高考英語（北師大版）新一輪復習課件：寫作技巧點撥系列七-發(fā)揮合理想象,靈活闡釋開放作文（共15張）

1、寫作技巧點撥系列(七)發(fā)揮合理想象, 靈活闡釋開放作文【典例導練】（2013北京高考）請根據(jù)下面提示, 寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so. 【寫作指導】 1. 開放作文的特點。 （1）自由發(fā)揮的空間大。開放作文屬于非控制性寫作或非任務型寫作，即主要根據(jù)文字提示、圖畫展示或表格列舉等形式設題，留有一

2、定的空間讓考生自由發(fā)揮。 （2）能力要求較高。它不僅考查考生的語言表達能力、組織能力，而且還考查考生的邏輯思維能力、發(fā)散思維能力、想象能力以及多角度考慮問題的能力。因此這種題型的作文雖然給考生提供了發(fā)揮的機會，但由于考生對給出的信息沒有真正領會，沒有理清文章的命題意圖導致失分現(xiàn)象嚴重。 2. 與其他文體的區(qū)別。 開放式作文不等同于一般的提綱作文，因為它不像提綱作文那樣所給的要點很全面，寫作時按照一定的“框框”進行發(fā)揮即可，它要求考生憑借試卷上所提供的線索（包括文字提示和圖畫），利用發(fā)散性思維，去合理地想象、推理，然后寫出一篇合情合理的文章。【審題謀篇】【佳句錘煉】1. 我想圖畫告訴我們的是：一

3、個人的夢想和現(xiàn)實通常是有差別的。（一般表達）I think, the picture is telling us a truth. There is usually a difference between ones dream and reality. （賓語從句）I think that _. There is usually a difference between ones dream and reality. （同位語從句）I think the picture is _there is usually a difference between ones dream and real

4、ity. the picture is telling us a truthtelling us a truth that2. 然而，對人們來說每次實現(xiàn)他們的夢想是十分不容易的。（一般表達）But people realize their dreams every time is very difficult. （形式主語+不定式復合結(jié)構(gòu)）_, _ is not so easy _ _ their dreams every time. Howeveritforpeople to realize3. 就像圖畫中的那個人，他實際上釣到的是條小魚，而不是他希望的大魚。（一般表達）Like the m

5、an in the picture, he actually catches a small fish, and he doesnt catch a big one that he wishes for. （定語從句+高級詞匯）_, _ _, he actually catches a small one. Just like the man in the pictureinstead of the big fishthat he wishes for4. 以我之見，人們需要學會去接受現(xiàn)實并且繼續(xù)嘗試。（一般表達）According to my idea, people need to lea

6、rn to accept the reality. They should keep on trying. （介詞短語+并列謂語）_, people need to _ _ accept the reality and _. In my opinionlearntokeep on trying5. 有了再次嘗試他們或許會獲得他們夢想的東西。（一般表達）They try again and maybe they get the things they dream of. （介詞短語）_, they may gain what they dream of. With another try【連句成

7、篇】 I think the picture is telling us a truth that there is usually a difference between ones dream and reality. People need to learn to face the reality. Everyone has his dream. However, it is not so easy for people to realize their dreams every time. Just like the man in the picture, instead of the

8、 big fish that he wishes for, he actually catches a small one. In my opinion, people need to learn to accept the reality and keep on trying. With another try, they may gain what they dream of. 【命題專家如是說】開放類作文解題關鍵 做這類題時，考生首先要讀懂所給的英語提示或圖畫提示，弄清情況和要求，然后抓住關鍵詞句，進行記敘、解釋、說明、議論，再根據(jù)要求去合理地想象，并用通順的語言寫出。具體做到：1. 認真審題，把握要求，找準關鍵句，提煉主題；2. 依據(jù)主線，草擬提綱，梳理文章脈絡；3. 定位人稱，確立時態(tài)，遣詞造句