人教版高中英語必修1Unit 3 Travel journal Part 4

1、Part 4Writing寫作技巧 點(diǎn)撥書面表達(dá) 訓(xùn)練寫一封電子郵件寫作技巧點(diǎn)撥 作文實(shí)例 假如你叫李平,你的一位美國筆友Peter要來杭州旅游,他想先請你向他簡單地介紹一下杭州的大致情況?，F(xiàn)在,請你給他發(fā)一封電子郵件,郵件必須包括如下內(nèi)容: 1.杭州位于我國東海岸; 2.意大利著名旅行家馬可波羅(Marco Polo)曾經(jīng)來杭州游玩過; 3.歷史悠久,曾是我國幾代古都。有許多名寺、古塔; 4.在美麗的西湖湖畔,到處可見公園,國內(nèi)外游客很多。 注意:1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 2.詞數(shù):100左右。 參考詞匯:朝代dynasty塔tower 題目研讀 1.本文要求寫一封介紹旅游城市的電

2、子郵件。要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 2.本文應(yīng)采用以下結(jié)構(gòu): 稱呼;開頭語;具體的介紹;結(jié)束語;簽名。 要點(diǎn)信息 1.位于東海岸on the east coast 2.據(jù)說Its said that. 3.許多名寺、古塔a lot of famous temples and old towers 4.來自國內(nèi)外游客visitors from home and abroad 5.玩得高興have a good time 連詞成句1.杭州是有悠久歷史的古城市之一。(with) _Hangzhou is one of the oldest cities with a long history.2.希望你在杭

3、州玩得高興。(I hope.) .I hope you will have a good time during your stay in Hangzhou. 一句多譯據(jù)說,意大利著名旅行家馬可波羅曾經(jīng)來杭州游玩過。People say that Marco Polo,a well-known Italian traveler once visited Hangzhou.Marco Polo,who was a well-known Italian traveler,is said to have once visited Hangzhou.Its said that Marco Polo,a

4、 well-known Italian traveler once visited Hangzhou.Its said that Marco Polo,who was a well-known Italian traveler,once visited Hangzhou.思考:你認(rèn)為哪種表達(dá)方式最好?你的表達(dá)方式? 連句成篇Dear Peter, Im glad to hear that you are coming to Hangzhou for a visit.As we all know,Hangzhou is a beautiful city on the east coast of

5、China.It is said that Marco Polo,a well-known Italian traveler once visited Hangzhou and he was attracted by its beauty.Hangzhou, with a long history,is one of the oldest cities.It was the capital of several dynasties. As a result,it has a lot of famous temples and old towers.The West Lake,with many

6、 beautiful parks around it,attracts a large number of visitors from home and abroad.I hope you will have a good time during your stay in Hangzhou. Im looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours,Li Ping 范文點(diǎn)評 本文格式正確,描述條理、清晰、生動。句與句之間過渡自然,是一篇不錯(cuò)的習(xí)作。 使用了賓語從句和as引導(dǎo)的定語從句,顯示了作者深厚的寫作 功底。 固定句式It is said that.及with

7、復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)的使用,提升了文章的檔次。 過渡性詞語的使用使上下文過渡自然、順暢。假設(shè)你是李華,在假期里你和你的家人一起到海南度假。請根據(jù)以下提示將你的海南之行寫成電子郵件發(fā)給你的好友Tommy。詞數(shù)100左右。 1.海岸的美麗難以描繪。 2.你們在海里游泳、潛水和沖浪。 3.在海邊的飯館里吃美味的海鮮。 4.風(fēng)景如此迷人,令人流連忘返。書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 One possible version:Dear Tommy, How time flies!It has been several months since we met last time. I am writing to tell you an exciting experience to Hainan.My family together with me went there to spend our holiday.Not only were we able to swim,dive and surf in the ocean,but also we could eat delicious seafood in a restaurant nearby.The beauty of the beach is more than I can describe.It is so at