短文改錯練習(xí)集錦

1、短文改錯專練（一一）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（人），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。AMarch29th,DearDiary,Imwritingthisatmyroom.ItsalmostmidnightandIhavetogettingupearlytomorrow,but

2、Icantsleep.Imthinkingaboutmyfuture!Everyday,myparentsasksme,“Whatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrow?”Theproblemis:Idontknow!Mymomalwayssays,“Beadoctor!”Andshedoesnttonderatdodtor,yuhavetostudyforaIong,longtimeandthatsnotherideaoffun.AlsoImreatbiologyattheschool.Mydadsays,“Beapilot!”Ishbateazy?HeknewIflying!No

3、wImgettingtiring,soImlaindown.BIhaveknownmyfriendRebeccaforalongtime.Wefirstlymetatafriendbirthdaypartyfiveyearsbefore.Wefoundoutthatwebothlikedsinginganddancing,soIinvitedRebeccaovertomyplace.Welistenedtothemusictogetherandsoonbecamebestfriends.Threeyearsago,RebeccaIlovedwalkingalongthebeautifullyb

4、each.Wetookalotofphotosandhadalotoffuns.Lastyear,Rebeccasfatherchangedherjob,andtheymovedtoothertown.Sincethenwehaventseeneachotherverymuch,butwevetalkedinthephoneandwevewrittenemailstoeachother.CDearJoe,Howareyou?ThankstoyourpostgoodtoknowwhenyoureOK.Ivegotnewstoo.Imgoingonholidaynextweekswithmybro

5、therandAnna,affrendschool.Weregoingtostayonafarmwithfourdays!Weregoingtolookaftertheanimalsanddoingsomehorse-ding.ImsureIllloveit.YouknowhowcrazyIamabouttheanimals!Iwanttolearnallaboutthecowsorthehorses.IhopeIwillhavesometimestogowalkinginthehills,too.Well,rightnowImgoingtofinishhomeworklotstodobefo

6、retheholiday!IllwritetoyouwhenIgetbacktotellingyouaboutmyholiday.Yours,NadiaDPeoplehadalwaysbeeninterestedinbees.Thisinterestmayhavebegunwiththehoneywhatbeesmake.Inthefact,ithasbeenfoundthatpeoplehavebeeneatinghoneyforthousandofyears.Inthemorerecentlypast,peoplewereinterestedinthewaybeesmadehoney.Th

7、eyadmiredthewaybeesseemedtoworkingsohard.SomeIanguagesevendevelopedexpressionsaboutpeopleworkinglikebees.InEnglish,forexample,wetalkwitha“busybee”.Nowscientistshasanewreasontobeinterestedinbees.Theyhavediscoveredthatbeesabletocommunicatewitheachother.Researchhasrevealedsomesurprisedfactsaboutthis,bu

8、ttherearestillmanymysteries.EYesterdayafternoon,ItooktheNo.6bustogohome.Itwascrowdedonthebus,andIhadlistenedtomusicbymyearphones.SuddenlyIsawthenameofthebusstopandeagertofindingit,soIwenttothebuscompaniesforhelp.Fortunate,attheLostandFound,Iseemybag.Iwantedtothankthepersonwhohadfoundmybag,andthestaf

9、ftheresaidthepersonhadntlefthisname.Howagoodman!FIreadaninterestedpieceofnewsonanewspapertoday.AccordingtoProfessorRichardWiseman,onlylessthanaquarteroftheBritishachievedtheirNewYeargoalsbecausetheydoitinthewrongway.Hestudied700volunteerswhomadeawiderangesofNewYeargoals,includingquittingsmoking,losi

10、ngtheweight,orgainingaqualification.Just22percentoftheparticipantsmanagedtomeetingtheirgoalsordescribedtheirprogresslike“verysuccessful.”Thereasonsomuchfailedwasthattheytookthewrongapproachandledbyself-helpbooksinthewrongway.Theytendedtospendalotoftimeonthinkingaboutthe“badthings”whatwoulchappenifth

11、eydidnotachievetheirgoalsinsteadoftakingaction.GLastweekends,Iwentshoppingbymyself.ItwasasunnydayandIfeelveryhappy.WhenIhadboughtanythingIneeded,Iwenttothebusstoptotakeabus.Unfortunately,thereweretoomuchpeopleatthebusstop.Thenitwasmyturntogeton,therewasnoroom.Ihadtowaitthenextbus.Suddenly,itstartedt

