2020中考英語作文：交友親情

1、09 交友親情篇（一）初中生活即將結(jié)束，這三年一定給你留下很多美好的回憶英語俱樂部征文要求寫篇110 詞左右文章描述你難忘的校園生活、 師生情或同學(xué)情 以及在臨別之際， 對他們說的感激和祝福的話 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名【滿分范文】How time flies!Our junior high school days are coming to an end， and Id like to say a lot to you allwho have helped me and stayed with me 【高分句型一】 （點題）Firstly ， Id like to thank my gr

2、eatteachers They teach me not only how to learn but also how to be a man Though they look strict and serious， they are always kind to me （感謝老師） Secondly ， I want to thank my friendly classmates As long as I have trouble ， they are always around me I miss the happy days when we stay with each other I

3、 love all of you （感謝同學(xué)）Finally ， Im going to thank my parents They always look after me very well to keep me healthy And they often encourage me to work hard at school 【高分句型二】 （感謝父母）（二）初三學(xué)生 Sandy 面臨中考，面對父母和老師的期望及每天堆成山的作業(yè)感到非?？鄲溃蛱煲驗榭戳艘恍r的電視和媽媽吵架，最后摔門而去。于是她寫信給老師傾訴煩惱，請你根據(jù)下列提示以老師 Nancy 的身份用英語給她寫一封回信。提示：

4、1 如何舒緩目前的壓力；2如何安排好每天的學(xué)習(xí)和休息；3 如何處理與父母的關(guān)系。、，、.一、一注意：必須包括要點中所有提示內(nèi)容，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；詞數(shù)不少于90 詞（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)） 。Dear Sandy ，I mreally glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me Here is myadvice Yours，Nancy 【滿分范文】Dear Sandy ，I m really glad that you can share yo

5、ur problems and feelings with meHere is my advice （點題）First, it s a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure【高分句型 一】 Second， you can make plans for your everyday life After you study for about two hours ， you can take a walk outside and try to relax Besides， don t st

6、ay up late It s not good for your healthThird ， never argue with your parents You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them Discuss your problems with them and tell them your ideas They will help you find better ways to solve them （建議）In a word ， you will have a hap

7、pier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents 【高分句型二】 （總結(jié)全文）Yours，Nancy（三）假如你是英語校報編輯徐玲 校報收到初一新生Ben 的來信， 他提出了自己面臨的兩個問題 請你根據(jù) Ben 的來信，每個問題結(jié)合自己的過往經(jīng)歷提出一些建議并陳述理由Dear Xu Ling ，My name is Ben I m a Grade 7 stude nt Recently ， I feel worried because I have trouble ge

8、tting used to life in middle school I always feel lonely because I have few friends Also ， I have problem remembering new English words Can you give me some suggestions to help me ？ Thank you Best wishes，Ben注意：（ 1）回信應(yīng)包括所有要點；（ 2 ）詞數(shù)90 左右（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)） ；（ 3 ）不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分Dear Ben ，I m so

9、rrtyo hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends I think Yours,Xu LingInGood luck with everything【滿分范文】Dear Ben ，I m sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle

10、school （表示理解） your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends . I think it is a good choice to join some clubs . In this way , you can make more friends who share the same interest with you .【高分 句型一】 I used to go to the tennis club every day and that brought me good he

11、alth as well as many good friends. What s more you d better be friendly to others A smile costs nothing but gives much . Also , you found it difficult to remember English words .Reading more English stories can help you learn English words . Our English teacher once encouraged us to see English film

12、s to help us remember words . If you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day, it will be helpful .【高分句型二】（問題和建議）I hope you will find these useful suggestions .（希望）Good luck with everything .Yours,Xu Ling（四）根據(jù)所給圖畫，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文.要求完整敘述圖畫內(nèi)容.【滿分范文】Last week ， my parents and I decided

13、to go to visit my grandmother We went to a shop at half past nine and bought some gifts （去商店買禮物）We went there by bus It took us forty minutes to get to mygrandmothers house （ 坐汽車去那兒） As soon as we arrived there ， my grandmother and my uncle went out to meet us 【高分句型一】 （外婆和舅舅出來接我們） My uncle prepared

14、lunch for us （舅舅準(zhǔn) 備午餐） At noon ， we had a wonderful lunch together （聚餐） In the evening ， after we said goodbye to my grandmother and my uncle ， we went home （告別，回家）What a happy day we had! 【高分句型二】 I hope we can visit them as often as possible （感受）（五）假如彳叫Paul,是第一中學(xué)九年級學(xué)生，今年夏天即將畢業(yè).初中三年你變化很大，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi) 容，用英

