如何寫好中考作文課件

1、 Try to write a composition nicely泗洲中學(xué)金燕如何賞析作文：1.體裁：說明文、記敘文、議論文、應(yīng)用文。2.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過去時(shí)、將來時(shí)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。3.結(jié)構(gòu)：分-總，總-分，總-分-總。4.正確地運(yùn)用語法。 運(yùn)用簡短的語句5.運(yùn)用精彩的詞句。6.運(yùn)用連接詞。保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)。可是你的朋友李揚(yáng)卻做得不夠。請寫一篇短文，說明他在環(huán)保方面的表現(xiàn)，并表明自己的態(tài)度。要點(diǎn)如下：1.在學(xué)校，他不注意保持教室干凈，不收集廢紙廢瓶來再利用，甚至亂扔垃圾。2.在家，打掃房間，養(yǎng)盆栽，還在自家花園里種樹。 3.適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的看法。 Taking care of our en

2、vironment is very important. Wherever you live, you can do something useful around your neighbourhood. But my friend Li Yang hasnt done enough. He needs to do better in protecting the environment. At school, he hasnt kept his classroom clean and tidy. He also hasnt collected waste paper or bottles f

3、or recycling. Whats worse, he often throws rubbish around our school. I think it is not right to do so. At home he can do much better than at school. He cleans his bedroom every day. He keeps plants at home and plants trees in his garden. I think we should keep our home clean as well as our school.

4、If everyone makes a contribution to protecting our environment, the world will become much more beautiful. By Ouyang Haonan賞析：Structure(結(jié)構(gòu))：Conjunctions(連接詞) ：Transitional sentence(承上啟下過渡性的語句)：Good expressions(精彩詞句)：總分總But, also, whats worse,as well asAt home he can do much better than at school.Tak

5、ing care of our environment is very important.Wherever you liveMy friend needs to do better in protecting the environment.Its +adj.+to doAfter school, Li Ming went home as usual. When he was walking past a house, someone threw a bag of rubbish out of a window. Li Ming saw it happen and picked it up,

6、 then threw it into a dustbin. After doing that, he thought that he must stop people from doing this again. So he wrote a sign and put it up on the tree. It said,“Dont throw rubbish about.”Just then a man saw it and came up. He said sorry to Li Ming. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting th

7、e environment like Li Ming, the world will become much more beautiful. By Cao Qiufang記敘文賞析：Good expressions(精彩詞句)：Time order(明確的時(shí)間順序)：After school, when he was walking past a house,then, after doing that, just then as usual, Li Ming saw it happen (see sb. do)He thought that he must stop people from

8、doing. this again. (stop sb. from doing)He said sorry to Li Ming. (say sorry to sb.)If everyone makes a contribution to protectingTense(時(shí)態(tài)):Past tense(過去時(shí))常用的連接詞:并列：轉(zhuǎn)折：遞進(jìn)：原因：時(shí)間：舉例：選擇：總結(jié)：and, also, as well asbut, although, howeverwhats worse, whats morebecause, as, since, forwhen, while, before, afte

9、r, as soon as, first, then, after that, later, finallysuch as, for exampleor, eitherorin a word, after all, in all一篇好的作文應(yīng)該是：1.有好的開頭和結(jié)尾，最好首尾能呼應(yīng)。2.正確地運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)和語法。 3.運(yùn)用連詞，使得行文流暢。4.運(yùn)用精彩的語句。 口頭表達(dá)： 根據(jù)下面4幅圖畫，口述一篇50詞左右的短文， 要求達(dá)意、通順、連貫。老師幫你審題、構(gòu)思：It was March 8th,Womens Day yesterday. Jane wanted to do something f

10、or her mother. she bought some delicious food from the shop.she got home, she tried her best to cook a meal swept the floor.Everything was ready _her mum came back. Her mother was very happy and she said,“Well done,my dear!” What a good girl Jane is!Soafter schoolWhenand thenwhen/before 假設(shè)你叫李平，暑假快到了

11、，給你在美國的朋友Tom寫一封信，邀請他來中國旅游。在信中簡單地向他介紹中國。內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)，80個(gè)詞左右。要點(diǎn)：1.中國是世界大國之一，有悠久的歷史。2.中國有13億(1,300 million)人口，中國人民勤勞友好。3.中國有很多風(fēng)景名勝，萬里長城舉世聞名。4.2008年奧運(yùn)會(huì)將在中國舉行，到那時(shí)中國將更加美 麗富強(qiáng)。5Dear Tom: How time flies! Summer holiday will start. I hope that you can come to China.China is a great country with a long history. It

12、 is one of the biggest countries in the world. And it has a large population. There are about 1,300 million people in China. Chinese people are hard working and friendly.There are many places of interest in China, such as Mount Emei, the West Lake and so on. Whats more, the Great Wall is famous all

13、over the world. The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in China. I am sure China will be much more beautiful and stronger by then.I am proud of China. Welcome to China. Yours, Li Ping 總結(jié)：平時(shí)訓(xùn)練中的幾個(gè)注意點(diǎn)：準(zhǔn)備工作：仔細(xì)審題，明確要求。 羅列信息，認(rèn)真分析，審清題意，列出要點(diǎn)。緊扣要點(diǎn)，尋求思路。 草擬提綱，確定開頭，選詞，造句，擬好結(jié)尾。 （可適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)）寫作之中開門見山，緊扣主題。語言正確、規(guī)范地道

14、。句型結(jié)構(gòu)避免中國式英語。 如，I by bike to school.標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號重短輕長，就易避難。以寫正確、通順為最低要求。過渡自然，表達(dá)流暢。正確使用連詞，保持行文流暢。不重復(fù)使用可置換的詞。適當(dāng)評論，發(fā)表已見。What a nice girl she is! We can learn from her. 成文之后一般語法項(xiàng)目的檢查。人稱：Mr. Chen is my math teacher. She works very hard.時(shí)態(tài)：I have visited my grandparents yesterday. 主謂一致：Everyone in our class work h

15、ard.習(xí)慣用法：She often helps me in my English.書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。w . 書寫規(guī)范, 卷面整潔。Bye-bye!Good luck with your English study!Taking care of our environment is very important. Wherever you live, you can do something useful around your neighbourhood. But my friend Li Yang hasnt done enough. He needs to do better in p

16、rotecting the environment. At school, he hasnt kept his classroom clean and tidy. He hasnt collected waste paper or bottles for recycling. He also hasnt planted trees. Whats worse, he often throws rubbish around our school. I think it is not right to do so. At home he can do much better than at school. He