1819 Unit 1 Section Ⅴ　Writing——記敘文

1、Section Writing記敘文寫(xiě)作技法指導(dǎo)eq avs4al(文體指導(dǎo))本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是寫(xiě)一篇敘事類(lèi)記敘文。該類(lèi)作文以敘述事件為主，要通過(guò)完整的故事情節(jié)和生動(dòng)形象的語(yǔ)言，使讀者在享受故事情節(jié)的同時(shí)有所感悟。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意把記敘文的六要素：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、原因和結(jié)果等交代清楚。其基本框架結(jié)構(gòu)為：1開(kāi)頭交代清楚事件的背景。2主體主要敘述事件的發(fā)生、經(jīng)過(guò)及結(jié)果。3結(jié)尾呼應(yīng)標(biāo)題，發(fā)表感想、愿望等。注意事項(xiàng)：1標(biāo)題：如有標(biāo)題，標(biāo)題一定要明確，能點(diǎn)明事件或主題。2人稱(chēng)：通常用第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)。3時(shí)態(tài)：在敘事過(guò)程中，一般用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。在描寫(xiě)背景或某景象時(shí)，常用過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)，這樣顯得更加生動(dòng)形象。

2、eq avs4al(亮點(diǎn)句式)1Although it happened three years ago，I never forgot the evening party.2Last week I had an amusing experience.3I was walking in the street when .4When we arrived，they gave us a warm welcome.5At last，they saw us off and said goodbye.6We had a good time.7I learn a lot from it.8If it had

3、 not been for Li Hua，I would have got wet through.滿(mǎn)分佳作構(gòu)建eq avs4al(寫(xiě)作任務(wù))假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面五幅圖畫(huà)寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹你和家人慶祝春節(jié)的經(jīng)過(guò)。參考詞匯：the Spring Festival Gala春晚the Lunar New Year Eve除夕夜eq avs4al(審題謀篇)體裁記敘文話(huà)題節(jié)日活動(dòng)時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)/過(guò)去時(shí)人稱(chēng)第一人稱(chēng)結(jié)構(gòu)首段：總述節(jié)日的情況中段：根據(jù)圖表的順序詳細(xì)介紹節(jié)日活動(dòng)尾段：表達(dá)美好的愿望eq avs4al(遣詞造句).對(duì)接單元詞匯1full of fun充滿(mǎn)樂(lè)趣2be drowned in沉浸在

4、3admire欣賞4set off燃放；引爆5celebrate慶祝6look forward to盼望.巧用單元語(yǔ)法和句型(一)完成句子1我們聚集在一起，吃了一頓豐盛的晚餐。We all gathered around and had a big dinner.2然后，春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(huì)開(kāi)始了。Then the Spring Festival Gala began.3據(jù)報(bào)道春晚相當(dāng)精彩。It was reported that the Spring Festival Gala was wonderful.The Spring Festival Gala was reported to be won

5、derful.4許多明星都在舞臺(tái)上露面，他們給我們帶來(lái)了如此多的樂(lè)趣以至于我們都沉浸其中，欣賞他們的表演。Many stars turned up on the stage，bringing us so much pleasure that we were all drowned in admiring their performances.5午夜時(shí)分，我們?nèi)挤疟夼趹c祝新年的到來(lái)。The midnight saw us setting off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year.6黎明時(shí)，我們盛裝打扮，挨家挨戶(hù)的拜年。A

6、t dawn，we all dressed up and paid a visit door to door.(二)句式升級(jí)7用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ)改寫(xiě)句1We all gathered around having a big dinner.8用全部倒裝句改寫(xiě)句2Then began the Spring Festival Gala.9用as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句改寫(xiě)句3As was reported，the Spring Festival Gala was wonderful.eq avs4al(妙筆成篇)【參考范文】The Spring Festival was really full

7、of fun.First，we all gathered around having a big dinner.Then began the Spring Festival Gala.Just as was reported，it was wonderful.Many stars turned up on the stage，bringing us so much pleasure that we were all drowned in admiring their performances.The midnight saw us setting off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. Then we ate dumplings.At dawn，we all dressed up and paid a visit door to door.We all