15、語寫一篇短文，記錄自己的成長過程，并談?wù)勀愕氖罴儆媱? 性格內(nèi)向，不敢在人前講話過去2 對學(xué)習(xí)不感興趣，成績不好3不愛運動，沉迷電腦游戲1 樂于分享，與同學(xué)相處很好現(xiàn)在2.各科成績優(yōu)異，（舉一例）3.積極參加各類活動，（舉一例）暑假計劃（一至兩點）要求： 1 ）詞數(shù) 100 左右，文章開頭已給，不計入總詞數(shù)2）短文需包括表格中所有要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮3）字跡工整，條理清楚，行文連貫4）文中請勿提及你的真實姓名和學(xué)校Im Paul ， a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School Ill graduate this summer Ive changed a lot

16、during the last three years Im Paul ， a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School Ill graduate this summer Ive changed a lot during the last three yearsIn the past ， I was too shy to speak in front of others 【高分句型】 （性格內(nèi)向，不敢在人前講話） I wasnt interested in study ， so I was weak in all my subjects （對學(xué)習(xí)不感興趣， 成

17、績不好） Whats more ， I didnt like sports Instead， I was crazy about computer games （不愛運動，沉迷電腦游戲）However ， Ive changed greatly now Im willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates.（樂于分享， 與同學(xué)相處很好）I study so well that Im a top student in our class now .【高分句型】 （各科成績優(yōu)異） Moreove

18、r ， I take an active part in all kinds of school activities （積極參加各 類活動） Last term ， I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition During the coming summer holiday ， Ill help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself 【高分句型】 （暑假計劃）（六）“百善孝為先 ”, 孝敬父母是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。某

19、英語報社正在舉辦以 “弘揚中華傳統(tǒng)文化 ”為主題 的征文活動，請你以We should honor our parents為題，寫一篇短文參加征文活動。內(nèi)容包括 ：What do you often do for your parents?Why should we honor our parents?How should we honor our parents?要求： 1 ）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)： 100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)） ；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。We should honor our pare

20、ntsAs we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition ofChina.We should honor our parentsAs we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.I honor my parents.I often help my parents do housework in my spare time.I think its our duty to honor our parents.Our parents take muc

21、h effort to raise us, so its important for us to honor them.They love us so we should love and respect them.First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.Next, we should respect them

22、and never talk to them rudely.Wed better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.Its also important to tell our parents we love them. 【解析】 本題要求考生以 “我們應(yīng)該尊敬我們的父母”為題結(jié)合所給的內(nèi)容要點，寫一篇作文。這是篇材料作文，主要內(nèi)容要點已給，所以考生要圍繞著要點，進行寫作，不要遺漏，當(dāng)然順序可以適當(dāng)調(diào)整。這篇作文又句型亮點，例如：As we know ,眾所周知；.I think its our duty

23、 to do sth等等，其次文章結(jié)構(gòu)也比較清晰，例如第二段的銜接詞， First of all ， Then， Next ，使用的簡單而恰當(dāng)。（七）在陽光雨露里，我已長高、長壯，但這還不是全部，長大還應(yīng)包括什么？是關(guān)心幫助同學(xué)？是體貼、 理解父母？是感恩、回報親朋好友？還是 成長的點點滴滴，久久不能忘記。請以“I am not a childanymore ”為題，記敘你在學(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)歷的事，表明你已經(jīng)不再是一個小孩子。（注意：短文中不能出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。 ）【滿分范文】I am not a child any moreI am a 16-year-old gi

24、rl now. I used to be weak and thin. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others. It was a Saturday evening. My mother is ill, so I cooked the meal. My mother said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty.After sup

25、per ,my mother said:Dear, you have grown up.I realized I was not a child any more.【解析】. 題干解讀：本文屬于話題作文，寫作要點從我的改變和生活中經(jīng)歷的一件事展開描述。.例文點評：例文采用第一人稱描述，時態(tài)主要為一般過去時。準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，并保持主謂一致。圍繞主題展開作文，邏輯性強，句子通順。.高分亮點： used to do sth 過去常常做某事；as as如一樣； My mother said the meal was verydelicious, although it tasted salty 句型中“