12、orain.Ihadnochoicebuttocallataxi.Halfwaythroughthejourney,thetaxiwasbrokedown.IwasfilledwithangrywhenIsawanemptierbusgoby.Finally,Idecidedtowalkhomeinarain.Whatanuniuckyday!HMynameisLiHuaandIwantedtobeclassmonitor.Iamresponsible,sociable,oreasy-going.Ienjoyservingothers.Additionally,Ihavevaryinteres

13、ts.Ilovesingingandplayingthedrumsaswellsoccer.Iamalsoagoodlistenerandbealwaysopentodifferentopinions.IamconfidentthatIcandothejobgood.Beingastudentmyself,firstly,Iwillcreateanacademicatmospheresothateveryoneinourclassescanimprovetheirstudies.Forthosestudentswhoisfallingbehind,Iwillfindwaystohelpthem

14、tocatchup.Secondly,Iwillserveasabridgeamongteachersandstudents.Finally,Iwillarrangepartiessowecanrelax.IbelieveIamtherightpersontothispost.答案A1.atmyroom.atfin2.havetogetting.gettingfget3.myparentsasks.asksfask4.whenyougrow?grow后力卩up5.Andshedoesnt.AndfBut6.notherideaof.herfmy7.attheschool.去掉the8.Hekn

15、ewIhate.knewfknows9.Imgettingtiring.tiringftired101.Imlaindown.lainflyingB1.Wefirstlymet.firstly-rstfi2.fiveyearsbefore.beforefago3.tothemusic.去掉the4.goonholiday.go前加to5.Itisgreat.isfwas6.beautifullybeach.beautifullyfbeautiful7.alotoffuns.funsffun8.changedherjob.herfhis9.toothertown.otherfanother10)

16、.n/overC1.Thankstoyour.toffor2.toknowwhen.whenfthat或去掉when3.nextweekswith.weeksfweek4.withfourdays!withffor5.anddoingsome.doingfdo6.abouttheanimals!去掉the7.orthehorses.orfand8.havesometimes.timesftime9.finishhomework.homework前力卩my10L.totellingyou.tellingftellD1.Peoplehadalways.hadfhave

17、2.whatbeesmake.whatfthat/which3.Inthefact.去掉the4.thousandofyears.thousandfthousands5.recentlypast.recentlyfrecent6.workingsohard.workingfwork7.wetalkwith.withfabout8.hasanewreason.hasfhave9.beesableto.able前力卩are10L.surprisedfacts.surprisedfsurprisingE1.Ihadlistened.去掉had2.bymyearphones.byfwith3.that

18、Ishould.thatfwhere4.businhurry.hurry前加paniesfcompany7.Fortunate,atthe.FortunatefFortunately.Iseemybag.andthestaff.Howagoodman!.aninterestedpiece.theydoitin.awideranges.4.losingtheweight.5.managedtomeeting.6.likeverysuccessfke7.somuchfailed.andledby.timeonthinking.whatwouldhappen.Lastweekends.Ifeelve

19、ryhappy.anythingIneeded.toomuchpeople.Thenitwasmy.waitthenextbus.wasbrokedown.filledwithangry.anemptierbus.inarain.Iwantedtobe.oreasy-going.havevaryinterests.seesawandbutHowWhatFinterestedinterestingdodidrangesrange去掉themeetingmeetasmuchmanyled前力卩wereonin或去掉onwhatthatGweekendsweekendfeelfeltanything

20、everythingmuchmanyThenWhenthe前加for去掉wasangryngeremptieremptyatheHwantedwantorandvaryvaried.aswellsoccer.bealwaysopen.dothejobgood.inourclasses.whoisfalling.amongteachers.tothispost.soccer前力卩as去掉begoodwellclassesclassisareamongbetweentofor短文改錯專練（二）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有

21、兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（人），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。ADearSarah,ImwritingbecauseIwanttoapologizetowhatIdidlastweek.ImreallysIknowwesaid8:30,andIwouldvegottenhereontimeifeverythingeiadntgowrongly.Iwaslatebecausemy

22、watchbrokeandIdidntknowwhatthetimeitwas.Soyousee,Iwouldvearrivedontimeifmywatchhadntbroken.ThenIhavetowalkbecauseIdmissedthebus.AndthenIfelloverandmytrousersgotdirty,soIhadtogohomeandgetchanging.ThenIdecidedtocatchanotherbuses,butitwastoolate.Iwouldhavephonedyouandmybrotherhadtakenmymobilephone.Anyw

