高考英語讀后續(xù)寫：考情分析及真題講解

1、高考英語讀后續(xù)寫：考情分析及真題講解一、考綱摘錄讀后續(xù)寫：滿分25分。提供一段350詞左右的語言材料，要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開頭語和所標示關鍵詞進行續(xù)寫（150詞左右），將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結構完整的短文。閱卷時將主要考慮以下內(nèi)容：（1）與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；（2）內(nèi)容的豐富性和對 所給關鍵詞語 的覆蓋情況；（3）應用語法結構和詞匯的豐富性和準確性；（4）上下文的連貫性。二、考情表解短文特點卷別長度體裁；主題2018. 6320記敘文爸爸帶兒子去朋友家農(nóng)場游玩迷路的故事。續(xù)寫2017. 11338記敘文和父母一塊去旅游的故事。續(xù)寫2017. 6344

2、記敘文和朋友一起騎車游玩，野外遇狼的故事。續(xù)寫2016. 10332記敘文小兩口野外露宮，因小事發(fā)生爭執(zhí)，女主人獨自 走進森林迷路，在野外獨自度夜的故事。續(xù)寫考試說明樣卷364記敘文Arthur在幫助一個年輕人時聽到有人搶劫了銀 行，于是Arthur懷疑這個年輕人就是搶劫銀行 的嫌疑犯續(xù)寫讀后續(xù)寫劃線關鍵詞語卷別名詞（詞組）動詞（詞組）介詞（詞組）形容詞2018. 67212017. 11732017. 6732016. 10622考試說明 樣卷91二、命題揭秘讀后續(xù)寫要求考生在理解一篇不完整文章的基礎上，充分調(diào)動想象創(chuàng)新思維， 大膽預測文章缺失部分的內(nèi)容走勢，進行充滿個性色彩的設計，并用英語

3、進行續(xù)寫表達。所提供短文詞數(shù)在350左右，劃線詞語涉及到名詞 （詞組）、動詞（詞組）、介詞（詞組）和形容詞等，其中，以名詞 （詞 組）為主，在續(xù)寫中至少要使用5個關鍵詞語，需要注意：在使用關鍵詞語時根據(jù)時態(tài)和語 態(tài)的需要，可以改變動詞的形式，可以改變名詞的單復數(shù)，但不要改變關鍵詞語在原文中 的含義和詞性；多以記敘文故事類文章 或者夾敘夾議類文章 為主，故事情節(jié)有曲折、有起 伏，但故事線索的邏輯性比較強。.創(chuàng)造性：即發(fā)揮想象力，該題型具有一定的開放性，考生需用自己的語言對故事情節(jié)進行 內(nèi)容創(chuàng)造；.邏輯性：即根據(jù)已提供的關鍵信息，按照可能的合理的方向續(xù)寫，使文章邏輯結構完整；.豐富性：即語言能力的

4、充分體現(xiàn)，詞匯句法的準確與復雜程度，細節(jié)描寫的生動性等都將讓故事更加立體飽滿。四、評分標準(1)評分原則.本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。.評分時，先根據(jù)所續(xù)寫短文的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。.詞數(shù)少于130的，從總分中減去 2分。.評分時，應主要從以下四個方面考慮：(1)與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；(2)內(nèi)容的豐富性和對所標出關詞語的應用情況；(3)應用語法結構和詞匯的豐富性和準確性；(4)上下文的連貫性。.拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個重要方面，評分時，應視其對交際的影響程度予以 考慮。.如書寫較差以致影響交際，可將分數(shù)降低

5、一個檔次。(2)各檔次的給分范圍和要求檔次描述第五檔(21 25)一與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開頭語銜接合理。內(nèi)容豐富，應用了 5個以上短文中標出的關鍵詞語。一所使用語法結構和詞匯豐富、準確，可能有些許錯誤，但完全不影響意義表達。一有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫短文結構緊湊。第四檔(16 20)一與所給短文融洽度較高，與所提供各段落開頭語銜接較為合埋。一內(nèi)容比較豐富，應用了 5個以上短文中標出的關鍵詞語。一所使用語法結構和詞匯較為豐富、準確，可能有些許錯誤，但不影響意義表達。一比較有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫短文結構緊湊。第三檔(11 15)一與所給短文關系較為密切，

