專題04-2021年廣東一模讀后續(xù)寫-《洪亮英語》研讀2021年各地名校英語模擬題讀后續(xù)寫課件(20頁PPT)

1、讀后續(xù)寫2021年普通高等學(xué)校招生 全國統(tǒng)一考試廣東一模Continuation Writing第1頁，共20頁。 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整短文。續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右。 On a freezing morning of December, two police officers were patrolling the streets. Suddenly, the walkie-talkie(對講機(jī)) on Alan, one of the officers, rang. “The cake shop near the City Museum ha

2、s reported a burglary (竊案). Please rush to the scene immediately”, said the electronic voice.The two policemen quickly arrived at the shop, only to find that the scene showed no sign of crimes at all. Curiously, they checked the monitor and found that a thin woman broke open the window and climbed i

3、nto the store at 5: 20 a. m. Instead of第2頁，共20頁。searching around, she walked straight into the storage room, stole cheese, chocolate, butter and other ingredients for a cake, and then ran away down the road. Both policemen felt quite confused about her behavior. One of the le shop assistants identif

4、ied the thief as Clara, a single mother who lived nearby. She has an eight-year-old boy to take care of and lives in poverty. Moments later, the two officers arrived at Claras house. Bob, another officer, pulled out a gun and was about to break in. But Alan told him to put the gun away and knocked g

5、ently.第3頁，共20頁。 The door opened and out came a very thin woman. From the outline of her figure, Alan recognized that she was exactly the thief. The woman, Clara, immediately understood the situation when she saw the two policemen. She buried her face in her hands and sat down on the le floor. At tha

6、t very moment, a childs voice broke the silence, “Mom, is anyone coming my birthday? Invite them in, please.”After hearing the boys words, Clara stood up and begged in a low voice, “Officer, I did steal those things, but theres nothing else I could do. Its my babys birthday, and Ive got neither job

7、nor money. Please dont take those things away. Ive just used them to make him a cake.”第4頁，共20頁。注意： 1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Looking into the womans teary eyes, Alan understood and walked into the house. Bob nodded thoughtfully and asked, “What about the things she stole?”第5頁，共20頁。Storyw

8、henwherewhowhathowwhyOn a freezing morning of Decemberin the streetstwo policemen, Alan and Bob，a thief named Clara and her eight-year-old boya burglary in the cake shop near the City MuseumClara wanted to make her son a birthday cake一、準(zhǔn)確理解材料，理清人物事件 1. 淺層信息理解 首先要審題：體裁：_；人稱：_；主體時態(tài)：_。記敘文第一人稱一般過去時第6頁，共

9、20頁。2. 深層信息理解 理清故事的發(fā)展線索（How）PARAGRAPH（段落）及空間線索BEHAVIORS（行為）TOPIC（段意）were patrolling，rang，reported，rushThe two policemen heard of a burglary. Para. 1（in the streets）第7頁，共20頁。2. 深層信息理解 理清故事的發(fā)展線索（How）PARAGRAPH（段落）及空間線索BEHAVIORS（行為）TOPIC（段意）arrived，checked，broke open，climbed into，stole，ran away，felt qui

10、te confused，identifiedAfter checking, the two policemen found Clara was the thief.Para. 2 & 3（at the shop）第8頁，共20頁。2. 深層信息理解 理清故事的發(fā)展線索（How）PARAGRAPH（段落）及空間線索BEHAVIORS（行為）TOPIC（段意）arrived，put the gun away，knocked gently，recognized，immediately understood，buried，broke the silence，begged，did steal，dont

11、take those things awayClara recognized her burglary only to make her son a birthday cake.Para. 4，5，6 & 7（at Claras house）第9頁，共20頁。3. 整合本篇的故事情節(jié)和情感線索： 整合本篇的故事梗概：12月一個寒冷的早晨，兩名警察在街上巡邏，發(fā)現(xiàn)一家蛋糕店發(fā)生盜竊，經(jīng)過調(diào)查發(fā)現(xiàn)是一位名叫克拉拉的單身母親所為，為了給她剛剛八歲的兒子過生日,克拉拉懇求警官不要拿走偷了那些東西，小孩邀請警官進(jìn)去一起過生日 情感線索：語調(diào)問題：touched，understandable，pitifu

12、l；性格問題：Alan and Bob（confused，decisive, quick，gentle，considerate），Clara（caring，tense，helpless）；文中感悟：Love is late but never absent.第10頁，共20頁。二、分析續(xù)寫段首，確定續(xù)寫方向根據(jù)段首句1（看著女人含淚的眼睛，Alan明白了，走進(jìn)了屋子）及空間線索詞into the house，設(shè)想以下問題獲取寫作要點： Which words or phrases catch your eyes? (teary eyes，understood，walked into)What

13、did Alan understand? How did the boy tell the policemen? What had happened in the house?第11頁，共20頁。根據(jù)段首句 2（Bob點了點頭，若有所思地問道：“那她偷的東西怎么辦?”），并結(jié)合上段內(nèi)容可知，本段要續(xù)寫尋路過程，設(shè)想以下問題：Which words or phrases catch your eyes? (nodded thoughtfully，the things she stole)Why did Bob nod thoughtfully？How did the policemen deal

14、 with the problem?What did I learn from the story?二、分析續(xù)寫段首，確定續(xù)寫方向第12頁，共20頁。三、借助文本資源，創(chuàng)設(shè)續(xù)寫情節(jié) 根據(jù)已知人物、事件及續(xù)寫段落首句預(yù)測故事總體的發(fā)展。 Paragraph 1：開端 看著女人含淚的眼睛，Alan明白了，走進(jìn)了屋子故事發(fā)展看見坐在輪椅上的小男孩準(zhǔn)備吃生日蛋糕高潮警官與這一家人一起慶祝生日。 Paragraph 2：結(jié)局思考如何處理Clara盜竊之事及妥善解決感悟 愛雖遲，但永不缺席。第13頁，共20頁。四、參考范文One possible version Looking into the woma

15、ns teary eyes, Alan understood and walked into the house. To their surprise, they found a child sitting in a shabby wheelchair, enjoying his cake. Upon seeing their coming in, the little figure yelled excitedly. “Welcome to my birthday!” Without hesitation, Alan walked forward, hugging the sweet cre

16、ature tightly as if the boy were out of breath. They sang birthday songs with the family together and shared the第14頁，共20頁。四、參考范文delicious cake together, with the room full of oceans of happiness. At last, the two officers had to say goodbye to them. On their way back to the station, Alan murmured to

17、 Bob, “I dont think that woman should be taken to the police station. Bob nodded thoughtfully and asked, “What about the things she stole?” Alan replied, “Although what Clara did was wrong indeed, she was just a helpless mother and it would be too cruel for us to take away a desperate第15頁，共20頁。四、參考范

18、文mother who occasionally made a mistake because of her child！Moreover, never can we take away a childs birthday cake.” After returning to the cake shop, they explained the case to the shop owner and then paid for the stolen materials for the mother. Knowing what the officer had done, Clara felt ashamed of her theft and took the initiative to go to the police station, asking for her punishment. She was determined to mend her fault in her own way. Love is late but never absent.第16頁，共20頁。 原文第一段根據(jù)文本尾段背景Clara沒有工作為了給孩子做生日蛋糕，偷了一些材料東西，孩子邀請后，第一段續(xù)寫了警官進(jìn)入房子，所見所聞所做，第二段根據(jù)首句