26、although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句。（八）請你根據(jù)上面五個問題的內(nèi)容及你的回答，結(jié)合以下提示，以 “How Can We Protect Ourselves atSchool? 為題，寫一篇”80-100詞的英語短文。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。提示：謹(jǐn)慎交友。不參與打架斗毆。面對校園欺凌怎樣自我保護。參考詞匯： 1. self-protection （自我保護） 2. bully（n./v. 欺凌）3. personal safety （人身安全） 4. have violent behaviors（ 打架斗毆）How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?【

27、 寫作思路 】這是一篇話題作文，以 How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，確定要點，根據(jù)要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容。字?jǐn)?shù)80-100 詞。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）?！緷M分范文】How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?School bullies hap

28、pen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior ha

29、ppens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times a

30、nd cant have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.Im hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future, do you think so?（九）學(xué)校英語社團正在組織題為 “My Family ”的征文活動。假如你是李明，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語完成征文。內(nèi)容要點如下：三口之家，家庭幸福，鄰里和睦；父母為教師，在校深受歡迎；分擔(dān)家務(wù)，周末戶外活動；相互陪伴，經(jīng)

31、常交流，良好家規(guī)助我成長；請補充說明一至兩點與家庭相關(guān)的情況。注意：文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；.詞數(shù)：60 - 80；3內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯；4標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯： popular adj. 受歡迎的 activity n. 活動 rule n 規(guī)矩My FamilyI m Li Ming.寫作思路 】本文屬于材料作文，介紹我的家庭。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和

32、主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_ 的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B 詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要 求等?！緷M分范文】My FamilyI m Li Ming. I have a happy famil

33、y. There are three people in it. They are my fath er, my mother and me. My parents are teachers, they are popular among students. We get along well with our neighbors. At home, I try my best to do some housework. On weekends, we often go out for outdoor activities. We accompany with each other, comm

34、unicate with each other. Good family rules help me grow up. I study hard, all the teachers and classmates like me. My home is a warm place. 【名師點評】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如 get along well with, try one sbest to do, accompany with, communicate with, help sb do 以及 grow

35、 up ，增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。（十）假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda 的電子郵件。以下是郵件的一部分，請你閱讀后回復(fù)，詞數(shù) 80 左右。Subject:From: LindaTo: Li PingI m really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer. I can show him around the city! Please tell me something about him! How old is he? What

36、 does he look like? What kind of person is he and what s he interested in?Hope to hear from you soon.Love,Linda Subject:From: Li PingTo: LindaDear Linda,Yours,Li Ping【 寫作思路】這篇作文要求我們對Linda 的電子郵件進行回復(fù)。寫作前，應(yīng)先閱讀Linda 的來信，了解信中她想知道的事情，然后有針對性地給她進行介紹。審題可知， Linda 在信中提到她想要了解你哥哥的一些情況，她提出了三個問題， “他多大了 ” ； “他是什么樣子

37、的 ”； “他是怎樣的人以及他的興趣” ，回信中應(yīng)對Linda的這些提問進行回答，并根據(jù)表達的需要，補充一些細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實、豐富。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時、第三人稱來敘述，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先內(nèi)容應(yīng)符合題目要求，并且敘述要注意層次和結(jié)構(gòu)；其次應(yīng)注意英語的表達問題，應(yīng)符合英文句式的特點以及表達習(xí)慣，不能寫漢語式的英語。可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，提升作文檔次。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然?！緷M分范文】Dear Linda,Thank you so much for agreeing to show my broth

38、er around Rome. Now let me tell you something aboutmy brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.My brother is also cute. He s of medium height with short straight black hai

39、r. He is goodnaetseChkiungfu,and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.Thanks again for your help!Yours,Li Ping【名師點評】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者以李平的身份給Linda 寫了回信，介紹了哥哥的一些情況。首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，按照 Linda 在來信中的提問，介紹了哥哥的年齡、外貌、興趣愛好等信息。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時、第三人稱單數(shù)來敘述，符合題目要求，尤其注意了謂語動詞第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化，這是學(xué)生們學(xué)習(xí)中的一個難點。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。

40、短文中主要使用了簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句，還使用了非謂語動詞，如動詞不定式、現(xiàn)在分詞等。文章中較好的句型和短語有： Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. 、 He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. 、 He is interested in museums and likes trying local food. 、 He s of medium height with short straight