6、與所提供各段落開頭語有一定程度的銜接。一寫出了若葉有關內(nèi)容，應用了4個以上短文中標出的關鍵詞語。一應用的語法結構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求，雖有一些錯誤，但不影響意義的表達。一應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫。第二檔(6 10)一與所給短文有一定的關系，與所提供各段落開頭語有一定程度的銜接。一寫出了一些有關內(nèi)容，應用了3個以上短文中標出的關鍵詞語。一語法結構單調(diào)，詞匯項目有限，有些語法結構和詞匯方面的錯誤，影響了意義的 表達。較少使用語句間的連接成分，全文內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。一與所給短文和開頭語的銜接較差。一產(chǎn)出內(nèi)容太少，很少使用短文中標出的關鍵詞語。第一檔一語法結構單調(diào)，詞匯項目很有限，有

7、較多語法結構和詞匯方面的錯誤，嚴重影響(15)了意義的表達。缺乏語句間的連接成分，全文內(nèi)容不連貫。0白卷、內(nèi)容太少無法判斷或所寫內(nèi)容與所提供內(nèi)容無關。五、真題及樣題閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。（2018年6月浙江卷）It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the

8、 state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of t

9、he farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm, terebseidkfAst, I went to help Aunt Tina feed thechickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to g

10、raze（吃草）.I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowbo

11、y hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. Don t be late for supper, “ Uncle Paul cried,“ andrkeepioothhe you don gef lost!OK! mydad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the

12、 deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven （ 編織的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意：.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為l50左右；.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped

13、 out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.One possible version:Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. I tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frighten

14、ed as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I was OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that we got lost.Paragraph 2:We had no

15、idea where we were and it got dark. We didn t know where thearm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation. Just as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. It musU bele

16、 Paul, I said. So we cried back with excit ement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride!（2017年11月浙江卷）A vacation with my motherI had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my motherloving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and f

17、orgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, Davi

18、d, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived,and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again

19、two hours later after we d returned home to get the purseand traveler s cheomshad forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: You stand outside the door and play lookout） while I go, and I llstand outside the door and play l

20、ookout while you go. I had terrible pictures in my mind:where are the kids? ” a What?Oh, GoshI thought they were being awfully quiet. We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vac

21、ancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections （ 反對）.If a str

22、ange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 注意：.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為l50左右；.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:The next day we remember

23、ed the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.One possible version:Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views there were surprisi

24、ngly beautiful the warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water. We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when Dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel. Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.Paragraph

25、2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Mom would cheer up like a child. She would get off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around. Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the historical buildings in the

26、small towns and the amazing scenery in nature. When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces. How sweet she was! Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us.（2017年6月浙江卷）On a bright, warm July afte

27、rnoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends_One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled （騎行）along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and

28、 two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.he thoThen Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. Man, that s augigt.dog!”he thoBut when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn twodpgiacay, but acatching up with him.Mac s hearumped. He found out

29、his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac s relief, it fell back,shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at t

30、he wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase （追趕）.Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not toshow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he d beeasy caught up and the wolf s teeth

31、would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn tthink much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a

32、bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now. 注意： 1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:The car

33、abruptly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.One possible version:Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give help. But with the bare hands, they didn dare to fight with the wolf. Howev

34、er, they still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, shouting loudly at Paul and Becky. Macihen jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. That reached deadlock.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclis

35、ts arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Macfriends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight withthe wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. Jus

36、t at that time, the wolf might feel the threats from the people, starting to withdraw. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.（2016年10月浙江卷）One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the w

37、ay an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom.to find a better spot for us to camp walked awayn dWith no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she tur

38、ned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.Tom! she cried. Help!”No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she wa

39、lked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and

40、 thirsty. She could hear water trickling （滴落） somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the s

41、tream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter.ls that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse,

42、 thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意：.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為l50左右；.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph 1 :But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Paragraph 2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up.One possible

43、 version:Paragraph 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in the forestfor another cold night. Although she felt a little sad, she didn t get fearful. She thouTbtmabout“Hemust have called for those helicopters. Maybe he was in one of them and will come b

44、ackagain! I have to guide him tomorrow. She fell asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.Paragraph 2:It was day break when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. Fortunately, she saw a huge flat rock in an open area at a

45、 distance. She rushed to the rock, climbed onto it and waited. To her great joy, the helicopter appeared again. The nearer it got, the more she flagged the yellow blouse. Luckily, the helicopter didn t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and ran

46、towards Jane. She broke down and burst into tears.（實驗省份考試說明樣題）A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and ag ain but couldn t get the car

47、moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked,“ It 100ks like youa problem, Arthur said.I m afraid so. I m in a big hurry and I can t start my car. ”i Isthere something I can do to help? ”Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two

48、suitcases in the back seat and then said, “Thanks. If you rsure it wouldn be too much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”N No trouble at all. I d be glad to help. The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turne

49、d to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.It was from the bank. There had been a robbery （搶劫）！Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. Peop