23、ay,Ihopeyouarenttooangrierwithme.Hopetohearyousoon.Yours,JackBTodaymyclassmateandIwenttoafarmforatrip.Igetupatsixoclockasetoffbybus.Onthebus,someofussang,andsomeofustalked.Weallhadgoodtime.Twohourslate,wearrivedatthegateofthefarm,thatthefarmerswerewaitingtogiveusawarmwelcome.Afterwewereshownaroundth

24、ebigfarm,theybegantoplanttrees.Itwasreallyagoodwaytogettingclosetonatureandprotecttheenvironmentatthesametime.Next,wehadapicnicanditwasgreatfuntoeatontheopenair.Finally,wewenthomeathalfpastfour.Althoughallofuswastired,ourtripwasreallyverymoreunforgettable.Bothmyfatherandmotherhasbeenwantingmetostudy

25、abroad.TheythinkthatitsnaturaltomasteraforeignIanguageinanEngspeakingcountryandthatstudyingabroadatearlyagewillenablemetobedependent.Moreover,itwillbeeasiertometogainadvaneedknowledgeoftechnology,thatwillpreparemeforabrighterfuture.Moreover,mygoodfriend,ZhangHuadoesntagreewiththem.HethoughtmyEnglish

26、istoolimitedtocommunicatewithforeigners.Besides,thecostistoomuchforhisfamily.Inmyopinions,IshouldcontinuetostudyinChina.AslongasIstudyhardatnow,Illmakegreatachievementsinthefuture.DAdvertisinginformsconsumersaboutnewerproductsavailableonthemarket.Itgivesusinformationwitheverythingfromshampoototoothp

27、astetocomputersandbenefitsbuthidesitsdisadvantages.Advertisingnotonlyleadsustobuyingthingsthatwedontneedandcantafford,butitconfusesoursensereality.“Zoomtoothpastepreventsbadteethandgivesyouthewhiteteeth!theadvertisementtellsus.Anditdoesnttellusthecompletetruththshealthdietandagoodtoothbrushwillhavet

28、hesameeffect.EMygrandfatherhadhadenoughofhiscat.Hewastiredofherscratchingallthefurnituresandmadeamess.Sohegavehertoafriend,wholivedontheothersideoftown.Hetoldhisfriendsthathewasgettingsooldtolookafterher.Aweeklater,inaverycoldwinterday,mygrandfatherreturnedhomefromshoppingandsurprisedtoseethecatonhi

29、sdoorstep.Mygrandfatherwasmovedbythefactthathispethadfoundhiswaybackfromtheothersideoftowninsuchacoldweather.Hetookthecatoutsideandgaveherlotsoflovingattention.Hedecidedhewillnevergiveherawayagain.FBedouin,theArabpeoplewholiveinthedesert,livinginatraditionalsociety.Thismeanstheyliveonmuchthesamewaya

30、stheirancestorsdid.Peoplewholiveintraditionalsocietieshasstrongtiestothepast.Customsandbeliefshavechangedveryslower.Theyfearthatwhenchangeswillmaketheirlivesworseratherthanbetter.Valuesarepassingonwithlittlechangesfromonegenerationtothenext.Yetchangesdotakeplace.Allcultureschange,buttheychangemuchqu

31、icklyatsomeperiodsthanatother.Inveryrecentyears,changeshavetakenplaceveryquicklyeverywhere,includingdesertsofSouthwestAsiaandNorthAfrica.GMyuncleandauntcomehomeoneeveninganddiscoveredhugeholeintheirroof.Theyalsofoundthattheirdogwasdeadandtheirfurniturewerecoveredinhorrible-smellingmatter.Upsetbywhic

32、htheysaw,theyphonedthepolice.Afterthepolicelookedintotheproblem,theyweretoldwhathadhappenedto.Itseemedthatthecontainerholdingthewastesfromthetoiletsonapassingplanehadburstopenly.Thecontentsfrozeintheatmosphereasitfelltowardstheground.Thentheresultingblockoficecrashedthroughtheroofandbrokeintopiece,k

33、illingthedogaftermeltingintheirhouse.Takingpartsinrecreationactivitieshelpuskeepfit.Therearevariouskindsofactivityinourdailylife,forexample,listeningtomusic,watchingTV,playingchess,orgoingtocinema.ButIthinkwedbettertohavemoreoutdooractivities.Asstudents,weusuallysittooIongerintheclassroom,andasaresu