41、 black hair. 、 He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans. 等等。（十一）假設(shè)李華是你的同班同學(xué)，請根據(jù)以下提示及要求，用英語寫一篇題為 My Classmate 的短文。提示： 1. 他個子高，長相英俊，成績優(yōu)秀，擅長運動；他樂于助人（舉一個例子）；對他的評價。要求： 1. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名及校名；2.詞數(shù)80左右My Classmate【滿分范文】My ClassmateLi Hua is my classmate and my good friend . He is tall

42、and handsome . His grades are excellent and he always does well in exams . He is also good at sports because he thinks health is very important .【高分句型（夕卜貌和特長） He is ready to help others . He often helps me with my English . Last year he helped a tenyear old boy who lost his way find his mother .（樂于助

43、人） I think Li Hua is a kind person . Everybody in my class likes him very much . （對他的評價） I hope we will be good friends forever .【高分句型二】 （愿 望）（十二）假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Jack想結(jié)交更多的中國朋友。請用英文寫封郵件，將你的男同學(xué)陳東介紹給他。內(nèi)容包括：年齡與外表16歲；高大健壯興趣與愛好喜歡運動、閱讀和聽音樂；最喜歡的科目是英語性格與為人風(fēng)趣幽默；樂于助人、容易相處注息：.詞數(shù)70左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；.郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給

44、出，不計入總詞數(shù);.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名與校名。參考詞匯：高大健壯 tall and strong運動 do sports聽音樂 listen to music最喜歡的科目 favorite subject風(fēng)趣幽默 funny and humorous樂于做某事be ready to do sth. 相處 get on withDear Jack,How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.Im sure youd like to have such a person

45、 as your friend. With my best wishesYours,Li Hua 【滿分范文】Dear Jack,How is everything going ？ Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you. He is a 16-year-old boy. He has round face, black hair and bright eyes. He is tall and strong. He likes smiling very much. （高分句型一）（要點一，介紹男同學(xué)的外貌及特征）

46、He likes doing sports, reading and listening to music. His favorite subject is English, because he thinks it is very interesting. He is humorous and funny. He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others. 【要點二，介紹同學(xué)的性格】 He likes doing sports, reading and listening to music. His favorite sub

47、ject is English, because he thinks it is very interesting. He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities. （ 高分句型二） He likes winter very much, because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things, such as skating, making snowman and so on.【要點三，介紹同學(xué)的喜好】Hisdream is becoming an E

48、nglish teacher, because he wants his students to get good grades. 【要點四，介紹同學(xué) 的理想】 Im sure youd like to have such a person as your friend With my best wishes! （要點五，美好的祝 愿）Yours, Li Hua 【名師點評】【高分句型一】Dear Nathan,He likes smiling very much .此句是一般現(xiàn)在時的陳述句.運用短語like doing sth喜歡做某事，短語very much 非常，很.此句可翻譯為他很喜歡

49、笑。注意like后加doing【高分句型二】He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities .此句是一般現(xiàn)在時的陳述句。運用短語 spend some time (in) doing sth花時間做某事。短語take part in 參加，此句可翻譯為他還花大量時間 參加課外活動。(十三)假定你是蘇華，最近你的澳大利亞筆友Nathan犯了一些錯誤，倍感懊惱，寫了一封郵件向你訴說，為幫助他排解困感，請你根據(jù)他的郵件內(nèi)容并結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷.用英語回信開導(dǎo)他。To : HYPERLINK mailto:subua subua

50、From : Subjects: Learning from mistakesDear Su Hue,Im unhappy that Ive made some mistakes recently. Theyre troubling me a lot these days. I really need your help. Would you please share your experience with me?Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes?Can you tell me one of your mistakes?How did you

51、 deal with your problem?What have you learned from the mistake?Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.All the best,Nathan一、/ 注息：.詞數(shù)90左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞量；.回復(fù)須包括所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；.文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days.I hope my experience can help you out.Best w

52、ishesSu Hua【 寫作思路】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！緷M分范文】Dear Nathan,Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You neednt worry too much. Its true that everyone makes mistakes.Take me, for example. O

53、ne day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.It doesnt matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to

54、correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.I hope my experience can help you out.Best wishes.Su Hua 【名師點評】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如 too much ， make mistakes， for example， so much ， spend time doing ， forgot to do ， say sorry sb.， between an

55、d， whether or not ， learn from , in this way , feel much better等。而固定句型 I found it important to achieve a balance betweenschoolwork and hobbies. 和 Its true that everyone makes mistakes./ It doesnt matter whether or not youmake mistakes. / I hope my experience can help you out. 等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。（十