高考英語作文解析

1、一、邀請信1假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括：1. 時(shí)間；2. 活動安排；3. 歡迎他表演節(jié)目。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_二、其他應(yīng)用文2假定你是校排球隊(duì)隊(duì)長李華。請寫封郵件告知你的隊(duì)友Chris球隊(duì)近期將參加比賽，內(nèi)容包括:1. 比賽信息；2. 賽前準(zhǔn)備；3. 表達(dá)期待。注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_3書面表達(dá)假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說明原因；3.另約時(shí)間。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2、2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。4假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請你回復(fù)郵件。內(nèi)容包括：（1）到達(dá)時(shí)間；（2）合適的禮物；（3）餐桌禮儀。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。三、申請信5假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1. 寫信目的；2. 個(gè)人優(yōu)勢；3. 能做的事情。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 結(jié)束語已為你寫好。_參考答案：1Dear Allen,How is everything going? Our

3、 school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And Im writing to invite you to join us.The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely

4、 welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes,Li Hua【解析】【分析】今年的書面表達(dá)要求考生寫郵件，告知英國朋友音樂節(jié)的情況?！驹斀狻渴紫却_定提綱。先介紹寫作目的，之后介紹音樂節(jié)的時(shí)間、活動安排等具體信息，最后歡迎他表演節(jié)目。第二，根據(jù)提綱，確定關(guān)鍵詞語，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The ope

5、ning ceremony等。第三，注意選用合適的連接詞將各要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來。【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，詳略得當(dāng)。并使用了高級句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定語從句。提升了文章檔次。2Dear Chris,Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gy

6、m on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.

7、Youre an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Lets try hard together!Cheers,Li Hua【解析】【分析】今年的書面表達(dá)沿襲近幾年的體裁，仍舊是應(yīng)用文。本次書面表達(dá)要求考生寫一封郵件告知隊(duì)友有關(guān)比賽的信息?！驹斀狻勘酒獣姹磉_(dá)是一封告知信。首先要告知寫信目的；然后簡明扼要地告知排球比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及賽前的準(zhǔn)備事項(xiàng)，注意事件信息的三要素：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物，要交代清楚；第三則要表達(dá)對隊(duì)友的期待和鼓勵(lì)?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，詳略得當(dāng)，

8、并運(yùn)用了高級句式。Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.賓語從句；In order to win the match不定式作目的狀語。文章語言流暢，上下文轉(zhuǎn)換自然。3Dear Bob, Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that

9、 afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should

10、be available any time after school next week.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】試題分析：題目要求寫一封道歉信，就不能如約一起去書向Bob道歉，使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行寫作。寫作內(nèi)容包括：表示歉意；說明原因；另約時(shí)間。注意使用連接詞，使作文內(nèi)容連貫。亮點(diǎn)說明：范文包括了所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，做到了語意連貫。范文使用了賓語從句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的狀

11、語從句so that well have more time to read and select books；條件句If its convenient for you；省略句If not等，長短句結(jié)合，使內(nèi)容更加豐富。考點(diǎn)：書信類作文4Dear Terry,How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of some relevant deta

12、ils.Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For exampl

13、e, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.Hopefully, these suggestions will be helpful for you.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書信類應(yīng)用文寫作。餐桌禮儀也是考生比較熟悉的話題。成文時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：一、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全1到達(dá)時(shí)間；2合適的禮物；3餐桌禮儀。二、時(shí)態(tài)：主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)；三、人稱：二、三人稱。四

14、、注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)母呒壴~匯、短語或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞和插入語，使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。點(diǎn)睛：本文雖然看起來比較容易，但學(xué)生真正動起筆來，還是比較困惑的。原因?yàn)椋?.看起來中國餐桌禮儀很熟悉，但內(nèi)容很多，一時(shí)間不知道該寫什么；2.100單詞左右，寫出到達(dá)時(shí)間；合適的禮物；餐桌禮儀三個(gè)內(nèi)容，信息量大，選擇有困難；應(yīng)對方法：近年來高考寫作的命題常用的思想就是高起點(diǎn)低落點(diǎn)。高起點(diǎn)題目很高，中國文化，中國故事，中國禮儀等等，但最終都把它們落在應(yīng)用文的框架里，這就是低落點(diǎn)。寫這樣的作文，一定要注意不能寫過于具體的內(nèi)容，要找最重要的，最熟悉的寫，不要面面俱到，中國餐桌禮儀內(nèi)容太多，1

15、00單詞無法寫。找重點(diǎn)，以點(diǎn)帶面。但選擇重要內(nèi)容本身就是一種能力。5Dear Sir or Madam,Im writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and

16、 English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. Im looking forward to your reply.

17、Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)要求寫一封申請信，屬于書信應(yīng)用文?！驹斀狻?.審題立意本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫申請信，人稱使用第一人稱和第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2.謀篇布局書信格式，稱呼和落款文中已經(jīng)給出。首段，寫信的目的，中間段寫個(gè)人優(yōu)勢和能做的事，最后一段總結(jié)。3. 關(guān)鍵詞和句子根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)及構(gòu)思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和句子有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，advantages，I am good at，I can help with./Ill devote myself to。通過詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語法錯(cuò)誤，并增加一些細(xì)節(jié)和過渡性的詞匯，如First of all，Besides，to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least等，使全文銜接自然，語義流暢。【點(diǎn)睛】本文開門見山，表達(dá)了寫信的目的；之后詳細(xì)介紹了個(gè)人的優(yōu)勢和能做的事情，詳略得當(dāng)，內(nèi)容完整，同時(shí)使用了高級詞匯和高級句子。高級詞匯：be qualified for，be fluent in，be beneficial for等；高級句式