34、ltoureyesandbrainsgettingtired.Butitdideatapoplaybasketball,football,tabletennis,goswimming,dosomerunnings,orevengoforapicnic.Ourbrainsalsoneedchangestomakeitsmartandactive.Inaword,exerciseisgoodforthehealth.答案A1.apologizetowhat.toffor2.gottenhereon.herefthere3.gonewrongly.wronglyfwrong4.whatthetime

35、.去掉the5.Ihaveto.havefhad6.getchanging.changingfchanged7.anotherbuses.busesfbus8.andmybrother.andfbut9.tooangrierwith.angrierfangry10.Hopetohearyou.you前力廿fromB1.myclassmateand.classmatefclassmates2.Igetupat.getfgot3.hadgoodtime.good前力卩a4.Twohourslate.lateflater5.thatthefarmers.thatfwhere6.theybeganto

36、plant.theywe7.togettingcloseto.gettingget8.ontheopenair.onin9.allofuswas.waswere10.moreunforgettable.去掉moreC1.motherhas.hashave2.atearlyage.early前力卩an3.tobedependent.dependentindependent4.beeasiertome.tofor5.thatwillprepare.thatwhich6.Moreover,mygood.MoreoverHowever7.Hethoughtmy.thoughtthinks8.forhi

37、sfamily.hismy9.Inmyopinions.opinionsopinion10.hardatnow.去掉atD1.aboutnewerproducts.newernew2.witheverything.withon/blemsproblem4.areactuallyvery.areis5.itsdisadvantages.itstheir6.buyingthings.buyingbuy7.sensereality.reality前加of8.thewhiteteeth!”去掉the9.Anditdoesnt.AndBut10.ahe

38、althdietand.healthhealthyE1.allthefunitures.furnituresfurniture2.madeamess.mademakingHetoldhisfriends.sooldtolook.inaverycold.andsurprisedto.foundhisway.suchacoldweather.thecatoutside.hewillnever.livingina.liveonmuch.hasstrongtiesto.changedveryslower.whenchangeswill.Valuesarepassing.withlittlechange

39、s.muchquicklyat.thanatother.includingdeserts.auntcomehome.discoveredhuge.werecovered.whichtheysaw.hadhappenedto.holdingthewastes.hadburstopenly.itfelltowards.brokeintopiece.aftermeltingin.morefriendsffriendsoftooinfonsurprised前力卩washisfher去掉aoutsidefinsidewillfwouldFlivingfliveonfinhasfhaveslowerfsl

40、owly去掉whenpassingfpassedlittleewfmuchfmore或quickly前力卩otherfothersdeserts前力卩theGcomefcamehuge前力卩awerefwaswhichfwhat去掉towastesfwasteopenlyfopenitftheypiecefpiecesafterfbeforeTakingpartsin.helpuskeep.kindsofactivity.goingtocinema.bettertohave.sittooIonger.brainsgetting.Butitsagood.somerunnings.makeitsm

41、art.partstparthelpthelpsactivitytactivitiescinema前力卩the去掉toIongertlonggettingtgetButtSorunningstrunningittthem短文改錯專練（二）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（人），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多

42、者（從第11處起）不計分。ADearSandra,YoullneverguesswhereImwritingthisemail.Acave!YouknowwereonholidaysinSpain.Well,wespendafewdaysinBarcelonafirst.Wehadagoodtimethere,thoughonedayIdidntfeelverygood.IthinkIatetoomuchicecreamthedaybefore.Anyway,whenIleftBarcelona,wecametospendafewdaysinGranada.However,wecouldntg

43、etahoteibomantouristsandnotenoughbed!Thenthehotelownersaid,“Whydonttrythecavehotels?”Wethoughthewerejoking.Livingincaves?Butthereweareanditswonderful.Wereenjoyingitmuchthatwedonknowwhenweregoingtoleave.Werenevergoingtoghavmertoiexploreforeverything.Takecare!BenBMyunclebuysasatellitedish,whichisalarg

44、eroundpieceofmetalthatreceivessatellitetelevision.Hedecidedtosetuphimself.Heclimbeduptheladderandattachedthedishwiththesideofhishouses.Afterhefinishing,heandmyauntrelaxedfortheeveninginfrontoftheTV.Thenextdaywasverymuchhot,andtheydecidedtostayathomeandwatchTV.Thatafternoontheyheardlotsofshoutingouts

