高中英語(yǔ)外研版高中必修1Work-book-作文

1、WritingTeaching aim: To improve students writing ability.STEP1Analysis of students composition : 平均分 ： 分 最高分 ： 18分（羅婷婷） 最低分 ： 0 分 06分 ： 15人 612分 ： 14人 1218分：32人 19分以上： 0人 STEP2Writing Requirement. 假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Henry 最近來(lái)信，詢問你今年寒假的安排。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)回一封信，說明你的計(jì)劃,并簡(jiǎn)述理由。內(nèi)容： 1休息 2讀書；3陪伴父母； 4參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100

2、左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；3. 參考詞匯：社會(huì)活動(dòng)social activity 評(píng)分依據(jù)： 寒假計(jì)劃：3分 休息：4分 讀書：4分 陪伴父母：4分 參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)：4分 適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾：2分 書寫：2分 過度和整體語(yǔ)言素養(yǎng)：2分 STEP3: Factors that affect your score: Show students some examples of your writing, and make a comparison between the good and the bad. Show students som

3、e sentences from their composition and correct some mistakes from their sentences.STEP4:Writing guideStep5：Show students a sample and guide students to find out the point score.Dear Henry, Im glad to receive your letter. I am writing to tell you my plan about my winter vacation. First of all, I need

4、 to have a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of senior high school. Of course, Ill do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. Besides, Ill spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. Theyve done so much for me, you know. Lastly,Ill take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua Step6 Summary and homework R