高中英語(yǔ)必修二 Unit 1 Period Five　Writing-A news report

1、Unit 1Cultural Heritage技法點(diǎn)撥寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練Period FiveWritingA news report PART 1技法點(diǎn)撥文體分析 把握寫(xiě)作動(dòng)脈新聞是對(duì)新近發(fā)生的事實(shí)的報(bào)道。新聞反映新發(fā)生的、重要的、有意義的、能引起廣泛興趣的事實(shí)，具有迅速、明了、簡(jiǎn)短的特點(diǎn)。一、新聞報(bào)道寫(xiě)作的語(yǔ)言特點(diǎn)1.具體。新聞?dòng)檬聦?shí)說(shuō)話(huà)，五個(gè)W和一個(gè)H (when，where，who，what，why和how)是構(gòu)成一則完整消息不可缺少的要素，這就需要記敘具體的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人、事、經(jīng)過(guò)、因果等。2.準(zhǔn)確。新聞?wù)Z言不能含糊其詞、模棱兩可，也不能夸大或縮小事實(shí)。3.簡(jiǎn)練。新聞?wù)Z言要簡(jiǎn)明扼要、直截了當(dāng)。

2、寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)二、新聞寫(xiě)作的結(jié)構(gòu)新聞文體的主體結(jié)構(gòu)主要由標(biāo)題、導(dǎo)語(yǔ)、正文三部分組成。標(biāo)題(headline)：標(biāo)題是文章的眼睛，濃縮概括全文的中心問(wèn)題，要簡(jiǎn)潔、生動(dòng)、具有概括性。導(dǎo)語(yǔ)(lead or introduction)：導(dǎo)語(yǔ)是新聞的開(kāi)頭，通常為文章的第一段。要求用極簡(jiǎn)明的文字概括新聞的主要事實(shí)。正文(body)：在導(dǎo)語(yǔ)的基礎(chǔ)上，引入更多的與主題相關(guān)的事實(shí)，使之更加詳實(shí)、具體，并展開(kāi)評(píng)論，進(jìn)而得出結(jié)論。1.The accident occurred shortly after the plane took off.2.Authorities in Northeast Chinas Jilin

3、Province have announced a new target for improving the water quality of the Songhua River，one of the most heavily polluted rivers in the country.3.According to a new survey，Moscow is the worlds most expensive city for the second year in a row.4.As the summer vacation is coming，many students in Xiame

4、n are planning to go traveling，while other students are going to take training courses for different reasons.常用表達(dá)5.With the rapid increase of Chinas population，the housing problem is becoming more and more serious.6.The two countries agreed to reach a final agreement on the travel restrictions.7.If

5、you are to get to Sydney by five，you must start at once.PART 2寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練弄清文絡(luò) 寫(xiě)作妙筆生花請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的信息寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的新聞報(bào)道。四月十二日北京遭遇沙塵暴，當(dāng)天交通事故比平時(shí)多出二十余起，人們開(kāi)始關(guān)注這一災(zāi)害性天氣。下面為專(zhuān)家得出的結(jié)論：頻發(fā)時(shí)間：3、4月份危害：交通事故；土壤沙漠化；肺部疾病直接原因：天氣干燥；氣溫驟變根本原因：人類(lèi)活動(dòng)，如過(guò)度用水，有些地方草原退化；人口增長(zhǎng)解決方法：國(guó)家應(yīng)鼓勵(lì)科學(xué)利用資源等參考詞匯：sandstorm沙塵暴；desertification土壤沙漠化審題1.確定文體：這是一篇新聞報(bào)道，屬于應(yīng)

6、用文，內(nèi)容是報(bào)道發(fā)生在北京的沙塵暴，主體部分要寫(xiě)清楚沙塵暴帶來(lái)的危害以及解決方案。2.主體時(shí)態(tài)：文章應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。3.主體人稱(chēng)：以第三人稱(chēng)為主。謀篇第一段：交代沙塵暴發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、過(guò)程以及所帶來(lái)的危害；第二段：解釋原因；第三段：提出解決辦法。審題謀篇1.由于可怕的沙塵暴 _2.把人們的注意力轉(zhuǎn)向 _3.對(duì)交通安全構(gòu)成威脅 _4.與土壤沙漠化密切相關(guān) _5.導(dǎo)致 _核心詞匯遣詞造句owingtotheterriblesandstormturnpeoplesattentiontoathreattotrafficsafetybecloselyrelatedtodesertification

7、resultin連詞成句1.沙塵暴對(duì)交通安全構(gòu)成威脅，因?yàn)樯硥m暴會(huì)讓駕駛員的眼睛難以看清楚。(原因狀語(yǔ)從句；it充當(dāng)形式賓語(yǔ))Sandstorms are a threat to traffic safety _ .2.在中國(guó)北方，沙塵暴經(jīng)常發(fā)生在3月到4月之間。(主謂結(jié)構(gòu))_3.更糟糕的是，空氣質(zhì)量差會(huì)導(dǎo)致人們患肺癌。 ，the bad air quality can cause people to develop lung cancer.becausetheymakeitdifficultfordriverstoseeclearlySandstormsfrequentlyoccurinNo

8、rthernChinabetweenMarchandApril.Whatisworse4.沙塵暴會(huì)造成空氣質(zhì)量差。_5.人類(lèi)活動(dòng)是沙塵暴的罪魁禍?zhǔn)住?responsible)Human activities .6.專(zhuān)家說(shuō)，中國(guó)應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)明智和科學(xué)地利用資源。(賓語(yǔ)從句)Experts say .Sandstormscanproducethebadairquality.areresponsibleforsandstormsChinashouldencouragewiseandscientificuseofresources1.用定語(yǔ)從句把1、2句連接起來(lái)_2.用過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)連接3、4句_3.用w

9、ith復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)連接5、6句_句式升級(jí)Whatisworse，thebadairqualityproducedbysandstormscancausepeopletodeveloplungcancer.Sandstorms，which frequently occur in Northern China between March and April，are a threat to traffic safety because they make it difficult for drivers to see clearly.Withhumanactivitiesbeingresponsible

10、forsandstorms，expertssayChinashouldencouragewiseandscientificuseofresources.用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。組句成篇Hit by Troublesome Sandstorms AgainApril 12thTwenty more traffic accidents than usual happened in Beijing today owing to the terrible sandstorm.This has suddenly turned peoples at

11、tention to the causes of such disastrous weather.Sandstorms，which frequently occur in Northern China between March and April，are a threat to traffic safety because they make it difficult for drivers to see clearly.Also，according to scientists，they are closely related to desertification.What is worse，the bad air quality produced by sandstorms can cause people to develop lung cancer.參考范文What are the causes of sandstorms? Dry weather and sudden changes in temperature can result in the widespread dust.However，some scientists believe that