45、ide.Whentheywentoutside,theysawthatthehouseoppositewereonfire.Fortunately,thefirewasputtingout.Itturnedoutthatthefirehadstartedbecausemyunclessatellitedishhadbeenconcentratingthesunsraysonthecurtainsofherneighborshousebuthadcausedthefire.CChristmasissupposedtobeatimeexpressourloveandgoodwilltowardso

46、thers.Itissupposedtobeatimewhichweperformactsofkindnessforpeoplelessfortunatetoourselves.ButdowethinkoftheotherpeoplewhenwesatdowntoourChristmasdinner?OfcoursenotweretoobusyeatingthosedeliciousfoodsrelatedwithChristmas.Wearetoobusywonderingthatthepresentswegavewereasniceorbetterthantheonewereceived.

47、Theyforgettothinkofthesickandthehomeless.ThewholeideaofChristmashascompletechanged.Whatashame!DAthiefbrokeintoourhouseandfilledhisbagbyourpossessionswhenhesuddenlyfeelingapairofeyesonhim.Lookingup,heseesaneaglestaringathimwithcold,mercilesseyes.Atfirstthemanwastoofrighteningtomove,butaftertenminuteh

48、etriedmovingquietlytowardsthedoor.Therefore,theeyesjustfollowedhimandhecouldntmove.Evtunylparentsreturnedtoandfoundthethiefinourhouse.Whenmyfatherturnedthelight,thethiefcouldseethattheeaglewasjustatoy.Butitwastoolateandshewasarrested.Myfathersaidthatthetoyeaglewerebetterthananywatchdog.ENowadaysmore

49、andmorestudentswerefoundcheatinginexams.Somecopyfromeachother;somecopyfromtheirtextbooks,refereneebooksorpreparednote;othersusemoderncommunicationtoolsuchasmobilephones.Cheatinginexamswillcausesomeworseeffects.Foronething,itwillresultunfaircompetitionanddestroythecreativityofbrightstudents.Foranothe

50、r,studentswhooftencheatsinexamswilldevelopbadhabitsandwontbeabletomeettheneedsofsocietyinthefuture.Sohowcancheatinginexamsbestopped?Onmyopinion,severepunishmentsshouldbeputintotheeffecttopreventstudentsfromcheating.Atthesametime,greateffortsshouldbemadetomakestudentsunderstoodwhatkindofpersonsociety

51、needsortrytobuilduptheirhonesty.FDearJack,ImgladtolearnthatyouwillcomeBeijingtolearnaboutChinesecultureasanexchangestudent.Atthemoment,IamstudyingEnglishinmyschoolbutIalwaysgetbettergradesinmyclass.ImgoodatthespokenEnglish,soImsureIwillcommunicatewithyoufrequent.Beside,myparentsareopenandkindandisfr

52、iendswithmanyofmyclassmates.Ibelieveyouwillbeoneoftheirfriendtoo.Therefore,IinviteyoutoliveinmyhomeduringyoustayinBeijing.ImwillingtohelpingyouasmuchasIcan.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHuaGMyfriendJakeiseighteenyearsoldandlivesinasmallvillage,notfarwiththecityofNottingham.Hegrewupinthisvillage,soheknowseveryo

53、nehere.Buthefeelsboringinthevillage.Atthemoment,hetravelsNottinghameverydaytotheshopwhereheworks.Thisisabusat7:30inthemorningandthelatestbusbackintheeveningisat5:30.FromtheSeptember,however,hesgoingtostayinNottinghamwithhisauntandunclewhenhiscousinjointheNavy.Hecanusehiscousinsroom.Hesreallylookingf

54、orwardtoliveinNottingham.Hellbeabletoutwithhisfriendsintheeveningandhedoesnthavetogetupearlierinthemorningtocatchthebus.Hsmore,theyfixedthekitchenbythemselvesbecausethehighcostofworkers.Sincemyparentsarenotprofessional,soittookthemalongtimetofixit.Consideringthenoiseandtroubletheneighborwerehaving,m

55、yparentsdecidedtohiresomeworkerstofixourkitchensontheweekend.Wepromisedwewouldfinishtheworkassoonaspossibly.Atlast,weexpressedourshameagainandtheneighborforgivingus.答案.onholidaysin.wespendafew.feelverygood.whenIleft.AholidaysfholidayspendfspentgoodfwellIfwe.notenoughbed!“Whydonttry.hewerejoking.Butthereweare.itmuchth