【課件】讀后續(xù)寫專題Continuation Writing 課件-2022屆高三英語寫作專項

1、Continuation WritingStory Continuation WritingLead in: A Guessing GameThe first letter of this word is “a”There are five letters in this wordThe second-to-last letter is “p”CluesLead in: A Guessing GameRationality 合理性Consistency 連貫性 Tortuous Plots 曲折性Step 1: Basic ElementsWhoWhereWhenWhatDiane Ray w

2、as completely self-centred and very spoilt(寵壞的). Her parents gave her everything that she wanted, knowing that she would throw a tantrum(耍脾氣) if they did not satisfy her desire. She would scream(尖叫) and lie on the floor drumming her heels. Finally her parents always gave in. That was why she was alo

3、ne on the beach, wearing an expensive swimsuit. It had taken a big tantrum to get her parents to buy it for her. They were back at the beach house, recovering from the tantrum she had thrown when they told her that it was too dangerous to go diving alone. Dangerous? she had said.“You just dont want

4、me to have fun. Im going and if you try to stop me, Ill scream. “What are you doing?” a voice asked. Diane jumped and looked around. She did not know that the man was there until he spoke. “Im going to dive, she answered coldly. “You shouldnt swim today, the man advised.“There is a storm(暴風(fēng)雨)coming

5、up. “You should mind your own business!” Diane replied and walked into the gentle waves.“If you go out there youll be sorry, the man called after her. But she did not want to reply. Diane slipped into the water and dived happily until white waves began rolling in and it became harder to swim against

6、 the current(水流). Sea water hit against her face, making it difficult to breathe. Oh,why did I not listen to the advice? Diane regretted.Step 1: Basic ElementsWhoWhereWhenWhaton a beachin the seaDiane Ray, Dianes parents, a manDiane went to dive alone.When recovering from the tantrumStep 2: Read for

7、 the Main IdeaPlotsDianes feelings Beginning DevelopmentClimaxEndDiane Ray was completely self-centred and very spoilt(寵壞的). Her parents gave her everything that she wanted, knowing that she would throw a tantrum(耍脾氣) if they did not satisfy her desire. She would scream(尖叫) and lie on the floor drum

8、ming her heels. Finally her parents always gave in. That was why she was alone on the beach, wearing an expensive swimsuit. It had taken a big tantrum to get her parents to buy it for her. They were back at the beach house, recovering from the tantrum she had thrown when they told her that it was to

9、o dangerous to go diving alone. Dangerous? she had said.“You just dont want me to have fun. Im going and if you try to stop me, Ill scream. “What are you doing?” a voice asked. Diane jumped and looked around. She did not know that the man was there until he spoke. “Im going to dive, she answered col

10、dly. “You shouldnt swim today, the man advised.“There is a storm(暴風(fēng)雨)coming up. “You should mind your own business!” Diane replied and walked into the gentle waves.“If you go out there youll be sorry, the man called after her. But she did not want to reply. Diane slipped into the water and dived hap

11、pily until white waves began rolling in and it became harder to swim against the current(水流). Sea water hit against her face, making it difficult to breathe. Oh,why did I not listen to the advice? Diane regretted.PlotsDianes feelingsBeginningShe was alone on the beach with an expensive swimsuitinsis

12、tent(固執(zhí)的) and coldHer parents and a man warned her, but in vainDevelopmentShe slipped into the water and dived happilyhappyThe white waves began rolling in and it became difficule for her to swimscaredSea water hit against her face, making it difficult for her to breathregretfulClimaxFrightened, she

13、 began to screamfrightened.EndAfter Diane closed her bedrooms door, she was lost in thought.Step 3: Predict by QuestioningStep 3: Predict by QuestioningPair WorkWork in pairs, try to talk aboutthese questions with your partnersStep 4: Add Some Details 情感變化：動作描寫：語言描寫：Diane：frightenedgratefulashamed父母

14、：worriedbreathe a sigh of reliefrelieved, comfortingDiane溺水時的動作？得救后的行為？回家后的動作？父母的表現(xiàn)？周圍旁觀者的表現(xiàn)？Diane與父母之間的對話，與施救者之間的對話。Note:Pay attention to the change of places.After Diane closed her bedrooms door, she was lost in thought. _V Write your story!Frightened, she began to scream. _direct speech“” she sai

15、d.+ indirect speechshe said that Simple PastHow did she feel at that time?Who saved her？How did she deal with the problem?What did she think about?Step 4: Add Some Details 她感到羞愧，出去然后走向她母親。She_ _, went out and walked to her mother.你和爸爸很關(guān)心我，并給了我無私的愛。You and Dad have cared about me a lot, and given you

16、r_ _ to me.felt ashamedselfless loveStep 4: Add Some Details 她感到羞愧，出去然后走向她母親。(現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語), she went out and walked to her mother.你和爸爸很關(guān)心我，并給了我無私的愛。（who引導(dǎo)的定語從句）You and Dad Feeling ashamedwho have given your selfless love to me have cared about me a lot.Step 4: Add Some Details fear flooded over sb 某人心理充滿恐懼sbs face was dead with fright 他嚇得面無人色Step 4: Add Some Details Step 4: Add Some Details 哭眼含淚水 tears spring to ones eyes眼淚滾下臉頰 tears roll down ones cheeks大哭；啜泣 weep ones eyes out淚水模糊了視線 tears blur ones eyes/vision