段落間和段落中的銜接過(guò)渡在這種形式的文章中顯得比較重要。而很多學(xué)生在一些具有關(guān)聯(lián)意義的詞匯的選擇上存在困難。如有學(xué)生將while錯(cuò)用為副詞，將第二部分的開頭表達(dá)成While some others prefer reading the original work。也有學(xué)生在第一部分中用above all來(lái)表示看電影的第一個(gè)優(yōu)

60、點(diǎn)Above all, seeing the film saves much time。英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)運(yùn)用策略一、故事或人物介紹一、故事或人物介紹 第二章 美國(guó)學(xué)生習(xí)作賞析My Mum My mum is 36 and she goes to adultschool. She works at home by cleaning, cooking ect. Her full name is Robyn Tracie Ball. She has brown hair and brown eyes, and she usually wears shorts and a t-shirt unless we