高考英語第二輪復習writing 完整版課件PPT

1、writing a picture story假定你是TOM,請根據下面的圖畫內容寫一篇日記.1. Style :2. Tense( generally):3. Person:1. Go over the requirementA diary past tenseI Tuesday December 6 ,2005 Fine I had a very bad day yesterday. Everything go wrong. In the morning, my alarm clock didnt ring so I woke up an hour late. I am in such a

2、 hurry that I burned my hand when I was cooking breakfast. Correct any mistakeswent wasThen I run out of the house to catch the 8:30 bus, but of course I miss it. I was very unhappy because I know my teacher got angry if anyone was late for class. So I ran three miles to the school. But when I arriv

3、ed there in the end, I find that it was SundayCorrect any mistakesranknewfoundmissed 根據下列圖畫中 Tom 騎自行車的經歷，用英語寫一篇故事。 短文要寫得連貫、完整。Sample 11. topic :2. Tense( generally):3. Person:1. Go over the requirementA story （a traffic accident)past tenseTom , he Tom /ride a bike Along the street/roadA few days ago

4、/ the other day/ one day2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)A car / run fast to/run into himTom/ fall off his bikeSuddenly 2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)The driver/ frightened/ run away 2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)A woman/

5、remember the number of the car The police The driver/ catch2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)Key wordssentencesA woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. The driver was caught.ride a bike /run fast tosee the accident/remember the numb

6、er /call the police /be caught be frightened /run awayhit him/fall off his bikeWhen Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him. And he fell off his bike.The driver was so frightened that he ran away. Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him

7、 and he fell off his bike. The driver was frightened. He ran away. A woman saw the accident. She remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman. The driver was caught.Passage 13. Writing a passage The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He t

8、urned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. Sh

9、e called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.passage 2 The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike

10、. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was c

11、aught and punished for his wrong doing.Passage 2 Using connectives并列 轉折 3. 因果 4. 其他and, bothand but, however, though, while so, therefore, because when, suddenly, immediately, as soon as , unfortunately, sothat , finally, as a result, What was worseGo over the requirement（person, tense, style） Summa

12、ry : How to write a picture story?Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)Write a passage （using connectives and adding details and specific information. )基本篇章結構 點題（時間、地點、人物、事件） 事件的起因 事件的發(fā)展/過程 事件的結果 扣題 下面4幅圖片描述的是星期天上午在中山公園里發(fā)生的一件事。請根據圖片所提供的信息用英語為你校的“英語園地”寫一篇短文。注意：短文須包括所有圖片的主要內容。短文的內容要連貫

13、、完整；短文單詞數：100左右（已給句子中的單詞不計入總詞數）；參考詞匯：貨攤stand (n.) ; 搶奪 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕 arrest (v.)1點題（時間、地點）星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤旁2事件的起因年輕婦女的包被搶3事件的發(fā)展/過程人們追趕搶包者 ；長排椅上坐著一位老人；搶包者從老人身旁跑過，老人用傘將他絆倒4事件的結果兩名警察逮捕搶劫者：5扣題婦女感謝老人，人們稱贊老人的機智審題描述過去個人經歷第三人稱4.主題：3.人稱：1.體裁：2.時態(tài)：記敘文體一般過去時星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤One Sunday morning,；in Zhongshan P

14、ark.；At an ice-cream stand年輕婦女的包被搶snatch her handbag away人們追趕搶包者run after the snatcher在附近長排椅上坐著一位老人There be sb. sitting on the bench nearby提綱從老人身旁跑過Run past the old man拿起傘；將傘放在他兩腿之間；pick up his umbrella ; put it between the two legs of the snatcher; 摔一大跟斗fall down on the ground heavily兩名警察來到并逮捕搶劫者Ca

15、me in a police car; arrest sb.感謝老人的幫助Thank sb. for his help 稱贊老人的機智Praise the old man for his cleverness1、幾天前the other day; several days ago2、使人感到意外to ones surprise3、就在這時at that moment; at that time常用關聯(lián)詞 副詞：suddenly, unfortunately, luckily, immediately as a result so/suchthat two hours later, and 1.

16、 It was (天氣)2.While sb. was doing / sb. was about to do when 3. sb. did and 4.see /hear sb. Doing5. with the help of sb.一些可能用到的句型和詞組One Sunday morning, many people went to Zhongshan Park. As it was very hot, some people got thirsty and were trying to buy some ice-cream. Suddenly a woman at the stand

17、 shouted because a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. Seeing this, immediately a few people began to run after him. However, the snatcher ran so fast that it was not easy to catch him. Luckily , there was an old man sitting on a bench nearby. As the snatcher was running past him, the ol

18、d man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatchers legs. The young man cried and fell down on the ground hard. A few minutes later two policemen came in a police car and arrested him. The woman thanked the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness.Homeworkfinish your writing and hand it in tomorrow Clear idea Correct grammar Complete passage Beautiful language Beautiful handwriting What